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閱讀下面材料，根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。
It was in a small town in England at one cold night. An old farmer was driving his horses to the bam (牲口棚) when he heard a voice saying, “Excuse me, sir. Mny I sleep in your burn tonight ” It was from a young soldier called Jack. Quietly standing there, tired and cold, he was waiting for an answer. But the old larmer said rudely, “No, I don't want anybody like you lo stay in my barn. You had better go away.”
Jack sadly turned away, wondering where he would go next. Suddenly he felt a light ta p on his shoulder. It was the young boy who had been working for the old farmer. The boy said. “I know where you can get help. Just go down this road to the first little cabin you come to. There lives Mrs. Smith, who is very kind and is always willing to help those who need it.”
Oh, what warmth filled Jack's heart, “Thank you very much!” There was at least somebody who cared about him. He quickly reached the cabin and gently knocked on the door. The door opened and the lady inside said, “Good evening. Were you looking for me ”
Jack answered, “Are you Mrs. Smith I was told that you might offer a place to a homeless poor soldier for a night's stay. "She said, “Sure! Do come in! You look as though you are nearly frozen. "Mrs. Smith shared her simple meal with Jack in the warm room. Then with a thankful heart, he went to sleep on a pile of clean hay Mrs. Smith had prepared for him.
The next morning, the kind woman cooked him a warm breakfast. She also gave him a small sum of money to help him travel farther. As he left her house, he thanked her for her kindness, and she prayed for him.
Ten years went by and no one remembered what had happened on that cold windy night except one person.
注意：1.續寫詞數應為150左右；
2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。
One morning Mrs. Smith received a letter inviting her to come to London.
Mrs. Smith's heart was filled with wonder and she burst into tears.
文章大意
在英格蘭的一個小鎮，一個寒冷的夜晚，老農夫拒絕讓年輕士兵杰克在他的牲口棚過夜。老農夫的幫工小男孩告訴杰克，沿著路走，第一間小木屋住著善良的史密斯夫人，她總是樂于助人。杰克找到史密斯夫人，她熱情地招待了杰克，給他提供食物、住處，還在第二天給了他一些錢助他遠行。十年過去了，除了一個人，似乎沒人記得那個寒冷多風夜晚發生的事。
故事分析
這是一個關于善良與回報的故事。史密斯夫人的善良在寒冷的夜晚給了杰克溫暖和幫助，為故事的發展埋下了溫情的基調。
伏筆以及在續寫中的回應
杰克的感激：杰克對史密斯夫人充滿感激，這為十年后他對史密斯夫人的回報埋下伏筆。在續寫中，杰克邀請史密斯夫人去倫敦并給予豐厚回報，回應了這份感激。
史密斯夫人的善良：她總是愿意幫助有需要的人，這種善良品質預示著她會得到好的回報。續寫中杰克的感恩之舉就是對她善良的回應。
無人記得那晚的事：除了一人，暗示這個人就是杰克，并且他會有所行動，在續寫中杰克邀請史密斯夫人就是他行動的體現。
杰克的士兵身份：可能暗示他在十年間經歷了一些事情，有了能力去回報史密斯夫人，續寫中他在倫敦有一定地位，有能力給予回報。
小男孩的指引：小男孩的幫助讓杰克找到了史密斯夫人，也間接促成了這段善緣，續寫中雖然沒有直接提及小男孩，但整個故事的發展是由他的指引開始的。
續寫要點（兩段）
第一段：史密斯夫人收到去倫敦的信，她帶著疑惑前往。在倫敦，她被帶到一個豪華的地方，見到了已經有一定成就的杰克。
第二段：杰克向史密斯夫人表達深深的感激，講述自己十年來的經歷和對她的感恩之情。史密斯夫人被感動得熱淚盈眶，感慨善良有了美好的回報。
情感線
一開始杰克被老農夫拒絕的沮喪，到得到小男孩幫助和史密斯夫人關懷的溫暖與感激。十年后杰克懷著感恩之心邀請史密斯夫人，史密斯夫人從疑惑到感動，情感層層遞進，展現了善良與感恩帶來的美好情感。
故事線
杰克被老農夫拒絕借宿。
小男孩指引杰克找到史密斯夫人。
史密斯夫人熱情幫助杰克。
十年后杰克邀請史密斯夫人去倫敦。
史密斯夫人在倫敦見到杰克。
杰克感恩，史密斯夫人感動。
主旨升華句
Kindness is like a seed, which will surely bloom and bear fruit in the right time. 善良就像一顆種子，在合適的時候一定會開花結果。
A small act of kindness can change someone's life and create a cycle of love and gratitude. 一個小小的善舉可以改變一個人的生活，創造愛與感恩的循環。
Gratitude is the most beautiful flower that grows in the garden of a kind - hearted person. 感恩是在善良之人的花園中綻放的最美麗的花朵。
The warmth of kindness can melt the coldest of hearts and light up the darkest of nights. 善良的溫暖可以融化最冰冷的心，照亮最黑暗的夜晚。
In the journey of life, kindness and gratitude are the most precious treasures that we should always cherish. 在人生的旅途中，善良和感恩是我們應該永遠珍惜的最寶貴的財富。
寫作示范一
One morning Mrs. Smith received a letter inviting her to come to London. The letter was written in elegant handwriting, but there was no signature. Wondering what it was about, she decided to go. When she arrived in London, a well - dressed servant took her to a magnificent mansion. Inside, she saw a tall and handsome man who looked familiar. It was Jack! He had become a successful businessman. Jack walked towards her with a big smile and said, “Mrs. Smith, it's been ten years. I've been looking forward to this moment.”
Mrs. Smith's heart was filled with wonder and she burst into tears. Jack then told her how her kindness had changed his life. After leaving her place, he joined the army and with hard work and determination, he achieved great success. He said, “Your help on that cold night gave me hope and strength. I will always be grateful to you.” Mrs. Smith was deeply moved. She realized that a simple act of kindness could bring such wonderful results. “I'm so glad to see you doing well,” she said with a trembling voice. From then on, their friendship deepened, and the story of their kindness and gratitude spread far and wide.
寫作示范二
One morning Mrs. Smith received a letter inviting her to come to London. The letter said that all her expenses would be paid and she would be warmly welcomed. She was a bit hesitant at first, but her curiosity got the better of her, so she set off. In London, she was led to a grand hotel. In the luxurious suite, Jack was waiting for her. He had a beard and looked more mature. “Mrs. Smith, you are my savior,” Jack said emotionally.
Mrs. Smith's heart was filled with wonder and she burst into tears. Jack recounted his experiences over the past ten years. He had faced many difficulties, but the memory of her kindness always inspired him. “I made a promise to myself that if I ever had the chance, I would repay you,” he said. Mrs. Smith wiped her tears and said, “I'm just glad I could help. Your success is the best reward for me.” Their meeting was a beautiful reminder of the power of kindness and the magic of gratitude.
參考范文：
One day Mrs. Smith received a letter inviting her to go to London. With an unwavering belief in the goodness of people, she made her way to London and arrived at the location specified in the letter. To her great astonishment, she heard a familiar voice saying, “How are you doing, Madam ” It was none other than Jack. “I have always remembered your kindness,” he said, his words echoing the bond they shared.“I am now the captain of a large ship, and I wish to repay you. Each year at this time, I will arrange for someone to send you a sum of money as a token of my gratitude.”
Mrs. Smith's heart was filled with wonder and she burst into tears. After expressing her heartfelt gratitude and sincere care for Jack, she returned home. How truly grateful she was! Now, with sufficient funds, she could extend a helping hand to even more people in need. For the remainder of her life,whenever she heard someone sharing their troubles, she would recall the invaluable treasure she gained from helping the young man, which strengthened her resolve to offer assistance.

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