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I was eight years old when my family moved from Towoomba to England in 1950. My mother was suffering from a rare disease and had to take treatment in London. The day before we boarded the ship, Father sent his five-year-old red heeler (Australian cattle dog), Spider, who was loved by us all, to his friend Sandy, as Sandy was to be his guardian while we were overseas. We didn’t know how long my mother’s treatment would take or how long we would be away.
Six weeks later, an airletter arrived from Sandy, giving my father the news that Spider had run away just two weeks after we had sailed. I will always remember my father’s face as he read this news. My mother and I tried to comfort him, knowing in our hearts how useless this was.
Sandy had advertised constantly on the media. Despite many “sightings”, the dog was never found. It seemed Spider just kept running and searching for us. My father worried he would be shot or dead from starvation. But our family thought that Father held a secret hope that Spider was still alive.
We sailed back to Australia two years later and my father immediately began his own search for Spider. He repeated calls to the people who had said they had seen his dog, but it turned out to be clueless.
One cold winter’s Saturday morning, eight months after our return, my father had a call from Gin Gin, 375 kilometers from Toowoomba. An elderly lady living on her own was putting food out “for a very old yellow dog”. This had been going on for a few weeks. Immediately we set off.
Five and a half hours later, we found the old house beside the bush (灌木叢). Sadly, the lady told my father that the dog hadn’t been around for a few days. My father had an upset look in his eyes. He put two fingers to his mouth and did his special whistle for Spider.
注意：
1. 續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；
2. 請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
Suddenly there was a sound in the bush.
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Once home we gently cleaned him up.
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文章大意
1950 年，作者 8 歲時(shí)全家從澳大利亞的圖文巴搬去英國(guó)，因母親要在倫敦接受罕見(jiàn)病治療。出發(fā)前，父親把心愛(ài)的 5 歲紅色牧牛犬 Spider 交給朋友 Sandy 照顧。六周后，Sandy 來(lái)信告知 Spider 在他們乘船離開(kāi)兩周后跑丟了。盡管多方尋找，一直無(wú)果。兩年后全家回到澳大利亞，父親立刻開(kāi)始尋找 Spider。八個(gè)月后的一個(gè)寒冷冬日，父親接到 375 公里外金金鎮(zhèn)一位老婦人的電話，說(shuō)有只很老的黃狗來(lái)吃食已有幾周。全家立刻前往，可惜到達(dá)時(shí)老婦人說(shuō)狗已經(jīng)幾天沒(méi)來(lái)了。父親吹起為 Spider 特制的口哨。
故事山分析
開(kāi)端：全家因母親治病搬去英國(guó)，Spider 被托付給朋友。
發(fā)展：Spider 跑丟，多方尋找無(wú)果。
高潮：全家回國(guó)后父親繼續(xù)尋找，接到老婦人電話前往卻得知狗已幾天未出現(xiàn)，父親吹口哨。
結(jié)局（待續(xù)寫(xiě)）：期待小狗 Spider 出現(xiàn)，與家人團(tuán)聚。
五處伏筆以及在續(xù)寫(xiě)中的回應(yīng)
“Spider, who was loved by us all”—— 回應(yīng)：續(xù)寫(xiě)中家人對(duì) Spider 的關(guān)愛(ài)體現(xiàn)在找到它后的精心照顧，如為它清理、陪伴它恢復(fù)。
“Sandy had advertised constantly on the media. Despite many ‘sightings’, the dog was never found.”—— 回應(yīng)：暗示小狗一直在流浪尋找主人，續(xù)寫(xiě)中可體現(xiàn)小狗歷經(jīng)艱難最終找到主人。
“My father worried he would be shot or dead from starvation.”—— 回應(yīng)：找到小狗時(shí)它可能又瘦又虛弱，體現(xiàn)父親之前擔(dān)憂的合理性。
“One cold winter’s Saturday morning”—— 回應(yīng)：可描述小狗在寒冷環(huán)境下的狀態(tài)，如瑟瑟發(fā)抖，更凸顯找到它后的溫暖。
“He put two fingers to his mouth and did his special whistle for Spider.”—— 回應(yīng)：續(xù)寫(xiě)中小狗聽(tīng)到口哨聲有反應(yīng)，如從灌木叢中跑出來(lái)。
續(xù)寫(xiě)要點(diǎn)（兩段）
第一段：重點(diǎn)描寫(xiě)小狗聽(tīng)到口哨聲后的反應(yīng)，從灌木叢中出現(xiàn)的樣子，如身體狀況、動(dòng)作等，以及家人看到小狗時(shí)的激動(dòng)表現(xiàn)。
第二段：描述帶小狗回家后的情景，如為它清理、喂食，小狗逐漸恢復(fù)精神，家人與小狗相處的溫馨畫(huà)面，體現(xiàn)團(tuán)聚的喜悅。
情感線（150 字）
開(kāi)始時(shí)家人因可能找不到 Spider 而失落、擔(dān)憂。當(dāng)聽(tīng)到灌木叢中的聲音，希望瞬間燃起。看到 Spider 出現(xiàn)，激動(dòng)與喜悅涌上心頭。帶它回家后，滿心都是對(duì)它的心疼與關(guān)愛(ài)，在照顧過(guò)程中，家庭的溫暖和對(duì) Spider 失而復(fù)得的珍惜之情愈發(fā)濃烈，最終洋溢著幸福與滿足。
故事線（6 條）
小狗聽(tīng)到口哨聲從灌木叢中出現(xiàn)。
家人看到小狗，父親沖過(guò)去抱住它。
家人發(fā)現(xiàn)小狗的身體狀況很差。
帶小狗回家，為它清理身體。
給小狗喂食，小狗逐漸恢復(fù)精神。
小狗與家人重新建立親密關(guān)系，快樂(lè)生活。
主旨升華句 5 句英文
This reunion of the dog and our family shows that the power of love and loyalty can overcome any distance and hardship.（小狗與我們家庭的團(tuán)聚表明，愛(ài)與忠誠(chéng)的力量能夠戰(zhàn)勝任何距離和艱難。）
The long - awaited return of Spider reminds us that hope never fades, no matter how desperate the situation may seem.（Spider 的遲遲歸來(lái)提醒我們，無(wú)論情況看起來(lái)多么絕望，希望永不消逝。）
Through this experience, we understand that the bonds between humans and animals are deep - rooted and can withstand the test of time.（通過(guò)這次經(jīng)歷，我們明白人類(lèi)與動(dòng)物之間的紐帶是根深蒂固的，能夠經(jīng)受住時(shí)間的考驗(yàn)。）
Spider's journey back home is a beautiful story of perseverance and the unbreakable connection between family members, even if one of them is a pet.（Spider 回家的旅程是一個(gè)關(guān)于堅(jiān)持不懈以及家庭成員之間牢不可破聯(lián)系的美好故事，即使其中一員是寵物。）
The reunion of Spider and our family warms our hearts and teaches us the value of never giving up on those we love.（Spider 與我們家庭的團(tuán)聚溫暖了我們的心，教會(huì)我們永遠(yuǎn)不要放棄我們所愛(ài)的人的價(jià)值。）
寫(xiě)作示范
范文一
Suddenly there was a sound in the bush. A skinny, dirty figure emerged slowly. It was Spider! His fur was matted, and his body was shaking, but as soon as he saw my father, his tail began to wag feebly. My father rushed towards him, tears streaming down his face. He knelt down and opened his arms wide. Spider limped into his embrace, whining softly. We were all overjoyed, hugging each other and crying with happiness.
Once home we gently cleaned him up. We filled a tub with warm water and carefully washed away the dirt. Father fed him small amounts of soft food, and Spider gobbled it up hungrily. Over the next few days, Spider regained his strength. He followed my father everywhere, and our home was filled with his cheerful barks again. This reunion was a true miracle, a testament to the unbreakable bond between us and our beloved pet.
范文二
Suddenly there was a sound in the bush. A weak and ragged - looking Spider stumbled out. His eyes lit up when he heard the whistle and saw my father. He tried to run but his legs were too weak. My mother and I rushed to him, gently lifting him up. My father's hands trembled as he stroked Spider's head. We could see the scars of his long journey on his body.
Once home we gently cleaned him up. We used a soft brush to untangle his matted fur and applied ointment to his wounds. Spider ate the food we offered with gusto. Day by day, he grew stronger. He played with us in the yard, and the love that had been missing for so long was back in our home. This experience taught us that love and patience can bring back what seems lost forever.
【答案】Suddenly there was a sound in the bush. My father’s eyes lit up immediately. We all looked in the direction of the sound and saw a yellow dog emerge from the bush. It was Spider! He ran towards my father, wagging his tail excitedly. My father kneeled down and hugged him tightly, tears streaming down his face. It was a heartwarming reunion.
Once home we gently cleaned him up. He was thin and tired, but still recognized us. We gave him a warm bath and fed him a delicious meal. Spider lay on the floor, looking happy and content. My father sat beside him, stroking his fur and telling him how much he had missed him. It was as if nothing had changed between them. From then on, Spider became a part of our family again, bringing us endless joy and companionship.

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