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My friend Avery and I tried out for Alice in Wonderland several weeks ago. Avery really hoped she could get picked to be Alice. I said, “You’d make a great Alice! I don’t care what part I get as long as I’m in it.” Then she asked, “So you’d be happy to have a small part like the Dormouse ” I replied, “Exactly!”
A few days later, Avery and I raced over to the theatre office, where the director had posted the cast list.
“Wow!” said Avery. “You got the part of Alice and I got the part of the March Hare.”
“That can’t be right,” I said. “There must be some mistake!”
But I was really given the part of Alice. The reason why I’d done well during the audition (試鏡) was that I was not nervous at all, because I had never thought I could get the major role.
I asked her if she wanted to practise our lines after school. Avery responded, “You mean practise your lines No, thanks. I’m busy this week.” “OK. How about someday next week ” I asked. “Sorry,” she whispered, “I’m sure I’m busy forever.”
That night at dinner, after my parents congratulated me on getting the lead role, they asked how I felt about it.
“Well, I’m confused,” I said. “Avery was so upset that I was picked to be Alice. She threw away our friendship.”
“Arizona, don’t you think this might be an opportunity for you to be an extra-good friend ” said my dad. “Sometimes when our friends do well, we feel envious (嫉妒的) and don’t know how to act. Try giving her a little time and understanding. I guess she’ll come around before long.”
注意：
1. 續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；
2. 請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
Over the next week, I did my best to give Avery some space.
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Our play ended up going great.
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《愛麗絲夢游仙境》演出與友情續(xù)寫
續(xù)寫要點(diǎn)
第一段：著重描繪 “我” 給予 Avery 空間的具體行為，除了留便簽，還可包括在學(xué)校的日常互動(dòng)中保持適當(dāng)距離，給她時(shí)間調(diào)整心態(tài)。同時(shí)，細(xì)膩刻畫 Avery 的心理變化，從最初的嫉妒、排斥，到看到便簽后的觸動(dòng)，最終主動(dòng)向 “我” 道歉求和，以及兩人重歸于好后共同努力排練的場景。
第二段：詳細(xì)敘述演出的精彩過程，比如觀眾的反應(yīng)細(xì)節(jié)，Avery 和 “我” 在舞臺(tái)上的出色表現(xiàn)，動(dòng)作、表情、臺(tái)詞等方面的呈現(xiàn)。演出結(jié)束后，突出兩人之間深厚的友誼以及對這次經(jīng)歷的深刻感悟，將友誼與演出成功緊密聯(lián)系起來。
情感線
在得知 “我” 被選為主角后，Avery 因嫉妒而產(chǎn)生不滿情緒，對 “我” 態(tài)度冷淡，兩人友誼出現(xiàn)裂痕，“我” 感到困惑和失落。
“我” 聽從父親建議，給予 Avery 空間，通過留便簽表達(dá)善意，Avery 逐漸被打動(dòng)，內(nèi)心的嫉妒開始消散，產(chǎn)生愧疚感，主動(dòng)向 “我” 道歉，兩人重歸于好，友誼得以修復(fù)，此時(shí) “我” 感到欣喜和寬慰。
演出成功后，兩人充滿自豪，友誼在共同經(jīng)歷中進(jìn)一步升華，對彼此的情誼更加深厚，內(nèi)心滿是感動(dòng)與珍惜。
故事線
“我” 和 Avery 一起參加《愛麗絲夢游仙境》的試鏡，“我” 意外獲得愛麗絲的角色，Avery 成為三月兔，Avery 因嫉妒對 “我” 態(tài)度惡劣。
“我” 聽從父親建議，給 Avery 空間，不在排練上勉強(qiáng)她，而是在她的儲(chǔ)物柜留下鼓勵(lì)和表達(dá)想念的便簽。
Avery 看到便簽后，內(nèi)心有所觸動(dòng)，開始反思自己的行為，意識(shí)到自己的錯(cuò)誤。
Avery 主動(dòng)找到 “我”，為自己之前的行為道歉，兩人冰釋前嫌，決定一起認(rèn)真排練。
演出當(dāng)天，Avery 和 “我” 在舞臺(tái)上完美演繹各自角色，將《愛麗絲夢游仙境》的奇妙世界生動(dòng)呈現(xiàn)給觀眾。
演出大獲成功，Avery 和 “我” 收獲了觀眾的熱烈掌聲，兩人的友誼也在這次經(jīng)歷中變得更加堅(jiān)不可摧。
主旨升華句
True friendship has the power to weather the storm of envy and emerge even stronger, teaching us the value of patience and understanding.
In the journey of friendship, moments of jealousy can be transformed into opportunities for growth, strengthening the bond between friends.
The magic of friendship lies in its ability to overcome the most challenging emotions, such as envy, and create lasting memories.
A strong friendship is not defined by the absence of envy, but by the willingness to forgive and work through it together.
Through the experience of envy and reconciliation, we learn that true friends are those who can turn a difficult situation into a chance to deepen their connection.
寫作示范一
Over the next week, I did my best to give Avery some space. I refrained from asking her about rehearsals and simply smiled at her in the hallway. Every morning, I placed a handwritten note in her locker. One note read, “Your energy will make the March Hare unforgettable.” As days passed, I noticed a change in her. One afternoon, she stopped me in the corridor. Her eyes were filled with remorse as she said, “I was so wrong. I let jealousy get the better of me. Can we start over and practice ” I nodded eagerly. From that day on, we spent hours after school, perfecting our lines and acting skills, supporting each other every step of the way.
Our play ended up going great. As soon as the curtain rose, the audience was spellbound. Avery's portrayal of the March Hare was full of energy, and I did my best to bring Alice to life. We synchronized our movements and delivered our lines with precision. When the final scene ended, the applause was deafening. We took our bows, looking at each other with tears of joy. This play not only showcased our acting talents but also mended our broken friendship, proving that true friends can overcome any obstacle.
寫作示范二
Over the next week, I did my best to give Avery some space. I didn't bring up the play around her and focused on my own preparations. I also made sure to compliment her on other things, like her new haircut. Along with the locker notes, I once left a small flower by her desk. One day, I found her waiting for me after class. She fidgeted nervously and then said, “I'm really sorry for being so distant. I was jealous, but I realize now how silly that was. Let's practice together.” I was thrilled. We immediately started planning our rehearsal schedule and helped each other with the tricky parts of our roles.
Our play ended up going great. The audience was captivated from the first scene. Avery's performance as the March Hare was both hilarious and endearing, and I felt a sense of confidence on stage. We could feel the energy from the audience as we performed. When the curtain closed, the cheers were overwhelming. We hugged each other tightly, knowing that our friendship had not only survived but thrived. This experience taught us that friendship is more precious than any role and that understanding can heal even the deepest rifts.
【答案】
Over the next week, I did my best to give Avery some space. Then one day, I approached her. “I know you didn’t exactly love the idea of being the March Hare, but you’re such a talented actress, and the way you say your lines is great.” “Thanks,” said Avery happily, with a big smile on her face. “Well,” I said, “I’m still struggling with a few things about my character. I’d love your help if you have any free time this week.” She smiled. “I might be free on Thursday.” And we practised carefully and passionately on Thursday.
Our play ended up going great. We had so much fun, and the audience loved the perfect show. They broke into loud applause. And even though things were rough for a little while with Avery and me, they’re better than ever now! She even apologized for the way she acted at first. And I’ve learned an important lesson from this experience. Give your teammate a little time and understanding, and he or she just might come around before too long.

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