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John and Mary, a retired English couple, were spending their summer visiting Cape Cod, an attractive seaside scenic spot just two hours’ drive from Boston. Their daughter, who lived in Salem close to Boston, had dropped them off early that morning, and insisted that she would pick them up in the evening. John, known for his sharp memory and sense of direction, comforted Mary that they would have no trouble finding their way home, and refused their daughter’s offer.
As time went by, they were fascinated by the charm of Cape Cod, its old-fashioned streets, and the relaxing sound of the waves, and the couple lost themselves in the beauty of their surroundings. The sky was a brilliant blue, the air fresh with the scent of saltwater, and the sun bathed everything in a golden shine. John and Mary wandered along the beach, picking up seashells and taking in the view.
Yet, with the afternoon wearing on, they noticed dark clouds gathering on the horizon. Before the clouds thickened, John and Mary decided it was time to head back to Boston.
They boarded the bus with a few other tourists. At six o’clock, they reached what John believed to be the stop closest to the train station. He confidently led Mary off the bus, certain that they were just a short walk away from their connection to Salem.
However, as they walked through the nearly empty streets, it became clear that something was wrong. The station was nowhere in sight. Finally, the storm came. The whole town was dark except a cafe with light on. Having approached it, they found it was closed.
To make matters worse, when they finally decided to check their phone for directions, they discovered that the battery was dead. This hit them hard, and their earlier confidence turned into frustration and worry. Mary looked at John, her concern mirrored in his eyes, as they stood on the weakly lit sidewalk, unsure of what to do next.
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Just as they were beginning to lose hope, a young man approached them.
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The machine failing, the young man took out his credit card to purchase their tickets.
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文章大意
退休的英國夫婦約翰和瑪麗在科德角（Cape Cod）游玩，他們拒絕了住在波士頓附近塞勒姆（Salem）的女兒接送，自信能找到回家的路。他們沉醉于科德角的美景，直到下午烏云密布才決定返程。他們乘坐巴士，約翰自信地在他認為離火車站近的站點下車，然而卻找不到火車站。此時暴風雨來臨，手機沒電，咖啡館關門，他們陷入了困境，就在絕望之時，一位年輕人出現了。
故事山分析
開端：約翰和瑪麗在女兒送他們到科德角后，開始享受這里的美景。
發展：下午烏云出現，他們決定返程，在約翰認為的離火車站近的站點下車，卻找不到火車站。
高潮：暴風雨來臨，手機沒電，咖啡館關門，他們陷入絕望。
結局（待續寫）：年輕人出現，幫助他們解決困難，成功回家。
伏筆以及在續寫中的回應
約翰的自信：開頭約翰自信能找到回家的路，與后文迷路形成對比，續寫中可通過約翰的態度轉變來回應，比如從自信變得尷尬和感激。
女兒的接送提議：女兒堅持接送被拒，續寫中可提及如果當時接受可能不會有此困境，也可在最后表達對年輕人幫助的感激，如同得到了家人般的幫助。
烏云出現：預示著后續不好的事情發生，續寫中暴風雨來臨就是對此的回應，而年輕人的出現則是在這糟糕情況下的轉機。
手機沒電：導致他們無法查路線，續寫中年輕人可能會用自己的手機或其他方式幫助他們解決路線和買票問題。
幾乎空無一人的街道和關閉的咖啡館：體現他們孤立無援的處境，續寫中年輕人的出現打破這種困境。
續寫要點（兩段）
第一段：著重描寫年輕人的外貌、神態和語言，展現他的友善和熱心。描述年輕人了解情況后的反應，比如他是如何安慰約翰和瑪麗，以及他提出的初步幫助方案，如幫忙找火車站或提供手機查詢路線。
第二段：描寫買票機器故障時眾人的反應，突出年輕人的果斷和善良，他用信用卡為約翰和瑪麗買票。最后描述約翰和瑪麗的感激之情，以及他們順利回家后的感受。
情感線
起初約翰和瑪麗自信滿滿地游玩，迷路后，隨著情況惡化，他們的自信逐漸被焦慮和絕望取代。年輕人出現時，他們看到了一絲希望，當年輕人表示愿意幫忙時，他們的焦慮有所緩解。買票機器故障，他們再次緊張，直到年輕人用信用卡買票，他們充滿了感激。最后順利回家，他們對年輕人的善舉銘記于心，感受到陌生人的溫暖。
故事線
年輕人出現，詢問情況，了解約翰和瑪麗迷路且手機沒電。
年輕人安慰他們，用自己手機查詢路線，得知火車站位置。
眾人前往火車站，準備買票。
買票機器故障，大家著急。
年輕人拿出信用卡買票，約翰和瑪麗十分感激。
約翰和瑪麗順利回家，向女兒講述經歷，對年輕人的幫助念念不忘。
主旨升華句
A small act of kindness from a stranger can light up the darkest of times and turn despair into hope. 陌生人一個小小的善舉就能照亮最黑暗的時刻，把絕望變成希望。
In the journey of life, we may encounter unexpected difficulties, but the warmth and kindness of others can always guide us through the storm. 在人生的旅途中，我們可能會遇到意想不到的困難，但他人的溫暖和善良總能引領我們度過風雨。
Sometimes, the most precious treasures in life are not material possessions, but the kindness and help we receive from those we don't even know. 有時候，生活中最珍貴的財富不是物質財富，而是我們從陌生人那里得到的善良和幫助。
The kindness of a stranger is like a bright star in the night sky, shining brightly and showing us the way when we are lost. 陌生人的善良就像夜空中的一顆明亮的星星，在我們迷失時閃耀光芒，為我們指引方向。
This experience taught John and Mary that in a strange place, the kindness of a stranger can be a lifeline, connecting them to safety and warmth. 這次經歷讓約翰和瑪麗明白，在陌生的地方，陌生人的善良可以是一條生命線，將他們與安全和溫暖相連。
寫作示范一
Just as they were beginning to lose hope, a young man approached them. He had a friendly smile on his face and a kind look in his eyes. "Are you folks okay You seem a bit lost," he asked gently. John and Mary quickly explained their situation. The young man nodded understandingly and immediately took out his phone to search for the train station's location. After a few minutes, he said, "I know where it is. It's not too far. I can walk you there." John and Mary's faces lit up with hope, and they thanked him sincerely.
The machine failing, the young man took out his credit card to purchase their tickets. John and Mary were overwhelmed with gratitude. "We can't thank you enough. This is so kind of you," Mary said, her eyes filled with tears. The young man just smiled and said, "It's no big deal. I'm glad I could help." With the tickets in hand, John and Mary boarded the train. As they sat on the train, they couldn't stop talking about the young man's kindness. When they finally arrived home, they told their daughter the whole story, still amazed by the unexpected help from a stranger.
寫作示范二
Just as they were beginning to lose hope, a young man approached them. He was dressed casually in jeans and a T - shirt, with a backpack slung over one shoulder. "Hey, is everything all right " he inquired with concern. John and Mary poured out their troubles. The young man listened attentively and then offered to drive them to the train station. "It's on my way, so don't worry," he assured them. John and Mary were relieved and got into his car.
The machine failing, the young man took out his credit card to purchase their tickets. John's face turned red with embarrassment. "We'll pay you back as soon as we can," he said. The young man waved his hand dismissively. "Don't worry about it. I'm happy to help." After getting the tickets, John and Mary thanked the young man profusely. On the train, they were filled with warmth and gratitude. When they got home, they realized that this unexpected encounter had taught them a valuable lesson about the kindness of strangers and the beauty of humanity.
【答案】參考范文
Just as they were beginning to lose hope, a young man approached them. He seemed to sense their suffering and offered a warm smile, asking if they needed any help. After hearing their situation, he comforted them that they were close to the station and offered to walk them there. His calm and comforting presence provided a much-needed comfort, and John and Mary felt a wave of relief wash over them as they followed him. However, upon reaching the station, they were met with another problem — the ticket machine was broken, and their coins simply fell through without issuing a ticket.
The machine failing, the young man took out his credit card to purchase their tickets. Despite their attempts to repay him, he simply smiled and waved off their offer. He even made sure they were safely on the platform before wishing them a good journey. As the train doors closed, John and Mary watched him wave goodbye, deeply moved by the stranger’s generosity. That evening, as they narrated/told the story to their daughter, they couldn’t help but marvel at the unexpected kindness that had turned their troubling experience into a reminder of the goodness in people.

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