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Callie was a high school student, because of her parents’ business, her family moved from London to Los Angeles where she grew up. Living in a quiet and warm community with her parents, Callie was very interested in various volunteer activities in the community, and almost no one in the community didn’t know her.
On a sunny afternoon, Callie was reading a poem when she heard a soft knock. She stood up at once and opened the door. Her favorite neighbor, Mrs. Baker, stood outside the door.
“I need your help, Callie,” Mrs. Baker said, “and do you know the empty lot down the street ” Callie nodded, smiling. “The place is a mess, covered with trash. The city is letting us use the lot as a community garden,” she explained. “We need help to clean up the lot on Saturday.” “Sure, Mrs. Baker!” Callie said cheerfully. “Just have nothing to do this Saturday. I will be happy to help you!” Mrs. Baker looked pleased and said, “Thanks, Callie. We want to get the garden planted before summer. By then, adults and children in our community will have had a good place to go.”
At school the next morning, Callie’s close friend Tamara was waiting for her by their classroom, who had a surprise for her. Tamara said, “My mom bought tickets to Fun World this Saturday. She has an extra one for you!” The girls had been waiting for months for the amusement park to reopen.
Callie sighed and worried over how to choose for the rest of the day. Her mother noticed her mood when she arrived home. “Did something go wrong at school ” her mother asked. Callie explained her problem. “What should I do, Mom ” Callie asked. “I know you want to go with Tamara and also want to help Mrs. Baker. Think carefully about your choice, and you need to make your own decision. But I know you will do what is best.” her mother answered.
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1. 續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；
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Para.1: Callie spent the rest of the evening thinking about her decision.
Para.2: On Saturday, Callie met Mrs. Baker at the empty lot.
Callie關(guān)于志愿者活動(dòng)選擇的故事續(xù)寫
續(xù)寫要點(diǎn)
第一段：細(xì)致描繪 Callie 在做決定時(shí)內(nèi)心的激烈掙扎，她在游樂園的誘惑與社區(qū)責(zé)任之間權(quán)衡。要展現(xiàn)她從猶豫、糾結(jié)到最終堅(jiān)定選擇幫助社區(qū)的心理轉(zhuǎn)變過(guò)程，可通過(guò)回憶 Mrs. Baker 的請(qǐng)求、想象社區(qū)花園建成后的美好畫面等方式，促使她做出決定，并且描述她告知 Tamara 決定時(shí)的場(chǎng)景。
第二段：具體講述 Callie 在周六參與清理空地的全過(guò)程，包括到達(dá)空地后與 Mrs. Baker 及其他鄰居的互動(dòng)，詳細(xì)描述她所承擔(dān)的各項(xiàng)工作，如搬運(yùn)重物、繪制花園規(guī)劃草圖等。強(qiáng)調(diào)她在勞動(dòng)過(guò)程中的身體感受和內(nèi)心的滿足感，以及看到空地逐漸改變后的欣喜，最后闡述社區(qū)花園對(duì)整個(gè)社區(qū)的意義。
情感線
起初，Callie 面對(duì)游樂園的邀請(qǐng)和社區(qū)志愿活動(dòng)，內(nèi)心充滿糾結(jié)與矛盾，渴望去游樂園玩耍但又覺得對(duì)社區(qū)有責(zé)任。在思考過(guò)程中，她的情緒逐漸傾向于社區(qū)，從猶豫轉(zhuǎn)為堅(jiān)定。當(dāng)告知 Tamara 決定時(shí)，她有些愧疚，但同時(shí)也因自己的決定而感到一絲自豪。在參與志愿活動(dòng)時(shí)，她從一開始的干勁十足，到勞動(dòng)中的疲憊但堅(jiān)持，再到看到成果時(shí)的喜悅與滿足，情感隨著行動(dòng)不斷變化，最終收獲了強(qiáng)烈的成就感。
故事線
Callie 在晚上反復(fù)思考游樂園之行和社區(qū)志愿活動(dòng)的選擇，內(nèi)心糾結(jié)。
回憶 Mrs. Baker 的請(qǐng)求以及社區(qū)花園的規(guī)劃，Callie 逐漸堅(jiān)定選擇幫助社區(qū)。
Callie 打電話給 Tamara，向她解釋自己的決定，Tamara 表示理解。
周六，Callie 來(lái)到空地與 Mrs. Baker 和其他鄰居會(huì)合，開始清理工作。
Callie 積極投入勞動(dòng)，承擔(dān)多種任務(wù)，在過(guò)程中雖疲憊但堅(jiān)持。
空地清理完成，初步規(guī)劃出花園模樣，Callie 和大家看到成果十分開心。
主旨升華句
True happiness often lies in making sacrifices for the greater good of the community, as Callie discovered.（正如 Callie 所發(fā)現(xiàn)的，真正的幸福往往在于為了社區(qū)的更大利益而做出犧牲。）
The choices we make, even when difficult, can shape not only our own lives but also the lives of those around us, just like Callie's decision.（我們所做的選擇，即使艱難，也不僅能塑造我們自己的生活，還能影響周圍人的生活，就像 Callie 的決定一樣。）
Community spirit is built on the selfless contributions of individuals, and Callie's act of kindness is a shining example.（社區(qū)精神建立在個(gè)人的無(wú)私奉獻(xiàn)之上，Callie 的善舉是一個(gè)光輝的榜樣。）
Sometimes, giving up immediate personal pleasures for long - term community benefits is the path to true fulfillment, as Callie's story shows.（正如 Callie 的故事所示，有時(shí)為了長(zhǎng)期的社區(qū)利益而放棄眼前的個(gè)人樂趣，是通往真正滿足的道路。）
Through her choice, Callie taught us that the value of helping others and building a better community is immeasurable.（通過(guò)她的選擇，Callie 告訴我們幫助他人和建設(shè)更美好社區(qū)的價(jià)值是無(wú)法估量的。）
寫作示范
示范一
Para.1: Callie spent the rest of the evening thinking about her decision. The images of thrilling rides at Fun World and the messy empty lot in need of cleaning kept flashing in her mind. She tossed and turned in bed, torn between the two options. However, as she thought about Mrs. Baker's kind eyes and the bright future of the community garden, her heart began to lean towards volunteering. Finally, she picked up the phone and called Tamara. With a heavy heart, she explained her choice. Tamara was disappointed at first but then said she was proud of Callie. Callie felt a mix of relief and determination.
Para.2: On Saturday, Callie met Mrs. Baker at the empty lot. She was greeted with warm smiles from the neighbors. Without hesitation, Callie started working. She helped carry heavy bags of trash, dug the soil, and even used some old wood to build simple fences. As the sun shone brightly, she felt the sweat dripping down her face, but she didn't stop. By the end of the day, the empty lot had been transformed into a promising space. Callie looked around, filled with a sense of accomplishment. She knew that this community garden would bring joy to everyone, and her decision was truly worth it.
示范二
Para.1: Callie spent the rest of the evening thinking about her decision. She sat at her desk, staring at the calendar, with the dates of the amusement park visit and the community clean - up marked. The thought of the fun she'd miss at Fun World made her sad, but she couldn't shake the feeling of responsibility towards the community. She remembered how much the community had welcomed her family. After a long time of deliberation, she decided to help with the garden. She called Tamara, her voice a bit shaky as she explained. Tamara was understanding, and their friendship remained strong. Callie felt a new sense of purpose.
Para.2: On Saturday, Callie met Mrs. Baker at the empty lot. She joined the group of neighbors, full of energy. She was in charge of removing the stubborn weeds and later helped design the flower - bed layout. As she worked, she chatted with the other volunteers, sharing ideas. The hot sun didn't dampen her spirits. When the day ended, the lot was clean and had the outline of a beautiful garden. Callie looked at the 成果，a huge smile on her face. She realized that by choosing to help the community, she had not only created a wonderful place but also learned the true meaning of giving.
參考答案
Callie spent the rest of the evening thinking about her decision. She wanted to go to Fun World, but in the end she decided that her promise to her neighbor was more important. The next day at school, Callie told Tamara that she would not be able to go to Fun World. Tamara tried to understand, but Callie could tell Tamara was disappointed. The girls hardly spoke for the rest of the week.
On Sunday, Callie met Mrs. Baker at the empty lot. “Your mother said you made a tough choice. Thank you for giving a hand today.” Callie smiled as she cleaned with a large trash bag. “Do you need any help ” a voice behind her asked. Callie turned, surprised to see Tamara. “I know you made a promise to clean up the garden, and I wanted to come to help you. My mom said she could take us to Fun World next weekend.” With joint efforts, they finished the cleaning. Both Callie and Tamara realized that once a promise is made, it needs to be kept.

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