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The Secret of Flowers
Anna worked with her mother in their vegetable garden every day. This was how they made their living. Anna helped her mother tend the garden, so the vegetables would be healthy and ready for the market. Anna often pretended the plants she tended were beautiful roses, like Mrs. Brown’s prize flowers.
The only person in the village who made money selling flowers was Mrs. Brown. She grew roses and sold them to flower shops in the city. Every year she joined the City Rose Festival. People thought that Mrs. Brown used magic to grow her roses. How else could she win first prize twenty years in a row
Anna loved to tend flowers. Moreover, she often dreamed about growing her own roses and winning first prize in the festival. With the prize money, she would also be able to lighten the burden at home. However, roses were too expensive for her to start.
One day, Anna visited Mrs. Brown to see her flowers. Mrs. Brown was whispering to her roses when she arrived. “Spying on me again!” Mrs. Brown frowned.
“I only came to see your flowers, Mrs. Brown.” Anna took a deep breath. “I wish I could grow beautiful roses and win a prize at the festival like you.”
“I have experience passed down from generations.” Mrs. Brown laughed. “Stick to vegetables, child. Leave flowers to those who know the secret of flowers.”
Mrs. Brown returned to her gardening, ignoring the sad look on Anna’s face. Then she pulled up a dried-up rose, and threw it over the fence. “A plant in bad condition. Unworthy of my time,” Mrs. Brown mumbled.
Anna smiled, as she had an idea. She bowed farewell to Mrs. Brown and went out the garden gate. Mrs. Brown was busy minding her prize roses. Anna quickly bent over and grabbed the abandoned rose before rushing home. She remembered a quiet spot behind the cottage. It was the perfect place for her little rose to grow. Now, she had a chance for the festival.
Anna planted the rose in her garden and tended it carefully. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
On festival morning, Mrs. Brown passed by and saw the beautiful rose. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
一、文章大意
安娜和母親靠打理菜園維持生計，但安娜熱愛養(yǎng)花，尤其夢想能種出玫瑰，在城市玫瑰節(jié)獲獎，減輕家庭負擔。村里只有布朗夫人靠賣花賺錢，她種的玫瑰連續(xù)二十年在玫瑰節(jié)獲一等獎，人們認為她有養(yǎng)花秘訣。安娜去拜訪布朗夫人，表達自己也想種玫瑰獲獎的愿望，卻被布朗夫人嘲笑，讓她繼續(xù)種蔬菜，還扔掉一株枯萎的玫瑰。安娜撿起玫瑰，打算種在小屋后的安靜角落，期待有機會參加玫瑰節(jié)。
二、故事山分析
開端：安娜和母親以種菜為生，安娜熱愛養(yǎng)花，夢想種玫瑰在玫瑰節(jié)獲獎，布朗夫人是村里唯一賣花且多次獲獎的人。
發(fā)展：安娜向布朗夫人表達種玫瑰獲獎的愿望，被布朗夫人拒絕和嘲笑，布朗夫人扔掉一株枯萎玫瑰，安娜撿起打算種植。
高潮：安娜悉心照料撿來的玫瑰，克服種植過程中的困難，如病蟲害、惡劣天氣等，玫瑰逐漸成長。
結局（預測）：玫瑰節(jié)當天，安娜的玫瑰綻放得十分美麗，驚艷眾人，布朗夫人看到后十分驚訝，安娜在玫瑰節(jié)上取得好成績。
尾聲（預測）：安娜通過努力實現(xiàn)夢想，證明了自己，也讓大家明白成功并非依賴所謂的 “秘訣”，而是靠自身的努力和堅持，同時也改變了布朗夫人對她的看法。
三、伏筆及在續(xù)寫中的回應
伏筆 1：安娜熱愛養(yǎng)花，夢想種玫瑰在玫瑰節(jié)獲獎 。回應：在續(xù)寫中，安娜為實現(xiàn)夢想努力照顧玫瑰，最終在玫瑰節(jié)上展示成果。
伏筆 2：布朗夫人多次在玫瑰節(jié)獲獎，人們認為她有養(yǎng)花秘訣 。回應：與安娜通過自己努力種出美麗玫瑰形成對比，突出努力的重要性，也可能在結尾讓布朗夫人揭示其實并無特殊秘訣，打破神秘感。
伏筆 3：安娜撿起布朗夫人扔掉的枯萎玫瑰 。回應：這是安娜實現(xiàn)夢想的契機，在續(xù)寫中，圍繞這株玫瑰的成長展開，成為安娜成功的關鍵。
伏筆 4：安娜找到種植玫瑰的安靜角落 。回應：為玫瑰的生長提供環(huán)境，在續(xù)寫中，描述這個角落對玫瑰生長的幫助，以及安娜在這個角落的辛勤付出。
伏筆 5：安娜希望減輕家庭負擔 。回應：在續(xù)寫中，獲獎后的安娜可能會用獎金改善家庭生活，體現(xiàn)她的努力帶來的實際改變。
四、續(xù)寫要點
第一段：詳細描述安娜照顧玫瑰的過程，她每天精心澆水、施肥，遇到病蟲害時，四處尋找解決辦法，請教村里有經驗的人，雖然過程艱難，但她從未放棄。隨著時間推移，玫瑰逐漸長出新芽，抽出嫩綠的枝條，最終結出了飽滿的花骨朵。
第二段：玫瑰節(jié)當天，布朗夫人看到安娜的玫瑰后，臉上露出驚訝和難以置信的表情。安娜的玫瑰嬌艷欲滴，花瓣層層疊疊，色彩鮮艷奪目。在評選中，安娜的玫瑰獲得了眾人的贊賞，最終獲得了獎項。布朗夫人向安娜道歉，承認自己之前小看了她，安娜則表示感謝布朗夫人扔掉的玫瑰給了她機會，也感謝大家的認可。
五、情感線
從安娜最初對種玫瑰獲獎的渴望，到被布朗夫人嘲笑后的失落，再到種植玫瑰過程中的堅持與期待，最后在玫瑰節(jié)上獲得成功后的喜悅和自豪，情感不斷起伏，展現(xiàn)了安娜在追求夢想過程中的心理變化。
六、故事線
安娜和母親種菜為生，安娜夢想種玫瑰在玫瑰節(jié)獲獎。
安娜向布朗夫人表達愿望，被嘲笑，布朗夫人扔掉枯萎玫瑰，安娜撿起。
安娜在安靜角落種下玫瑰，悉心照料，克服困難。
玫瑰逐漸成長，在玫瑰節(jié)當天綻放。
布朗夫人看到安娜的玫瑰十分驚訝，安娜的玫瑰在評選中獲得眾人贊賞。
安娜獲獎，布朗夫人道歉，安娜表達感謝，實現(xiàn)夢想。
七、主旨升華句
This story shows that with determination and hard work, one can turn dreams into reality, regardless of the doubts and mockery from others.（這個故事表明，只要有決心和努力，一個人就能將夢想變?yōu)楝F(xiàn)實，無論他人的懷疑和嘲笑。）
Anna's journey from a dreamer to a winner proves that success is not about secrets or privileges but about the courage to pursue one's passion and the perseverance to overcome obstacles.（安娜從夢想者到獲勝者的歷程證明，成功不在于秘訣或特權，而在于追求熱愛的勇氣和克服障礙的毅力。）
Through Anna's experience, we learn that even the most unlikely opportunities can lead to great achievements if we are willing to take risks and put in the effort.（通過安娜的經歷，我們了解到，只要我們愿意冒險并付出努力，即使是最不可能的機會也能帶來巨大的成就。）
The tale of Anna and her rose teaches us that true beauty and success are the results of dedication and love, not the possession of some mysterious knowledge.（安娜和她的玫瑰的故事告訴我們，真正的美麗和成功是奉獻和愛的結果，而不是擁有某種神秘知識。）
Anna's victory in the rose festival serves as an inspiration, reminding us that no dream is too big and no obstacle is too great when we have the will to succeed.（安娜在玫瑰節(jié)上的勝利是一種鼓舞，提醒我們，當我們有成功的決心時，沒有夢想是遙不可及的，沒有障礙是無法逾越的。）
八、寫作示范一
第一段
Anna planted the rose in her garden and tended it carefully. Every morning, she would get up early to water the rose, making sure the soil was moist but not waterlogged. When pests attacked the plant, she didn't panic. Instead, she spent hours researching remedies in old gardening books. She even asked the village elder for advice on natural pesticides. As the days passed, the once - dried - up rose slowly came to life. A tender green shoot emerged from the seemingly dead stem, and soon, small leaves unfurled. Anna watched with bated breath as the plant grew stronger day by day, and finally, plump buds formed on the branches.
第二段
On festival morning, Mrs. Brown passed by and saw the beautiful rose. Her eyes widened in shock, and her mouth dropped open. The rose was a vision of perfection, with large, velvety petals in a rich, deep red. The fragrance was so sweet that it attracted bees and butterflies. In the competition, judges and spectators alike were drawn to Anna's rose. It won the first prize. Mrs. Brown walked up to Anna, her face flushed with embarrassment. “I'm sorry for doubting you,” she said. Anna smiled and replied, “Thank you, Mrs. Brown. Your discarded rose gave me this chance.”
寫作示范二
第一段
Anna planted the rose in her garden and tended it carefully. She would talk to the rose every day, just like Mrs. Brown did. She used the knowledge she had gathered from observing Mrs. Brown's garden and applied it to her own. When a heavy rainstorm threatened to uproot the young plant, Anna rushed out in the pouring rain to stake it firmly. She spent her meager savings on organic fertilizers to ensure the rose had the best nutrients. With tender loving care, the rose not only survived but thrived. Buds that were tightly closed began to open, revealing the promise of a magnificent bloom.
第二段
On festival morning, Mrs. Brown passed by and saw the beautiful rose. She was speechless for a moment, then stammered, “How... how did you do it ” Anna's rose stood out among the others, its colors more vibrant, its form more elegant. As the results were announced, Anna's name was called for the top prize. Mrs. Brown approached her with a newfound respect. “I was wrong,” she admitted. Anna took Mrs. Brown's hand and said, “We all have our own secrets of growing beautiful things, and mine was just hard work and love.”
九、讀后續(xù)寫參考答案
Anna planted the rose in her garden and tended it carefully. She nurtured it every day, watering it just right and making sure that it received plenty of sunlight. She talked to it softly, much like Mrs. Brown did with her roses, hoping her words would encourage it to bloom beautifully. Weeks passed, and Anna’s rose began to show signs of improvement. Its leaves grew greener, and a few buds formed at the ends of its stems.
On festival morning, Mrs. Brown passed by and saw the beautiful rose. Mrs. Brown couldn’t hide her shock. Anna carried it to the festival, where it stood out among the rows of roses. As the prizes were announced, Anna’s flower won the hearts of all. Mrs. Brown’s mouth dropped open at the result and came to ask what her secret of planting flowers was. Anna mentioned it was being able to do something she enjoyed and trying her best. Shocked and proud, her mother said excitedly in a whisper “Proud of you and your dream.”

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