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In 2015, Emma Carlson Berne had just had her third child. She loved her role as a mother, but she often felt consumed by it, like her life would never return to normal. One day, when her baby was about three months old, she decided that her whole family — her husband, her two young boys and her new baby boy — should get out of the house and go to a restaurant.
They tumbled out of the car, ready with a diaper (尿布) bag, books for the kids to read, a seat for the baby and bags of snacks. As soon as they stepped onto the curb, her baby was ready to nurse again, and Berne knew she had to get inside.
“I was already feeling pretty shaky,” she recalled. “So we all pile into the restaurant. We’re very messy; we’re very loud.”
Her baby thrashed (劇烈扭動(dòng)) around as she tried to nurse him under a blanket, and she worried he was about to cry. Berne began to feel hopeless. “I was feeling a little teary-eyed because, although we were doing it, this was really hard.”
A short time later, her unsung hero appeared: an older woman, who reminded Berne of her own mum. This woman came up and stood there and looked at them. And Berne was sort of preparing that she was gonna say how cute the baby was. Instead, the woman took them all in.
She said admiringly, “What a beautiful family.”
Then she looked at Berne’s two young boys, ages 6 and 3, sitting quietly on Berne’s side of the table. And she said, “It’s not easy to sit at a table for a long time.” The woman saw her older children in a way few people seemed to, now that they were no longer in the infant (嬰兒) stage. “Nobody ever noticed them anymore,” Berne recalled.
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Then the woman turned to Berne.
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Nearly 10 years later, Berne is still moved by the woman’s thoughtfulness.
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續(xù)寫要點(diǎn)（兩段）
第一段：重點(diǎn)描寫女人與 Berne 的對(duì)話細(xì)節(jié)，女人進(jìn)一步給予鼓勵(lì)，比如分享自己為人母的經(jīng)驗(yàn)，夸贊 Berne 孩子的可愛之處，還可以描述女人的動(dòng)作、表情，如溫柔的微笑、關(guān)切的眼神，讓畫面更生動(dòng)，展現(xiàn)女人的善意。
第二段：講述 Berne 多年后對(duì)這件事的感悟，她如何將這份善意傳遞，比如在社區(qū)幫助新手媽媽，或是在自己孩子學(xué)校里關(guān)心其他家長(zhǎng)。同時(shí)，強(qiáng)調(diào)這份善意對(duì)她育兒觀念的影響，以及她希望更多人能傳播溫暖的想法。
情感線（150 字）
Berne 最初因帶孩子外出的艱難而感到無助、焦慮，甚至有些絕望，處于極度低落的情緒中。當(dāng)女人出現(xiàn)并給予贊美和理解時(shí)，Berne 的內(nèi)心被溫暖和感激填滿，情緒得到極大的舒緩。多年后，Berne 回想起這件事，依然被深深感動(dòng)，這份感動(dòng)轉(zhuǎn)化為她傳遞善意的動(dòng)力，讓她從一個(gè)接受者變?yōu)榻o予者，情感在時(shí)間的沉淀中不斷升華。
故事線（6 條）
Berne 一家?guī)е⒆尤ゲ蛷d，孩子的狀況讓 Berne 感到手忙腳亂，陷入困境。
一位老婦人出現(xiàn)，她先是夸贊 Berne 的家庭，關(guān)注到 Berne 的兩個(gè)大兒子，這讓 Berne 感到意外。
老婦人轉(zhuǎn)向 Berne，給予她真誠(chéng)的鼓勵(lì)和理解，讓 Berne 情緒得到安撫。
這件事成為 Berne 心中難忘的記憶，在之后的生活中時(shí)常想起。
近 10 年后，Berne 依然被老婦人的善良所觸動(dòng)，開始在生活中主動(dòng)幫助其他有困難的媽媽。
Berne 希望通過自己的行動(dòng)，讓更多人感受到善意，將這份溫暖傳遞下去。
主旨升華句 5 句英文
A simple act of kindness can have a profound and lasting impact, just like a small pebble creating endless ripples in the vast ocean of life.（一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單的善舉能產(chǎn)生深遠(yuǎn)而持久的影響，就像一顆小石子在廣闊的生命海洋中激起無盡的漣漪。）
The kindness we receive not only soothes our souls in the moment but also inspires us to spread warmth and love, making the world a better place.（我們所接受的善意不僅能在當(dāng)下?lián)嵛课覀兊男撵`，還能激勵(lì)我們傳播溫暖與愛，讓世界變得更美好。）
In the journey of life, a kind word from a stranger can be a guiding star, lighting up our path and giving us the strength to move forward.（在人生的旅途中，一個(gè)陌生人的友善話語(yǔ)可以是一顆啟明星，照亮我們的道路，給我們前行的力量。）
Remember, every act of kindness, no matter how small, has the power to change a life and create a chain reaction of goodness.（記住，每一個(gè)善舉，無論多么微小，都有改變一個(gè)人生活并引發(fā)善的連鎖反應(yīng)的力量。）
Let us all be the messengers of kindness, for it is the most precious gift that can be passed on from generation to generation.（讓我們都成為善意的傳遞者，因?yàn)樗亲钫滟F的禮物，可以代代相傳。）
寫作示范一
Then the woman turned to Berne. With a warm smile on her face, she gently said, “I've been there. Those early days with kids are tough, but they're also the most precious. Your boys are so well - behaved, and you should be proud.” She then shared a story about her own experience as a young mom, making Berne feel less alone. Berne listened attentively, her eyes filled with gratitude.
Nearly 10 years later, Berne is still moved by the woman’s thoughtfulness. She often volunteers at a local community center, offering help to new moms. She remembers the comfort she received that day and is determined to pay it forward. She believes that a little kindness can go a long way, and she hopes more people will spread love and understanding in their daily lives.
寫作示范二
Then the woman turned to Berne. Placing a hand on Berne's arm, she said softly, “You're doing an incredible job. Raising kids is a challenge, but you're handling it beautifully. Look at your family; it's full of love.” Her kind words and gentle touch made Berne's eyes well up with tears of relief. The woman even offered some practical tips on calming a fussy baby.
Nearly 10 years later, Berne is still moved by the woman’s thoughtfulness. Whenever she sees a mom struggling in public, she doesn't hesitate to step in. She has organized a support group for new parents in her neighborhood, sharing her own experiences and the lessons she learned from that kind encounter. She hopes to create a community where kindness and support are the norm.
【答案】
Then the woman turned to Berne. And she said, “Look at you, Mum. You’re doing such a good job. It must be very challenging to raise the three children. You are so great.” Berne felt very grateful to her warm words, tears in her eyes. She brightened up at her words of encouragement. The woman brought out a box of chocolates from her bag and gave them to the children, who were excited at the sweets. Berne was too moved to say anything to express her gratitude. Then the woman gently patted on Berne’s shoulder, gave them one last smile, and left on the street.
Nearly 10 years later, Berne is still moved by the woman’s thoughtfulness. And she has often recalled it with friends and family. If she could speak to the woman now, this is what she would say, “Thank you for seeing all of us. And thank you for seeing me. Me, someone who wasn’t often seen during these early days, and someone who was sometimes feeling pretty invisible. And I have never forgotten it.” Now her children have grown up, and her life has become better than before. When Berne meets other women struggling to get out with kids, she often says some warm words to them, just like what the older woman talked to her.

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