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Max and Mia were so excited to go to the city festival with their parents. They woke up early that day, put on their favorite clothes, and headed straight for the car. The anticipation was killing them!
As they drove into town, they could see flags waving in the air and hear music coming from every direction. “We’ re here!” Max shouted as they pulled into a parking spot.
Mia’s eyes widened with amazement as she took in all of the sights around her. There were food stalls selling all kinds of yummy treats like cotton candy, popcorn, and ice cream.She couldn’t wait to try everything! Meanwhile, Max was already eyeing his first game booth (崗亭) where he could win a giant stuffed animal if he scored enough points throwing balls through hoops. They spent hours exploring different parts of the festival together: trying out games at carnival booths or enjoying exotic (異國風味的) dishes from food stands while hearing different types of music ranging from jazz bands to folk singers.
But then something scary happened. Max turned around to ask his mom a question when he noticed that-she was no longer there. He looked around but couldn’t see her or his dad anywhere. Mia started to cry because she didn’t know what was going on.
“Where did they go ” Max asked himself as he nervously scanned the crowd for any sign of his parents. Mia clung (緊抓) to Max’s hand tightly as they walked through the busy street filled with people. “We need to find them,” Max said calmly but firmly. “Let’s try calling out for them.” They shouted at the top of their lungs, hoping that somehow their voices would reach their parents over all of the noise at the festival. But still, no answer came back from anywhere in sight!
As minutes stretched into what felt like hours, Max started getting really scared too — how could they ever find each other in such a huge sea of people
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Just then, a kind lady approached them with a warm smile.
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Turning around, they saw their parents rushing towards them.
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文章大意
Max 和 Mia 與父母一同前往城市節日慶典，他們一早便興奮出發。到達后，慶典上彩旗飄揚、音樂回蕩，美食攤位和游戲攤位琳瑯滿目，他們盡情享受節日的歡樂。然而，Max 轉身詢問媽媽問題時，卻發現父母不見了，Mia 嚇得大哭，Max 也緊張起來。他們在人群中呼喊父母，但在嘈雜的慶典聲中毫無回應，隨著時間流逝，Max 也越發害怕，不知如何在茫茫人海中找到父母。
故事山分析
開端：Max 和 Mia 與父母前往城市節日慶典，滿懷期待。
發展：在慶典上盡情游玩，享受美食和游戲。
高潮：發現父母不見，在人群中呼喊卻無回應，陷入恐慌。
結局（待續寫）：在他人幫助下找到父母，化解危機。
伏筆以及在續寫中的回應
伏筆：Max 和 Mia 與父母一同出行 。回應：結尾處父母出現，與前文出行形成呼應，強調家人團聚。
伏筆：慶典現場人多嘈雜 。回應：正是因為人多嘈雜，才導致呼喊父母無回應，同時在尋找過程中增加難度，為他人幫助提供背景。
伏筆：Max 和 Mia 的恐慌情緒 。回應：在他人幫助逐漸冷靜，最后見到父母時情緒轉為安心和喜悅。
伏筆：Max 的冷靜應對 。回應：在尋找過程中發揮作用，配合好心女士找到父母，展現其責任感。
伏筆：城市節日慶典的環境 。回應：續寫中利用慶典的環境特點，如工作人員、廣播系統等，幫助尋找父母。
續寫要點
第一段：著重描寫好心女士的出現，她的詢問、安撫以及提供的幫助，比如詢問情況、帶孩子去廣播室等，同時描述 Max 和 Mia 的反應，從恐慌到稍感安心。
第二段：詳細描繪父母出現時的場景，父母的焦急神情、動作，以及一家人團聚時的激動和喜悅，表達對好心女士的感激。
情感線
起初 Max 和 Mia 興奮地前往慶典，充滿期待。發現父母不見后，從 Mia 的大哭到 Max 的緊張，兩人陷入極度恐慌。好心女士出現時，他們稍感安心，隨著尋找過程推進，心中燃起希望。最后見到父母，恐慌瞬間轉為安心、激動和喜悅，情感經歷大起大落。
故事線
Max 和 Mia 與父母前往城市節日慶典。
在慶典上享受美食和游戲。
發現父母不見，呼喊無果，陷入恐慌。
好心女士出現，提供幫助。
通過好心女士的幫助，聯系到父母。
父母出現，一家人團聚。
主旨升華句
In the chaos of life, a helping hand from a kind - hearted stranger can guide us back to safety and warmth, just like a lighthouse in the stormy sea.（在生活的混亂中，一個善良陌生人的援手能引領我們回到安全與溫暖，就像暴風雨中的燈塔。）
Moments of fear and separation can make us cherish the bond of family even more deeply, teaching us the true value of togetherness.（恐懼和分離的時刻能讓我們更加深刻地珍惜家庭的紐帶，教會我們團聚的真正價值。）
The kindness shown by that lady in the crowded festival reminds us that there is always hope and love in the world, even in the most unexpected places.（那位女士在擁擠節日中展現的善意提醒我們，世界上總有希望和愛，即使在最意想不到的地方。）
Through this adventure, Max and Mia not only learned the importance of staying calm in difficult situations but also experienced the power of human kindness and the unbreakable bond of family.（通過這次冒險，Max 和 Mia 不僅學會了在困境中保持冷靜的重要性，還體驗到了人性的善良和牢不可破的家庭紐帶。）
In the vast sea of people, the reunion of Max and Mia with their parents is a beautiful reminder that love and connection can always overcome the challenges of separation.（在茫茫人海中，Max 和 Mia 與父母的團聚美好地提醒我們，愛和親情總能戰勝分離的挑戰。）
寫作示范一
Just then, a kind lady approached them with a warm smile. “Are you two lost, sweeties ” she asked gently. Max and Mia nodded, tears still in their eyes. The lady introduced herself as Mrs. Brown and told them not to worry. She took them to the festival's information booth, where the staff could make an announcement. “We'll find your parents in no time,” Mrs. Brown comforted them. Max and Mia sat nervously, waiting for any news.
Turning around, they saw their parents rushing towards them. Their mother had tears in her eyes, and their father looked extremely worried. “Oh, thank goodness we found you!” their mother cried, hugging them tightly. Max and Mia explained what had happened, and they all thanked Mrs. Brown sincerely. It was a relief to be together again, and they realized how precious their family was. From that day on, they always made sure to stay close during outings.
寫作示范二
Just then, a kind lady approached them with a warm smile. “What's wrong, little ones ” she asked softly. Max bravely told her they couldn't find their parents. The lady, named Mrs. Green, said she had kids of her own and knew how scary it could be. She took them to the security office. The security guard there used the festival's loudspeaker to announce the lost children. Max and Mia listened intently, hoping their parents would hear.
Turning around, they saw their parents rushing towards them. Their father scooped them up in his arms, and their mother kissed their foreheads. “We were so worried!” their father said. They thanked Mrs. Green and the security guard. This experience taught Max and Mia the importance of staying together and the kindness of strangers. As they continued their festival adventure, they held their parents' hands even tighter.
【答案】
Just then, a kind lady approached them with a warm smile. The kind lady, introducing herself as Ms. Johnson, gently asked if everything was alright. Feeling relieved that someone noticed them, Max nodded his head eagerly while Mia clung tightly to his hand. Ms. Johnson offered to help them find their parents. “Let’s go to the information booth, where we can make an announcement and your parents can find you more easily.” Ms. Johnson suggested. Max and Mia, still holding hands, followed her through the crowd. Along the way, Ms. Johnson constantly comforted them and assured that they would find their parents. As they were nearing the information booth, suddenly they heard familiar voices calling their names.
Turning around, they saw their parents rushing towards them. “Max! Mia!” their mom exclaimed, pulling them into a tight hug. Their dad, equally relieved, knelt down to their level. “You two did the right thing by staying together and going to the information booth,” he said, his voice choked with emotion. Max told their parents how Ms. Johnson helped them. Their parents turned to her, and thanked her for helping keep an eye on their kids. Although it was scary to get separated from their parents in a crowded place like that, Max and Mia felt the warmth from the stranger and also learned a valuable lesson about staying safe when out in public places like city festivals.

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