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“You should go for it,” Artie said, giving my shoulder a squeeze as we stood gazing at the poster. ‘Cinderella — auditions (試鏡) this Thursday after school,’ the words proclaimed.
“Me ” My voice came out as a frightened squeak. “Come on, Amy. You probably know the entire play off by heart. You are the best person for Cinderella.” he encouraged. I knew he was joking, but the truth was, I could tell you every single line (臺詞) in the play.
When we reached the hall on Thursday, I began to wish I hadn’t signed up to be Cinderella. It was easier to feel hopeful several days ago when my name was the only one on the sign-up sheet. Since then, seven other girls have added their own names to the list, including Sherry Anderson, the head cheerleader (拉拉隊長).
Luckily, we were given a moment to practice before the auditions began. “Good,” Mr Cordoza said approvingly as he stopped by and listened to my practice. I felt a glimmer of hope. “Now let’s see how you get on performing on the stage in front of everyone.” He clapped his hands for attention, signaling the start of the auditions.
Sherry Anderson was up first. She showed great confidence as she tossed her long blonde hair and recited her lines. Although she lacked an understanding of the lines, her performance was attractive.
Then it was my turn. As I climbed the stairs to the stage, I tripped, nearly falling flat on my face. I felt my cheeks burning.
“When you’re ready,” Mr Cordoza said, sounding impatient.
“Sorry,” I mumbled. I tried to calm my breathing, but the nerves tightened in my throat. “I...I…” I stuttered. ‘Speak up Amy, can’t hear you!’ jeers and whistles came from the back of the hall. I could feel that my performance was a disaster. Even Sherry’s lines were better than mine. Finally, I limped to the end of the scene, and as soon as it was over, I rushed off the stage, feeling defeated.
As I made my way through the hallway, I spotted Artie waiting for me.
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（1）續寫詞數應為150左右；
（2）請按如下格式作答。
He told me that Sherry got the role of Cinderella but I would be the understudy (替角).
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On the day of the performance, Sherry got sick and couldn’t come.
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文章大意
在學校準備排演《灰姑娘》的背景下，主人公艾米在好友阿蒂的鼓勵下報名試鏡灰姑娘這一角色。起初，報名單上只有她的名字，讓她滿懷希望。然而后來又有七名女孩報名，其中包括拉拉隊長雪莉 安德森。試鏡當天，雪莉自信滿滿地展示了自己的表演，盡管對臺詞理解不足，但表現很有吸引力。輪到艾米時，她在登上舞臺時絆倒，開場就緊張結巴，還遭到了臺下的嘲笑，最終表演失敗，她覺得自己徹底失敗了。試鏡結束后，她在走廊遇到了等她的阿蒂。
故事山分析
開端：阿蒂鼓勵艾米報名《灰姑娘》試鏡，艾米原本充滿期待。
發展：報名人數增多，競爭激烈，試鏡時雪莉表現出色，艾米卻狀況百出，表演失敗。
高潮：艾米表演失敗后心情低落，不知如何面對，阿蒂帶來試鏡結果。
結局（待續寫）：艾米成為替角后如何準備，以及演出當天的意外情況如何解決，艾米能否獲得成功。
伏筆以及在續寫中的回應
伏筆：艾米能記住劇中每一句臺詞 。回應：在成為替角后，她充分利用這一優勢，努力練習，為可能的上臺機會做準備。演出當天，因為熟悉臺詞，她能順利頂上。
伏筆：雪莉缺乏對臺詞的理解 。回應：在第一段續寫中，體現出她雖然獲得角色，但可能存在不足，為第二段生病不能演出，艾米頂上并展現出更好的理解和表演做鋪墊。
伏筆：艾米試鏡失敗，心情低落 。回應：在第一段續寫中，面對成為替角的結果，她從失落中逐漸振作，努力練習，實現心態轉變。
伏筆：阿蒂鼓勵艾米報名 。回應：在艾米失落時，阿蒂繼續鼓勵她，在她成為替角后，也支持她繼續努力。
伏筆：艾米在舞臺上絆倒，緊張結巴 。回應：在第二段續寫中，艾米克服之前的心理陰影，在真正登臺時表現出色，實現自我突破。
續寫要點
第一段：詳細描述艾米得知雪莉獲得灰姑娘角色，自己成為替角時的心情，如失落、沮喪等，以及阿蒂對她的鼓勵，艾米決定如何面對成為替角這一結果，如何開始努力練習。
第二段：著重描寫演出當天雪莉生病不能來，艾米臨危受命時的緊張心情，上臺后的表現，她如何克服之前的心理障礙，最終獲得成功后的喜悅和感悟。
情感線
起初艾米在阿蒂鼓勵下報名試鏡，充滿期待。試鏡時遭遇挫折，心情從希望的巔峰跌入失落的谷底，極度沮喪。得知成為替角，她先是失落，在阿蒂鼓勵下，決心努力練習，心情逐漸轉變為積極。演出當天臨危受命，她十分緊張，成功表演后，內心充滿喜悅和自豪，對自己有了新的認識。
故事線
阿蒂鼓勵艾米報名《灰姑娘》試鏡，艾米滿懷期待。
報名人數增多，競爭激烈，試鏡時雪莉表現出色，艾米表演失敗。
艾米試鏡失敗后心情低落，阿蒂帶來試鏡結果，雪莉獲得角色，艾米成為替角。
艾米在阿蒂鼓勵下，努力練習，為可能的上臺機會做準備。
演出當天雪莉生病，艾米臨危受命。
艾米克服緊張，成功表演，收獲喜悅和成長。
主旨升華句
Sometimes, the path to success is not as straightforward as we hope, but every setback can be a stepping - stone to greater achievements.（有時候，通往成功的道路并不像我們希望的那樣一帆風順，但每一次挫折都可能成為通往更大成就的墊腳石。）
This experience taught Amy that perseverance and the willingness to embrace unexpected opportunities can lead to unforeseen growth and success.（這次經歷讓艾米明白，堅持不懈和愿意接受意想不到的機會可以帶來意想不到的成長和成功。）
In life, we may not always get the roles we initially desire, but by making the most of what comes our way, we can shine brightly in our own unique moments.（在生活中，我們可能并不總是能得到最初渴望的角色，但通過充分利用降臨到我們身上的機會，我們可以在屬于自己的獨特時刻閃耀光芒。）
Amy's story shows that even in the face of failure, a positive attitude and the determination to keep going can turn things around and lead to a remarkable victory.（艾米的故事表明，即使面對失敗，積極的態度和堅持下去的決心也能扭轉局面，帶來非凡的勝利。）
Through this journey, Amy learned that true success lies not only in achieving our original goals but also in how we respond to challenges and make the most of every opportunity.（通過這次經歷，艾米懂得了真正的成功不僅在于實現最初的目標，還在于我們如何應對挑戰并充分利用每一個機會。）
寫作示范一
He told me that Sherry got the role of Cinderella but I would be the understudy. At first, I was filled with disappointment. I had dreamed of being Cinderella, not just her backup. Artie saw the sadness in my eyes and said, “Amy, being an understudy is still important. You know the play better than anyone. Practice hard, and you might get your chance.” His words gave me some hope. From that day on, I dedicated myself to rehearsals. I watched Sherry's every move during practice, learning from her strengths and also noticing her weaknesses in understanding the character.
On the day of the performance, Sherry got sick and couldn't come. Mr Cordoza looked around anxiously and then his eyes landed on me. My heart raced with nervousness, but I remembered all my hard work. Taking a deep breath, I stepped onto the stage. At first, my voice trembled slightly, but as I recited the lines, I grew more confident. I poured my heart and soul into the role, showing a deeper understanding of Cinderella. When the play ended, the audience erupted into thunderous applause. I had done it! I realized that sometimes, opportunities come in unexpected ways, and we should always be ready to seize them.
寫作示范二
He told me that Sherry got the role of Cinderella but I would be the understudy. I was crushed. All my hopes of being the lead seemed to have vanished. However, Artie refused to let me give up. “Amy, you have a gift. Just because you're not the first choice now doesn't mean you won't shine,” he said firmly. His encouragement gave me the strength to carry on. I spent hours after school perfecting my lines and studying the character. I watched old versions of “Cinderella” to gain more inspiration, determined to make the most of my role as the understudy.
On the day of the performance, Sherry got sick and couldn't come. Panic filled the air backstage. Mr Cordoza asked me if I was ready. My hands were shaking, but I nodded bravely. As I walked onto the stage, memories of my failed audition flashed through my mind. But I quickly pushed them aside. I focused on the story, on Cinderella's hopes and dreams. My voice rang out clearly, and my movements were confident. When the final curtain fell, I was greeted with cheers and praise. I had not only saved the performance but also proved to myself that I was capable of so much more than I had imagined.
【答案】
He told me that Sherry got the role of Cinderella but I would be the understudy (替角). At the news, I sighed and forced a smile. Sensing my disappointment, Artie put his hand on my shoulder and encouraged, “Seize the chance and you can shine too. Believe in yourself!” His words giving me a burst of confidence, I nodded admittedly, determined to be the best understudy. In the following days, I spent hours every day rehearsing my lines, perfecting my expressions and practicing each act. Gradually, I grew more confident and was fully prepared for the possibility of stepping onto the stage if needed.
On the day of the performance, Sherry got sick and couldn’t come. Panic filled the air backstage. Calm outside but nervous inside, I took a deep breath and stepped forward. All those days of hard work and preparation had led to this moment. As the curtains rose, I walked onto the stage with a newfound courage. The lights shone on me, and I delivered my lines with full of passion and confidence. With the music fading away, the audience broke into thunderous applause. At that very moment, I knew I fulfilled my mission as an understudy. That day, I became the star of the show, proving to myself and everyone that chances are for those who are prepared.

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