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I am in the Navy, and several years ago I moved from Chicago, Illinois, to Meridian, Mississippi. I was at the airport, trying to get my boarding pass and check my bags. Because I was moving, I had almost all of my possessions with me.
When I got to the counter, I found out there was a limit to the number of bags you can check without paying a fee. I had exceeded (超過) this limit by four bags. In order to get both myself and all of my things home, I would have to spend over $100. I didn’t have so much money with me, because I had just paid some of my bills and sent a few larger items home by mail.
The airline employee told me she couldn’t do anything to help me. So I asked her where the nearest ATM was. She told me how to find the ATM and suggested I should go to the Airport Help Point for some help.
There was just one staff member there, to whom I told my trouble. He apologetically told me there was nothing he could do. I started to cry because I didn’t know what was going to happen next.
A fellow military gentleman was there using the amenities (便利設備), and he overheard me tell my story to the staff member. He came over and asked me for the story again. I told him, and we talked for a few minutes. He told me he was a parachuter (傘兵) in the army. And then he told me to go to the ATM to get my money. So I went, but I could only pull out eighty dollars.
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When I got back, much to my surprise, the ticket counter told me the man had paid the entire fee for me.
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Excitedly, I saw a familiar figure come into my sight, when waiting to pick up my luggage.
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一、文章大意
作者是一名海軍，從伊利諾伊州芝加哥搬到密西西比州默里迪恩，在機場辦理登機手續和托運行李時，發現行李超出免費托運數量限制四個包，需額外支付 100 多美元，但身上錢不夠。航空公司員工和機場服務點工作人員都表示無法幫忙，作者急得哭了。此時，一位同為軍人的男士聽到作者的遭遇，讓作者去自動取款機取錢，而作者只能取出 80 美元。
二、故事山分析
開端：作者在機場面臨行李超重需額外付費但錢不夠的困境。
發展：作者先后向航空公司員工和機場服務點工作人員求助無果，急得哭了，一位軍人男士了解情況后讓作者去取錢。
高潮：作者取錢回來發現那位男士幫自己支付了全部費用。
結局（預測）：作者取行李時再次遇到那位男士，兩人交流，表達感激與善意。
尾聲（預測）：作者感受到軍人之間的情誼和社會的溫暖，將這份善意銘記于心。
三、伏筆及在續寫中的回應
伏筆 1：作者行李超重，錢不夠支付額外費用。回應：為男士幫忙支付費用的情節做鋪墊，突出男士幫助的必要性。
伏筆 2：航空公司員工和機場服務點工作人員都無法幫忙。回應：凸顯作者困境的艱難，與男士的幫助形成鮮明對比。
伏筆 3：男士了解情況后讓作者去取錢。回應：暗示男士可能會在錢的方面給予幫助，為后續他支付費用埋下伏筆。
伏筆 4：作者只能取出 80 美元。回應：進一步強調費用缺口，體現男士支付全部費用的慷慨。
伏筆 5：男士是軍人。回應：可能因為同為軍人的身份，男士更愿意伸出援手，也能體現軍人之間的特殊情誼。
四、續寫要點
第一段：著重描寫作者得知男士支付全部費用后的震驚、感動等情緒，以及對男士這一行為的感慨，還可描述周圍人的反應。
第二段：細致描繪再次見到男士時的場景，兩人的對話，作者如何表達感激，男士又如何回應，傳遞出溫暖與正能量。
五、情感線
作者一開始因行李費用問題陷入焦慮和無助，求助無果后急得哭，處于極度沮喪的狀態。當得知男士幫忙支付費用時，轉為震驚與感動，內心充滿溫暖。再次見到男士時，滿懷感激，通過交流進一步加深對這份善意的感受，情感從低落轉為溫暖與積極。
六、故事線
作者在機場面臨行李超重付費難題，錢不夠。
向航空公司員工和機場服務點工作人員求助失敗。
軍人男士了解情況后讓作者去取錢。
作者取錢回來發現男士已支付全部費用。
取行李時再次遇到男士，兩人交流。
作者銘記這份善意，感受到溫暖。
七、主旨升華句（英文）
In the face of difficulties, a simple act of kindness from a stranger can not only solve a practical problem but also warm the heart and restore our faith in humanity.（在困難面前，陌生人一個簡單的善舉不僅能解決實際問題，還能溫暖人心，重塑我們對人性的信心。）
The bond among military personnel, characterized by mutual understanding and support, transcends individual interests and showcases the true meaning of camaraderie.（軍人之間的情誼，以相互理解和支持為特征，超越個人利益，展現了友情的真正含義。）
This experience taught me that kindness is a universal language, and even in the most unexpected places, we can find people willing to lend a helping hand without hesitation.（這次經歷讓我明白，善良是一種通用語言，即使在最意想不到的地方，我們也能找到毫不猶豫伸出援手的人。）
Sometimes, the most valuable treasures in life are not material possessions but the moments of kindness and compassion we share with others, which can leave a lasting impression on our hearts.（有時候，生活中最寶貴的財富不是物質財富，而是我們與他人分享的善良和同情的時刻，這些時刻能在我們心中留下持久的印象。）
Through this encounter, I realized that a small act of generosity can have a profound impact, spreading warmth and inspiring others to pay it forward in the cycle of kindness.（通過這次相遇，我意識到一個小小的慷慨之舉可以產生深遠的影響，傳播溫暖，并激勵他人在善良的循環中傳遞善意。）
八、寫作示范一
第一段
When I got back, much to my surprise, the ticket counter told me the man had paid the entire fee for me. I stood there, frozen in shock for a moment. My eyes widened in disbelief, and my heart was filled with overwhelming gratitude. I couldn't believe that a complete stranger had been so incredibly kind. People around me also showed expressions of surprise and admiration. I asked the staff to tell me where the man was, determined to express my thanks in person.
第二段
Excitedly, I saw a familiar figure come into my sight, when waiting to pick up my luggage. It was the kind - hearted man. I rushed towards him and said, “Sir, I can't thank you enough. Your help means the world to me.” He smiled gently and replied, “We're all in the military. We should support each other.” His words were simple yet full of warmth. We chatted for a while, and I learned more about his military life. Before we parted, I promised him that I would pass on his kindness whenever I could.
寫作示范二
第一段
When I got back, much to my surprise, the ticket counter told me the man had paid the entire fee for me. I was speechless for a few seconds, then a lump formed in my throat. Tears of gratitude welled up in my eyes. I was deeply touched by his selfless act. The staff around me were also moved by this unexpected kindness. I kept asking about the man's information, eager to know more about the person who had saved me from such a difficult situation.
第二段
Excitedly, I saw a familiar figure come into my sight, when waiting to pick up my luggage. It was him. I walked up to him with a big smile and said, “I really don't know how to repay you.” He patted me on the shoulder and said, “Don't mention it. Just pay it forward.” His words resonated in my heart. We exchanged some contact information, and I knew that this encounter would be a precious memory in my life. From then on, I always remembered his kindness and tried to be as helpful as he was.
九、【參考答案】
When I got back, much to my surprise, the ticket counter told me the man had paid the entire fee for me. I was so thankful but didn’t know how to find him to say thanks. He had left without giving me his name or contact information like phone number or address, so I couldn’t return him what he had paid. He helped me get home when I was in trouble, leaving me in tears of gratitude. I was wondering what I could do to repay his kindness all the way.
Excitedly, I saw a familiar figure come into my sight, when waiting to pick up my luggage. It was the military gentleman who had helped me earlier. He was standing there, checking his own bags with a smile. I quickly walked over to him, my heart pounding with gratitude. “Sir, I just wanted to say thank you again, you really saved my day.” He just chuckled and patted me on the shoulder. “Don’t mention it, kid. We’ve all been in a trouble before. Just pay it forward someday, okay ” I nodded eagerly, feeling a warmth in my chest. He gave me a wink and walked off, leaving me with a renewed sense of hope and the belief that there are always good people in the world.

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