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A Valentine’s Day joke is a funny but super sweet way to celebrate love without being quite so serious! Old Lady Hayes deserved it. She often screamed at us for “borrowing” some roses from her garden. Well, she had it coming.
At least, that’s the way we saw it as George finished tying the string to the red, heart-shaped box. We giggled(咯咯笑)as Ron added the final touch: two plastic red roses, glued to the lid. George practiced pulling the box by the string. I couldn’t wait to see it fly away when she tried to pick it up.
I was the first to notice my dad in the doorway. I froze. Within seconds, my anxiety was shared by all. Dad walked slowly to the empty candy box. He picked it up, and watched it swing back and forth. Then he looked into the eyes of the frightened boys.
“It doesn’t seem so long ago that I was playing Valentine’s Day jokes.” he said. “One year my cousins and I decided to pull one on our grandma even though we loved her. We just wanted to have some fun. We tiptoed to her doorstep and drew a gift there with red paint. Then we kicked the door and hid behind the bushes. When Grandma finally appeared, she looked down and reached for the fresh paint. Slowly, she figured out our joke. She smiled, absently wiping red paint on her clean and white apron(圍裙).”Dad paused and for the first time I noticed that his eyes were wet. “Grandma died later that year. I never had another chance to give her a real Valentine.”
Later that night a red heart-shaped box was placed on Mrs. Hayes’ front doorstep. As we hid behind the bushes, the cool night air wrapped around us, adding a chill to our excitement. “Do you think she’ll scream ” I whispered. “Maybe she’ll think it’s a real gift this time,” George replied, trying to hold back his giggles.
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Just then, we heard the door click open.
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Hearing the giggles, Mrs Hayes walked up to the bushes.
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情感續寫
續寫要點
第一段：重點描繪 Mrs. Hayes 看到盒子時的神態、動作和反應。她先是疑惑，然后慢慢靠近，彎腰去拿盒子。孩子們在灌木叢后緊張地注視，心里既有對惡作劇可能被識破的忐忑，又有對 Mrs. Hayes 反應的期待。同時，可描述周圍環境，如微風吹動灌木叢，增添緊張氛圍。
第二段：Mrs. Hayes 走近灌木叢，孩子們從最初的尷尬到她溫和的回應后，心情逐漸放松。Mrs. Hayes 表達對禮物的喜愛，孩子們與她交流，發現她并非如想象中那般嚴厲。最后，大家一起歡笑，氛圍變得溫馨，體現孩子們從這次經歷中學會理解他人，收獲溫暖與友誼。
情感線
孩子們最初帶著惡作劇的興奮準備捉弄 Mrs. Hayes，在看到父親講述往事而落淚后，內心有所觸動，開始反思行為。送禮物時，他們緊張又期待，怕被 Mrs. Hayes 責罵。當 Mrs. Hayes 看到盒子露出微笑并走向灌木叢時，孩子們轉為尷尬。而 Mrs. Hayes 溫和的回應，讓孩子們的心情從尷尬轉為驚喜與感動，最終大家感受到了溫暖與友好，情感從略帶調皮的戲謔轉變為溫馨的情誼。
故事線
孩子們準備用特制的帶繩子的糖果盒捉弄 Mrs. Hayes，父親出現并講述了自己小時候對奶奶的惡作劇及遺憾。
當晚，孩子們懷著緊張又興奮的心情將紅盒子放在 Mrs. Hayes 家門口，躲在灌木叢后等待。
Mrs. Hayes 開門，看到盒子，露出疑惑的表情，慢慢走向盒子。
孩子們在灌木叢后緊張地觀察，擔心被發現。
Mrs. Hayes 聽到孩子們的笑聲，走向灌木叢，孩子們尷尬地站出來。
Mrs. Hayes 表達對禮物的喜愛，與孩子們友好交流，大家收獲了溫暖與友誼。
主旨升華句
This Valentine's Day experience taught the boys that kindness can transform even the most seemingly unfriendly relationships, and that a little thoughtfulness can bring unexpected warmth.（這次情人節的經歷讓男孩們明白，善良可以改變即使是最看似不友好的關系，一點點的體貼能帶來意想不到的溫暖。）
Through this prank - turned - gift - giving, the boys learned the true meaning of Valentine's Day: to spread love and understanding, not just play tricks.（通過這次從惡作劇到送禮物的轉變，男孩們領悟了情人節的真正意義：傳播愛與理解，而不只是搞惡作劇。）
The encounter with Mrs. Hayes on this special day showed that beneath people's tough exteriors, there often lies a heart yearning for kindness, and that reaching out with love can bridge any gap.（在這個特殊日子與 Mrs. Hayes 的相遇表明，在人們強硬的外表下，往往藏著一顆渴望善意的心，用愛去靠近能跨越任何隔閡。）
This Valentine's Day event became a precious memory for the boys, reminding them that changing their perspective could turn a potential conflict into a beautiful moment of connection and friendship.（這次情人節事件成為男孩們珍貴的回憶，提醒他們改變看法能將潛在沖突轉變為建立聯系與友誼的美好時刻。）
The boys' gesture of giving and Mrs. Hayes' warm response on Valentine's Day demonstrated that love has the power to melt misunderstandings and create a harmonious community where everyone feels cared for.（男孩們在情人節的給予之舉和 Mrs. Hayes 的溫暖回應表明，愛有融化誤解的力量，能營造一個人人都感受到關愛的和諧社區。）
寫作示范一
Just then, we heard the door click open. Mrs. Hayes stepped out, her eyes landing on the red heart - shaped box immediately. She looked around suspiciously, her brows furrowed. Slowly, she bent down, her hand reaching out tentatively towards the box. As her fingers touched it, we held our breath, our hearts pounding in our chests. The cold air seemed to thicken with tension. Suddenly, a small smile tugged at the corners of her mouth, and she gently pulled the box closer.
Hearing the giggles, Mrs. Hayes walked up to the bushes. We sheepishly stepped out, our faces flushed with embarrassment. But instead of scolding us, she looked at us with kind eyes. “This is the sweetest thing anyone has done for me in a long time,” she said softly. We were taken aback. She picked up the box and held it close, as if it were a precious treasure. “Thank you, boys,” she added. We exchanged shy smiles, realizing that our simple gift had brought joy to her. Maybe, Valentine's Day was about more than just jokes; it was about sharing love and making connections.
寫作示范二
Just then, we heard the door click open. Mrs. Hayes emerged from her house, her gaze falling on the box. She froze for a moment, and then her eyes widened in surprise. She took a few hesitant steps forward, her hands clasped in front of her. As she got closer to the box, a look of curiosity replaced her initial shock. She bent down, her fingers brushing the edges of the red heart - shaped lid. The night air was still, and the only sound was the gentle rustling of the bushes where we hid.
Hearing the giggles, Mrs. Hayes walked up to the bushes. We stood up, feeling awkward and nervous. But to our surprise, she was smiling. “You boys are full of surprises,” she said. “I thought I was in for another one of your tricks, but this is really lovely.” We grinned, relieved. She invited us to come inside and share some cookies. As we sat in her warm living room, munching on cookies, we realized that Mrs. Hayes wasn't as scary as we thought. This Valentine's Day, we learned that a little kindness could go a long way in breaking down barriers.
【答案】
Just then, we heard the door click open. Out came Mrs. Hayes with a lamp in her hand. When her eye fell on the red, heart-shaped box, she leaned closer with a mixture of confusion and excitement. Driven by curiosity, she reached out her hand, picked it up and opened it with trembling hands. On seeing the candy, she could hardly contain her joy. A broad smile spread over her face. Seeing the surprise and happiness in her eyes, we couldn’t help giggling, covering our mouths with hands.
Hearing the giggles Mrs Hayes looked up at the bushes. We had nowhere to hide, so we jumped out of the bushes, yelling “Happy Valentine’s Day!”. She stood rooted to the spot, speechless with surprise. Recovering from the shock, she walked to us and hugged us tightly, saying “Thank you all!” with tears of happiness welling up in her eyes. At the same time, a great wave of warmth swept over us. The box of candy would be treasured as it was a reminder of an amazing Valentine’s Day.

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