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假定你是李華，想拍攝一段短視頻，向外國朋友推銷你的家鄉(xiāng)特產(chǎn)。請給你的外教 Tom 寫一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：
1 .請他幫忙修改英文解說詞；
2. 請他幫忙為視頻錄音；
3. 表示感謝。
注意：1. 詞數(shù)80左右；
2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
參考詞匯：拍攝視頻 shoot a video；特產(chǎn) special products；解說詞 narration；錄音 recording
注意：1. 詞數(shù)80詞左右；2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
Dear Tom,
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Yours,
Li Hua
寫作提綱
第一段：開篇表明寫信目的，簡要介紹自己要拍攝推廣家鄉(xiāng)特產(chǎn)的短視頻，引出下文尋求幫助的內(nèi)容。
第二段：詳細(xì)說明希望外教 Tom 提供的具體幫助，一是幫忙修改英文解說詞，二是幫忙為視頻錄音，并闡述尋求這些幫助的原因，如自己英文水平有限，而 Tom 在英文方面有優(yōu)勢。
第三段：再次表達(dá)對 Tom 的感謝之情，強(qiáng)調(diào)他的幫助對視頻的重要性，以及期待他的回復(fù)。
語言積累
短語
shoot a video 拍攝視頻
promote... to... 向…… 推廣……
special products 特產(chǎn)
be in need of 需要
do sb. a favor 幫某人一個忙
have a good command of 精通
ask for one's help 尋求某人的幫助
look forward to 期待
express one's gratitude 表達(dá)某人的感激之情
contribute to 有助于
佳句
I am writing to you because I am planning to shoot a video to promote the special products of my hometown to foreign friends, and I am in great need of your help.（我寫信給您是因?yàn)槲矣媱澟臄z一個視頻，向外國朋友推銷我家鄉(xiāng)的特產(chǎn)，我非常需要您的幫助。）
Since English is not my native language, I am afraid there may be some grammar mistakes and inappropriate expressions in the narration. Thus, I sincerely hope you can do me a favor by checking and revising it.（由于英語不是我的母語，我擔(dān)心解說詞中可能會有一些語法錯誤和不恰當(dāng)?shù)谋磉_(dá)。因此，我真誠地希望您能幫我檢查并修改一下。）
Knowing that you have a good command of English and an excellent voice, I was wondering if you could spare some time to do the recording for my video.（我知道您精通英語，而且聲音非常出色，我想知道您是否能抽出一些時間為我的視頻錄音。）
Your help will surely contribute to the success of this video, making it more appealing and professional.（您的幫助一定會促成這個視頻的成功，使其更具吸引力和專業(yè)性。）
I truly appreciate your kindness and look forward to your favorable reply at your earliest convenience.（我真心感謝您的好意，期待您在方便的時候盡早回復(fù)我。）
寫作示范一
Dear Tom,
I hope this email finds you well. I'm Li Hua, and I'm currently working on an exciting project. I plan to shoot a video to promote the special products of my hometown to foreign friends.
However, I'm facing some challenges. I've written the English narration for the video, but I'm not confident in my English. I would be extremely grateful if you could help me revise it. Besides, your voice is so charming. I was wondering if you could do the recording for my video.
Your help means a great deal to me. Thank you in advance, and I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
寫作示范二
Dear Tom,
Hello! I'm Li Hua, writing to ask for your kind help. I'm going to shoot a video to introduce the unique special products of my hometown to international friends.
The English narration has been written, but I'm worried about potential errors. Since you have a good command of English, I sincerely hope you can help me polish it. Moreover, I know you have a wonderful voice. It would be amazing if you could do the recording for the video.
Your assistance will make the video more professional. Thanks a lot, and I'm eagerly waiting for your response.
Yours,
Li Hua
寫作示范三
Dear Tom,
How are you I'm Li Hua, and I'm excited to share my new project with you. I aim to shoot a video promoting the special products of my hometown to foreign friends.
As English is not my first language, I'm not sure if the English narration I wrote is accurate. I really need your help to correct it. Also, your excellent pronunciation and clear voice would be a perfect fit for the video recording. Could you please do me this favor
Your help will play a crucial role in the success of this video. Thank you very much, and I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Tom,
Eager to shoot a video to promote my hometown’s special products to my foreign friends, I’m writing to consult you to perfect it.
Firstly, what upsets me is whether my narration is accurate, vivid and authentic. So it will be very kind of you to correct the mistakes and polish my narration. What’s more, I have no confidence in the English recording, which I think may result in misunderstanding for my inaccurate pronunciation and intonation. So can you record it for me Only in this way will my foreign friends understand it better.
I would appreciate it if you can give me a hand. Keenly anticipate your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua

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