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In a green forest, there lived a group of animals. The wise old owl (貓頭鷹) Hootie, with his sharp eyes and calm manner, was the keeper of ancient knowledge. The playful rabbit Thumper was always full of energy, wandering around and bringing cheers. The brave deer Bambi, with his strong legs and gentle heart, was fearless in the face of danger. And the curious squirrel Nutty was constantly exploring, his tiny feet always finding something new.
One day, the animals woke up to find that their forest was in danger. A group of humans, armed with tools, had come to cut down the trees and build a new city. The animals were scared and didn’t know what to do. They decided to hold a meeting to come up with a plan.
Hootie, being the wise old owl, suggested that they go and talk to the humans. He said that they should try to reason with them and make them understand that the forest was their home. The other animals were hesitant, but they trusted Hootie and agreed to go with him.
As they neared the humans, Thumper’s heart raced, but he bravely stayed by Hootie’s side. Bambi’s ears moved nervously, yet he stood tall, ready to protect his home. Nutty, sitting on a nearby branch, chattered anxiously. Hootie stepped forward and spoke to the humans, explaining the forest’s significance. The humans paused, but their expressions remained uncertain. Thumper then stepped forward, showing his playful side, trying to soften the humans’ hearts. Bambi rubbed the closest human gently, hoping to convey the peace of the forest. Nutty, gathering his courage, dropped a small nut at the humans’ feet as a sign of friendship. The animals’ combined efforts were a desperate attempt to save their beloved forest.
注意：1. 續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；
2. 請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
Gradually, the humans’ expressions began to soften.
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The animals were overjoyed and thanked Hootie for his wise advice.
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一、文章大意
在一片綠色森林里，住著貓頭鷹胡蒂、兔子桑珀、鹿斑比和松鼠納蒂等動(dòng)物。一天，它們發(fā)現(xiàn)一群人類帶著工具來砍伐樹木，要建造新城市，森林面臨危險(xiǎn)。動(dòng)物們害怕又不知所措，便開會(huì)商議對策。睿智的胡蒂建議去和人類談判，讓他們明白森林是動(dòng)物們的家園。其他動(dòng)物雖猶豫，但信任胡蒂，還是一同前往。靠近人類時(shí)，動(dòng)物們都很緊張，但都勇敢地以自己的方式試圖打動(dòng)人類，如胡蒂解釋森林的重要性，桑珀展現(xiàn)俏皮一面，斑比溫柔觸碰人類，納蒂扔下堅(jiān)果示好。
二、故事山分析
開端：森林里的動(dòng)物們發(fā)現(xiàn)人類要來砍伐樹木，森林面臨危機(jī)，動(dòng)物們決定開會(huì)商討對策。
發(fā)展：胡蒂建議與人類談判，動(dòng)物們雖緊張但一同前往，各自以不同方式試圖打動(dòng)人類。
高潮：人類的表情開始軟化，這是故事的轉(zhuǎn)折點(diǎn)，預(yù)示著事情有了轉(zhuǎn)機(jī)。
結(jié)局（預(yù)測）：人類被動(dòng)物們打動(dòng)，放棄砍伐森林，動(dòng)物們成功守護(hù)家園。
尾聲（預(yù)測）：動(dòng)物們慶祝勝利，更加珍惜森林，也明白了團(tuán)結(jié)和溝通的重要性。
三、伏筆及在續(xù)寫中的回應(yīng)
伏筆 1：胡蒂是睿智的，擁有古老知識(shí) 。回應(yīng)：他的建議成為解決問題的關(guān)鍵，最終證明他的決策是正確的，動(dòng)物們也因此感謝他。
伏筆 2：動(dòng)物們都很害怕，但決定一起面對 。回應(yīng)：在與人類溝通的過程中，它們相互陪伴，共同努力，體現(xiàn)了團(tuán)結(jié)的力量，最終成功守護(hù)家園。
伏筆 3：動(dòng)物們以各自獨(dú)特的方式試圖打動(dòng)人類 。回應(yīng)：這些舉動(dòng)逐漸讓人類的態(tài)度發(fā)生轉(zhuǎn)變，是人類態(tài)度軟化的直接原因。
伏筆 4：人類聽到動(dòng)物們的訴求后表情不確定 。回應(yīng)：為后續(xù)人類態(tài)度的轉(zhuǎn)變做鋪墊，暗示事情還有轉(zhuǎn)機(jī)。
伏筆 5：動(dòng)物們對森林的熱愛和對家園的守護(hù)決心 。回應(yīng)：促使它們積極行動(dòng)，也讓人類感受到它們的情感，最終贏得人類的理解。
四、續(xù)寫要點(diǎn)
第一段：詳細(xì)描述人類表情軟化后的行為和言語，比如他們開始互相交流討論，表達(dá)對動(dòng)物們的理解，甚至提出一些保護(hù)森林的建議。同時(shí)，描寫動(dòng)物們看到人類態(tài)度轉(zhuǎn)變后的反應(yīng)，如驚喜、歡呼等。
第二段：描寫動(dòng)物們慶祝勝利的場景，它們可能會(huì)舉辦一場歡樂的聚會(huì)。接著強(qiáng)調(diào)胡蒂建議的重要性，以及動(dòng)物們從這次經(jīng)歷中獲得的成長，如更加懂得團(tuán)結(jié)和溝通的意義。
五、情感線
起初動(dòng)物們因森林面臨危機(jī)而恐懼、焦慮，在與人類溝通時(shí)緊張不安，當(dāng)看到人類表情軟化時(shí)，感到一絲希望，驚喜逐漸涌上心頭。最后人類同意不砍伐森林，動(dòng)物們極度喜悅，對胡蒂充滿感激，同時(shí)也因成功守護(hù)家園而充滿自豪。
六、故事線
動(dòng)物們發(fā)現(xiàn)森林被人類威脅，開會(huì)商議對策。
胡蒂提議與人類談判，動(dòng)物們一同前往。
動(dòng)物們以各自方式試圖打動(dòng)人類，人類表情開始軟化。
人類被打動(dòng)，決定不砍伐森林，與動(dòng)物們達(dá)成共識(shí)。
動(dòng)物們慶祝勝利，舉辦歡樂聚會(huì)。
動(dòng)物們感謝胡蒂，領(lǐng)悟團(tuán)結(jié)和溝通的重要性，更加珍惜森林。
七、主旨升華句（英文）
This experience taught the animals that through unity and communication, even the most formidable challenges can be overcome, and harmony between different species can be achieved.（這次經(jīng)歷讓動(dòng)物們明白，通過團(tuán)結(jié)和溝通，即使是最艱巨的挑戰(zhàn)也能被克服，不同物種之間也能實(shí)現(xiàn)和諧共處。）
The animals' successful defense of their forest not only safeguarded their home but also demonstrated the power of understanding and cooperation, showing that with a common goal, all beings can work together.（動(dòng)物們成功保衛(wèi)森林，不僅守護(hù)了家園，還展示了理解與合作的力量，表明只要有共同目標(biāo)，所有生物都能攜手共進(jìn)。）
In the face of the threat to their home, the animals' combined efforts and heartfelt appeals revealed the deep - seated connection between nature and its inhabitants, and the importance of protecting this bond.（面對家園受到的威脅，動(dòng)物們共同的努力和誠摯的訴求揭示了自然與其棲息者之間深厚的聯(lián)系，以及保護(hù)這種聯(lián)系的重要性。）
This encounter between the animals and humans serves as a powerful reminder that every creature has a place in the world, and by respecting and listening to one another, we can create a more harmonious and sustainable environment.（動(dòng)物與人類的這次相遇有力地提醒我們，每個(gè)生物在世界上都有一席之地，通過相互尊重和傾聽，我們可以創(chuàng)造一個(gè)更和諧、可持續(xù)的環(huán)境。）
The animals' victory over the human threat to their forest was not just a win for themselves but a lesson in empathy and compromise, teaching us that peaceful coexistence is possible when we value the needs of others.（動(dòng)物們戰(zhàn)勝人類對森林的威脅，不僅是它們自身的勝利，更是關(guān)于共情和妥協(xié)的一課，教會(huì)我們當(dāng)我們重視他人需求時(shí)，和平共處是可能的。）
八、寫作示范一
第一段
Gradually, the humans’ expressions began to soften. They started to talk among themselves in hushed tones. One of them stepped forward and said, “We didn't realize how much this forest means to you all.” Another nodded in agreement, adding, “We should find another place for our city.” The animals were filled with joy and relief. Thumper jumped up and down, cheering loudly. Bambi let out a gentle bleat, and Nutty chattered excitedly. Hootie, with a wise smile, knew their efforts had paid off.
第二段
The animals were overjoyed and thanked Hootie for his wise advice. They decided to hold a grand celebration in the forest. Flowers were gathered, and fruits were shared. Bambi said, “If it weren't for Hootie, we might have lost our home.” Thumper added, “And we all worked together! That's what made it possible.” From that day on, the animals understood the importance of unity and communication. They lived in harmony, always ready to protect their precious forest.
寫作示范二
第一段
Gradually, the humans’ expressions began to soften. They put down their tools and started to listen attentively. One human knelt down and gently stroked Bambi, saying, “We were wrong. This forest is a beautiful place, and you all belong here.” The other humans echoed in agreement. Nutty, filled with excitement, ran up and down the tree. Thumper, his eyes shining with happiness, hopped around the humans. The animals couldn't believe their ears. Their hard work and courage had finally paid off.
第二段
The animals were overjoyed and thanked Hootie for his wise advice. They organized a special party in the forest clearing. Everyone brought something unique. Hootie was given the biggest share of the delicious nuts. Bambi said, “This is a victory for all of us. We must always protect our home together.” The animals nodded in unison. From then on, they became more united, and their forest thrived, a symbol of the harmonious coexistence between nature and its inhabitants.
九、【參考答案】
Gradually, the humans’ expressions began to soften. Their eyes, once hardened with determination, now showed a grace of understanding. The man who was playing with Thumper laughed heartily, reaching out to pet Bambi’s head gently. Another human bent down to pick up the nut Nutty had dropped, examining it with huge interest. They started to whisper among themselves, nodding in acknowledgment. It seemed that the animals’ efforts had finally touched their hearts. In that moment, a wave of relief washed over the animals, and their fear was replaced with a glimmer of hope.
The animals were overjoyed and thanked Hootie for his wise advice. They all gathered around Hootie, their eyes shining with gratitude. They knew that without Hootie’s guidance, they might have lost their precious forest. With a newfound sense of unity and confidence, they celebrated that night, dancing under the moonlit sky, knowing that their home was safe and that their friendship and teamwork could conquer any future challenges.

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