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應用文書信類(告知信+建議信) 訓練講評
一 書信類應用文格式、考情
書信類應用文首段一般包括開場寒暄，身份信息，背景事件，表達目的，銜接過渡五方面內容。
基于整體邏輯，中間段多采用虛（感受，想法等）實結合的內容構建模式
尾段一般包括重申，感受，互動等內容。
應用文高考趨勢
1. 注重考查創新思維、分析問題解決問題的能力；
2. 內容要求更為具體；
3. 中國故事、國際視野、環保意識、體美勞等內容貫穿其中。
寫作注意事項
1. 注意收信人身份（正式與非正式，語言的得體性）；
2. 注意格式特征;
3. 審題到位，寫全要點
4. 句子的流暢性（長句較多，尾重原則；避免單一句式，句句開頭都不同；）
二 告知信、活動介紹
(一) 練后重寫 告知信 給筆友寫信，非正式
假定你是李華，為豐富同學們的課外活動，上周你校舉行了愛國歌詠比賽( patriotic song singing contest)。請給你的筆友Tom寫一封信，分享其中的故事。內容包括:
1．比賽經過（整體+個人）；2．你的感悟（圍繞愛國、歌曲、比賽）。
注意：
1．寫作詞數應為80左右；2．請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。
Dear Tom,
______________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
問題：比賽經過要具體；感悟要契合話題
范文
Dear Tom,
Last week, our school organized a patriotic song singing contest to enrich our extracurricular activities, and it was truly an inspiring event!
開場寒暄，身份信息，背景事件√，表達目的，銜接過渡（簡單評價或總結概括）（總分總結構）
Students from different grades participated enthusiastically in it, singing patriotic songs that celebrated our country's glory and history. The atmosphere was electric as everyone sang with passion and pride. I performed a song that my grandfather used to sing, which made me feel connected to our heritage. 長句，符合尾重原則；句句開頭都不同
比賽經過：參加人員，具體唱了哪首歌，+評價氣氛、學生風貌，我做了什么+我的感受
I learn that expressing patriotism can take various forms, and music is one of the most beautiful ways to do so. It is a heartwarming experience that I will always treasure.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
或：
Para1:
I am writing to share with you a patriotic song singing contest held by our school last week, which is truly an inspiring event. 開場寒暄，身份信息，背景事件√，表達目的√，銜接過渡（簡單評價）（總分總結構）√
你的作品1
Dear Tom,
How's everything going To enrich our after-class activities, our school held a patriotic song singing contest last week. I'd like to share some details with you.銜接過渡，好！
To begin with our headmaster left gave a lecture concerning the significance of loving country. Then, participaters participants were invited to give their performances and I engaged in it actively. In the end. I won the silver medal. 中間段要具體；因篇幅有限，校長講話可以不寫
After this contest，I was full of excitement and gratitude. Only our country blooms will we live a better life.I feel so fortunate to be born in China. Only+狀語位于句首 才用倒裝
I'm looking forward to your reply. 尾段有些突兀
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
幫你改進1-1（語言打磨）
Last week, our school held a patriotic song singing contest to enrich our after-school activities. I’d like to share it with you. （刪掉寒暄部分，語言更流暢）
It started with a lecture from our headmaster about the importance of patriotism. Then, we all got to perform. I participated and had a great time! I even won a silver medal! 中間段內容偏少，需要進一步增加具體內容
I'm so excited and grateful. I truly believe that only with a thriving country can we have a better life. I feel incredibly lucky to be Chinese.
Looking forward to hearing from you!
幫你改進1-2（內容+語言優化）
Last week, our school held a patriotic song singing contest to enrich our after-school activities. I can’t wait to share it with you!
Many classes participated, each performing a different patriotic song. The competition was fierce! Our class sang "My Motherland," and although we didn't win, we gave it our all. Seeing everyone so enthusiastic and singing with such passion really moved me. It made me feel a strong sense of national pride and the importance of loving our country.
It is such a meaningful and unforgettable experience that I am eager for more.
尾段或：
What kind of extracurricular activities are popular at your school Looking forward to hearing from you! （合理使用Looking forward to hearing from you!）
你的作品2
Dear Tom,
I'm excited to tell you my story which happened定語從句稍顯啰嗦 last week. It's about my experiences and feelings from a patriotic song singing contest. 句子.不夠流暢
When hearing the news of this contest, I actively participated in it. I practiced my songs again and again and I believed I could make it. 賽前篇幅過長Then the big day finally came, despite a little sense of embarrassment, I finished my song as I expected. Finally I had won the first prize with big applause. 比賽經過要具體
From this experience, I have learnt that " There is a willing,there is success. Where there is a will, there is a way.” 感受與活動主題不契合
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
幫你改進2（內容+語言優化）
I am writing to share with you the patriotic song singing contest held in our school last week, which was really inspiring.
As arranged, each class took the stage and sang a patriotic song. Class 3 sang "Ode to the Motherland" enthusiastically and Class 5's performance of "The East is Red" was particularly moving. My class chose "My Motherland" and we even won the first prize! Singing together, feeling the power of the lyrics, I was overwhelmed with a sense of national pride.
The contest wasn't just about winning; it was about sharing our love for our country through music. It was a truly unforgettable experience.
（二）高考題訓練 2024新課標卷 告知信
假定你是李華，上周五你們班在公園上了一堂美術課。請你給英國朋友Chris寫一封郵件分享這次經歷，內容包括：
（1）你完成的作品；（2）你的感想（圍繞公園美術課）。
注意：（1）寫作詞數應為80個左右；（2）請按如下格式在答題紙的相應位置作答。
Dear Chris,
I’m writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday.
______________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
難點：對美術作品的具體闡述；基于公園 美術課的合理的感想
Para1：首段銜接過渡：
You cannot imagine how meaningful and interesting it was!
Its details are as follows. 代詞銜接
It was an amazing experience that left a deep impression on me.
It was filled with creativity and joy.
What happened there truly broadened my horizons.
The combination of art and nature was simply perfect.
Para2: 內容構建：
你完成的作品：（美術課任務可以寫但不要過多，）你的作品內容，（創作過程/靈感，效果如何）
你的感受（公園 上美術課的感受）親近自然，藝術靈感
范文片段1：We were tasked to draw or paint something that impressed us most. Inspired by the fantastic scenery, I created a watercolor painting of the small bridge over the park’s pond, surrounded by blooming flowers. The entire experience was incredibly refreshing. Being surrounded by nature not only sparked my creativity but also offered a much-needed break from the usual hustle and bustle of school life. I felt a deep sense of peace as I painted.
任務——作品內容——感受
范文片段2：Upon arriving at the park at 8 o’clock, we began painting the landscape there. Inspired by the beauty of the park, I soon had a great idea. I painted the park scenes: the bright sun, the green grass, the children playfully chasing after one another and the people playing chess in the shade, all of which made up a peaceful and happy picture. This outdoor art class was really unforgettable. Not only did we students get some hands-on experience from the class, but we also developed our interest in both art and nature! 時間順序
虛實結合：到達，任務，開始，我的創意+靈感來源，我的畫+整體印象；感受總——分
Para3: 重申感受、期待、互動
In a word, it was not just an art class; it was a moment of connection with nature that I truly cherished.
The park art class was incredibly refreshing and inspiring. I'm eager for more.
你的作品3
Dear Chris,
I’m writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday. 少銜接過渡
My work illustrates a corner of the park, in which stands a thin tree covered with thick snow. I found a red blossom on its branch. Astonished, I recorded it with my paintbrush.I was inspired by this tree and moved by its might, which told me the meaning of life and the courage when facing difficulties. It was that special art class that gave me the chance to come across such a special tree. 內容邏輯：先寫靈感，再寫畫了什么
In my point of view, this kind of classes is essential for our keeping closed to nature and learning from nature. for us to be closer to nature and get some inspiration from it.
Do you agree with me Looking forward to your reply.
修改意見：三段式比較好
幫你改進3
I’m writing to share the experience of an art class I had in a park last Friday. It was truly unforgettable!
My work captures a slender tree, covered with a heavy coat of snow, stands upright in the cold. Against the icy white, a vibrant red flower blooms bravely on one of its branches, symbolizing life's strength in adversity. The encounter with nature was truly inspiring, providing a unique experience unattainable in the classroom.
Not only did the art class stimulate my creativity, but it also deepened my bond with the natural world. I am eager for more of such enriching experiences.
（三） 模擬題訓練
假定你是李華，最近你們到一個外國游客較多的旅游景點上了一堂口語實踐課。請你用英文給澳大利亞朋友Luke寫一封郵件分享這次經歷，內容包括：
上課的過程；2．你的感想。
注意：1．寫作詞數應為80個左右：2．請按如下格式在答題紙的相應位置作答。
Dear Luke,
I’m writing to share with you a special spoken English class I had the other day.
__________________
Yours,
Li Hua
范文
I’m writing to share with you a special spoken English class I had the other day. It was an amazing experience that left a deep impression on me. / It was held at a popular tourist spot frequented by many foreign visitors.
Our teacher organized interactive activities where we had to communicate with tourists in English to practice our speaking skills. We were divided into small groups and tasked with introducing local attractions to the tourists. 上課過程：任務——時間順序
The class was both challenging and exciting. I felt a bit nervous at first, but as I started interacting with the tourists, my confidence grew. It was fascinating to see how people from different cultures responded to our presentations. I learned a lot about effective communication and the importance of being adaptable in language use. 感想：評價，感受，收獲
Overall, the experience was incredibly enriching. It not only improved my English but also broadened my perspective on cultural exchange. 重申感受、期待、互動
范文2
Dear Luke,
I’m writing to share an extraordinary spoken English class we had recently.
Our teacher led the entire class to a famous tourist attraction frequented by visitors from Western countries. We had the unique opportunity to engage in conversations with native speakers. All of us were activated by the authentic environment, eager to talk to the foreigners. Even the most timid boy managed to have a happy conversation with a tourist from Wellington.
This immersive experience was incredibly beneficial, as it significantly boosted my confidence and sharpened my language skills. I believe this experience will have a lasting positive impact on my English proficiency.
或：
Interacting with them in a real-world setting was exciting and profoundly enriching. I am eager for more of such activities.
Yours,
Li Hua
總結
首段開門見山：活動內容、目的、時間、地點、主辦方等+銜接句(簡單評價,或總結概括)；
中間段內容要具體：誰參加，唱了什么歌曲/ 具體畫了什么/ 具體做了什么；
中間段要虛實結合：現場氛圍、我的感受/ 對畫作意境的闡述等 ；
感受可放在中間段最后，也可放在尾段；感受要與活動契合（愛國、唱歌與愛國、難忘的經歷、希望有更多類似活動）；
首尾段不要過長。
三 建議 推薦
示范
Suggestion Letter to a Superior 正式
Dear Sir,
After spending a considerable amount of time with my team, I feel that there are a lot of areas where we can improve. I am writing this letter to you to give my honest opinion on the working of the team so far.
I feel the team is moving towards a positive direction and a few improvements will help us in achieving more. The first one is that we need to improve upon the communications within the team. All delays and lags we are facing are somewhat associated with a lack of communication. 建議的理由The second one is that we need to organise some team-building activities to help us work together as one unit.
I feel if these pointers are worked upon, we will witness growth in each individual and the group as well.
Yours sincerely,
Pablo Ortega
或：
I am writing this letter to you regarding---
I hope you will accept these suggestions and take the necessary actions.
（四） 練后重寫
假定你是李華，你校外教Chris想學習中國的水墨畫，希望你能給他推薦一位老師。請你給他寫一封電子郵件，內容包括：
1. 介紹老師的情況；2. 授課時間和地點。
注意：1 詞數80詞左右；2. 開頭和結尾已給出，但不計入總詞數。
Dear Chris,
I'm writing to recommend a Chinese ink painting teacher to you as you expressed your interest in learning this art form. I wholeheartedly suggest Mr Li, an accomplished and seasoned professional in Chinese ink painting.
With over two decades of experience in teaching, Mr. Li is widely recognized for his engaging and practical teaching style, which has earned him a considerable following. His classes are both informative and entertaining. The classes are held on Saturdays from 10 am to 12 pm at the Chinese Cultural Center, situated at No. 6 Kangning Road.
I hope this recommendation is helpful to you. Please let me know if you have any questions, as I would be happy to assist you further.
（五） 高考題訓練 2023新課標卷 建議信 （分析問題+建議）
假定你是李華，外教Ryan準備將學生隨機分為兩人一組，讓大家課后練習口語，你認為這樣分組存在問題。請你給外教寫一封郵件，內容包括：
1. 說明問題；2. 提出建議。
注意：1. 寫作詞數應為80個左右；2. 請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3.
_______________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
難點：恰當地指出問題，具體合理的建議; 得體的語言。
范文1
I’m Li Hua from Class 3. Knowing you are going to randomly divide two students into a group to practice the speaking after class, I am writing to state my opinion on the grouping way.
This grouping method has some drawbacks. One of the disadvantages to random pairs is that some students, especially the ones unfamiliar with each other, have to deal with embarrassments. What's more, large level gap can bring about difficulties in communication within the groups. It would be ideal if you can arrange the group according to our levels and objectives so that we can strengthen interactive learning.
I am looking forward to your reply. / Hoping you can take my advice into careful consideration and looking forward to your reply.
范文2
Dear Ryan,
I hope this email finds you well正式信件打招呼. I have some concerns regarding the random grouping of students in pairs for post-class speaking practice.
Random pairings may not always be effective as students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated with someone they are not familiar with. I suggest considering grouping based on students' proficiency levels or interests. This can enhance engagement and encourage better communication. It could also foster a supportive environment for language practice.
Thank you for considering my suggestions.
Best regards,
Li Hua
你的作品4
Dear Kyan,
I'm Li Hua from Class 3. I’m writing to you about the groups of practicing language. You have declared that two students should be divided into one group. I think it is improper. Because there always one listener, he or she couldn't check out your人稱錯 problems. It's bad for your future development. In my opinion, I think重復 the group should include 4 students in which the most of mistakes can be figured out and they can develop better.
Above are my views about the division不是建議信尾端寫法. Looking forward to your reply. 審題沒有注意到“隨機”
幫你改進4（僅語言）
Dear Ryan,
I am Li Hua from Class 3, writing to express my opinion on the grouping strategy for language practice you have proposed.
I believe that pairing two students together may not be the most effective approach. Having just one listener means that errors might go unnoticed, blocking overall progress. In my opinion, forming groups of four students would be more beneficial. This setup would allow for a broader range of feedback and enable students to identify and correct mistakes more effectively, facilitating the better development of language skills.
I appreciate your consideration of these suggestions. Looking forward to your early reply.
（六） 模擬題訓練
隨著社會的發展，心理健康越來越受到人們的關注。10 月 10日是“世界精神衛生日”。假定你是李華,請你給校長就如何改善學生心理健康狀況寫一封信,內容包括:
心理健康的重要性; 2. 你的建議及理由。
難點：心理健康重要性；語言得體
Dear Principal.
I hope this letter finds you well. As World Mental Health Day is approaching. I want to take this opportunity to discuss the importance of mental health among us students and suggest some improvements.
Mental health is crucial for overall well being. It affects thoughts, emotion and behavior, influencing how we handle stress and relate to others. To enhance it, I suggest organizing workshops that educate students about stress management, which will empower them with practical skills to deal with life's challenges. Additionally, establishing a mental health support system, including trained counselors and a safe space for students to express themselves, will be invaluable. It will encourage students to seek help when needed and foster a sense of belonging and understanding.
Thank you for considering these suggestions. I am convinced that mental health of us students will reach new heights.
Yours
Li Hua
范文2
Dear Principal,
With the development of society, mental health is drawing ever more attention. As World Mental Health Day is approaching, I am writing this letter with the utmost respect and eagerness to offer some suggestions on how to improve students' psychological conditions.
Good mental health is crucial for personal growth, enabling individuals to develop a positive self-image, build confidence, and have a strong sense of self-worth. I suggest the school offer professional psychological guidance, such as hiring professional psychologists to provide counseling services. This would help students deal with stress and promote their mental health. What's more, it might be a good idea if the school were to organize more sports activities, like running competitions and ball games. Engaging in these activities can help release stress and enhance students’ physical fitness.
I sincerely hope that my suggestions can be put to use by the school. I firmly believe that the psychological state of our school will get better and better.
Yours
Li Hua
你的作品5
Honored headmaster,
I'm Li Hua in senior 3. The world mental Day is around the corner. It's clear that mental health is crucial to create students a better basis to learn and improve their physical health.銜接
I suggest that you should add a mental health class in Saturday afternoon. Also, every month, there should be mental health speech. These measures would not interrupt students' study time and could help students be aware of the importance of mental health and improve it gradually.
Hope you could apply my suggestions.
Yours sincerely,
幫你改進5
Dear Principle,
I'm Li Hua in senior 3. As World Mental Health Day approaches, I would like to seize this opportunity to offer some suggestions on enhancing the mental well-being of students.
Mental health is undeniably the cornerstone of a balanced life, influencing not only academic achievements but also emotional well-being and overall happiness. To enhance student mental health in our school, I recommend introducing a mental health class every week. Furthermore, organizing a monthly mental health talk would be beneficial. These measures can educate students on how to effectively address mental health issues, thus offering them powerful mental support.
I hope you will consider implementing these suggestions.
Yours sincerely,
總結：
首段：建議（推薦）的背景+過渡銜接
中間段：建議（推薦）+理由（根據具體題目可能會增加其他內容）
尾段：希望建議被采納；希望問題得到解決
恰當的建議，得體的語氣；
語言總結
提建議的句式+陳述理由
It would be ideal/ a good idea if you can arrange the group according to our levels and objectives so that we can strengthen interactive learning.
I suggest / recommend considering grouping based on students' proficiency levels or interests. This can enhance engagement and encourage better communication. It could also foster a supportive environment for language practice.
In my opinion, forming groups of four students would be more beneficial. This setup would allow for使可能 a broader range of feedback and enable students to identify and correct mistakes more effectively, facilitating the better development of language skills.
What's more, it might be a good idea if the school were to organize more sports activities, like running competitions and ball games. Engaging in these activities can help release stress and enhance students’ physical fitness.
It is important to do ---
綿陽一診 建議信
假如你是李華，你的朋友Wilson寫信告訴你他最近沉迷于踢足球，成績下降，老師和父母很擔心，希望他放棄這個愛好，他很難過（問題）。請你就Wilson的問題給他回信，內容包括：
1. 你的建議；2. 給與安慰或鼓勵。
你的作品6
Dear Wilson,
How's going How is it these days I hearing from am sorry to hear that some problems which bothered you a lot. There are some tips and comforts.
Your parents and teacher are worried about your grades. So It is important to improve your grades First, you can balance the time between the football and study. Secondly, you can recognize it was a prize, may be it can encouraged you not focus on football all clay. Also, it's important to keep this hobby, because it can excites excite you. The best way is communicate to communicate with your parents.
Hope this email can comforts comfort you. Have a nice day!
Yours,
Li Hua.
修改意見：
首段闡述問題（，表示理解），寫做意圖（提建議）
中間段（邏輯清晰）：提建議，原因，具體做法；鼓勵（或安慰）
注意建議的合理性
尾段：祝愿，盼回復
幫你改進6
Dear Wilson,
I hope you are doing well. Knowing that you are upset because of the conflict between your love for football and the impact it's having on your grades, I am writing to offer some suggestions.
I suggest you find a balance between your football activities and your studies. While football is an important part of your life, prioritizing your studies is crucial for your future success. One effective strategy could be to / You could set aside specific time for football practice and reserve other time for focused studying. Believe in yourself, and I am confident that you can excel in both your academics and your interests, achieving improved results.
Looking forward to hearing good news from you!

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