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讀后續(xù)寫思維拓展訓練
高考讀后續(xù)寫的文體主要為記敘文。顧名思義，記敘文主要以記敘事件為主，因此需要用到許多的細節(jié)描寫以使文章生動，言之有物。不少學生語言功底不錯，但是續(xù)寫始終得不了高分，其中一個重要原因就是細節(jié)描寫的缺乏。
那么，讀后續(xù)寫該如何寫呢？我們應該做到兼顧概括描述和細節(jié)描述，而且要多用細節(jié)描述。所謂概括描述是指對一個事件的總體描述，而細節(jié)描述則是對事件的具體描述，來對之前的總體描述進一步解釋說明，這樣能夠使得描述更加生動，有畫面感。
讀后續(xù)寫思維拓展訓練之1——用動作細節(jié)描寫表達感情
【佳句觀摩】
1.他很困。 概括描寫：He is very sleepy.
細節(jié)描述：He covered his mouth to hide his yawn(捂住嘴不讓人看見他打哈欠).
2.我們很驚訝。 概括描寫：We are very surprised.
細節(jié)描述：Our mouths dropped open in surprise (驚奇地張大嘴巴).
3.她非常生氣。 概括描寫：She was very angry.
細節(jié)描述：She folded her arms and glared at him (交叉雙臂，怒視著他).
4.她非常興奮。 概括描寫：She was very excited.
細節(jié)描述：She jumped to her feet with joy (高興地跳起來) at the news.
【好句仿寫】
1.她非常小心謹慎。 概括描寫：She was very cautious/careful.
細節(jié)描述：She picked her way cautiously/carefully (小心地走著) along the stream.
2.他很不安。 概括描寫：He was very upset/uneasy.
細節(jié)描述：He paced back and forth (來回踱步) in the room.
3.她非常害怕。 概括描寫：She was very frightened.
細節(jié)描述：She screamed that there was a snake (尖叫著說有一條蛇).
讀后續(xù)寫思維拓展訓練之2——高興與興奮
【“高興與興奮”之多樣表達】
1.happy adj.　愉快的，高興的；美滿的2.joyful adj.歡樂的 3.pleased adj. 欣喜的，高興的，滿意的 4.delighted adj. 欣喜的，高興的 5.cheerful adj. 快樂的 6.excited adj. 興奮的
7.thrilled adj. 興奮的；激動的 8.be in high spirits 精神高漲
9.be excited with joy at the success 為成功而欣喜 10.be on top of the world 　心滿意足
11.a mixture of excitement and happiness 　既興奮又開心 12.be wild with delight 欣喜若狂
【佳句觀摩】
1.當媽媽親吻他時，小孩開心極了。
概括描寫：When his mother kissed him on the cheek，the baby was very happy.
細節(jié)描述：When his mother kissed him on the cheek，it seemed as if the baby were on top of the world(非常開心).
2.他很激動，心情久久不能平靜。
概括描寫：He was very excited，and it was long before he calmed down.
細節(jié)描述：His heart was thumping with excitement(他激動得心怦怦跳)，and it was long before he calmed down.
3.聽到你成功的消息我非常高興。 概括描寫：I was delighted to hear the news of your success.
細節(jié)描述：On hearing the news of your success，I danced with joy and sweetness(我歡欣雀躍).
【好句仿寫】
1.他一看見娜塔莎就開心。 概括描寫：As soon as he saw Natasha，he was pleased.
細節(jié)描述：As soon as he saw Natasha，his face was full of smile (他的臉堆滿笑容) and his bright smile lit up the room(笑容照亮房間).
2.當主持人宣布她獲獎時，她興奮極了。
概括描寫：When the host announced that she won the prize，she felt thrilled.
細節(jié)描述：When the host announced that she won the prize，her eyes twinkled with excitement(她激動得兩眼放光).
3.當他聽說那消息時很高興。 概括描寫：He was highly delighted when he heard the news.
細節(jié)描述：He was wild with delight(欣喜若狂) when he heard the news.
讀后續(xù)寫思維拓展訓練之3——悲傷與消沉
【“悲傷與消沉”之多樣表達】
1.weep v.　無聲地流淚 2.sob v. 啜泣，抽噎 3.yowl v. 大哭大叫 4.tear n. [常復]眼淚，淚珠
5.sorrow n. 悲痛； 憂傷 6.desperate adj. 絕望的 7.sadness n. 悲傷， 憂愁
8.grief n. 悲痛 9.a broken spirit 意志消沉 10.cry one’s heart out 悲痛欲絕
11.with a heavy heart 懷著沉重的心情 12.fall into despair 陷入絕望
【佳句觀摩】
1.一聽到那個壞消息，她悲傷不已。 概括描寫：Upon hearing the bad news，she felt extremely sad.
細節(jié)描述：Upon hearing the bad news，her heart ached，tears streaming down her cheeks(心痛；眼淚直流).
2.這個小姑娘在哭泣。 概括描寫：The little girl was weeping.
細節(jié)描述：The little girl stood silently, tears rolling down her cheeks(默默地站著；眼淚順著面頰流了下來).
3.他看著凱瑟琳，充滿了憂傷。 概括描寫：He looked at Katherine, full of sorrow.
細節(jié)描述：He looked at Katherine, numb with grief，had trouble speaking(悲傷到木然；不能開口說話).
【好句仿寫】
1.看到這個悲慘的場景，我很悲傷。 概括描寫：Seeing the terrible scene，I felt very sad.
細節(jié)描述：Seeing the terrible scene，I cried my heart out (悲痛欲絕).
2.斯嘉麗感到絕望。 概括描寫：Scarlett felt desperate.
細節(jié)描述：Scarlett fell into despair but she is not immersed in grief (陷入絕望但她并非沉浸在悲痛之中).
3.查理對這個消息感到傷心。 概括描寫：Charlie felt sorrowful about the news.
細節(jié)描述：On hearing the news，Charlie felt like he was floating in an ocean of sadness (自己漂浮在悲傷的海洋里).
讀后續(xù)寫思維拓展訓練之4——生氣與憤怒
【“生氣與憤怒”之多樣表達】
1.annoyed adj.惱怒的，氣惱的　2.cross adj. 生氣的，不高興的 3.rage/fury n. 憤怒
4.glare v. 對……怒目而視 5.anger n. 生氣 6.blow up 勃然大怒
7.flame with anger 氣得滿臉通紅 8.get mad/cross at sb 對某人勃然大怒
9.stamp one’s foot in anger 憤怒地跺腳 10.tremble with rage 因憤怒而顫抖
11.run out of the room in a burst of anger 怒氣沖沖地跑出房間
12.He could hardly/scarcely contain his anger. 他幾乎控制不住怒火。
【佳句觀摩】
1.謝爾登感到非常生氣。 概括描寫：Sheldon felt very angry.
細節(jié)描述：Sheldon felt so angry that he stormed out of the room，slamming the door furiously behind him(沖出房間；狠狠摔門).
2.他的態(tài)度使我極為惱火。 概括描寫：His attitude made me extremely annoyed.
細節(jié)描述：His attitude made me filled with anger，unable to utter a single word(充滿憤怒；說不出話).
3.盡管她什么也沒說，可是她眼里充滿了憤怒。
概括描寫：Though she said nothing，her eyes were full of anger.
細節(jié)描述：Though she said nothing，her eyes were full of anger and she could hardly contain her rage(幾乎控制不住怒火).
【好句仿寫】
1.得知他的車被人砸了，他怒火中燒。 概括描寫：Learning that his car was smashed，he got mad.
細節(jié)描述：Learning that his car was smashed，he could hardly/scarcely contain his rage (幾乎控制不住怒火).
2.當他聽到她要退學時，他簡直怒不可遏。
概括描寫：When he heard she was going to quit school，he simply blew up.
細節(jié)描述：When he heard she was going to quit school，he stamped his foot in anger (憤怒地跺腳).
3.她氣得發(fā)抖。 概括描寫：She was trembling with anger.
細節(jié)描述：Boiling with rage (怒火中燒)，she shook her fist at me(對我揮舞拳頭).
讀后續(xù)寫思維拓展訓練之5——害怕與恐懼
【“害怕與恐懼”之多樣表達】
1.frightened adj.害怕的；恐懼的　2.scared adj.害怕的；恐懼的 3.fear n. & v. 害怕，恐懼
4.scare sb to death 嚇死某人 5.I’m afraid of snakes. 我害怕蛇。 6.I was scared silly. 我被嚇傻了。
7.My blood ran cold. 嚇得我不寒而栗。 8.It gave me goose bumps. 嚇得我起了一身雞皮疙瘩。
9.That horror movie made my hair stand on end. 那部恐怖電影嚇得我頭發(fā)都豎起來了。
10.We were horror－stricken when we saw the accident. 我們目睹了那起意外，都嚇壞了。
【佳句觀摩】
1.看了這部恐怖片，她嚇壞了。 概括描寫：After seeing the horror film，she got scared.
細節(jié)描述：After seeing the horror film，she was too scared to go to sleep(她嚇壞了，根本睡不著).
2.我感到緊張和害怕。 概括描寫：I was nervous and frightened.
細節(jié)描述：I was nervous and had my heart in my mouth(嚇得心都提到嗓子眼了).
3.她害怕得動彈不得。 概括描寫：She couldn’t move for fear.
細節(jié)描述：She got so frightened that it scared her out of her wits(嚇得她魂不附體) and stood still there(站在那兒一動不動).
【好句仿寫】
1.當看到那只兇惡的狼時，我感到很害怕。 概括描寫：At the sight of the fierce wolf，I felt very scared.
細節(jié)描述：At the sight of the fierce wolf，I was scared silly，too scared to move an inch(我都嚇傻了，不敢動彈).
2.那部恐怖片嚇得我心驚肉跳。 概括描寫：That horror film made me full of fear.
細節(jié)描述：That horror film made my blood ran cold(嚇得我不寒而栗)，my hair standing on end(我的頭發(fā)都豎起來了).
3.當時，我嚇壞了。 概括描寫：At that time，I was horror－stricken.
細節(jié)描述：At that time，I was seized by a strong sense of horror and my palms were sweating(被強烈地恐懼感所控制，手心出汗).
讀后續(xù)寫思維拓展訓練之6——融情于景
【“融情于景”之多樣表達】
1.beautiful adj.美麗的　2.fairyland n.仙境 3.splendid adj. 輝煌的 4.fantastic adj. 奇異的，極好的
5.landscape n. 景色 6.cloudless sky 無云的天空 7.elegant adj. 優(yōu)美的 8.a sea of 大量，茫茫一片
【佳句觀摩】
1.我全然被這種力量鎮(zhèn)住了。 一般句：I was held entirely in their power.
提升句：The dark，rainy evening，the wind，the thundering clouds(漆黑的雨夜，風雨交加，電閃雷鳴) held me entirely in their power.
2.世界一片黑暗。他癱倒在扶手椅上。 一般句：The world was dark. He collapsed into his armchair.
提升句：The wind was howling dreadfully and the rain was pouring from the heaven，whipping against the branches of lined trees(狂風呼嘯，大雨從天上傾瀉而下，鞭打著林立的樹枝).The world was burdened with a sea of darkness(被黑暗的海洋所籠罩).Sad and exhausted(既傷心又筋疲力盡)，he collapsed into his armchair.
【好句仿寫】
1.我沐浴在陽光中。 一般句：I was bathed in the sunlight.
提升句：When I was bathed in the sunlight，it felt like the amber－like sunshine was kissing every inch of my skin(琥珀色的陽光親吻著我每一寸肌膚).
2.小農場和村莊位于山里。 一般句：Small farms and villages were in the mountains.
提升句：Mist－covered mountains were dotted with(薄霧覆蓋的山脈點綴著) small farms and villages.
3.只有蘆葦陪伴著我。 一般句：Only the reeds accompanied me.
提升句：The sound of my footsteps(我的腳步聲) was accompanied only by the gracefully waving reeds (優(yōu)雅搖曳的蘆葦).
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　

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