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During that hot summer, little Sammy and his sister Marie spent their vacation at their grandparents’ farm. The farm was filled with fun and adventure, but one day, an unfortunate accident occurred. While playing, Sammy accidentally shot his grandmother’s beloved pet duck with a slingshot (彈弓). Panicked, he quickly hid the duck behind a pile of old wood in the yard. He was afraid to tell his grandmother the truth, worried about being punished.
However, what he didn’t know was that his sister Marie had seen the entire event. The next day, when Grandma asked Marie to wash the dishes, Marie seized the opportunity to shift the responsibility onto Sammy. She said, “Sammy told me he wanted to help in the kitchen today, Grandma.” Sammy was shocked and confused because he had not said such a thing. Marie approached him and whispered threateningly, “Remember the duck ” It was then that Sammy realized Marie had seen his secret and was now using it to make him do the housework she didn’t want to do.
This situation continued for several days. Whenever there were household chores to be done, Marie would threaten Sammy with “Remember the duck ”. Sammy felt an increasing burden of guilt and responsibility.
注意：續寫詞數應為 80左右。
Finally, he couldn’t bear the secret and pressure any longer and decided to tell everything to Grandma
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Sammy與奶奶的故事續寫
續寫要點
Sammy 坦白：詳細描述 Sammy 向奶奶坦白時的神情、動作和話語，展現他內心的恐懼與愧疚。比如，他可能低著頭，聲音顫抖，身體微微發抖。
奶奶反應：刻畫奶奶聽到坦白后的表情、語言和行動，體現奶奶的寬容與智慧。奶奶或許會放下手中的事情，認真傾聽，然后溫柔地安慰 Sammy。
Marie 受觸動：描寫 Marie 在一旁聽到對話后的反應，包括她的表情變化、內心的掙扎以及最終的轉變。她可能從最初的緊張害怕，到后來感到羞愧和懊悔。
結局與感悟：講述事情的最終解決方式，以及 Sammy 和 Marie 從中得到的成長與感悟，如學會誠實、珍惜親情等。
情感線（150 字）
Sammy：起初因害怕懲罰而極度恐懼，在秘密被 Marie 要挾后，壓力與愧疚感不斷累積。決定坦白時，內心充滿忐忑。坦白后，雖害怕被責罵，但更多的是卸下重擔的輕松。最后，在奶奶的寬容下，感到溫暖與安心，對奶奶充滿感激。
Marie：看到 Sammy 犯錯時，最初有想要利用此事的心思。在要挾 Sammy 過程中，可能有一絲得意。但當 Sammy 向奶奶坦白時，她開始緊張害怕，擔心自己的行為被揭露。聽到奶奶的教導后，內心充滿羞愧，意識到自己的錯誤。
故事線（6 條）
Sammy 鼓起勇氣，找到正在廚房忙碌的奶奶，開始艱難地坦白自己的過錯。
奶奶停下手中的活，認真傾聽，臉上沒有一絲憤怒，反而充滿了慈愛。
躲在一旁偷聽的 Marie，聽到 Sammy 的話后，臉色變得煞白，身體也微微顫抖。
奶奶聽完后，把 Sammy 和 Marie 叫到一起，輕聲詢問 Marie 是否知曉此事。
Marie 紅著臉，低著頭承認了自己的要挾行為，并向 Sammy 道歉。
奶奶教導兩人要誠實和寬容，一家人最終和好如初，關系更加親密。
主旨升華句 5 句英文
Honesty is not only the best policy but also the key to mending relationships and finding inner peace.（誠實不僅是上策，也是修復關系和獲得內心平靜的關鍵。）
In the face of mistakes, courage to confess and forgiveness to accept can turn a bad situation into a precious life lesson.（面對錯誤時，勇于承認和寬容接納能將糟糕的局面轉化為寶貴的人生教訓。）
Sibling bonds are tested by challenges, but truth and love can always strengthen them.（兄弟姐妹的關系會受到挑戰的考驗，但真相和愛總能讓它們更加牢固。）
True growth comes from acknowledging our wrongdoings and learning from them, as Sammy and Marie did.（真正的成長源于承認我們的錯誤并從中學習，就像 Sammy 和 Marie 所做的那樣。）
The power of forgiveness can heal wounds, both in ourselves and in our relationships, just as Grandma showed.（正如奶奶所展示的，寬容的力量可以治愈我們自己和人際關系中的創傷。）
兩篇寫作示范
示范一
Finally, he couldn’t bear the secret and pressure any longer and decided to tell everything to Grandma. Sammy walked slowly into the living room, his head hanging low. With a quivering voice, he poured out his guilt about the duck. Grandma put down her book, looking at him gently. “I knew, dear. Everyone makes mistakes,” she said. Marie, who was listening nearby, felt a lump in her throat. Grandma called Marie over, and with tears in her eyes, Marie confessed her blackmailing. Grandma smiled, hugging them both. “Now, we start fresh,” she said. From then on, the siblings understood the importance of honesty and forgiveness.
示范二
Finally, he couldn’t bear the secret and pressure any longer and decided to tell everything to Grandma. Sammy’s hands were shaking as he approached Grandma in the garden. “Grandma, I... I shot the duck,” he sobbed. Grandma turned around, her eyes soft. “It’s okay, Sammy. What matters is you telling me now.” Marie, hiding behind a tree, was shocked. Grandma called Marie out. Realizing her mistake, Marie apologized. Grandma patiently taught them about honesty. That day, the siblings learned that honesty could fix even the biggest mistakes, and their bond grew stronger than ever.
參考答案
Finally, he couldn’t bear the secret and pressure any longer and decided to tell everything to Grandma. Grandma knelt down smiling, gave him a hug and forgave him. Grandma called Marie to come to her and disclosed the whole truth, and meantime blamed her for taking advantage of her brother. Marie also felt ashamed and regretful, so she said sorry to Grandma and her brother, promising not to do so again. Both of them learned a lot from this trip. So it is important to admit your mistake, apologize and seek others’ forgiveness.

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