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I’m not going to say storms are good, because I know what they’ve stolen from people. But my story is of a storm that gave me more than I’d thought to ask for.
The tornado(龍卷風(fēng))blew through on a Sunday. We were visiting grandparents in Raleigh then unaware that seventy miles away the big tree in our front yard was tearing through our roof and destroying the kitchen.
When we returned, we saw Rosica’s father and brothers in our yard, gathering debris(碎片)and using a chain saw to cut the thickest branches of the fallen tree, though we barely knew them then. They were covered in sweat and dirt.
My mom didn’t seem to notice how happy they were to help us because the first thing she said was “Oh, you don’t need to be doing all that work!” Mr. Flores laughed.“Claro! Of course, we don’t. But more importantly, you cannot sleep in that house e and speak to my wife. She’ll help you figure out what to do.” My mom doesn’t usually let people tell her what to do, but she sighed(嘆氣)deeply as she took in the sight of our home in the failing light, reached for my hand, and followed our neighbor to their house.
The Flores family lived across the street. Their home was the same size as ours but housed three generations. Rosica was my age. I knew her name and face, but since she was new to our school, and had a different teacher than I did, we had never spoken. It was she who answered the door.“Mama is changing the sheets on the bed for you, and there’s some lemon cheesecake on the table.”
“Please don’t trouble yourself. I think I’d call a hotel and see about a room,” my mom said, more uneasy than usual. Mrs. Flores came down the stairs and smiled at us warmly, “Y our room is ready. I know it’s more encouraged to give than receive, but allow yourself to receive a place to stay, and allow us the chance to give you something you need!”
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Our two-week stay at Flores’s home started.
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Following our stay in their home, a beautiful tradition began.
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文章大意
文章講述了作者一家在外地時，家中遭遇龍卷風(fēng)襲擊，大樹砸穿屋頂并毀壞廚房。回家后，雖不太熟悉的鄰居弗洛雷斯一家主動幫忙清理廢墟，還熱情邀請作者一家到他們家居住。作者媽媽起初有些猶豫，但最終還是接受了鄰居的好意。弗洛雷斯一家的熱情和善良讓作者一家在困境中感受到溫暖。
故事山分析
開端：作者一家外出時，家中遭遇龍卷風(fēng)破壞。
發(fā)展：回家后看到鄰居弗洛雷斯一家?guī)兔η謇恚€被邀請到鄰居家居住，作者媽媽從猶豫到接受。
高潮（可在續(xù)寫中體現(xiàn)）：作者一家在弗洛雷斯家居住期間發(fā)生的溫暖故事。
結(jié)局（可在續(xù)寫中體現(xiàn)）：形成新的傳統(tǒng)，鄰里關(guān)系更加親密。
伏筆以及在續(xù)寫中的回應(yīng)
伏筆：作者與羅西卡雖同校但從未交談。回應(yīng)：在居住期間，兩人逐漸熟悉，成為朋友，一起玩耍、交流。
伏筆：弗洛雷斯一家熱情邀請作者一家。回應(yīng)：續(xù)寫中，弗洛雷斯一家在生活各方面照顧作者一家，讓他們感受到家的溫暖。
伏筆：作者媽媽的猶豫。回應(yīng)：在居住過程中，媽媽逐漸放下顧慮，與弗洛雷斯一家相處融洽，對他們的幫助十分感激。
伏筆：弗洛雷斯家房子不大卻住三代人。回應(yīng)：體現(xiàn)出他們雖然空間有限，但依然慷慨地接納作者一家，突出善良品質(zhì)。
伏筆：羅西卡說媽媽在換床單和準(zhǔn)備蛋糕。回應(yīng)：后續(xù)可以體現(xiàn)弗洛雷斯一家在生活細(xì)節(jié)上的照顧，比如準(zhǔn)備適合作者口味的飯菜等。
續(xù)寫要點
第一段：詳細(xì)描述在弗洛雷斯家居住的兩周里的生活細(xì)節(jié)，如兩家人一起吃飯、聊天，作者和羅西卡增進(jìn)友誼等。
第二段：著重講述新傳統(tǒng)的具體內(nèi)容，比如定期家庭聚會、互相幫忙等，以及這個傳統(tǒng)對鄰里關(guān)系的積極影響。
情感線
起初，作者一家因房屋受損而陷入困境，心情低落、焦慮。鄰居弗洛雷斯一家的熱情幫助，讓作者一家感受到溫暖，作者媽媽從猶豫到接受，體現(xiàn)出對鄰居善意的信任。在居住期間，兩家人情感不斷升溫，作者和羅西卡成為朋友，兩家人像親人一樣相處。新傳統(tǒng)的形成，更是將這種鄰里間的溫暖和情誼延續(xù)下去，成為彼此生活中重要的情感支撐。
故事線
作者一家房屋受損，鄰居幫忙清理并邀請居住。
作者一家在弗洛雷斯家居住，感受溫暖照顧。
作者與羅西卡從陌生到熟悉，成為好朋友。
兩家人相處融洽，關(guān)系越來越親密。
形成新的傳統(tǒng)，鄰里間定期互動。
鄰里關(guān)系因這次經(jīng)歷變得更加深厚，溫暖延續(xù)。
主旨升華句
This experience taught us that in the face of difficulties, the kindness and support of neighbors can turn a disaster into a chance for building deeper connections.
The warmth we received from the Flores family not only helped us through a tough time but also became a precious memory that would always remind us of the power of human kindness.
Our story shows that a simple act of generosity can create a beautiful bond between neighbors and make our community a more harmonious and loving place.
The friendship and care that grew during our stay at the Flores' home prove that even in the most unexpected situations, true kindness can bloom and bring light to our lives.
This encounter with the Flores family taught us that the value of a community lies not in its material wealth but in the love and support its members offer to one another.
寫作示范一
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Our two-week stay at Flores’s home started. Each day was filled with warmth and care. In the evenings, we would all gather around the dinner table. The Flores family shared their stories, making us laugh with their funny anecdotes. Rosica and I spent hours together, doing homework and exploring the neighborhood. She introduced me to her favorite spots, and we formed a deep friendship. My mom, at first reserved, gradually opened up. She helped Mrs. Flores in the kitchen, and they chatted like old friends.
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Following our stay in their home, a beautiful tradition began. Every month, our two families would have a potluck dinner. We would take turns hosting at each other's houses. These gatherings were filled with delicious food, laughter, and shared experiences. We would talk about our lives, dreams, and challenges. The storm that once brought destruction had now become the catalyst for a lasting bond between our families, showing us the true meaning of community and neighborly love.
寫作示范二
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Our two-week stay at Flores’s home started. Mrs. Flores made sure we had everything we needed. She even adjusted the menu to suit our tastes. During the days, while my mom was busy dealing with insurance matters, I was never alone. Rosica and I played board games, watched movies, and shared secrets. Her grandparents would tell us stories about their youth, and we listened intently, fascinated by their experiences. The small house was filled with the sound of joy and togetherness.
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Following our stay in their home, a beautiful tradition began. Every holiday, we would decorate our houses together. In spring, we planted flowers in the front yards. During Christmas, we would put up lights and exchange handmade gifts. These activities not only strengthened the bond between our families but also inspired other neighbors to be more friendly. The storm, instead of tearing us apart, had brought our community closer, and we all cherished the new - found warmth and connection.
【答案】 Our two-week stay at Flores’s home started. In the beginning, my mom was very uneasy and thought that living here could be a trouble for the family. She would help them with the housework as much as possible. The family were very friendly to us. They always said to us that, “Be at home!” They not only prepared everything we needed for us, but also cooked us delicious food, trying their best to make us feel at home. Gradually, we became familiar with each other just like a family. With Thanksgiving Day coming, our house was still under repair, which meant that we had to celebrate the festival with the family.
Following our stay in their home, a beautiful tradition began. On Thanksgiving Day, we together made a big dinner. My mom roasted the turkey which was popular with everyone. During the dinner, my mom extended her thanks to the family. “Thank you! I really don’t know what to say, but really thank you!” “Friends need no thanks!” said Mrs. Flores. We all laughed and enjoyed the dinner with joy and gratitude.

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