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Like many others, I had the burning dream of becoming a sportsman. However, due to my middle-class family background, buying sports equipment was just a luxury I couldn’t afford. But 1 was determined not to give up and continued to pursue my dream.
One day, while I was practicing athletics, a sudden sharp pain shot through my knee. I fell to the ground, clutching my knee tightly. That severe knee injury crushed my dream of becoming a good athlete. The doctor advised me firmly not to play sports anymore. My parents gently comforted me, “We know how much you love sports, but your health comes first”, their eyes filled with worry and concern. I hung my head in despair, tears welling up in my eyes. I knew I had no choice but to sacrifice it for my health. Although I never played sports again, that dream still lingered in my heart like a flickering flame.
Another incident that changed my life was when my father had a severe heart stroke.1 remember that day vividly. I was at home when I heard a strange noise from my father’s room. I rushed in and saw him lying on the bed, struggling to breathe. Without hesitation, I called the ambulance, my hands shaking uncontrollably as I dialed the number. Fortunately, he was safe after getting timely treatment. But when the doctor said to me, “You brought him in time. Otherwise, things would be very different.” Hearing this, I fell into a deep dilemma. Looking at my weak father I thought about my long-cherished dream of going abroad for higher studies. Finally, I gave up my dream and decided to stay with them, feeling a complex mixture of sadness and determination. I knew it was a difficult choice, but I also knew it was the right thing to do.
Moreover, my sister’s troubled marriage had a profound impact on our family. There were constant quarrels in her house and ours, the sound of angry shouts and sobs filling the air, which made my parents mentally disturbed for 5 years. To take care of them, I gave up the opportunity to relocate for higher studies and better job opportunities. I couldn’t abandon my parents in their time of need.
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1. 續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；
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Luckily, now I can feel a glimmer of happiness after these sacrifices. My family’s journey has witnessed the power of love and sacrifice.
一、文章大意
作者懷揣成為運(yùn)動(dòng)員的夢(mèng)想，但因家庭經(jīng)濟(jì)條件無(wú)法負(fù)擔(dān)運(yùn)動(dòng)裝備。在一次練習(xí)中，作者膝蓋嚴(yán)重受傷，醫(yī)生禁止其再進(jìn)行運(yùn)動(dòng)，作者無(wú)奈放棄夢(mèng)想。后來(lái)，父親突發(fā)嚴(yán)重心臟病，作者及時(shí)送醫(yī)救了父親，但為照顧家人，放棄了出國(guó)深造的夢(mèng)想。此外，姐姐婚姻問題導(dǎo)致家庭紛爭(zhēng)不斷，父母精神受擾，作者為照顧父母，又放棄了去外地深造和更好工作的機(jī)會(huì)。
二、故事山分析
開端：作者有成為運(yùn)動(dòng)員的夢(mèng)想，卻因家庭經(jīng)濟(jì)和受傷被迫放棄。
發(fā)展：父親心臟病發(fā)作，作者放棄出國(guó)深造機(jī)會(huì)照顧家人；姐姐婚姻問題，作者又放棄外地發(fā)展機(jī)會(huì)。
高潮：經(jīng)歷一系列犧牲后，生活出現(xiàn)轉(zhuǎn)機(jī)，這是故事的轉(zhuǎn)折點(diǎn)。
結(jié)局（預(yù)測(cè)）：作者在家庭中收獲溫暖和幸福，家人關(guān)系更加緊密。
尾聲（預(yù)測(cè)）：作者感悟到愛與犧牲的力量，對(duì)生活有新的理解和珍惜。
三、伏筆及在續(xù)寫中的回應(yīng)
伏筆 1：作者為家庭多次放棄夢(mèng)想和機(jī)會(huì) 。回應(yīng)：在后續(xù)情節(jié)中體現(xiàn)這些犧牲帶來(lái)的積極影響，如家庭關(guān)系的升溫，家人的感恩。
伏筆 2：作者雖放棄夢(mèng)想，但夢(mèng)想仍在心中 。回應(yīng)：可能會(huì)以某種方式重新點(diǎn)燃?jí)粝耄蛘咴诩彝ブ姓业叫碌娜松鷥r(jià)值，實(shí)現(xiàn)夢(mèng)想的另一種形式。
伏筆 3：家人的困境和作者的照顧 。回應(yīng)：家人在作者的照顧下逐漸好轉(zhuǎn)，對(duì)作者的付出給予回報(bào)，如家人的理解和支持。
伏筆 4：家庭的紛爭(zhēng)和壓力 。回應(yīng)：后續(xù)可能會(huì)出現(xiàn)家庭矛盾的解決，關(guān)系緩和，突出犧牲帶來(lái)的積極改變。
伏筆 5：作者艱難的選擇 。回應(yīng)：體現(xiàn)這些選擇的意義，如收獲親情、內(nèi)心的平靜，強(qiáng)調(diào)犧牲的價(jià)值。
四、續(xù)寫要點(diǎn)
第一段：描述幸福的具體表現(xiàn)，如家人關(guān)系的改善，父親身體逐漸康復(fù)，姐姐婚姻問題解決，自己在家庭中感受到的溫暖和支持，以及自己內(nèi)心的滿足。
第二段：闡述愛與犧牲如何在家庭中體現(xiàn)，如家人之間相互關(guān)愛、支持，為彼此付出，通過(guò)具體事例說(shuō)明這種力量如何讓家庭度過(guò)難關(guān)，最后表達(dá)對(duì)未來(lái)生活的期待和珍惜。
五、情感線
作者一開始因放棄夢(mèng)想而感到絕望、悲傷，在面對(duì)家庭困境時(shí)充滿無(wú)奈和糾結(jié)，做出犧牲后，隨著家庭情況好轉(zhuǎn)，逐漸感受到幸福和滿足，最后對(duì)家庭和生活充滿感恩與期待。
六、故事線
作者因家庭經(jīng)濟(jì)和受傷放棄運(yùn)動(dòng)員夢(mèng)想。
父親心臟病發(fā)作，作者放棄出國(guó)深造照顧家人。
姐姐婚姻問題，作者放棄外地發(fā)展機(jī)會(huì)照顧家人。
家庭情況好轉(zhuǎn)，作者感受到幸福。
作者感悟到愛與犧牲的力量，家庭關(guān)系更緊密。
作者對(duì)未來(lái)生活充滿期待，珍惜家庭。
七、主旨升華句
Through the hardships we've endured, our family has learned that love and sacrifice are the cornerstones of a strong bond, and they can overcome any obstacle.（通過(guò)我們所經(jīng)歷的艱難困苦，我們的家庭明白了愛與犧牲是緊密聯(lián)系的基石，它們能克服任何障礙。）
Our family's journey has taught us that in the face of difficulties, the selfless love and sacrifice among family members can not only bring us through tough times but also create a deeper and more meaningful connection.（我們家庭的經(jīng)歷讓我們明白，在困難面前，家庭成員之間無(wú)私的愛與犧牲不僅能讓我們度過(guò)艱難時(shí)期，還能創(chuàng)造更深厚、更有意義的聯(lián)系。）
The sacrifices we made for each other have shown that love is not just a word but an action, a continuous giving that enriches our lives and strengthens the family unit.（我們?yōu)楸舜俗龀龅臓奚砻鳎瑦鄄粌H僅是一個(gè)詞，更是一種行動(dòng)，一種持續(xù)的付出，它豐富了我們的生活，鞏固了家庭。）
In our family, the power of love and sacrifice has been proven time and time again, reminding us that the most precious things in life are the relationships we nurture and the love we share.（在我們的家庭中，愛與犧牲的力量一次又一次得到證明，提醒我們生命中最珍貴的東西是我們培育的關(guān)系和我們分享的愛。）
Our story of sacrifice and love has taught us that true happiness lies not in achieving personal dreams alone, but in the warmth and togetherness of a loving family, where every sacrifice is a testament to our unwavering bond.（我們關(guān)于犧牲與愛的故事告訴我們，真正的幸福不在于獨(dú)自實(shí)現(xiàn)個(gè)人夢(mèng)想，而在于充滿愛的家庭的溫暖和團(tuán)聚，在那里，每一次犧牲都是我們堅(jiān)定不移聯(lián)系的證明。）
八、寫作示范一
第一段
Luckily, now I can feel a glimmer of happiness after these sacrifices. My father has fully recovered under my careful care, and his hearty laughter fills our home again. My sister's marriage has also improved. She and her husband have learned to understand each other better, and the quarrels have disappeared. Every day, when we sit around the dinner table, sharing the stories of the day, I feel a deep sense of contentment. I realize that the sacrifices I made are all worth it when I see the smiles on my family members' faces.
第二段
My family’s journey has witnessed the power of love and sacrifice. When my father was ill, my quick action and sacrifice of my study dream saved his life. During my sister's troubled time, my presence brought comfort to her and my parents. These sacrifices have made our family closer. We support each other through thick and thin. Now, we cherish every moment together more than ever. Looking ahead, I believe that with this strong bond of love, our family will face any challenges that come our way with courage and unity.
寫作示范二
第一段
Luckily, now I can feel a glimmer of happiness after these sacrifices. My mother often tells me how much she appreciates my decision to stay. She says my presence has been a great comfort to them. My father, who is much healthier now, often takes me for walks, sharing his life wisdom with me. And my sister, with a new - found peace in her marriage, often comes to our house with her family, filling it with laughter. I find that the simple joys of family life are far more precious than any dream I gave up.
第二段
My family’s journey has witnessed the power of love and sacrifice. When my father was in danger, my love for him led me to make that difficult choice. When my sister was in trouble, my sacrifice for her brought stability to her life. These experiences have taught us that love is about putting others first. We've learned to be more understanding and supportive of each other. As we move forward, I'm confident that our family, bound by love and sacrifice, will continue to grow stronger and face whatever life throws at us with open arms.

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