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Summer vacation just began. Steve and Paul had set their hearts on practicing baseball daily to make the freshman team. Steve grabbed his bat and glove, shouting a quick goodbye to his mom before rushing out, the door slamming behind him. Paul was already waiting, looking a little worried.
“What’s wrong Forgot your stuff ” Steve inquired. Paul shook his head, explaining that he had to help Mr Thimpson, whose broken arm prevented him cleaning his garage. Paul sighed, “Mr Thimpson is old and needs help.” Understanding the situation, Steve offered to lend a hand. Together, they headed to the Thimpson’s.
Soon the boys arrived and got started. They found a couple of brooms and shovels (鏟). Before they swept, they put boxes that scattered around the garage floor on shelves. As Paul put a big box on a shelf, it fell off and with it falling an envelope. His eyes widened when he found a large sum of money in it.
“You’ve got to see this,” Paul pulled out a handful of bills and showed it to Steve. “Perhaps we can ask Mr Thimpson for tips,” Paul said.
“We can’t!” Steve insisted firmly. He grabbed the money from Paul’s hand and stuffed it back in the envelope. “Knock it off. You’re better than that,” Steve said and put the envelope back on the shelf. “Come on. Let’s get done and go to the park.”
Just then, Mr Thimpson walked into the garage, surprising them. He came to invite the boys to taste the chocolate that Mrs Thimpson had just baked. “Ugh... Sure, Mr Thimpson,” said Paul. “Let us finish up and we’ll be right in.”
After Mr Thimpson left, Paul admitted his moment of embarrassment and regret. “I don’t know what got into me. The Thimpsons are always trying to pay me for the work I do. My mom won’t let me take money from them, since she thinks they don’t have that much. But, Mrs Thimpson is always making me cakes and cookies, and she has knitted (編織) five sweaters for me.”
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The boys finally finished cleaning the garage and then went into the house.
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As they finished the cake and were about to leave, Mrs Thimpson handed Paul a beautifully wrapped package.
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幫助老人故事續(xù)寫
續(xù)寫要點
第一段要點：著重描寫保羅在屋內(nèi)的狀態(tài)，如局促不安的肢體動作，眼神游離不敢直視老人；史蒂夫為緩解氣氛所做的努力，如繪聲繪色地講述棒球故事，模仿球員動作；以及老人講述棒球往事時的神態(tài)，眉飛色舞、手舞足蹈，讓故事場景更具畫面感。
第二段要點：細致刻畫保羅收到包裹時的反應(yīng)，先是驚喜得張大嘴巴，接著小心翼翼打開，看到手套時眼中閃爍光芒；描述老人送禮物時的溫暖話語和親切笑容；最后補充保羅和史蒂夫前往公園后，使用新手套進行棒球練習的場景，如兩人的投球、擊球動作，臉上洋溢的快樂笑容。
情感線
起初，保羅因看到錢產(chǎn)生不當念頭而興奮，被史蒂夫制止后感到尷尬和后悔，在屋內(nèi)吃巧克力時滿心愧疚。收到禮物時，保羅從驚訝轉(zhuǎn)為感動，對老人充滿感激，同時為自己之前的想法感到羞愧。史蒂夫一直秉持正直態(tài)度，在幫助保羅的過程中，對保羅的轉(zhuǎn)變感到欣慰，兩人都在這次經(jīng)歷中體會到善良帶來的溫暖與滿足。
故事線
假期計劃：暑假開始，史蒂夫和保羅計劃每天練習棒球，為進入新生隊努力。
幫忙抉擇：保羅因要幫手臂受傷的辛普森先生打掃車庫而猶豫，史蒂夫理解并一同前往。
發(fā)現(xiàn)錢財：在打掃車庫時，保羅不小心碰落盒子，發(fā)現(xiàn)里面有一大筆錢，曾提議要小費，被史蒂夫堅決制止。
屋內(nèi)交談：辛普森先生邀請他們品嘗巧克力，保羅因之前的想法而愧疚，史蒂夫努力活躍氣氛。
收到禮物：準備離開時，辛普森夫人送給保羅一個包裹，里面是嶄新的棒球手套。
感悟前行：保羅被禮物感動，和史蒂夫前往公園，決心用手套好好練習，領(lǐng)悟到善良才是真正的回報。
主旨升華句
This experience taught the boys that integrity is the compass that guides us through life's choices, and kindness always returns in unexpected and beautiful ways.（這次經(jīng)歷讓男孩們明白，正直是指引我們在人生選擇中前行的指南針，善良總會以意想不到的美好方式回饋。）
Through this encounter, they realized that true wealth lies not in money but in the warmth of human relationships and the joy of helping others.（通過這次相遇，他們意識到真正的財富不在于金錢，而在于人際關(guān)系的溫暖和幫助他人的喜悅。）
The story of Steve and Paul serves as a reminder that even in the face of temptation, standing firm on principles can lead to a path filled with moral growth and genuine happiness.（史蒂夫和保羅的故事提醒我們，即使面對誘惑，堅守原則也能引領(lǐng)我們走向道德成長和真正幸福的道路。）
In the end, they learned that the rewards of kindness are far more precious than any material gain, and that a simple act of helping can create a chain of positive emotions.（最后，他們懂得善良的回報遠比任何物質(zhì)收獲都珍貴，一個簡單的幫助之舉就能創(chuàng)造出一連串的積極情感。）
This heartwarming tale shows that when we choose kindness over self - interest, we not only enrich the lives of others but also find a deeper sense of purpose and fulfillment within ourselves.（這個溫暖人心的故事表明，當我們選擇善良而非私利時，我們不僅豐富了他人的生活，也在自己內(nèi)心找到了更深層次的目標和滿足感。）
寫作示范一
第一段
The boys finally finished cleaning the garage and then went into the house. As they sat around the table, savoring the rich chocolate, Paul fidgeted uneasily in his seat. His eyes constantly darted around, avoiding Mr. and Mrs. Thimpson's gaze. Mr. Thimpson, completely unaware of the inner turmoil, recounted his glorious baseball memories with great enthusiasm, his hands gesturing wildly. Steve, sensing Paul's discomfort, jumped in with a hilarious story about a baseball game where the pitcher threw the ball in the wrong direction. He mimicked the pitcher's confused expression, making everyone laugh, except Paul, who managed a weak smile. Paul's mind was a whirlwind of thoughts, constantly replaying his moment of weakness. He stole glances at the Thimpsons, filled with self - reproach.
第二段
As they finished the cake and were about to leave, Mrs. Thimpson handed Paul a beautifully wrapped package. Paul's eyes lit up in surprise, and his hands trembled slightly as he took it. He carefully unwrapped the package, his breath catching in his throat when he saw the brand - new baseball glove. “We know you've been working so hard on baseball. This is just a small token of our gratitude,” Mrs. Thimpson said, her eyes twinkling with kindness. Paul's face flushed with a mix of embarrassment and gratitude. He stammered out his thanks, his voice thick with emotion. On the way to the park, Paul turned to Steve and said, “I'll never forget this. I'm so glad you stopped me.” They arrived at the park, and with the new glove on, Paul took a powerful swing, the sound of the bat hitting the ball echoing through the air, a symbol of his new - found resolve.
寫作示范二
第一段
The boys finally finished cleaning the garage and then went into the house. Once seated, Paul was like a cat on a hot tin roof. He picked at the chocolate, barely tasting it. Mr. Thimpson was in high spirits, sharing stories of his old baseball team, his face beaming with pride. Steve, trying his best to ease the tension, started talking about a crazy baseball match where a fan ran onto the field. He animatedly described the chaos, making Mr. Thimpson laugh heartily. But Paul was lost in his own thoughts, berating himself for his earlier lapse in judgment. He stole a look at the kind - faced Thimpsons, feeling a lump form in his throat. He knew he had to make things right.
第二段
As they finished the cake and were about to leave, Mrs. Thimpson handed Paul a beautifully wrapped package. Paul's eyes widened in disbelief. He slowly opened it, and when he saw the baseball glove, his eyes welled up with tears. “This is for you, dear. We hope it helps you in your baseball journey,” Mrs. Thimpson said gently. Paul was overcome with emotion. He thanked her profusely, his voice breaking. On their way to the park, Paul said to Steve, “I feel so ashamed of what I thought. But this gift... it's like a second chance.” When they reached the park, Paul put on the glove and threw a ball high into the sky, watching it soar, a symbol of his new - found understanding of kindness and integrity.
【答案】范文
The boys finally finished cleaning the garage and then went into the house. The air was filled with the warm, comforting smell of freshly baked chocolate cake. Steve and Paul sat down at the dining table, their minds still on the money they had found but not mentioned to Mr. Thimpson. They both felt a sense of relief as they enjoyed the delicious cake, trying to forget the unsettling discovery.
As they finished the cake and were about to leave, Mrs. Thimpson handed Paul a beautifully wrapped package. Paul’s eyes lit up with curiosity and gratitude. “Thank you, Mrs. Thimpson,” he said, eagerly tearing open the package to find a handmade sweater, perfectly knitted to his size. “This is amazing! You shouldn’t have,” Paul added, feeling a mix of embarrassment and appreciation. Mrs. Thimpson smiled warmly, “Paul, you’re like part of our family. We just want to show our appreciation for all the help you give us.” Steve watched his friend, realizing that sometimes, the best rewards aren’t always monetary. Sometimes friendship is more valuable than money.

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