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This summer my swim team had to run the Snack Stand to raise money for swim meets and equipment. But Coach Edward called us all together and said, “I just got word that the Snack Stand will be canceled through August.” No Snack Stand meant no money for swim meets! Coach Edward continued, “I’m just not sure what’s going to happen. For now, let’s jump into that pool and get swimming!”
The next morning, practice felt really weird. None of us were swimming our best, and even though Coach Edward was smiling as usual, we could tell he was worried. When we got out of the pool for a break, Daniel, captain of our swimming team, said, “I’ ve been wondering if we can’t run the Snack Stand, maybe we can think of other ways to raise money.”“Good idea,” we all agreed.
At first, Coach Edward wasn’t sure about doing a big fundraiser. But once he saw how much we all wanted to help, he said, “OK! Let’s go for it!” That’s when we started brainstorming ideas for the Big Stand. “We could have a Fun in the Sun Lemonade Stand,” I suggested. “I could bring my karaoke machine from home, and the songs could be about swimming and water, “said one team member. So many kids offered to make fish cookies. We spent so much time getting everything ready and were positive that it would be a grand success.
I was squeezing lemons for lemonade the day before our big event when I saw a very dark cloud outside the kitchen window. “Uh-oh! That’s not a rain cloud is it ” I asked my mom. “Rain would be a disaster! It could ruin everything.” “You know what they say,” she answered. “Hope for the best, but prepare for the worst. ”“Hmm,” I said. The next day, as soon as arriving at the pool grounds, Daniel and I set up our Fun in the Sun Lemonade Stand. We had stacks of cups, and a fancy drink filled with lemonade. The weather started out just fine. Even more people than we’d expected sang songs, and gobbled cookies.
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Unluckily, a few clouds suddenly turned into a bunch of dark ones.
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After a while, the rain let up, the sun popped back out, and Coach Edward made a fantastic announcement.
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一、文章大意
今年夏天，作者所在的游泳隊原本計劃經營小吃攤為游泳比賽和設備籌集資金，但小吃攤取消。隊員丹尼爾提出想其他辦法籌款，教練同意后大家開始頭腦風暴，最終決定舉辦 “陽光下的樂趣檸檬水攤” 活動，隊員們各自準備物資，活動前一天作者發現烏云，擔心下雨會毀了一切，活動當天一開始天氣不錯，比預期更多的人參與唱歌、吃餅干。
二、故事山分析
開端：游泳隊經營小吃攤籌款計劃取消，面臨資金困境。
發展：隊員提議并決定舉辦 “陽光下的樂趣檸檬水攤” 活動，積極準備，活動當天起初進展順利。
高潮：突然烏云密布，面臨下雨可能毀了活動的危機，這是故事的轉折點。
結局（預測）：雨停后活動繼續，取得成功，游泳隊成功籌集到資金。
尾聲（預測）：這次經歷讓隊員們更加團結，也讓大家明白面對困難時積極應對的重要性。
三、伏筆及在續寫中的回應
伏筆 1：小吃攤取消，游泳隊面臨資金難題 。回應：在后續情節中，通過舉辦檸檬水攤活動成功解決資金問題，體現隊員們的積極應對和團隊協作。
伏筆 2：作者看到烏云，擔心下雨毀了活動 ?；貞河旯幌缕饋?，使活動陷入危機，為后續雨停后的轉折做鋪墊。
伏筆 3：大家積極準備檸檬水攤活動，充滿期待 ?；貞罕M管遭遇下雨，但活動最終還是成功，突出大家的努力沒有白費。
伏筆 4：活動當天一開始天氣不錯，參與人數超出預期 ?；貞号c下雨后的危機形成對比，更能體現克服困難后的喜悅和成功的來之不易。
伏筆 5：教練起初不確定舉辦大型籌款活動，看到隊員熱情后同意 ?；貞航叹氃诨顒又械淖饔秘灤┦冀K，在雨停后做出重要宣布，推動故事發展。
四、續寫要點
第一段：詳細描述下雨時大家的反應，如慌亂、沮喪，以及為保護物資和活動采取的行動，如用雨布遮蓋、轉移物資等。
第二段：描寫雨停后大家的喜悅心情，繼續活動的場景，教練宣布活動的成果，如籌集到的資金數額，最后表達對這次經歷的感悟，強調團隊合作和面對困難不放棄的精神。
五、情感線
隊員們一開始為小吃攤取消而擔憂，策劃活動時充滿期待，活動當天進展順利時興奮，下雨時慌亂、沮喪，雨停后重拾希望，活動成功后喜悅、自豪，通過這些情感變化展現故事的起伏。
六、故事線
游泳隊小吃攤籌款計劃取消。
隊員提議舉辦檸檬水攤活動，大家積極準備。
活動前一天作者擔心下雨，活動當天起初進展順利。
突然下雨，活動陷入危機，大家采取保護措施。
雨停后活動繼續，取得成功。
教練宣布活動成果，隊員們收獲成長。
七、主旨升華句（英文）
This experience taught us that no matter how challenging the situation may seem, with unity and perseverance, we can always find a way to overcome difficulties and achieve our goals.（這次經歷讓我們明白，無論情況看起來多么具有挑戰性，只要團結一心、堅持不懈，我們總能找到克服困難、實現目標的方法。）
Through the ups and downs of this fundraising event, we learned the true meaning of teamwork and resilience, which will surely carry us through any tough times in the future.（通過這次籌款活動的起起落落，我們學到了團隊合作和堅韌不拔的真正含義，這無疑將幫助我們度過未來的任何艱難時刻。）
Our journey to raise funds for the swim team not only filled our coffers but also filled our hearts with the understanding that a positive attitude and collective efforts can turn a potential disaster into a remarkable success.（我們為游泳隊籌集資金的歷程不僅充實了我們的資金庫，也讓我們深刻理解到，積極的態度和共同的努力可以將潛在的災難轉化為非凡的成功。）
In the face of the unexpected rain, our unwavering determination and cooperation demonstrated that the power of a united team can withstand any storm, both literal and metaphorical.（面對突如其來的雨，我們堅定不移的決心和合作表明，一個團結的團隊的力量可以抵御任何風暴，無論是現實中的還是象征意義上的。）
This event served as a powerful reminder that when we come together with a common purpose, we can not only achieve great things but also create memories and bonds that will last a lifetime.（這次活動有力地提醒我們，當我們為了共同的目標走到一起時，我們不僅可以取得偉大的成就，還能創造將伴隨一生的回憶和情誼。）
八、寫作示范一
第一段
Unluckily, a few clouds suddenly turned into a bunch of dark ones. In no time, heavy raindrops started to pour down. Everyone at the event froze in panic. We quickly rushed to cover the lemonade and cookies with plastic sheets. Some kids were trying to move the karaoke machine to a dry place. Daniel and I were desperately looking for something to shield the stacks of cups. The rain seemed to be determined to ruin our hard - work, and we felt a sense of despair creeping in.
第二段
After a while, the rain let up, the sun popped back out, and Coach Edward made a fantastic announcement. “Guys, despite the rain, we still managed to raise over $500 for our swim meets!” Everyone cheered and jumped for joy. We were so excited that our efforts paid off. This experience taught us that no matter how tough the situation is, as long as we stick together and keep going, we can overcome any obstacle. We all felt proud of our team and the successful event.
寫作示范二
第一段
Unluckily, a few clouds suddenly turned into a bunch of dark ones. In an instant, the sky opened up, and a torrential downpour began. The music from the karaoke machine was drowned out by the sound of the rain. People scrambled for shelter. We were all soaked, but we didn't give up. We formed a human chain to move the valuable items under the tent. Some of us were busy mopping up the water around the lemonade stand, trying to salvage what we could. The once - lively event seemed to be on the verge of collapse.
第二段
After a while, the rain let up, the sun popped back out, and Coach Edward made a fantastic announcement. “A big round of applause for all of you! Not only did we raise enough money, but we also showed great teamwork in the face of the rain. This is what our swim team is all about!” We were overjoyed. The experience made us realize that setbacks are just opportunities for us to grow stronger. We looked forward to more challenges and more chances to prove ourselves as a united team.
九、【參考答案】
Unluckily, a few clouds suddenly turned into a bunch of dark ones. Rain started to fall. and people began to scatter. Some of us quickly took out prepared umbrellas and attached them to our table to cover our lemonade stand and make a nice dry area for keeping the cookies dry. In response to the chilly rain, some of us started serving hot tea and coffee alongside our cookies. Even a new sign was pulled out. reading Fun in the Rain Hot Drinks Stand. The warm drinks were a big hit — and they went perfectly with the cookies from the bake sale.
After a while, the rain let up, the sun popped back out, and Coach Edward made a fantastic announcement. He announced that we had raised enough money to cover our swim meets expenses. He thanked everyone for their efforts and resilience, saying that even though the weather had been challenging, the team had shown true spirit and teamwork. We cheered and hugged each other, feeling proud of our accomplishment. Coach Edward reminded us that teamwork wasn’t just about winning races, but also about overcoming obstacles together.

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