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“BEES ARE DYING!” Doodlebug Pinkley cried, thrusting his latest copy of World of the Weird at his sister Dandelion. His favorite magazine had a lot of strange but important content. This month it was insects in danger. The number of certain bugs, including bees, was falling sharply all over the world.
“It’s terrible!” Dandelion replied, after reading the article. They were sitting on the outdoor patio (露臺) of Cool Yule’s Ice Cream Shop.
“Maybe we could make a bee roof garden, too — like in this article,” Doodlebug suggested. Yule recommended making it on the patio, adding a pollinator (傳粉昆蟲) garden up there would attract bees — and more customers. “Brilliant!” Everyone else responded in a chorus.
Now the problem was how to get the funds. Dandelion proposed raising money by setting up a booth near the shop’s entrance to alert people and ask them to donate. The plan was a go!
The next day their friends Bog, Tomiko and Izzy met Doodlebug and Dandelion inside Yule’s. Everyone was excited. They made handouts explaining how the garden would attract pollinators, do something to help prevent flooding, and improve the air.
“We should have a bee mascot (吉祥物),” Izzy suggested. Doodlebug recalled the old bee costume that his Mom wore for Halloween once. Over the enthusiastic uproar, Dandelion shouted, “And you’ll be the bee, Doodlebug!” “WILL NOT!” Doodlebug shot back. “Too big. We need to stuff some grownup into that costume.” But who, then For ten mad minutes the kids debated loudly.
“Silence, you little noisy kids!” someone suddenly roared. “I’m trying to read about bees in danger!” The whole crew turned in shock. There sat Doodlebug’s horrible teacher, Mrs. Noodleknocker. Doodlebug had discovered long ago that she was a World of the Weird fan, but that didn’t make her any nicer. “Bees and butterflies need help!” Mrs. Noodleknocker cried. “But a person can’t even worry about them peacefully!”
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Paragraph 1: Doodlebug’s eyes went wide as a brilliant idea came to mind.
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Paragraph 2: The bee campaign was a massive success!
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蜜蜂吉祥物故事續寫
續寫要點
第一段：Doodlebug 想到讓 Mrs. Noodleknocker 做蜜蜂吉祥物后，要描寫 Mrs. Noodleknocker 的反應，以及大家為宣傳活動做準備的過程，如布置攤位、Mrs. Noodleknocker 穿著蜜蜂服裝的樣子等。
第二段：重點寫活動的成功，包括人們的反應、籌集到的資金數量，以及用資金打造花園后的成果，如吸引了很多蜜蜂和蝴蝶，店鋪生意變好，大家的喜悅心情等。
情感線
開始孩子們為找蜜蜂吉祥物人選而發愁，Doodlebug 想出讓 Mrs. Noodleknocker 扮演的主意后大家由憂轉喜。活動成功后，孩子們和 Mrs. Noodleknocker 都充滿了自豪與喜悅，大家為能幫助蜜蜂而感到滿足，從開始的擔憂昆蟲生存問題到最后通過行動帶來成就感，情感得到了升華。
故事線
Doodlebug 想出讓 Mrs. Noodleknocker 做蜜蜂吉祥物的主意。
Mrs. Noodleknocker 同意后，孩子們和她一起準備宣傳活動。
大家在店鋪門口設置攤位進行宣傳，Mrs. Noodleknocker 穿著蜜蜂服裝吸引眾人目光。
人們被吸引過來，認真聽孩子們的講解。
活動取得巨大成功，籌集到大量資金。
用資金打造出美麗的蜜蜂花園，吸引了蜜蜂和蝴蝶，店鋪生意也越來越好。
主旨升華句
“From this experience, we all learned that even the smallest actions can make a big difference when we work together for a good cause.”
“Seeing the bees and butterflies flocking to the garden, we realized that unity and determination can bring about wonderful changes for the environment.”
“The success of this campaign taught us that everyone can be a part of the solution when it comes to protecting our precious nature.”
“As we watched the happy customers and the thriving garden, we knew that our efforts had not only helped the bees but also brought more beauty and joy to our community.”
“This adventure showed us that with a little creativity and a lot of teamwork, we can make the world a better place for both humans and insects alike.”
寫作示范
示范一
Doodlebug’s eyes went wide as a brilliant idea came to mind. “Mrs. Noodleknocker,” he said loudly, “you love bees so much and you are just the right person to be our bee mascot!” Mrs. Noodleknocker looked surprised at first, but then she smiled and said, “Well, I guess I can do that for the bees.” The kids cheered. They quickly helped her into the bee costume and set up the booth. Mrs. Noodleknocker, in the funny bee outfit, waved and danced, attracting many people.
The bee campaign was a massive success! People of all ages stopped by the booth. They were very interested in the kids’ plan and donated generously. By the end of the day, they had raised more than enough money. They wasted no time and started working on the patio garden. Soon, colorful flowers were in full bloom. Bees and butterflies flew around happily. The ice cream shop became more popular than ever, and everyone was proud of what they had achieved.
示范二
Doodlebug’s eyes went wide as a brilliant idea came to mind. He turned to Mrs. Noodleknocker and said, “You could be the bee mascot! You’re tall and you really care about bees.” Mrs. Noodleknocker was taken aback, but after a moment, she nodded. “Alright, I’ll do it.” The kids were overjoyed. They quickly got everything ready. Mrs. Noodleknocker in the bee costume was a hit, drawing lots of attention.
The bee campaign was a massive success! The booth was surrounded by people all day. Many were touched by the kids’ enthusiasm and donated money without hesitation. With the funds, they created a wonderful pollinator garden. The patio was filled with the buzzing of bees and the fluttering of butterflies. The shop’s business boomed, and everyone felt a deep sense of satisfaction. It was clear that their efforts had made a real impact on helping the bees and bringing life to the patio.
參考答案
Doodlebug’s eyes went wide as a brilliant idea came to mind. “THE BEE!” he exclaimed and pointed at Mrs. Noodleknocker, only to be greeted with a glare. Dandelion detailed their plan and asked her to be the bee mascot. After digesting the information, Mrs. Noodleknockerher had her irritable expression softened a bit. “Just forget it,” she said, turning back to her magazine. “Only real bees matter.” Tomiko responded boldly that this whole plan was indeed for real bees. “Please, lady ” Bog coaxed, adding her favor might double the fund. Mrs. Noodleknocker put down the magazine, a tiny smile glinting across her usually mean mouth. It had been a long time since anyone called her a lady. Finally, she snorted and gave in.
The bee campaign was a massive success! On the day of fundraising, Mrs. Noodleknocker rocked the bee costume in all her pollinator glory. Instead of threatening passers-by with a sting, the group decided a friendly bee was the right way to go. The following hours witnessed the bee buzzing around the booth, arms and legs punching and kicking. Whenever her strange insect eyes landed on someone, the victim quickly forked over cash — even without being stung. So hilarious and inspiring! A few weeks later Cool Yule’s bee garden bloomed spectacularly, attracting customers and good insects from all around. And Mrs. Noodleknocker was almost a nice person from then on. It proved that being a bee could be good for anyone.

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