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The New York Marathon (馬拉松) is my goal for this year. I know I am never going to win a race but now, when I get anything negative, I will think of the kind gentleman who really believed, “You very good… you very fast.”
At the time, I was living in the Bay Area, and my mother had come to visit for a few days. On the last day of her stay, I was preparing to go out for a run. I picked up a T-shirt I just bought the other day from a Chinese clothing shop — it had some Chinese characters on the front, and a scene of Honolulu Chinatown on the back. I didn’t speak Chinese, but somehow this special T-shirt was quite soft and good for exercise.Working in a very negative environment, I found morning runs very beneficial — body tired but mind awake.
And I had always met an elderly Chinese gentleman walking on the opposite side of the trail (道路) when I was running on other mornings. I had always said, “Good morning,” and he had always smiled warmly and nodded his head slightly.
As I was going out the door, my mother suddenly said, “I don’t think running is so hot — that famous runner died.” I started to recount what I had read about Jim Fixx, and how running had probably been the contributing factor to his living far longer than most of the other members of his family, but I knew there was absolutely no point.
As I started running on my favorite trail, I found I couldn’t shake my mother’s statement. I was so discouraged that I could hardly run. I began thinking, “Why do I run at all Serious runners probably think I look silly! I might have a heart attack on the trail — my dad had a fatal (致命的) heart attack at 50 years old, and he was seemingly in better shape than I am.”
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My mother’s statement remained in my mind like a giant blanket.
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Upon hearing the man’s words, I felt more unexplained strength in my step.
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《紐約馬拉松目標》續寫
續寫要點
第一段：詳細描述作者在聽到母親消極言論后，跑步時的低落狀態，如步伐沉重、內心糾結等。同時，著重刻畫與老人相遇的場景，老人的舉動和言語，以及作者的驚訝反應。
第二段：重點描繪老人的話對作者產生的積極影響，如信心的恢復、決心的增強等。接著闡述作者從那之后的改變，包括面對挫折時的心態轉變，以及為實現紐約馬拉松目標所付出的努力。
情感線
起初，作者因母親的消極言論而陷入自我懷疑和沮喪，跑步時充滿負面情緒。
遇到老人并聽到鼓勵話語后，作者感到驚訝，同時內心的陰霾開始消散。
之后，作者被老人的話激勵，重拾信心和決心，變得積極向上，對未來充滿希望。
故事線
作者準備去跑步，母親提及著名跑步者的死亡，讓作者心情低落。
作者在跑步途中，腦海中不斷回響母親的話，腳步沉重，狀態不佳。
作者遇到常碰面的老人，老人這次不僅打招呼，還仔細看了作者的 T 恤并給予鼓勵。
作者被老人的話觸動，開始反思，內心的消極情緒逐漸被驅散。
從那以后，作者每次遇到挫折，都會想起老人的話，從而振作起來。
作者將紐約馬拉松設為目標，努力訓練，想要證明自己，也不辜負老人的鼓勵。
主旨升華句
A simple word of encouragement can turn a person's life around and light up the path to their dreams.
Sometimes, the kindness of a stranger has the power to overcome the darkest doubts and inspire us to reach for the stars.
Encouragement, no matter how small, can be the spark that ignites our inner strength and propels us forward on the journey of life.
The right words at the right time can transform our perspective, filling our hearts with hope and determination to pursue our goals.
A kind gesture from a passer - by can become the driving force that helps us break through self - doubt and achieve what we once thought impossible.
寫作示范一
My mother’s statement remained in my mind like a giant blanket. I trudged along the trail, each step feeling like a burden. The chirping of the birds, which usually brought me joy, now seemed like a mocking sound. As I was wallowing in self - pity, the elderly Chinese gentleman appeared. He halted, his eyes fixed on my T - shirt. Then, with a warm smile and a thick accent, he said, “You very good… you very fast.” I was taken aback, my gloomy face suddenly showing a glimmer of surprise.
Upon hearing the man’s words, I felt a rush of energy coursing through my veins. His simple yet powerful words shattered the self - doubt that had been weighing me down. I stood up straight, my shoulders squared, and started running with a new - found purpose. From that moment on, whenever life threw challenges at me, I would remember his kind words. I trained harder for the New York Marathon, determined to prove that his encouragement was well - placed. In the end, it wasn't just about winning a race; it was about overcoming my own fears and embracing the strength that came from a stranger's kindness.
寫作示范二
My mother’s statement remained in my mind like a giant blanket. I shuffled along the trail, my head hanging low. The once - vibrant colors of the flowers beside the path now seemed faded. I was on the verge of giving up when I saw the elderly Chinese gentleman approaching. He stopped in front of me, his gaze lingering on my T - shirt. “You very good… you very fast,” he said, his voice soft but full of conviction. I stared at him in disbelief, not expecting such a heartening comment.
Upon hearing the man’s words, I felt an unexplainable sense of courage welling up inside me. His words were like a ray of sunshine piercing through the dark clouds of doubt. I took a deep breath, lifted my head, and broke into a brisk run. Every time I faced difficulties during my training for the New York Marathon, I would recall his encouragement. It became my source of strength, pushing me to go the extra mile. This experience taught me that a single act of kindness can have a profound impact, turning our self - doubts into determination and helping us chase our dreams fearlessly.
【答案】
My mother’s statement remained in my mind like a giant blanket. Gradually, my jog slowed to a walk. My body drained of energy and my mind felt extremely defeated. Just as I was going to turn around and head for home — feeling more discouraged than I could recall in years — I saw that elderly Chinese gentleman again. Seeing my shirt in the distance had prompted him to march towards me. With limited English he pointed to the letters and enthusiastically said, “You very good… you very fast.”
Upon hearing the man’s words, I felt more unexplained strength in my step. He cast his usual warm smile at me and gave me a thumb up as we passed each other. A surge of warmth across my whole body, I didn’t turn from the trail where my previous dark mood had intended. Thanks to that little boost, I continued for six more miles that day instead. I was not that fast, but was very good in my spirit and my heart. Luckily, the elderly gentleman saved me from the shadow of negative feedback.

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