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There are always things in our life that teach us a lesson and let us know how stupid and ridiculous (荒謬) we have been I had such an experience years ago.
Progressing into the senior high school, I laid my eyes on the modern campus, the breathtaking scenery and energetic peers (同齡人). The school was undoubtedly newer and bigger than the one I had attended one year before.
Dealing with interpersonal relationships was always a headache for me. The night before, I had made up my mind that I would relate well with my classmates as long as I became friends with those cool and popular guys. To make myself stand out, I replaced my worn schoolbag with a brand new one, with an image of a cute Brown Bear on it.
Lost in the joy of starting my new journey, I went upstairs to my classroom, only to find the walls of the hall were decorated with mathematical formulas. I stood in front of the wall, puzzled. Then, a girl with a plain appearance came up and asked, “The walls are intended to create a study atmosphere where students can memorize formulas as easily as possible. I’m Shirley. What’s your name ” Even though she seemed warm-hearted and friendly, she was definitely not the kind of person I desired to be associated with. In response, I decided to tell her my name anyway. When we reached my classroom, Shirley said, “I hope you lead a fulfilling life here. I’m in Class 348, next to yours.” At that moment, I even had the thought that I wouldn’t meet Shirley any more.
Then, I stepped into the classroom, expecting to find my expected “friends”. A scene caught my attention — a handsome boy wearing Nike clothes was surrounded by dozens of boys and girls. I believed this guy was the most welcomed, so I walked to him and began to introduce myself. I said, “Hello. I’m new here. My name is Eason.” Without looking into my eyes, he simply said, “Sam.” I continued, “Could you tell me how to apply for a student card ” “No, I am busy now,” he replied coldly.
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I stood there, not knowing what to do next.
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What Shirley did for me made me awkward and ashamed.
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文章大意
“我”升入高中，被嶄新且宏大的校園吸引。由于處理人際關系對“我”而言頗具挑戰，前一晚“我”下定決心，要通過與酷炫、受歡迎的同學交朋友來改善人際交往狀況。為了脫穎而出，“我”換上了帶有可愛棕熊圖案的全新書包。在去教室的路上，熱心友善的Shirley主動與“我”交流，向“我”介紹墻上裝飾數學公式的用途，但“我”因她外表普通，并不想與她交往。進入教室后，“我”看到被眾人簇擁的帥氣男孩，便上前搭話，詢問如何申請學生卡，卻遭到他冷漠拒絕。
二、故事山分析
開端：“我” 升入新高中，渴望與受歡迎的同學建立良好關系，為此做了準備。
發展：Shirley 熱情與 “我” 交流，介紹校園相關內容，可 “我” 因她的外表對她有所嫌棄；“我” 在教室向被眾人圍繞的帥氣男孩搭話，卻被冷漠回應。
高潮：帥氣男孩的拒絕讓 “我” 陷入尷尬境地，不知如何是好。
結局（預測）：Shirley 幫助了 “我”，讓 “我” 意識到自己以貌取人、追求表面朋友的錯誤，開始反思自己的人際交往觀念。
尾聲（預測）：“我” 與 Shirley 成為真正的朋友，在她的影響下，“我” 學會了如何真誠地與人交往。
三、伏筆及在續寫中的回應
伏筆 1：“我” 處理人際關系頭疼，渴望與受歡迎的同學交友。回應：在被帥氣男孩拒絕后，“我” 的人際交往困境凸顯，為 Shirley 的幫助做鋪墊。
伏筆 2：Shirley 的熱情友好與 “我” 對她的嫌棄。回應：在續寫中，Shirley 不計前嫌幫助 “我”，使 “我” 感到尷尬和羞愧，認識到自己的錯誤。
伏筆 3：“我” 為了交友換了新書包。回應：新書包雖想讓 “我” 脫穎而出，但在與他人交往時并未起到作用，側面反映出以貌取人、追求表面的方式不可取。
伏筆 4：帥氣男孩被眾人簇擁。回應：表明他在同學中的受歡迎程度，與他對 “我” 的冷漠態度形成對比，突出 “我” 追求表面朋友的失落。
伏筆 5：“我” 認為不會再與 Shirley 見面。回應：與續寫中 Shirley 幫助 “我” 形成反差，強調 “我” 對她的誤解以及后來的轉變。
四、續寫要點
第一段：著重描寫 “我” 被帥氣男孩拒絕后的尷尬神態、心理活動，如臉紅、內心的沮喪和自我懷疑等，還可描述周圍同學的反應，進一步烘托 “我” 的窘迫。
第二段：詳細描述 Shirley 幫助 “我” 的具體行為，比如她如何為 “我” 解答申請學生卡的問題，她的話語和態度，以及 “我” 聽到她的幫助后內心的觸動、尷尬和羞愧的具體表現，如不敢直視她的眼睛、言語的支支吾吾等。
五、情感線
起初 “我” 滿懷期待地想要結交受歡迎的同學，充滿熱情。在與 Shirley 交流時，因她的外表普通，“我” 表現出嫌棄和不屑。被帥氣男孩拒絕后，“我” 感到沮喪、尷尬和自我懷疑。當 Shirley 幫助 “我” 時，“我” 內心充滿尷尬和羞愧，進而開始反思自己的行為和人際交往觀念，情感從最初的盲目追求到后來的自我反思，實現了轉變。
六、故事線
“我” 升入高中渴望改善人際關系，準備與受歡迎的同學交友。
Shirley 主動與 “我” 交流，“我” 嫌棄她。
“我” 在教室向帥氣男孩搭話遭拒。
“我” 被拒絕后陷入尷尬。
Shirley 幫助 “我”，讓 “我” 感到羞愧。
“我” 反思自己的人際交往觀念，與 Shirley 的關系發生變化。
七、主旨升華句（英文）
True friendship is not determined by appearance or popularity, but by the warmth and sincerity of one's heart.（真正的友誼不是由外表或受歡迎程度決定的，而是由一個人內心的溫暖和真誠決定的。）
We should never judge others by their looks, for kindness and inner beauty often hide beneath the most ordinary appearances.（我們絕不能以貌取人，因為善良和內在美常常隱藏在最平凡的外表之下。）
In the journey of building relationships, it is the genuine care and help from others that truly matter, not the pursuit of those who seem popular on the surface.（在建立人際關系的旅程中，真正重要的是他人真誠的關心和幫助，而不是對那些表面上看起來受歡迎的人的追求。）
A moment of embarrassment can be a powerful catalyst for self - reflection, leading us to recognize our mistakes and grow in our understanding of true friendship.（一時的尷尬可以成為自我反思的強大催化劑，引導我們認識到自己的錯誤，并在對真正友誼的理解中成長。）
True friends are those who stand by you when you are in need, regardless of your social status or the way you present yourself.（真正的朋友是在你需要時陪伴在你身邊的人，無論你的社會地位或你的外表如何。）
八、寫作示范一
I stood there, not knowing what to do next. My face turned red instantly, and I felt as if all eyes in the classroom were fixed on me, making me even more embarrassed. I lowered my head, wishing there was a hole I could crawl into. The noise around me seemed to fade away, and I was left with only the sound of my own rapid heartbeat. I started to doubt myself, wondering if I was really that unlikable.
What Shirley did for me made me awkward and ashamed. Just as I was standing there in a daze, Shirley walked in. She noticed my situation and came over immediately. With a warm smile, she said, “I know how to apply for a student card. Let me help you.” Her words were like a ray of sunshine in the dark. I looked at her, my eyes filled with gratitude and embarrassment. I stammered out a “thank you,” feeling ashamed of my previous judgment of her. From that day on, I realized that true friendship has nothing to do with appearance or popularity.
九、寫作示范二
I stood there, not knowing what to do next. My hands were nervously fidgeting, and I could feel my ears burning with humiliation. I tried to force a smile, hoping to cover up my embarrassment, but it was in vain. The students around continued their chatting and laughing, completely ignoring my discomfort. I felt like an outsider, a failure in this new social environment.
What Shirley did for me made me awkward and ashamed. Shirley, who had just passed by, saw my predicament. She quickly walked towards me and said in a gentle voice, “Don't worry. I'll show you how to apply for the student card.” I was speechless for a moment, looking at her in disbelief. Her kindness contrasted sharply with my cold attitude towards her before. I followed her, my head hanging low. I couldn't help but blame myself for being so shallow - minded. From then on, I made up my mind to change my way of making friends and cherish the sincere ones like Shirley.
【答案】
I stood there, not knowing what to do next. Suddenly, I felt so embarrassed and frustrated. I had expected a warm welcome and friendly interaction, but instead, I was met with coldness and indifference. My heart sank, and I felt a sense of isolation and confusion. Just as I was at a complete loss, desperately trying to figure out my next move, I heard a familiar voice. It was Shirley. She came up to me with a gentle smile and kind eyes, saying, “I saw what happened. Let me help you with the student card.”
What Shirley did for me made me awkward and ashamed. I had judged her based on her appearance and ignored her kindness earlier. Now she was the one who came to my rescue without any hesitation or complaint. I realized how shallow and wrong I had been. My face flushed with embarrassment as I reflected on my behavior. From that moment on, I decided to change my attitude and not judge people by their appearance. I thanked Shirley sincerely from the bottom of my heart and promised to be a better person.

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