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Catherine had stayed at home all her life to look after her three children, but now, she, who lost her husband in a car accident, had to step out and earn money to make ends meet. With zero work experience and no professional degree, her chances of getting hired for a well-paid job were next to zero.
One day, after dropping her children at school, Catherine spotted a construction site (工地). “I think I can work here,” she thought and walked close to the manager.
“Hi, are you hiring (雇傭) ” she asked. “Yes, we are,” the manager looked at Catherine from head to toe.“Are you sure you can work here This job requires a lot of hard work.” “I’m ready for it,” she told the manager and signed a contract (合同) to work a 12-hour shift (輪班). However, Catherine kept her new job a secret from her children. She thought they would feel embarrassed after learning their mother worked at a construction site.
Every morning, after dropping her children to school, she would go to the construction site and work until her shift ended. She would pick up heavy bricks (磚塊) on her shoulder to transport them from one part of the site to the other. One evening, Catherine’s son, Peter, told her about an upcoming competition in school that required mothers to join. In the competition, students would wear blindfolds (眼罩) and have to recognize their mothers without looking at them. “That sounds like such a cool event, Peter!” Catherine said excitedly. “I can’t wait for it!” “I won’t go there with you, mom,” Peter replied. “But why ” What her son said next was something Catherine wasn’t prepared to hear.
“Mom, I would have to touch your hands to recognize you, and everyone would look at them,” Peter explained. “Your hands are so ugly. They’re so hard and rough,” he added. “I will feel so embarrassed when my classmates look at your hands,” the boy said. “I won’t attend the event.” Catherine felt terrible but couldn’t say anything in her defense.
注意:
1. 續寫詞數應為150左右；
2. 請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。
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A few weeks later, Peter was walking home when something unexpected caught his attention.
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On his way back home, he kept thinking about how he would apologize to his mother.
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文章大意
凱瑟琳一生都在家照顧三個孩子，丈夫因車禍去世后，她不得不外出賺錢維持生計。由于沒有工作經驗和專業學位，她很難找到高薪工作。一天，她看到建筑工地招聘，盡管經理質疑，她還是簽下 12 小時輪班的合同，并對孩子們隱瞞了這份工作。一天晚上，兒子彼得告訴她學校有個親子活動，要求母親參加，通過蒙眼觸摸手來辨認自己的母親，但彼得因嫌棄母親粗糙難看的手，怕在同學面前尷尬，拒絕讓母親參加，凱瑟琳聽后十分難過。
故事山分析
開端：凱瑟琳丈夫去世后，為維持生計去建筑工地工作，并瞞著孩子。
發展：學校舉辦親子活動，彼得因嫌棄母親粗糙的手，拒絕讓母親參加。
高潮（待續寫）：彼得發現母親工作的真相，內心受到觸動，開始反思自己的行為。
結局（待續寫）：彼得向母親道歉，理解母親的辛苦，母子關系得到改善。
伏筆以及在續寫中的回應
凱瑟琳隱瞞工作：在續寫中，彼得會意外發現母親的工作，打破凱瑟琳的隱瞞，成為他理解母親的契機。
彼得嫌棄母親的手：后續彼得發現母親工作后，會意識到母親的手是因辛苦工作才變得粗糙，從而為自己之前的言行感到愧疚。
建筑工地工作辛苦：彼得看到母親工作場景時，會深切體會到母親的艱辛，理解母親為家庭的付出。
親子活動：原本拒絕母親參加的彼得，在認識到母親的辛苦后，可能會重新邀請母親參加，體現他態度的轉變。
凱瑟琳的難過：當彼得道歉并理解母親后，凱瑟琳的難過會被欣慰替代，家庭關系也會因此改善。
續寫要點（兩段）
第一段：描述彼得在回家路上看到母親在建筑工地工作的場景，詳細描寫他看到母親扛著沉重磚塊時的震驚、心疼等復雜情緒，以及周圍環境的艱苦，突出母親工作的不易。
第二段：描寫彼得回家路上的心理活動，他深刻反思自己對母親的態度，思考如何向母親道歉?；丶液?，他真誠地向母親道歉，表達自己的理解和愛，母親欣慰地接受，母子關系更加親密。
情感線
彼得一開始嫌棄母親的手，對母親態度冷漠，拒絕母親參加親子活動?？吹侥赣H在建筑工地辛苦工作后，他內心充滿震驚、心疼和愧疚?；丶衣飞希麧M心懊悔，思考如何道歉。向母親道歉后，他心中的愧疚得以緩解，母子之間的愛更加深厚，他也學會了理解和感恩母親。
故事線
彼得回家路上看到母親在建筑工地扛著沉重的磚塊工作。
彼得震驚又心疼，意識到母親工作的艱辛和為家庭的付出。
彼得反思自己對母親的態度，后悔當初嫌棄母親的手。
彼得思考向母親道歉的方式，內心十分煎熬。
彼得回到家，真誠地向母親道歉。
母親欣慰地接受道歉，母子關系得到改善，更加親密。
主旨升華句
True love and understanding are born when we see the sacrifices our parents make for us, and it is these precious emotions that strengthen the family bond. 當我們看到父母為我們所做的犧牲時，真正的愛與理解便應運而生，正是這些珍貴的情感鞏固了家庭紐帶。
Family love is not about the appearance or the comfort of life, but about the selfless dedication and mutual understanding within the family. 家庭之愛不在于外表或生活的舒適，而在于家庭成員之間的無私奉獻和相互理解。
We should always cherish and respect the hard - work of our parents, for it is their efforts that build a warm and loving home for us. 我們應該始終珍惜和尊重父母的辛勤付出，因為是他們的努力為我們營造了一個溫暖有愛的家。
The moment we truly understand the hardships our parents endure for our well - being is the moment we grow up and learn the true meaning of gratitude. 當我們真正理解父母為我們的幸福所承受的艱辛時，便是我們成長并領悟感恩真諦的時刻。
A family thrives on the foundation of empathy and appreciation, where each member's sacrifices are recognized and cherished. 一個家庭在同理心和感恩的基礎上蓬勃發展，在這里每個成員的犧牲都能被認可和珍視。
寫作示范一
A few weeks later, Peter was walking home when something unexpected caught his attention. It was his mother, Catherine, on the construction site. She was struggling to carry a large pile of bricks on her shoulder, her face red with effort. The noise of the construction site was deafening, and the dust was everywhere. Peter froze in his tracks, his eyes wide open in shock. He had never imagined that his mother was working in such a tough environment. As he watched his mother's thin figure bending under the heavy load, his heart ached with guilt.
On his way back home, he kept thinking about how he would apologize to his mother. He realized how selfish and thoughtless he had been. When he got home, he rushed to his mother and hugged her tightly. “Mom, I'm so sorry. I didn't know you were working so hard for us. Your hands are the most beautiful hands in the world because they are filled with your love for us,” he said, tears streaming down his face. Catherine was taken aback at first, but then she smiled warmly, her eyes filled with relief and love. From that day on, Peter and his mother became closer than ever.
寫作示范二
A few weeks later, Peter was walking home when something unexpected caught his attention. Out of the corner of his eye, he saw a figure that looked extremely familiar. It was his mother, Catherine, at the construction site. She was wearing a hard hat and carrying heavy building materials. The sun was beating down on her, and sweat was pouring down her face. Peter's heart sank. He watched as his mother struggled to keep up with the heavy workload. He remembered his words about her hands and felt a deep sense of shame.
On his way back home, he kept thinking about how he would apologize to his mother. He thought about all the times she had taken care of him and his siblings, sacrificing her own comfort for their well - being. When he arrived home, he waited patiently for his mother to return. As soon as she walked through the door, he stepped forward. “Mom, I saw you at the construction site today. I'm so sorry for what I said about your hands. I know now how much you've been through for us,” he said with a trembling voice. Catherine was touched. She hugged Peter tightly, and they both knew that their relationship had changed for the better.
【答案】范文
A few weeks later, Peter was walking home when something unexpected caught his attention. In the distance, he saw a familiar figure in worn-out clothes, covered in dust and sweat, lifted heavy bricks with her weathered hands at the construction site. As he drew closer, he realized it was his mother, Catherine. Catherine tirelessly moved heavy bricks with her ugly and rough hands under the scorching sun. Her face was covered in sweat, and she didn't even have time to wipe it off as she rushed back and forth, working tirelessly. Peter stood there in shock, unable to utter a single word. Meanwhile, a wave of guilt and regret flooded over him. He shouldn’t have said those hurtful words.
On his way back home, he kept thinking about how he would apologize to his mother. Peter couldn't shake off the guilt and regret for his hurtful words towards his mother. He knew he had to make things right and apologize to her. The moment Catherine stepped into the house from work, Peter rushed up to her, gently took her hands in his and held them tightly. “Mom, I’m sorry” he murmured, tears welling up in his eyes, “I didn’t understand then, but now I see how hard you work for us. Your hands may be rough, but they are the most beautiful hands in the world because they care for us.” Tears welled up in Catherine’s eyes as she embraced her son, a wave of happiness washing over her. From that day on, Peter not only attended the school event with his mother but also stood by her side, holding her hands with pride.

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