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It was late, about 10:15 p.m., when Janice Esposito arrived at the Bellport train station; she jumped into her Honda Odyssey and began the 20-minute drive home to her husband and seven-year-old son. She’d just returned from visiting her mother and had traveled the route many times before. She practically drove on autopilot: a left onto Station Road, then a left on Montauk Highway, and then—wham!
Out of nowhere a car T-boned Esposito’s minivan, pushing her to move backward some 100 feet onto the railroad tracks. She sat in the minivan, bruised (撞傷) but mostly just knocked out by the impact and the airbags.
As it happened, Pete DiPinto was getting ready for bed. He’d just closed his book and was getting under the covers when he heard the sound of metal on metal and breaking glass coming from not far outside his bedroom window. A volunteer firefighter and retired teacher, DiPinto, 64, never stopped to think. He grabbed a flashlight and, still dressed in his pajamas (睡衣), ran out of the door. “Any firefighter would have done what I did,” he told Newsday. “We’re always on duty.”
The first car he came upon, 2,000 feet from his front yard, was the one that had hit Esposito. Once DiPinto concluded the driver was OK, he looked around and sprinted to Esposito’s minivan positioned on the railroad tracks.
注意：
1. 續寫詞數應為150左右；
2. 請按如下格式在答題卷的相應位置作答。
Para1.
And then he heard a terrible sound: the bells signaling an oncoming train.
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Para2.
The heavy train, traveling at 65 miles per hour, crashed into the minivan.
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文章大意
晚上 10 點 15 分左右，賈尼斯 埃斯波西托在開車回家途中，遭遇一輛汽車側面撞擊，她的小貨車被撞到了鐵軌上。她受傷不重，但被撞暈了。皮特 迪平托是一名志愿消防員和退休教師，當時他正準備睡覺，聽到撞擊聲后，穿著睡衣拿著手電筒沖了出去。他先確認了撞埃斯波西托的那輛車的司機沒事，然后沖向了停在鐵軌上的埃斯波西托的小貨車。
故事山分析
目標：皮特的目標是救出鐵軌上的埃斯波西托，避免她被火車撞上；埃斯波西托的目標是脫離危險。
阻礙：時間緊迫，火車即將到來，埃斯波西托被困在小貨車里，且可能受傷無法自行逃生。
努力：皮特努力嘗試打開小貨車，叫醒埃斯波西托，試圖將她從危險中解救出來。
結果：可能成功救出埃斯波西托，也可能在火車撞上的最后一刻出現意外轉機。
意外：火車突然來臨，增加了救援的緊迫感和危險性，使故事發展充滿不確定性。
轉折：從相對平靜的夜晚到突發的車禍和即將到來的火車威脅，情節發生巨大轉折。
結局：埃斯波西托獲救，皮特成為英雄，兩人都對這次經歷有深刻感悟，或者雖然遭遇危險但最終化險為夷，讓人們感受到生命的脆弱與堅韌以及人性的光輝。
伏筆以及在續寫中的回應
伏筆：埃斯波西托的小貨車被撞到鐵軌上。回應：在續寫中成為她面臨生命危險的關鍵因素，是皮特展開救援的直接原因，也是故事發展的核心沖突。
伏筆：皮特是志愿消防員。回應：他的身份使他在聽到撞擊聲后迅速做出反應，在救援中發揮專業能力，如在緊張情況下保持冷靜，嘗試打開車門等。
伏筆：埃斯波西托被撞暈。回應：導致她無法自救，增加了救援難度，需要皮特努力叫醒她并將她帶出小貨車。
伏筆：皮特聽到撞擊聲和玻璃破碎聲。回應：促使他立刻出門查看，開啟了救援行動，推動故事發展。
伏筆：故事發生在深夜。回應：在續寫中增加了救援的難度和緊張氛圍，如光線不足，可能影響救援效率。
續寫要點（兩段）
第一段：詳細描述皮特聽到火車即將到來的鈴聲后的反應，他內心的焦急，如何快速行動，如拼命嘗試打開小貨車車門，呼喊叫醒埃斯波西托，同時描述周圍環境的緊張氛圍，如火車的轟鳴聲越來越近。
第二段：著重描寫火車撞上小貨車后的情景，如小貨車的損壞程度，埃斯波西托是否安全，皮特的感受，以及后續的救援情況，如其他救援人員趕到，埃斯波西托被送往醫院等。
情感線
起初，埃斯波西托遭遇車禍被撞暈，處于危險和未知中。皮特聽到撞擊聲出門，帶著責任感和使命感投入救援。當聽到火車鈴聲時，他的焦急和緊張達到頂點，拼命想救出埃斯波西托。火車撞上來時，緊張感再次升級，人們都為埃斯波西托的安危揪心。如果埃斯波西托獲救，皮特會感到欣慰，埃斯波西托則充滿感激，從危險到安全，情感在短時間內經歷了巨大的起伏。
故事線
埃斯波西托開車回家途中遭遇車禍，小貨車被撞到鐵軌上。
皮特聽到撞擊聲，作為志愿消防員出門查看。
皮特確認撞埃斯波西托的司機沒事后，沖向埃斯波西托的小貨車。
皮特聽到火車即將到來的鈴聲，開始緊張救援。
火車以 65 英里每小時的速度撞上小貨車。
后續救援展開，埃斯波西托的安危得到關注，皮特和埃斯波西托對這次經歷有不同感悟。
主旨升華句
This incident vividly shows that in the face of danger, a selfless act of bravery, like Pete's, can be a ray of hope that saves a life and warms the world. 這一事件生動地表明，在危險面前，像皮特這樣無私的勇敢行為可以成為拯救生命、溫暖世界的希望之光。
Through this life - and - death encounter, we realize that every moment of life is precious, and the kindness and courage of strangers can turn a tragic situation into a miracle. 通過這場生死考驗，我們意識到生命的每一刻都無比珍貴，陌生人的善良和勇氣能將悲劇化為奇跡。
This story serves as a powerful reminder that even in the darkest of times, the heroic spirit within ordinary people can shine brightly, bringing hope and salvation to those in need. 這個故事有力地提醒我們，即使在最黑暗的時刻，普通人內心的英雄精神也能閃耀光芒，為那些需要幫助的人帶來希望和救贖。
In the face of the approaching train and the trapped Esposito, Pete's unwavering determination to rescue her reflects the true meaning of humanity and the value of life. 面對即將駛來的火車和被困的埃斯波西托，皮特堅定不移的救援決心體現了人性的真諦和生命的價值。
This life - threatening situation not only tests the courage of an individual but also reveals the power of human connection and the beauty of self - sacrifice for the well - being of others. 這場危及生命的情況不僅考驗了個人的勇氣，還揭示了人與人之間聯系的力量以及為他人的幸福而自我犧牲的美好。
寫作示范一
And then he heard a terrible sound: the bells signaling an oncoming train. Panic surged through Pete. He knew he had no time to waste. With all his strength, he pulled at the jammed door of Esposito's minivan, shouting, "Wake up! Wake up! A train is coming!" But there was no response from Esposito. The sound of the approaching train grew louder and louder, like a death knell. Desperate, Pete tried to break the window with his flashlight. Finally, the window shattered, and he managed to reach inside and unbuckle Esposito's seatbelt.
The heavy train, traveling at 65 miles per hour, crashed into the minivan. The impact was so powerful that it sent the minivan flying. Miraculously, Pete had managed to pull Esposito out just in time. They fell to the ground a few feet away. Pete quickly checked Esposito's pulse. She was alive. Seconds later, emergency responders arrived. Esposito was rushed to the hospital, and Pete, although exhausted, felt a sense of relief. This night would be engraved in their memories forever, a testament to the power of courage and the will to survive.
寫作示范二
And then he heard a terrible sound: the bells signaling an oncoming train. Pete's heart raced. He pounded on the minivan's window, yelling, "Ma'am, you have to wake up! There's a train coming!" Fearful that he might not be able to get her out in time, he looked around frantically for something to help him break the window. Spotting a large rock nearby, he grabbed it and smashed it against the window. The glass cracked, and he continued until he made a big enough hole. Reaching in, he shook Esposito vigorously. Finally, she opened her eyes, dazed and confused.
The heavy train, traveling at 65 miles per hour, crashed into the minivan. The minivan was almost completely destroyed. But Pete and Esposito were safe on the side of the tracks. As Esposito realized what had happened, she burst into tears, hugging Pete tightly. "Thank you," she sobbed. Pete comforted her, saying, "It's okay. You're safe now." Soon, the ambulance arrived. Esposito was taken to the hospital for a full check - up. Pete's heroic act had saved a life, and it became a story that inspired everyone in the community.
【答案】Para1.
And then he heard a terrible sound: the bells signaling an oncoming train. Seeing the headlight of the train, DiPinto ran quickly to Esposito’s minivan and knocked on the driver’s side window. She just looked at him, her eyes unfocused. “I don’t know where I am,” she said. She seemed unhurt. “Honey, you’re on the railroad tracks,” DiPinto shouted anxiously. “We have to get you off right now!” He pulled hard on the handle, but the door was crashed in and jammed shut. DiPinto ran to the passenger side and threw open the door. “Please, don’t let her be trapped,” he thought. He pushed aside the flat airbags, grabbed Esposito’s arms, and pulled her toward him across the passenger seat until he could help her out and quickly get her to safety.
Para2.
The heavy diesel train, traveling at 65 miles per hour, crashed into the minivan. Fortunately, Esposito had been dragged out of her minivan before a disaster happened. DiPinto called 911 for emergency service. It didn’t take a long time before an ambulance arrived at the accident spot/ site. No sooner had the doctors checked Esposito than she was rushed to the nearest hospital for further treatment. “It was like a Hollywood movie,” DiPinto told reporters the next day. But this one had a twist. “Last night,” South Country Ambulance chief Greg Miglino told CBS New York, “the hero arrived in pajamas, not in a fire truck.”

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