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One pleasant New-year morning, Edward rose, and washed and dressed himself in a hurry. He wanted to be first to wish a happy New Year to his family. He turned up at every door of the house, and shouted the words of “Happy New Year” in an excited voice. After a quick breakfast, he hopped along the street like a happy bird, greeted and repeated the words to those he met.
When he came back, his father gave him 50 dollars, saying he could buy whatever he had been wishing for. His face lighted up as he took them. He had wished for a long time to buy some interesting books that he had seen at the bookstore. He thanked his father and danced out of the house again with a light heart, wanting to buy those books.
As he ran down the street, he noticed a poor German family, the father, mother, and three children trembling with cold. “I wish you a happy New Year,” said Edward, as he was happily passing on. The man took a look at the happy boy and shook his head sadly.
Edward stopped and said, “It seems that you do not belong to this country” The man again shook his head, a confused expression appeared over his face, for he could not understand or speak English.
But the poor man pointed to his mouth, and to the children with hungry looks, as if to say, “These little ones have had nothing to eat for a long time.”
Edward quickly understood that these poor people were in difficult situation.
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He took out his dollars, and gave them all to the man.
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When Edward went home, his father asked what book he had bought.
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文章大意
新年的早晨，愛德華早早起床，興奮地向家人和街上的人送上新年祝福。父親給了他 50 美元，他打算去買心儀已久的書。在街上，他遇到了一家貧窮的德國人，父母和三個孩子在寒風中瑟瑟發抖。他向這家人送上祝福，卻發現男人搖頭，通過男人的肢體語言，他意識到這家人正處于困境，孩子們很久沒吃東西了。
故事山分析
開端：新年早晨，愛德華開心地向家人和路人送祝福，收到父親給的 50 美元，準備去買書。
發展：愛德華在街上遇到貧困的德國家庭，發現他們處于困境，了解到孩子們挨餓的情況。
高潮：愛德華把買書的錢給了這家人，面臨著回家如何向父親交代的問題。
結局（待續寫）：回家后，父親詢問買書的情況，愛德華說明原因，得到父親的理解和贊揚，愛德華也收獲了成長和內心的滿足。
伏筆以及在續寫中的回應
伏筆：父親給愛德華 50 美元讓他買書 。回應：在第一段續寫中，愛德華把錢給了德國家庭，放棄了買書；在第二段續寫中，父親詢問買書情況，引出愛德華的解釋和父親的反應。
伏筆：愛德華看到德國家庭的困境 ?；貞涸诘谝欢卫m寫中，促使他做出把錢給這家人的決定；在第二段續寫中，成為他向父親解釋的原因，也是故事升華的關鍵。
伏筆：愛德華的快樂和善良，如向家人、路人送祝福 。回應：在第一段續寫中，體現為他毫不猶豫地幫助他人；在第二段續寫中，得到父親認可，進一步強化他善良的品質和積極的價值觀。
伏筆：德國家庭的語言不通，男人搖頭、表情困惑 。回應：在第一段續寫中，通過肢體語言讓愛德華更深刻理解他們的困境；在第二段續寫中，作為愛德華幫助他們的特殊背景，突出幫助行為的意義。
伏筆：愛德華開心地跳舞出門買書 ?；貞涸诘谝欢卫m寫中，形成他放棄買書幫助他人的行為反差；在第二段續寫中，與回家后的情景對比，突出故事發展和人物內心變化。
續寫要點
第一段：詳細描述愛德華把錢給德國家庭時的動作、語言和表情，以及這家人的反應，如驚訝、感激等，還要體現愛德華放棄買書的心理過程。
第二段：著重描寫愛德華回家后與父親的對話，他如何向父親解釋錢的去向，父親的態度和反應，以及愛德華內心的感受，如是否后悔、是否因幫助他人而感到滿足等。
情感線
起初愛德華因新年收到錢和準備買書而開心興奮。看到德國家庭困境時，他心生憐憫。把錢給這家人時，雖放棄了買書但因幫助他人而感到溫暖。回家面對父親詢問時，他有些忐忑，得到父親理解后，內心充滿自豪和滿足。
故事線
新年早晨，愛德華向家人和路人送祝福，收到父親給的 50 美元準備買書。
愛德華在街上遇到貧困的德國家庭，發現他們的困境。
愛德華把錢給了德國家庭，放棄買書。
愛德華回家，父親詢問買書情況。
愛德華向父親解釋錢的去向。
父親理解并贊揚愛德華，愛德華收獲成長和內心的滿足。
主旨升華句
This act of kindness not only brought warmth to the poor family but also taught Edward the true meaning of happiness, which lies in giving rather than receiving.（這次善舉不僅給貧困家庭帶來了溫暖，也讓愛德華懂得了幸福的真正含義在于給予而非索取。）
Through this experience, Edward realized that a small act of compassion can have a profound impact on others' lives, and the value of empathy and generosity far outweighs material possessions.（通過這次經歷，愛德華意識到一個小小的同情之舉可以對他人的生活產生深遠影響，同理心和慷慨的價值遠遠超過物質財富。）
Edward's choice to help the German family instead of buying books showed that in the face of others' suffering, true kindness prevails over personal desires, and such selfless acts can create a more harmonious and loving world.（愛德華選擇幫助德國家庭而不是買書，表明在他人受苦時，真正的善良戰勝了個人欲望，這種無私的行為可以創造一個更和諧、更有愛的世界。）
As Edward received his father's praise for his kindness, he understood that the greatest wealth in life is not money or possessions but the ability to bring joy and hope to those in need.（當愛德華因善良得到父親的贊揚時，他明白了人生最大的財富不是金錢或財產，而是給有需要的人帶來快樂和希望的能力。）
This New - Year's story of Edward serves as a reminder that in the pursuit of our own dreams, we should always keep an eye on the needs of others, for it is in helping others that we truly grow and find the essence of life.（愛德華的這個新年故事提醒我們，在追求自己夢想的過程中，我們應該時刻關注他人的需求，因為正是在幫助他人的過程中，我們真正成長并找到了生命的真諦。）
寫作示范一
第一段
He took out his dollars, and gave them all to the man. With a determined look on his face, Edward placed the money gently into the man's hand. “Take this. It will help you buy some food for your family,” he said softly. The man's eyes widened in disbelief, and then filled with gratitude. His lips trembled as if he wanted to say something but couldn't find the words. The children, too, looked at Edward with big, round eyes, a glimmer of hope shining in them. Edward smiled at them, feeling a warmth in his heart despite giving away all his money.
第二段
When Edward went home, his father asked what book he had bought. Edward lowered his head for a moment, a bit nervous. Then he looked up, met his father's eyes, and told him the whole story. “I'm sorry, Dad. I didn't buy the books, but I couldn't bear to see them hungry,” he said. His father smiled warmly and patted him on the shoulder. “You've made the right choice, son. Your kindness is more precious than any book.” Edward felt a surge of pride and happiness. He realized that helping others brought him a joy that no book could ever replace.
寫作示范二
第一段
He took out his dollars, and gave them all to the man. Without hesitation, Edward thrust the money into the man's cold hands. “Here, this is for you and your family,” he exclaimed. The man was stunned, his face a mix of shock and gratitude. He bowed deeply, while the children gathered around, their thin faces lighting up with a faint smile. Edward felt a strange sense of contentment, even though his dream of buying books had vanished. He knew in his heart that he had done something far more important.
第二段
When Edward went home, his father asked what book he had bought. Edward took a deep breath and told his father everything that had happened. His father listened attentively, a proud look gradually appearing on his face. “Son, you've shown great compassion today. The books can wait, but the help you gave to that family is priceless.” Edward smiled, his heart full. He understood that true happiness came from making a difference in others' lives, and he couldn't wait to spread more kindness in the future.
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He took out his dollars, and gave them all to the man. How their eyes sparkled with gratitude! They said something in their language, which might mean, “You are doing me a great favor, and I am very grateful to you.” The man was so moved that he stood there, failing to say any words. At the same time, Edward saw a bright smile spread across the man’s face. He smiled back at the father, waved goodbye to the family and went home delightedly.
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When Edward went home, his father asked what book he had bought. He hung his head a moment, but quickly looked up. Then he told the story to his father. “I have bought no books,” said he, “I can wait for my books till next New Year.” “My dear boy,” said his father, “here are a dozen of books. I give them to you, more as a reward for your goodness of heart than as a New Year gift.” It was on that very moment that Edward realized a small act of kindness may be powerful enough to make a huge difference.

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