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It was a snowing Monday night. Mava received an invitation from her friend Lily, asking Maya to attend her birthday party next Wednesday evening. To Maya’s amazement and excitement, the invitation looked like it came from Hogwarts. It would be a Harry Potter-themed costume party. As Lily’s good friend and as one of the millions of Harry Potter fans, Maya definitely accepted the invitation without a second thought. Her favourite character was Harry’s best female friend Hermione. Maya admired her not just because she was extremely clever and a bit of a know-it-all, but also for her bravery and a positive mindset. Every time faced with difficulty, she always had a way out. Maya was so eager to wear Hermione’s costume that she couldn’t wait to make preparations for it. She made a list of things to buy, which consisted of a f lark V-neck sweater, a white collared shirt with the Gryffindor tie, a skirt, stockings, Mary Jane shoes, a black cloak (斗篷) and of course a scarf of bee color.
With the list in hand, Maya happily went to tell her mother, Sarah, all about it. Sarah was weaving a sweater in the living room. After learning Maya’s plan, Sarah thought it was not necessary to buy all the clothing for they cost a lot and Maya had already had a dark V-neck sweater, a white collared shirt, many skirts, stockings and a pair of Mary Jane shoes. Therefore, she advised her daughter to rent or buy a second-hand black cloak and a brown and golden scarf. But Maya insisted that all the costumes should be brand-new. “Hermione is more about books than looks. Just remember to keep things tidy, simple and modest.” Sarah stopped weaving and told her daughter. Maya agreed with her mom, but she still wanted a new cloak and a new scarf.
注意：
1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;
2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
Looking at the half-weaved sweater, Maya got an idea.
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Over the following days, Maya was making her cloak while Sarah was weaving the scarf.
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文章大意
周一晚下雪，瑪瓦收到好友莉莉的生日派對邀請，這是一場哈利 波特主題的變裝派對?，斖咦鳛楣?波特粉絲，欣然答應(yīng)，她最喜歡赫敏，急切地準(zhǔn)備赫敏的服裝，并列出采購清單。母親薩拉認(rèn)為部分服裝已有，建議租賃或購買二手的黑斗篷和圍巾，但瑪瓦堅持要全新的。
故事山分析
開端：瑪瓦收到哈利 波特主題生日派對邀請，決定扮演赫敏。
發(fā)展：瑪瓦列采購清單，母親薩拉認(rèn)為部分物品無需新買，兩人產(chǎn)生分歧。
高潮：瑪瓦想到解決辦法，與母親一起制作服裝，最終完成的過程將是故事高潮。
結(jié)局：瑪瓦穿著自制服裝參加派對，收獲快樂，同時體會到與母親合作的意義，對物品價值有新認(rèn)知。
伏筆以及在續(xù)寫中的回應(yīng)
伏筆：薩拉在編織毛衣?；貞?yīng)：瑪瓦想到利用母親編織技能，一起制作圍巾和斗篷，既解決服裝問題，又增進親子關(guān)系。
伏筆：瑪瓦堅持要全新服裝?；貞?yīng)：通過自制服裝，滿足瑪瓦對 “新” 的追求，同時讓她明白自制物品的獨特價值。
伏筆：瑪瓦喜歡赫敏的勇敢和積極心態(tài)?；貞?yīng)：在制作服裝遇到困難時，瑪瓦以赫敏為榜樣，勇敢面對并解決問題。
伏筆：薩拉提到赫敏注重內(nèi)在，穿著應(yīng)整潔、簡單、樸素?；貞?yīng)：自制服裝符合這一特點，讓瑪瓦更好理解赫敏的形象內(nèi)涵。
伏筆：瑪瓦和母親在購買服裝上有分歧?；貞?yīng)：通過共同制作服裝，化解分歧，達成共識，促進家庭和諧。
續(xù)寫要點（兩段）
第一段：描述瑪瓦想到的主意，即和母親一起制作斗篷和圍巾。詳細(xì)描寫她向母親提出想法的過程，包括母親的反應(yīng)，兩人如何計劃，如確定制作材料、商量制作方法等。
第二段：敘述制作過程中發(fā)生的事情，如遇到的困難（針法錯誤、材料不足等）及如何解決。描述瑪瓦和母親在制作過程中的互動，如互相鼓勵、交流心得，最后完成服裝時兩人的喜悅心情。
情感線
起初瑪瓦因派對邀請興奮，與母親意見不合時有些失落。想到制作服裝的主意后，重新燃起希望，制作過程中雖有困難，但在和母親的互動中感受到親情溫暖，完成服裝時充滿成就感和喜悅。母親從最初對購買新服裝的反對，到理解女兒想法并一起制作，增進了對女兒的愛。
故事線
瑪瓦收到哈利 波特主題派對邀請，決定扮演赫敏。
瑪瓦列采購清單，母親建議部分物品買二手，兩人產(chǎn)生分歧。
瑪瓦看到母親編織毛衣，想到和母親一起制作斗篷和圍巾。
瑪瓦和母親確定制作計劃，準(zhǔn)備材料。
制作過程中遇到困難，母女共同解決。
完成服裝，瑪瓦穿著參加派對，收獲快樂與成長。
主旨升華句
Sometimes, the most precious things in life are not bought with money but created with love and effort, just like Maya's self - made costumes.
Through the process of making costumes together, Maya and her mother not only solved their disagreement but also deepened their bond, showing that family cooperation can overcome any obstacle.
Maya learned that embodying her favorite character was not just about appearance but also about the spirit of using creativity and perseverance to face challenges, just like Hermione.
The experience taught Maya that the value of an item lies not only in its newness but in the memories and emotions attached to it during the creation process.
This story shows that when we combine our passions with family support, we can create something truly special, which enriches our lives and brings us closer to our loved ones.
寫作示范一
Looking at the half - weaved sweater, Maya got an idea. She rushed to her mother and said, "Mom, instead of buying new ones, why don't we make the cloak and the scarf ourselves You're so good at weaving. I can help you, too." Sarah was surprised at first but then smiled, seeing the determination in Maya's eyes. They discussed the materials they needed. Maya found some black fabric in the storage room that could be used for the cloak. Sarah measured the fabric and showed Maya how to cut it into the right shape. For the scarf, they decided on using some wool in brown and golden colors.
Over the following days, Maya was making her cloak while Sarah was weaving the scarf. Maya encountered some problems when sewing the edges of the cloak. The stitches were uneven, but she didn't give up. She asked her mother for advice and tried again. Sarah, on the other hand, had to adjust the pattern of the scarf several times to make it look perfect. Finally, the big day arrived. Maya put on her self - made costume. The cloak flowed behind her, and the scarf was wrapped neatly around her neck. She looked exactly like Hermione. She thanked her mother with a big hug, feeling proud of what they had accomplished together.
寫作示范二
Looking at the half - weaved sweater, Maya got an idea. She sat down beside her mother and said, "Mom, I think we can make the cloak and scarf on our own. It'll be more special that way." Sarah considered her daughter's words and nodded in agreement. They searched online for patterns of the cloak and scarf. Maya was responsible for ordering the wool for the scarf, while Sarah found an old black sheet that could be transformed into a cloak. They planned to start working on the weekend.
Over the following days, Maya was making her cloak while Sarah was weaving the scarf. As Maya cut the black sheet, she accidentally cut it a bit too short. She was worried, but her mother reassured her that they could add an extra strip to make it long enough. Sarah, in the process of weaving the scarf, found that the color combination wasn't as good as she expected. So, they adjusted the colors. After days of hard work, the costume was finally ready. Maya put it on and twirled around in front of the mirror. She felt like she was in the world of Harry Potter. She couldn't wait to show it off at the party and tell everyone how she and her mother made it together.
【答案】Looking at the half-weaved sweater,Maya got an idea. “Mom,” Maya exclaimed, her eyes sparkling with excitement, “why don’t we make the cloak and scarf ourselves ” Sarah was more than delighted at her daughter’s proposal. She would put aside the sweater she was weaving and set out to weave a scarf similar to Hermione’s. Maya took the task of making the cloak. She had learned something about sewing at school. They found a DIY instruction video for a cloak online and used leftover cloth from a project Sarah had finished.
Over the following days, Maya was making her cloak while Sarah was weaving the scarf. Sarah was experienced at weaving so the scarf weaving went smoothly. The brown and gold stripes scarf was in sight. As for the cloak, although following the video instructions, Maya found it not that seemingly easy. Nevertheless, with great passion and patience, Maya did it eventually. On the long expected night, wearing Hermione’s costume, especially the hand-made scarf and cloak, Maya felt a surge of warmth and pride, ready to embrace the magical evening ahead. “You are brilliant like a real Hermione,” Sarah smiled at her daughter.

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