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On a rainy Friday afternoon, Susan Tribula fell in love with Elvis Presley after watching him imaginary guitar. Her mother, Mrs. Tribula noticed how much Susan resembled her own mother. Grandma Betty, who had been a talented banjo (班卓琴) player in her youth. Grandma Betty had once been a neighborhood celebrity, play ng at fairs and parties, but she had stopped playing as she grew older.
Susan’s enthusiasm for Elvis made Mrs. Tribula wonder if her daughter might be better suited to the guitar than the piano. Susan had taken piano lessons for years but never showed the same passion she now had for Elvis’s music. After discussing it with her husband, they decided to let Susan switch to guitar lessons.
The next day, Susan and her mother visited Grandma Betty at her retirement home. Susan asked her grandmother why slue no longer played the banjo. Grandma Betty explained that she felt too old and forgetful, but she shared the story of how she got her banjo. As a young girl, she had secretly borrowed a banjo from her friend’s father and taught herself to play, eventually winning a local music contest. Her parents, opposed to her playing the banjo, eventually supported her after society how much joy it brought her and others.
Susan’s newfound passion for the guitar made her regret that Grandma Betty no longer played the banjo. In order to help Grandma Betty regain her love for music. Susan asked her grandmother to teach her to play the guitar. However, Grandma Betty declined and introduced her to Mr. Mike, a retired guitarist, instead. Susan didn’t give up. On the contrary, she began practicing diligently, determined to perform at Grandma Betty’s upcoming 80th birthday party. During her performance, she would invite her grandmother to play together, thus inspiring her to pick up the banjo again. When the big day came, the big lounge (休息室) of the retirement home was completely full.
注意：
1. 續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；
2. 請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
As Susan stood in front of the crowd, her heart beat violently.
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Grandma Betty soon returned with her banjo.
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文章大意
一個(gè)周五的雨天下午，蘇珊 特里布拉在想象中彈奏吉他時(shí)，愛上了貓王埃爾維斯 普雷斯利的音樂。她的母親特里布拉夫人發(fā)現(xiàn)蘇珊和年輕時(shí)擅長彈班卓琴的外婆貝蒂很像。貝蒂外婆曾是鄰里間的名人，在集市和派對(duì)上表演，但隨著年齡增長不再彈奏。蘇珊此前學(xué)了多年鋼琴卻缺乏熱情，母親和父親商量后決定讓她改學(xué)吉他。第二天，蘇珊和母親去養(yǎng)老院看望外婆，蘇珊詢問外婆不再彈班卓琴的原因，外婆講述了自己年少時(shí)偷借朋友父親的班卓琴自學(xué)，最終贏得當(dāng)?shù)匾魳繁荣悾乙婚_始父母反對(duì)但后來因看到她的快樂而支持她的故事。蘇珊為幫助外婆重拾對(duì)音樂的熱愛，請(qǐng)求外婆教她彈吉他，外婆拒絕并給她介紹了退休吉他手邁克先生。蘇珊勤奮練習(xí)，決心在外婆 80 歲生日派對(duì)上表演，并邀請(qǐng)外婆一起演奏，以此激勵(lì)外婆重新拿起班卓琴。生日派對(duì)當(dāng)天，養(yǎng)老院的大休息室里擠滿了人。
故事山分析
開端：蘇珊愛上貓王音樂，對(duì)吉他產(chǎn)生興趣，父母決定讓她改學(xué)吉他。
發(fā)展：蘇珊和母親看望外婆，了解到外婆曾經(jīng)的音樂經(jīng)歷，蘇珊請(qǐng)求外婆教她彈吉他遭拒，轉(zhuǎn)而向邁克先生學(xué)習(xí)并勤奮練習(xí)，準(zhǔn)備在外婆生日派對(duì)表演。
高潮：外婆生日派對(duì)到來，蘇珊即將在擠滿人的休息室里表演。
結(jié)局（待續(xù)寫）：蘇珊表演過程以及與外婆的互動(dòng)，外婆是否重新拿起班卓琴，眾人的反應(yīng)。
伏筆以及在續(xù)寫中的回應(yīng)
“Grandma Betty, who had been a talented banjo player in her youth”：續(xù)寫中可體現(xiàn)外婆重拾班卓琴后的高超技藝，回應(yīng)她曾經(jīng)的才華。
“Susan asked her grandmother why she no longer played the banjo. Grandma Betty explained that she felt too old and forgetful”：蘇珊的表演可能會(huì)激發(fā)外婆，讓她克服覺得自己太老和健忘的想法，重新彈奏班卓琴。
“Susan didn’t give up. On the contrary, she began practicing diligently, determined to perform at Grandma Betty’s upcoming 80th birthday party”：續(xù)寫中展現(xiàn)蘇珊在生日派對(duì)上的精彩表演，是她勤奮練習(xí)的成果體現(xiàn)。
“During her performance, she would invite her grandmother to play together, thus inspiring her to pick up the banjo again”：續(xù)寫中著重描寫蘇珊邀請(qǐng)外婆一起表演的情節(jié)，以及外婆的反應(yīng)。
“The big lounge of the retirement home was completely full”：表明現(xiàn)場(chǎng)氛圍熱烈，續(xù)寫中可描寫觀眾對(duì)蘇珊和外婆表演的期待與反應(yīng)。
續(xù)寫要點(diǎn)
第一段：詳細(xì)描述蘇珊站在人群前緊張的狀態(tài)，如手腳冰涼、聲音顫抖等。接著描寫她開始表演，逐漸沉浸其中，表演漸入佳境，吸引了觀眾的注意力，最后她鼓起勇氣邀請(qǐng)外婆一起表演。
第二段：外婆帶著班卓琴回來，起初有些猶豫，但在蘇珊的鼓勵(lì)下開始彈奏。兩人的演奏配合默契，引發(fā)觀眾的熱烈反響。外婆重新找回對(duì)音樂的熱愛，蘇珊也達(dá)成了自己的心愿，一家人沉浸在歡樂之中。
情感線
蘇珊一開始站在人群前滿心緊張，隨著表演開始，緊張逐漸被專注取代，當(dāng)邀請(qǐng)外婆時(shí)，她滿懷期待又略帶忐忑。外婆一開始猶豫，拿起班卓琴后，從生疏到熟練，重新找回曾經(jīng)的熱愛，變得興奮和自信。觀眾從好奇蘇珊的表演，到被深深吸引，最后因蘇珊和外婆的合奏而激動(dòng)不已，現(xiàn)場(chǎng)洋溢著溫暖與歡樂的情感。
故事線
蘇珊克服緊張開始表演吉他。
蘇珊表演過程中逐漸投入，吸引觀眾。
蘇珊邀請(qǐng)外婆一起表演。
外婆帶著班卓琴回來。
外婆在蘇珊鼓勵(lì)下彈奏班卓琴，兩人配合默契。
表演結(jié)束，觀眾鼓掌，一家人歡樂慶祝。
主旨升華句
This experience shows that love for music can bridge generations and rekindle the passion that once burned bright.（這段經(jīng)歷表明，對(duì)音樂的熱愛可以跨越代際，重新點(diǎn)燃曾經(jīng)熾熱的激情。）
Through Susan's efforts, we see that it's never too late to reignite one's old hobbies and that family support can work wonders.（通過蘇珊的努力，我們明白重新點(diǎn)燃舊愛好永遠(yuǎn)不晚，家庭的支持能創(chuàng)造奇跡。）
The performance not only brought joy to the party but also strengthened the family bond, proving the power of music in uniting people.（這場(chǎng)表演不僅給派對(duì)帶來了歡樂，還加強(qiáng)了家庭紐帶，證明了音樂凝聚人心的力量。）
It teaches us that no matter how old we are or how long we've put aside our dreams, there's always a chance to revive them with a little encouragement.（它告訴我們，無論我們年紀(jì)多大，或者我們將夢(mèng)想擱置了多久，只要有一點(diǎn)鼓勵(lì)，就總有機(jī)會(huì)重新實(shí)現(xiàn)它們。）
Susan's determination and love for her grandmother turned a simple birthday party into a memorable event that celebrated music and family.（蘇珊的決心和對(duì)外婆的愛，將一個(gè)普通的生日派對(duì)變成了一個(gè)值得紀(jì)念的、歌頌音樂與家庭的活動(dòng)。）
寫作示范
范文一
As Susan stood in front of the crowd, her heart beat violently. Her hands were ice - cold and her knees trembled slightly. But as the first chords of her guitar filled the air, she gradually calmed down. She played with all her heart, her eyes closed, lost in the music. The audience was spellbound, listening intently. When she finished the song, she took a deep breath and said, “Grandma Betty, would you please join me ” The words echoed in the quiet lounge.
Grandma Betty soon returned with her banjo. She looked a bit hesitant at first, her hands shaking as she held the instrument. But when she saw Susan's encouraging smile, she took a deep breath and started to play. At first, the notes were a bit shaky, but soon, the two of them were playing in harmony. The lounge erupted into applause. Grandma Betty's face was lit up with joy, and Susan knew that her plan had worked. The family and friends gathered there cheered, celebrating not only the birthday but also the return of Grandma Betty's love for music.
范文二
As Susan stood in front of the crowd, her heart beat violently. She could feel the eyes of everyone in the room on her, which made her even more nervous. However, she remembered her goal and summoned up her courage. She began to play, and her music slowly filled the room. People started to nod their heads in rhythm, and soon, the atmosphere became lively. When she reached the end of her solo, she opened her eyes and called out, “Grandma Betty, come and play with me!” The audience held their breath, waiting for Grandma Betty's response.
Grandma Betty soon returned with her banjo. She walked onto the stage with a determined look. At first, she seemed a bit rusty, but as she continued to play, her fingers moved more smoothly. Susan and Grandma Betty looked at each other and smiled, their music blending perfectly. The audience was on their feet, clapping and cheering. It was a beautiful moment, full of love and the magic of music. Grandma Betty had found her passion for the banjo again, and Susan had achieved her dream of bringing back the joy of music to her grandmother.
【答案】
As Susan stood in front of the crowd, her heart beat violently. She took a deep breath, closed her eyes for a moment, and then began to play. Her fingers danced across the strings, producing a melody that filled the room with warmth and joy. The audience was captivated by her performance, and many of them were moved to tears by her passion and talent. Grandma Betty watched her granddaughter with pride and admiration, her eyes twinkling with unshed tears. She had never seen Susan so focused and determined, and it filled her with a sense of joy and accomplishment.
Grandma Betty soon returned with her banjo. She took her place beside Susan, her hands trembling with excitement as she picked up the instrument she had loved so much in her youth. The two began to play together, their music blending in perfect harmony. The crowd erupted into applause, their faces beaming with joy and admiration. As they played, Grandma Betty and Susan shared a look of love and understanding, their bond growing stronger with each note they played. It was a moment of pure magic, a celebration of music, family, and the enduring power of dreams.

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