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Once upon a time, there was a young athletic boy who is really hungry for success. For him, winning was everything and success was measured just by winning. He practised hard every day to win every race lying ahead of him.
One day, the boy was preparing himself for a running competition in his small village. A large crowd had gathered to witness the sporting event. A wise old man had travelled far to bear witness also. The race began. The boy with his determination, strength and power took the winning line and came to the first. The crowd were excited, cheering and waving at the boy. However, the wise man remained still and calm, expressing no excitement. The little boy, however, felt proud and important.
A second race was called and two new young fit challengers came forward to run with him. The race was started and sure enough the little boy came through and finished first. Once again the crowd was excited again, and cheered and waved at the boy. The wise man remained still and calm again, expressing no excitement. The little boy, however, felt proud and important.
Another race, the wise old man stepped forward and presented the little boy with two new challengers, an elderly weak lady and a blind man. “What is this ” the little boy was puzzled. “This is no race!” he claimed. “Race,” said the wise man.
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The race was started and the boy was the only finisher.
“Race again,” replied the wise man, “this time finish together with all three of you.”
文章大意
從前有個極度渴望成功的年輕運動員男孩，他認為勝利就是一切，以贏來衡量成功，每天刻苦訓練只為贏得每場比賽。一天，他在小村莊準備跑步比賽，眾多人圍觀，還有一位遠道而來的智者。第一場比賽他奪冠，人群激動歡呼，智者卻平靜無波；第二場比賽他再次奪冠，智者依舊如此，男孩很是驕傲。接著第三場比賽，智者為他安排了一位年老體弱的女士和一位盲人作為對手，男孩十分困惑，認為這不算比賽，但智者仍要求他比賽。
故事山分析
開端：男孩極度渴望成功，以勝利衡量一切，為比賽刻苦訓練。
發展：男孩在村莊比賽，連續兩場奪冠，人群激動，智者平靜，男孩愈發驕傲。
高潮：智者安排特殊對手（老弱女士和盲人）讓男孩比賽，男孩不解。
結局（待續寫）：男孩在后續比賽中理解成功的真正含義，實現思想轉變。
伏筆以及在續寫中的回應
男孩對成功的片面理解：在續寫中，男孩會通過與特殊對手的比賽，逐漸認識到成功并非只是贏得比賽，回應其對成功認知的轉變。
智者的平靜與無動于衷：暗示智者有更深的見解，在續寫中，智者會引導男孩領悟成功的真諦，解釋他平靜的原因。
人群的激動歡呼：與智者的平靜形成對比，在后續故事中，這種對比會促使男孩思考成功的真正意義，不再單純因人群歡呼而驕傲。
男孩的驕傲：隨著比賽發展，他的驕傲會成為他認識自我和成功的阻礙，續寫中他會在挫折或反思中克服驕傲，走向成熟。
特殊的比賽對手：這是關鍵伏筆，在續寫中，與他們的比賽會讓男孩體驗到不同的 “勝利”，明白成功包含幫助他人、關愛他人等更豐富的內涵 。
續寫要點（兩段）
第一段：描述男孩和老弱女士、盲人比賽的過程，男孩一開始可能覺得輕松，但看到對手艱難的狀態，內心開始產生變化，如猶豫、不忍等，最終他獨自完成比賽，卻沒有了以往的喜悅。
第二段：智者要求再次比賽并一起完成，男孩起初可能不理解，但在比賽中，他開始主動幫助對手，三人共同完成比賽，此時男孩感受到了與以往不同的成就感，智者向他解釋成功的真正含義，男孩恍然大悟。
情感線
男孩一開始充滿自信與驕傲，享受勝利帶來的喜悅和人群的歡呼。當面對特殊對手時，他從困惑不解到比賽時內心產生動搖，獨自完成比賽后驕傲感減退，變得疑惑。再次比賽時，他從抗拒到嘗試幫助對手，最后共同完成比賽時，他體會到了幫助他人帶來的滿足，內心充滿感動與領悟，對成功有了全新認知。
故事線
男孩與老弱女士、盲人開始比賽，輕松領先。
看到對手艱難，男孩內心猶豫，最終獨自沖過終點。
智者要求再次比賽并一起完成，男孩不解。
比賽中男孩開始幫助對手，拉著盲人，扶著老婦人。
三人共同沖過終點，男孩感受到別樣的成就感。
智者向男孩解釋成功的真正含義，男孩領悟。
主旨升華句
True success is not merely about personal achievements but also about the ability to help and bring out the best in others. 真正的成功不僅僅在于個人成就，還在于有能力幫助他人并激發他人的潛能。
Success, in its truest sense, lies not in leaving others behind but in walking hand in hand with them towards a common goal. 真正意義上的成功，不在于把他人甩在身后，而在于與他們攜手朝著共同目標前進。
Victory is not measured by the number of times we cross the finish line alone, but by the moments when we make sure everyone crosses it with us. 勝利不是用我們獨自沖過終點線的次數來衡量，而是用我們確保每個人都和我們一起沖過終點的時刻來衡量。
The greatest achievement in life is not the medals we win, but the lives we touch and the positive influence we have on others. 人生最大的成就不是我們贏得的獎牌，而是我們觸動的生命以及我們對他人產生的積極影響。
Success is a journey of self - discovery and compassion, where we learn to value the progress of all rather than just our own. 成功是一段自我發現和充滿同情心的旅程，在這個旅程中，我們學會重視所有人的進步，而不僅僅是自己的。
寫作示范一
The race was started and the boy was the only finisher. He dashed forward effortlessly, leaving the elderly lady and the blind man far behind. As he crossed the finish line, he didn't feel the usual pride and excitement. Instead, he looked back at his struggling opponents, a strange feeling welling up inside him. The crowd fell silent, and the wise man just stared at him with a knowing smile.
“Race again,” replied the wise man, “this time finish together with all three of you.” At first, the boy was hesitant, but something in the wise man's voice made him decide to give it a try. As the race began, he slowed down, first offering his arm to the blind man, then reaching out to the elderly lady. Step by step, they moved forward together. When they finally crossed the finish line as a group, the crowd erupted into thunderous applause. The boy felt a warmth in his heart, a sense of achievement like never before. The wise man walked up to him and said, “True success is not just about winning, but about helping others reach the finish line with you.” The boy nodded, finally understanding the true meaning of success.
寫作示范二
The race was started and the boy was the only finisher. He sped through the track as fast as he could, the wind whistling in his ears. But when he turned around and saw the old lady struggling to take a step and the blind man groping in the air, his heart sank. The cheers of the crowd seemed hollow this time. He stood there, looking at his lonely victory, a sense of emptiness filling his heart.
“Race again,” replied the wise man, “this time finish together with all three of you.” This time, the boy took a deep breath and walked towards his opponents. He gently guided the blind man and supported the elderly lady. As they moved forward, the boy realized that the journey was more important than the destination. When they crossed the finish line together, a huge smile spread across his face. The wise man came over and said, “Success is not measured by how far ahead you are, but by how much you bring others along.” The boy finally understood that true success was about compassion and unity, not just empty victories.
參考答案
The race was started and the boy was the only finisher. The other two challengers left standing at the starting line. The little boy was ecstatic, so he raised his arms in delight. The crowd, however, was silent showing no sentiment toward the little boy. "What has happened Why don't the people join in my success " he asked the wise old man.
"Race again," replied the wise man, "this time finish together with all three of you." The little boy thought a little, stood in the middle of the blind and the weak, and then took the two challengers. The little boy walked slowly to the finishing line and crossed it. The crowd were crazy and cheered and waved at the boy. The wise man smiled,nodding his head. The little boy felt proud and important. Lost in deep thought for a while, the boy thanked the wise old man for making him realize the real meaning of success. From then on, he could be regarded as a truly successful athletic.

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