資源簡介 閱讀下面材料,根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段,使之構成一篇完成的短文。Ruby was so proud of her new skates! She put them on right away and was soon rushing along the sidewalk. Her little brother Max could only watch in envy.“I wish I had a pair!” he told his mum.“Well, you’re nearly big enough to wear Ruby’s old skates,” she replied.But when Max tried on Ruby’s old skates, they were too big. He stuffed newspaper into the boots. Much to his disappointment, he fell over each time he tried to stand up in them.Finally, he gave up, only watching Ruby skating around him.“I should put on a skating display!” Ruby decided. “All our aunts, uncles and cousins will come. You’ll watch me, Max ”Max sighed. He didn’t want to watch the show. He wanted to be in it! “Poor Max!” said his mum. Then, she took out a pair of thick red socks to let Max pull them on with the hope of fitting better.Max eye d the red socks skeptically, saying, “Mum, these look just like my red soccer socks, but smaller.” His mum smiled, “Ah, your red soccer socks are too thin and meant for running, but these are magic socks that have the power to expand and stretch to fit most feet...”Magic When Mum left the room, Max took the wand (魔杖) from his magic set and waved it around a few times, “Magic socks, you are so great! Use your magic to help me skate” Max slipped the socks on and tried skating in his bedroom. He didn’t full over! He tried again. He still didn’t fall. He could now skate— thanks to his magic socks! Hooray!The next morning, when he skated up to Ruby on one foot, she stared in amazement.“ Max, you are magic!” Thrilled, Ruby invited him to join in the show. To prepare well for the show, Max practiced happily with the magic socks on every day. Max even tried tricks like jumps, believing the socks would help him.注意:(1) 續寫詞數應為150個左右;(2) 請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。The show time came and their family gathered in the garden.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________“But you’re not wearing magic socks!” said Mum.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意Ruby 有了新溜冰鞋,小弟弟 Max 羨慕不已。媽媽說 Max 差不多能穿 Ruby 的舊溜冰鞋了,可 Max 穿上后發現太大,嘗試各種方法都無法正常站立,最終放棄。Ruby 決定舉辦滑冰表演,邀請所有親戚觀看。媽媽拿出一雙厚紅襪子,稱其有魔法能讓 Max 穿上溜冰鞋。Max 半信半疑,用魔杖對襪子施展 “魔法” 后,竟真的能在臥室里滑冰了。第二天,Max 的滑冰技巧讓 Ruby 驚嘆,受邀參加表演,之后他每天都穿著魔法襪子快樂練習。故事山分析開端:Ruby 有新溜冰鞋,Max 渴望也有一雙,嘗試穿舊鞋失敗。發展:Ruby 準備滑冰表演,媽媽拿出 “魔法襪子” 幫助 Max,Max 能滑冰并受邀參加表演,開始練習。高潮:表演時刻到來,Max 在表演中會有怎樣的表現,是否會出現意外情況,是故事高潮。結局:表演結束,Max 對 “魔法襪子” 有新認識,家人也會有不同反應,他和家人之間的關系也會因這次經歷而有所變化。五處伏筆以及在續寫中的回應伏筆:媽媽說襪子有魔法,能讓 Max 穿上溜冰鞋。回應:在表演中,“魔法襪子” 會成為關鍵,可能是 Max 自信表演的支撐,也可能出現意外情況,如襪子破了,引發對 “魔法” 的新解讀。伏筆:Max 相信襪子有魔法,每天穿著練習,甚至嘗試高難度動作。回應:表演時,Max 可能因過度依賴 “魔法” 而遇到困難,如跳躍時差點摔倒,但最終憑借自己的能力化解,意識到自身努力的重要性。伏筆:Ruby 邀請 Max 參加表演,Max 積極練習。回應:表演時,Max 和 Ruby 的互動會很精彩,可能會有合作表演,展現他們的默契和成長。伏筆:Max 最初穿舊溜冰鞋總是摔倒。回應:表演時,Max 成功的表現會形成鮮明對比,突出 “魔法襪子” 帶來的改變以及他自身的進步。伏筆:家人會觀看表演。回應:家人的反應會影響故事走向,如他們對 Max 的表現贊不絕口,會讓 Max 更有成就感,也會讓媽媽的 “魔法” 說法更具趣味性。續寫要點(兩段)第一段:詳細描寫表演時的場景,包括花園的布置、家人的期待、Max 和 Ruby 的出場,Max 穿著 “魔法襪子” 自信地展示各種技巧,如單腳滑行、旋轉等,家人的歡呼和掌聲。第二段:設置情節轉折,比如表演結束后,Max 不小心弄破了襪子,媽媽指出他沒穿 “魔法襪子” 也能滑得很好,引發 Max 對 “魔法” 的思考,意識到是自己的練習和努力讓他成功,最后表達他對這次經歷的感悟。情感線起初 Max 因不能滑冰而失落,穿上 “魔法襪子” 能滑冰后興奮又自信,準備表演時滿懷期待。表演時緊張又激動,享受成功的喜悅。媽媽指出襪子秘密時,他先是驚訝,隨后明白努力的意義,內心充滿成就感和對未來的信心。故事線Ruby 有新溜冰鞋,Max 穿舊鞋失敗。Ruby 準備滑冰表演,媽媽拿出 “魔法襪子” 幫助 Max。Max 能滑冰并受邀參加表演,開始練習。表演時刻到來,Max 和 Ruby 在家人面前精彩表演。Max 表演結束弄破襪子,媽媽揭示襪子秘密。Max 意識到努力的重要性,收獲成長。主旨升華句(5 句英文)Sometimes, the magic we believe in is not just a supernatural force, but the power of our own efforts and determination that lead us to achieve our dreams.Through Max's experience, we learn that the support and encouragement from family, even in the form of a little white lie, can inspire us to overcome difficulties and reach new heights.This story shows that what seems like magic at first glance may turn out to be the result of our own hard work, and that self - belief and practice are the true keys to success.Max discovered that the real magic behind his skating skills was not in the socks, but in his willingness to try and improve, reminding us that true growth comes from within.In the journey of life, we may look for external magic to solve our problems, but it's often our own perseverance and self - improvement that create the most amazing transformations.寫作示范一The show time came and their family gathered in the garden. The grass was decorated with colorful balloons, and a small platform was set up in the middle. Max and Ruby stepped onto the platform, their faces beaming with excitement. Max, wearing his "magic socks", started with a smooth one - foot glide, then spun around gracefully. Ruby followed suit, showing off her own skills. The family cheered and clapped loudly, their voices filling the air. Max even managed a small jump, landing steadily on his feet, which brought even louder applause."But you're not wearing magic socks!" said Mum. As Max finished his performance, he tripped and tore one of his socks. To his surprise, he still managed to stand up and skate without falling. Mum came over and pointed out the now - torn sock. Max looked at it in shock at first. Then, he realized that it wasn't the socks that made him skate well, but his own practice. He smiled and said, "You're right, Mum. I guess I made my own magic with all that practicing." Everyone laughed, and Max felt a great sense of pride in his achievement.寫作示范二The show time came and their family gathered in the garden. A soft breeze blew, making the flowers in the garden sway gently, as if they were also looking forward to the show. Max, with a big smile on his face, skated out first. He performed a series of difficult moves, like backward skating and fast - paced turns. Ruby joined him, and they skated in harmony, creating a wonderful display. The aunts, uncles and cousins were all amazed, constantly taking pictures and cheering."But you're not wearing magic socks!" said Mum. After the performance, Max was so excited that he didn't notice his sock had come off. Mum picked it up and showed it to him. Max was puzzled at first. Then, he remembered all the days he spent practicing. He realized that his hard work was the real magic. He said to his family, "I thought it was the socks, but it was really me. I'm so glad I practiced hard." Everyone nodded in agreement, and Max knew that this was a performance he would never forget, not because of the "magic socks", but because of his own growth.【答案】The show time came and their family gathered in the garden. Max was nervous, afraid that he would fall over again. However, everything went perfectly! The audience held their breath as the two siblings did their special skating tricks, turns and jumps and when it was over, they clapped and cheered. Max had never been more proud! Mum went to hug them and praised Max for his graceful skating skills. Max thanked Mum a lot and owed his success to his magic socks.“But you’re not wearing magic socks!” said Mum. “I put them in the wash this morning.” Max stared at her, and then at magic socks, which were hanging on the washing line. Actually, he was wearing the red soccer socks. Max was so surprised that he could still skate — even without his magic socks! “You don’t need magic to skate,” said Mum. “You just need to practice and believe in yourself!” She was right! He could skate, all on his own. 展開更多...... 收起↑ 資源預覽 縮略圖、資源來源于二一教育資源庫