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作文學(xué)案
【學(xué)習(xí)目標(biāo)】To write a passage to introduce a figure.
寫作攻略
1. 審題：根據(jù)題目要求不同分為兩類 1）指定人物的介紹。題目中會提供一些基本信息供選擇使用。 2）自選人物進(jìn)行介紹。 2. 時(shí)態(tài)的選擇：對于人物的成就和貢獻(xiàn)應(yīng)使用一般過去時(shí)，人物對自己的影響用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。 3. 注意 1）事實(shí)細(xì)節(jié)的羅列應(yīng)注重內(nèi)在聯(lián)系和適當(dāng)?shù)倪^渡。不能是零散信息的簡單堆砌。 2）避免句式單一 3）人物的品格成就應(yīng)重點(diǎn)突出，可將其貢獻(xiàn)對自己的影響聯(lián)系起來。不必面面俱到 4）詞匯的選用盡量精確，不泛泛而談，特別是形容詞，動(dòng)詞短語。
二、素材積累
1. 必備短語
品質(zhì)： hardworking; determined ;strong--minded(意志堅(jiān)強(qiáng)的); selfless; creative; devoted(投入的); committed(盡職盡責(zé)的); warm-hearted
外貌： good-looking; funny-looking; ordinary-looking; handsome; charming; beautiful; pretty; white-haired; near-sighted; healthy; bearded; leggy(腿長的); bony(瘦的); muscular（肌肉發(fā)達(dá)的；強(qiáng)壯的）; slim; athletic（體格健壯的）
性格： kind-hearted; absent-minded; patient; naughty; smart; intelligent; bad-tempered; attractive; confident; independent; humorous; talkative; modest; serious; friendly; extrovert（外向的）; untidy; shy; fatherly（慈愛的，父親般的）; motherly; lovely; manly（強(qiáng)壯的 男子氣概的）; optimistic; innocent; modest; sensitive; reliable; forgetful; sincere
興趣愛好： be good at; be interested in; be fond of; be crazy about; be strict in/with; be absorbed in; be addicted to; focus on; pay attention to; put one’s heart into
家庭背景： be born in; spend one’s childhood in; live a happy/hard life
教育背景： be admitted into/to a key university; graduate from; receive a doctor’s degree
主要事跡： serve/work as; devote one’s life to; commit oneself to; make up one’s mind to do; have a gift/talent for
成就： set a good example for; be honored/respected as; make great contributions to; make a difference to; make great contributions to; have a great effect/influence/impact on; make important discoveries; realize one’s dream/make one’s dream come true; improve the quality of life; win the admiration of; gain a bachelor’s degree/master’s degree/doctor’s degree; lead to/result in // bring about
2. 必備句型
1) As an intelligent and outstanding/extraordinary/brilliant scientist, Albert Einstein had a pleasant personality and was much respected for his friendliness. He was not only modest, but had distinctive/unique views towards things. 作為一個(gè)聰明的和杰出的科學(xué)家， 愛因斯坦有著很好的個(gè)性并且由于他的友善備受尊重。他不僅很謙虛，而且對事物有著獨(dú)特的見解。
What needs to be stressed is that he is not only modest/selfless/ open-minded but also usually manages to swallow his pride and ask others for help. 需要強(qiáng)調(diào)的是，他不僅謙虛/無私/開明/而且通常能放下自尊向別人求助。
Mei Lanfang is still acknowledged as one of the masters of Beijing Opera. He played a key role in bringing Beijing Opera to the world, leading to the international status and recognition that it has today. Mei Lanfang is still widely remembered for his skill and his kindness and his deep love for his country. 梅蘭芳至今仍被公認(rèn)為京劇大師之一。 他在京劇走向世界的過程中發(fā)揮了關(guān)鍵作用，使京劇獲得了今天的國際地位和認(rèn)可。 梅蘭芳的技藝、善良和對祖國的熱愛至今仍被人們廣泛銘記。
Mei Lanfang is acknowledged as a cultural ambassador for his great contributions to bringing Beijing Opera to the world and promoting cultural exchange between china and other countries. Meilanfang was and still is greatly loved not only for his tremendous /tr m nd s/ artistic skill but also for his great kindness to all the people and his love for his country. 梅蘭芳被公認(rèn)為文化大使，因?yàn)榘丫﹦У绞澜纾龠M(jìn)中國和其他國家的文化交流而做出的貢獻(xiàn)。 無論是過去還是現(xiàn)在，梅蘭芳都深受人們的喜愛，不僅因?yàn)樗叱乃囆g(shù)技巧，還因?yàn)樗麑λ腥说纳屏己退麑业臒釔邸?br/>四、范文賞析
【范文一】
【2016北京卷】
假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。你的英國朋友Jim 在給你的郵件中提到他對中國歷史很感興趣，并請你介紹一位你喜歡的中國歷史人物。請你給Jim回信，內(nèi)容包括：
1. 該人物是誰；
2. 該人物的主要貢獻(xiàn)；
3. 該人物對你的影響。
注意：
1. 詞數(shù)不少于50；
2. 開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
[列提綱找思路]
1) 開頭 表示榮幸和 驕傲：delighted; honor; be enthusiastic about; excited; share; interest
2) 介紹自己喜歡的中國歷史人物，說明人物的貢獻(xiàn)和對自己的影響：when it comes to; my favorite figure; person; introduce; renowned（著名的 有聲望的）; widely; establish（建立 創(chuàng)辦）; masterpiece（杰作）; impact; style; enlighten（啟發(fā) 開導(dǎo)）; encourage
3）結(jié)尾：希望朋友能感興趣：be interested in; tell; send; recommend; work
【答案】
Dear Jim, I am delighted to hear from you. It’s an honor to know you are enthusiastic about Chinese history. When it comes to my favorite figure in Chinese history, it must be Li Bai of Tang Dynasty. He was renowned as the greatest romantic poet. Over 900 poems of him survived and were widely read by later generations. He expressed his emotions in poems directly every time he was frustrated by his unsuccessful career, which formed his unique style of writing. This really enlightens me. Are you interested in Li Bai Please tell me and I’ll send you some books. Yours, Li Hua
【范文二】
【2020高考全國I卷】
你校正在組織英語作文比賽，請以身邊尊敬和愛戴的人為題，寫一篇短文參賽。內(nèi)容包括：
1.人物簡介；
2.尊敬和愛戴的原因。
注意：
1.詞數(shù)100左右;
2.短文題目和首句已為你寫好。
【參考范文1】The person I Respect There are many respectable people around us. Among them, the person I respect most is Zhong Nanshan, who has become a household name for his great contributions to defeating viruses. First of all, Zhong Nanshan is considered as an outstanding scientist, whose research achievements are playing an increasingly significant role in the development of science. What’s more, faced with the challenge of COVID-19, he devoted himself to helping others and made great contributions to the whole society. Not only did he find an effective solution, but he encouraged countless volunteers to join him, which benefited a great many people in need. His dedication to work and to people is admirable, which truly inspires me to become a person like him in the future.
【參考范文2】The person I Respect There are many respectable people around us. Among them, the person I respect most is Zhang Guimei, who has become a household name for her great contributions to promoting girl’s education. First of all, Zhang Guimei is considered as an outstanding educator, whose educational practices are playing an increasingly significant role in the development of girls’ education. What’s more, faced with the challenge of poverty, she devoted herself to helping girls enter high school and made great contributions. Not only did she found the Huaping Girls High School, but she encouraged countless volunteers to join her, which benefited a great many girls in need. Her dedication to education and to students is admirable, which truly inspires me to become a person like her in the future.
【參考范文3】The person I Respect Mr. Liu, aged 58, is my English teacher. He is so humorous, responsible and selfless that I respect and love him very much. To be honest, his assistance has a great impact on me. It was Mr. Liu who made me realize the importance of learning English well. Had it not been for his guidance and encouragement, I couldn’t have won the first place in the city English speech contest. Without his aid, I wouldn’t have a good understanding in English. I’ll definitely remember his kindness and help forever. Mr. Liu is a very respectable teacher indeed! I do thank him for what he did for me.

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