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One day in 2009, Jane and her husband planned to drive from Boise to Jane’s hometown of Salt Lake City to visit her parents. But soon after they started their journey, their car broke down halfway. They didn’t have enough money to fix it. What’s worse, at the repair shop, they were told that it would take several days to repair it because there were no spare parts available. Just as they were wondering what to do, a woman named Alisa, who was at the repair shop, overheard their situation. She decided to help them.
“She offered to take us to Salt Lake City. The only thing she needed to do was go home to take care of her sick brother before leaving. She had to give her brother medicine at night,” Jane recalled, looking grateful.
Later that day, Alisa took the couple to her home. She bought them dinner and let them spend the night at her house. Jane and her husband thanked her for what she had done for them. They also watched Alisa take care of her brother. It was a loving and touching scene. Their admiration for Alisa grew. She told them that she felt like she did just the right thing that anyone would do in that situation.
The next day, early in the morning, Alisa drove them to Salt Lake City. But before they could fully thank her, she said goodbye and drove away. It was a little sad and regretful. After that, Jane and Alisa lost touch. But nearly 15 years later, Jane still thought about everything Alisa had done for them. She wanted to contact Alisa and express how much Alisa’s help had made a difference in her life. However, she couldn’t remember Alisa’s full name and the chance to find her seemed very small.
注意：1. 續寫詞數應為150個左右；
2. 請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。
Suddenly, Jane had an idea.
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To Jane’s surprise, Alisa saw the story online and picked up her phone.
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文章大意 2009年，Jane和丈夫從博伊西開車前往Jane位于鹽湖城的家鄉看望父母，途中汽車拋錨，因缺錢且無零部件，維修需耗時多日。在維修店，Alisa聽聞他們的困境，決定幫忙。她先帶Jane夫婦回自己家，為他們提供晚餐并留宿，還照顧生病的弟弟。次日清晨，Alisa開車送他們到鹽湖城，之后便失去聯系。近15年后，Jane仍難忘Alisa的幫助，想聯系她表達感激，卻因記不清其全名，尋找她的機會渺茫。
故事山分析
開端：Jane 和丈夫開車途中汽車拋錨，陷入困境，在維修店遭遇維修難題和資金短缺。
發展：Alisa 主動幫忙，帶他們回家，提供食宿，還照顧生病的弟弟，展現出善良和熱心。
高潮：Alisa 送他們到目的地后離開，兩人失去聯系，多年后 Jane 想尋找 Alisa 表達感激，卻面臨困難，這是故事的轉折點，也是續寫的起點。
結局（待續寫）：通過 Jane 尋找 Alisa 的行動以及后續兩人重逢后的交流，展現善良的回報和友情的延續，構成故事結局。
伏筆以及在續寫中的回應
Alisa 的善良幫助：為后續 Jane 尋找她并表達感激埋下伏筆，在續寫中，Jane 的尋找行動是對這份善良的回應，重逢后的交流也將進一步體現善良帶來的溫暖延續。
失去聯系且記不清全名：設置了尋找的困難，在續寫中，Jane 將克服這一困難，可能通過回憶細節、借助網絡等方式，凸顯尋找的不易和 Jane 的決心。
Jane 多年后仍難忘 Alisa 的幫助：表明 Jane 渴望回報的心情，在續寫中，會促使 Jane 積極尋找 Alisa，成為故事發展的動力。
Alisa 照顧生病的弟弟：展現她的家庭責任感，在續寫中，可能會提及她的弟弟情況，或者她的家庭對她善良行為的影響，豐富人物形象。
汽車維修的困難：引出 Alisa 的幫助，在續寫中，這一困境可能會被再次提及，作為兩人相識的背景，強調 Alisa 幫助的重要性。
續寫要點（兩段）
第一段：詳細描述 Jane 想到的尋找 Alisa 的辦法，比如她在社交媒體上發布當年的經歷，描述 Alisa 的特征，向當地的社區論壇求助，聯系當年的維修店詢問是否有 Alisa 的信息等，突出她尋找的努力和決心。
第二段：著重描寫 Alisa 看到故事后的反應，她的驚喜、感動，以及兩人通電話或見面后的交流場景，回憶當年的經歷，表達彼此的思念和對這份友情的珍視。
情感線
起初，Jane 和丈夫遭遇困境，心情沮喪焦慮。Alisa 的出現讓他們感受到溫暖和希望，對 Alisa 充滿感激。分別后失去聯系，Jane 心中一直懷有感恩和思念。多年后尋找 Alisa 時，她滿懷期待又有些忐忑。當 Alisa 看到故事并回應時，Jane 的喜悅和激動達到頂點，兩人重逢后的交流讓這份因善良而產生的情感更加深厚，她們都為這份跨越多年的情誼感到無比珍貴，情感從最初的困境中的溫暖，到重逢后的感動與珍惜，不斷升華。
故事線
Jane 和丈夫開車途中汽車拋錨，面臨維修難題和資金短缺。
Alisa 在維修店聽聞他們的困境，決定幫忙，帶他們回家并提供食宿。
Alisa 照顧生病的弟弟，展現家庭責任感。
次日 Alisa 送他們到鹽湖城后離開，兩人失去聯系。
近 15 年后 Jane 想尋找 Alisa 表達感激，卻記不清全名，面臨困難。
Jane 通過各種方式尋找 Alisa，最終兩人重逢交流。
主旨升華句
This story proves that a simple act of kindness can have a lasting impact, transcending time and distance, and that the power of human kindness can create beautiful connections that endure.（這個故事證明，一個簡單的善舉可以產生持久的影響，跨越時間和距離，人類善良的力量可以創造出持久的美好聯系。）
Jane's determination to find Alisa after all these years shows that gratitude is a powerful emotion that can drive us to seek out those who have made a difference in our lives, and that true friendship can withstand the test of time.（多年后 Jane 尋找 Alisa 的決心表明，感恩是一種強大的情感，它可以驅使我們尋找那些在我們生活中產生重要影響的人，真正的友誼可以經得起時間的考驗。）
The reunion of Jane and Alisa not only rekindles their friendship but also serves as a reminder that the kindness we offer to others can come back to us in unexpected ways, and that every act of kindness is a seed that can grow into a beautiful relationship.（Jane 和 Alisa 的重逢不僅重燃了她們的友誼，也提醒我們，我們給予他人的善意可能會以意想不到的方式回到我們身邊，每一個善舉都是一顆可以長成美好關系的種子。）
Through this heartwarming story, we learn that in a world full of uncertainties, acts of kindness and the bonds they create are like beacons of hope, guiding us through difficult times and bringing warmth and joy to our lives.（通過這個溫馨的故事，我們了解到，在一個充滿不確定性的世界里，善舉以及它們所建立的聯系就像希望的燈塔，指引我們度過艱難時期，給我們的生活帶來溫暖和喜悅。）
The journey of Jane and Alisa from strangers to friends, and their reunion after years apart, demonstrates that the power of kindness has no limits, and that it can bridge the gaps between people, creating a world filled with love and compassion.（Jane 和 Alisa 從陌生人到朋友的歷程，以及她們多年后的重逢，表明善良的力量是無限的，它可以彌合人與人之間的差距，創造一個充滿愛和同情的世界。）
寫作示范一
Suddenly, Jane had an idea. She decided to share her story on social media, hoping someone might recognize Alisa. She described Alisa's kind actions in detail and included the few details she remembered about her, like the town where she lived and the fact that she had a sick brother. She also reached out to the repair shop where they first met, asking if they had any information about Alisa. Days passed, and there was no response, but Jane didn't give up.
To Jane's surprise, Alisa saw the story online and picked up her phone. She was so touched to know that Jane had been looking for her all these years. When she called Jane, both of them were filled with excitement and joy. They talked for hours, reminiscing about that eventful day. Alisa was glad her help had meant so much to Jane. They decided to meet soon and promised never to lose touch again.
寫作示范二
Suddenly, Jane had an idea. She posted their story on local community forums, hoping to get some leads. She also contacted local newspapers, asking if they could run a story about her search for the kind - hearted Alisa. She even made a video about her experience and uploaded it on video - sharing platforms. Many people were moved by her story and started sharing it, which spread the word far and wide.
To Jane's surprise, Alisa saw the story online and picked up her phone. Tears filled her eyes as she read about how much her help had meant to Jane. When she called Jane, their voices trembled with emotion. They shared how their lives had changed over the past 15 years. Alisa was amazed by Jane's determination to find her. They made plans to meet in person, looking forward to creating new memories together.
【答案】
Suddenly, Jane had an idea. She could post the story on social media. After all, information on it could spread quickly. Without hesitation, she wrote her story, describing how Alisa helped her and her husband by letting them stay at her house and driving them home the next day. She also mentioned Alisa’s sick brother, who Alisa cared for with love and energy. At the end of the story, she sincerely hoped Alisa could recognize her and contact her. After making sure everything was okay, she clicked and posted it.
To Jane’s surprise, Alisa saw the story online and picked up her phone. Years after they first met, they reconnected through a video call. Within the first few minutes of chatting, and with tears in her eyes, Jane thanked Alisa again. She said that over the past years, inspired by Alisa’s kindness, she had always tried to be like Alisa and help others. Alisa was surprised and moved to tears. They decided to set a date for a happy reunion.

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