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A young man was driving home one evening on a two-lane (道) country road. Work in this small mid-western community was almost as slow as his old car, and he didn’t know whether to look for it or not. Ever since the factory closed, he’d been unemployed, and with winter coming on, the cold had finally hit home.
It was starting to get dark and light snow was coming down. He’d better get a move on. Then he saw an old lady trapped on the side of the road. But even in the dim (昏暗的) light of day, he could see she needed help. So he pulled up in front of her car and got out.
Even with the smile on his face, she was worried. No one had stopped to help for the last hour or so. Was he going to hurt her He didn’t look safe and seemed jobless. He looked poor and hungry. He could see that she was frightened, standing out there in the cold. He knew how she felt. He said, “I’m here to help you, Ma’ am. Why don’t you wait in the car where it’s warm By the way, my name is Bryan. ” The lady felt a little relieved after hearing what Bryan said. She got in her car and thought maybe he was helping for money.
Bryan found all she had was a flat tire, but for an old lady, that was bad enough. He crawled (爬) under the car looking for a place to put the jack (千斤頂) , cutting his finger a time or two. Soon he was able to change the tire. But he had to get dirty and his hands were hurt. As he was doing the work, she rolled down the window and began to talk to him. She told him that she was from St. Louis and was only just passing through.
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She expressed her gratitude for his coming to her aid.
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Before she drove off, the old lady handed him a small piece of paper with her phone number and address.
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傳遞善意的文章續(xù)寫(xiě)
續(xù)寫(xiě)要點(diǎn)
第一段：續(xù)寫(xiě)老太太表達(dá)感激后，Bryan 進(jìn)一步拒絕金錢(qián)，強(qiáng)調(diào)幫助是出于本心，兩人可以聊聊彼此的生活，老太太得知 Bryan 的失業(yè)困境，鼓勵(lì)他不要灰心，分享自己年輕時(shí)的類似經(jīng)歷，給他講一些應(yīng)對(duì)挫折的方法和心態(tài)調(diào)整的建議。
第二段：續(xù)寫(xiě)老太太離開(kāi)后，Bryan 看著紙條，心中滿是溫暖和感動(dòng)，他可能會(huì)在之后的生活中遇到困難，想到老太太的鼓勵(lì)，決定打電話向她傾訴，老太太給予實(shí)際的幫助，比如幫他留意工作機(jī)會(huì)，或者在精神上持續(xù)支持他，Bryan 因此慢慢走出困境，他也開(kāi)始主動(dòng)幫助他人，將這份善意傳遞下去。
情感線
Bryan 一開(kāi)始出于善良去幫助老太太，老太太起初擔(dān)憂害怕，后來(lái)被 Bryan 的真誠(chéng)和行動(dòng)打動(dòng)，心懷感激。Bryan 拒絕金錢(qián)時(shí)，老太太可能有些意外但更多的是對(duì)他品格的認(rèn)可。Bryan 得到老太太的鼓勵(lì)和幫助信息后，從失業(yè)的迷茫無(wú)助轉(zhuǎn)變?yōu)槌錆M希望，內(nèi)心溫暖且堅(jiān)定了傳遞善意的想法。
故事線
Bryan 駕車(chē)回家途中，看到被困在路邊的老太太，決定停車(chē)幫忙。
老太太因 Bryan 看起來(lái)不安全且像無(wú)業(yè)游民而擔(dān)憂，Bryan 表明來(lái)意并讓她到溫暖的車(chē)?yán)锏却?br/>Bryan 幫老太太換輪胎，過(guò)程中手指受傷、渾身變臟，老太太通過(guò)車(chē)窗與他交談，透露自己只是路過(guò)此地。
換好輪胎后，老太太表達(dá)感激并想給錢(qián)，Bryan 拒絕，兩人交流生活，老太太得知 Bryan 失業(yè)并鼓勵(lì)他。
老太太離開(kāi)前給 Bryan 留下寫(xiě)有電話和地址的紙條，讓他有困難聯(lián)系。
之后 Bryan 在生活困境中想起老太太的鼓勵(lì)，聯(lián)系她并得到幫助，走出困境后開(kāi)始傳遞善意。
主旨升華句
From that day on, Bryan understood that a simple act of kindness could not only bring warmth to others but also light up his own world in the darkest times.（從那天起，Bryan 明白了一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單的善舉不僅能給他人帶來(lái)溫暖，還能在最黑暗的時(shí)刻照亮自己的世界。）
It was a profound lesson for Bryan that helping others selflessly was not about expecting rewards but about the joy and hope it brought to both sides.（對(duì) Bryan 來(lái)說(shuō)，這是深刻的一課，無(wú)私幫助他人不是為了期待回報(bào)，而是在于它給雙方帶來(lái)的喜悅和希望。）
The encounter with the old lady taught Bryan that even in tough situations, one's kindness could be a beacon of hope, inspiring others and creating a cycle of goodness.（與老太太的相遇教會(huì)了 Bryan，即使身處困境，一個(gè)人的善良也能成為希望的燈塔，激勵(lì)他人并創(chuàng)造出善良的循環(huán)。）
Bryan realized that kindness was a powerful force that could break down barriers of mistrust and fear, and build bridges between strangers.（Bryan 意識(shí)到善良是一種強(qiáng)大的力量，它可以打破不信任和恐懼的障礙，在陌生人之間架起橋梁。）
This experience made Bryan determined to always reach out to those in need, for he knew that every act of kindness, no matter how small, could make a big difference in someone's life.（這次經(jīng)歷讓 Bryan 下定決心總是向那些需要幫助的人伸出援手，因?yàn)樗烂恳粋€(gè)善舉，無(wú)論多么微小，都能在某人的生活中產(chǎn)生巨大的影響。 ）
寫(xiě)作示范一
She expressed her gratitude for his coming to her aid. “I can't thank you enough, young man. You've really saved me a lot of trouble.” she said with a warm smile. Bryan just shook his head, saying, “It's really no big deal. I'm glad I could be of help.” Then, they started chatting. When the old lady learned about Bryan's unemployment, she patted his shoulder gently. “Don't lose heart. I once faced the same situation. With patience and perseverance, you'll surely get through it.” Her words were like a ray of sunshine, bringing warmth to Bryan's heart.
Before she drove off, the old lady handed him a small piece of paper with her phone number and address. “If you ever need anything, don't hesitate to call me. I mean it.” she said earnestly. Bryan thanked her sincerely. A few days later, when Bryan was still struggling to find a job, he decided to call the old lady. She listened attentively and promised to help. Soon, she found a job opportunity for Bryan. With this help, Bryan got back on his feet. From then on, he also made it a habit to help others, believing that kindness could always bring hope.
寫(xiě)作示范二
She expressed her gratitude for his coming to her aid. “You're such a kind - hearted person. I don't know how I could have managed without you.” The old lady's eyes were filled with appreciation. Bryan replied, smiling, “Helping others makes me happy, and that's enough for me.” As they talked, the old lady shared some of her life stories and encouraged Bryan not to give up on his dreams despite the difficulties. Her positive attitude influenced Bryan deeply.
Before she drove off, the old lady handed him a small piece of paper with her phone number and address. “Keep this. You might need it someday.” she said. Weeks later, Bryan faced financial problems. Remembering the old lady's words, he called her. She not only comforted him but also offered some financial support to help him through the tough time. With her help, Bryan gradually overcame his difficulties. Since then, he was always ready to lend a hand to those in need, spreading the kindness he had received.
【答案】
She expressed her gratitude for his coming to her aid. The old lady felt so warm in her inner heart as she watched Bryan, a stranger, selflessly change her flat tire in the cold. “You’ve been a blessing today, Bryan, ” she said. Bryan just smiled, saying it was nothing. She asked him how much she owed him. Any amount would have been all right with her. She had already imagined all the awful things that could have happened had he not stopped. But he simply declined and then the car could start again.
Before she drove off, the old lady handed him a small piece of paper with her phone number and address. It read, “If you’re ever in St. Louis, come to me. Maybe I can help you. ” Bryan smiled, feeling a warmth that transcended the cold evening. As he watched her car disappear into the distance, he realized that sometimes, the simple act of helping others can light up not just their day, but also one’s own heart. He headed home, determined to keep looking for work, knowing that kindness always finds a way.

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