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Our character will form without a guidebook and typically without our knowledge until we are faced with a situation that requires our intentional thought and action. These experiences can be a catalyst (催化劑) to our positive growth and impact who we are and what we become.
My regrettable “mean girl” moment happened when I was in eighth grade. As Halloween approached that year, my classmate Paisley, a shy yet kind girl, asked me if I would play trick-or-treat with her. I jumped at the invitation, until another more active and popular girl, Violet, invited me to join her group later. I was more inclined to join Violet because I thought I’d experience a more cheerful atmosphere. Then I made an unkind decision, lying to Paisley that my parents asked me to stay at home to pass out candy.
I remember that feeling of shame began to form in my heart as I delivered this dishonest excuse. However, that little voice of conscience quickly faded as I began to prepare my costume and plans for the evening. Unexpectedly, while we were playing trick-or-treat, I experienced a moment of pure embarrassment and shame when I found myself face to face with Paisley. The look of hurt and disappointment on her face when she saw me with another group of girls lingered in my mind.
In the days that followed, we didn’t interact at school. I knew I had hurt her deeply. Her absence in my life made me realize just how much her friendship meant to me. The guilt weighed heavily on my conscience as I reflected on my selfish behavior.
One day, as I was sitting alone in the school cafeteria, I saw Paisley walk in. She looked hesitant, as if unsure whether to approach me or not. My heart raced with anticipation and nervousness as I watched her making her way towards my table. I prepared myself for her anger and disappointment.
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To my surprise, Paisley smiled warmly and asked if she could join me.
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As I look back on that regrettable “mean girl” moment, I am grateful for the growth it brought into my life.
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文章大意
我們的性格在無引導(dǎo)的情況下自然形成，直至特定情境促使我們深思并行動。“我” 八年級時，在萬圣節(jié)前夕，先接受了同學(xué)佩斯利的邀請，打算一起玩 “不給糖就搗蛋”，但之后因更受歡迎的維奧萊特邀請，“我” 為了更歡樂的氛圍，對佩斯利撒謊推脫。當(dāng)與佩斯利碰面時，“我” 看到她受傷和失望的表情，深感愧疚。此后在學(xué)校，我們不再交流，“我” 意識到她的友誼對自己的重要性。一天，在學(xué)校食堂，佩斯利朝獨(dú)自坐著的 “我” 走來。
故事山分析
開端：“我” 在八年級時面臨萬圣節(jié) “不給糖就搗蛋” 活動的邀請選擇，因虛榮放棄了佩斯利，對她撒謊。
發(fā)展：活動中與佩斯利碰面，看到她受傷的表情，“我” 內(nèi)心愧疚，之后在學(xué)校我們不再交流，“我” 越發(fā)意識到她友誼的珍貴。
高潮（續(xù)寫部分）：佩斯利在食堂主動走向 “我”，微笑著要和 “我” 一起坐，我們敞開心扉交流，“我” 真誠道歉，佩斯利選擇原諒，這是故事沖突解決、情感轉(zhuǎn)折的高潮。
結(jié)局：回顧這段經(jīng)歷，“我” 感恩這次經(jīng)歷帶來的成長，明白要珍視友誼、堅(jiān)守善良，實(shí)現(xiàn)了主題的升華。
伏筆以及在續(xù)寫中的回應(yīng)
伏筆：“我” 對佩斯利撒謊后內(nèi)心有愧疚感，但很快被準(zhǔn)備活動的興奮沖淡。回應(yīng)：在與佩斯利再次交流時，這份愧疚促使 “我” 真誠道歉，為修復(fù)關(guān)系做鋪墊。
伏筆：看到佩斯利受傷失望的表情，“我” 內(nèi)心不安。回應(yīng)：成為 “我” 反思自己行為、渴望修復(fù)關(guān)系的重要動力，在續(xù)寫中推動 “我” 向佩斯利表達(dá)歉意。
伏筆：在學(xué)校我們不再交流，“我” 意識到她友誼的重要性。回應(yīng)：在續(xù)寫中，“我” 格外珍惜佩斯利主動靠近的機(jī)會，積極與她交流，努力挽回友誼。
伏筆：佩斯利在食堂走向 “我” 時表現(xiàn)得猶豫。回應(yīng)：說明她對 “我” 仍有顧慮，為后文 “我” 擔(dān)心她的態(tài)度做鋪墊，也突出了關(guān)系修復(fù)的艱難。
伏筆：“我” 準(zhǔn)備好面對佩斯利的憤怒和失望。回應(yīng)：與佩斯利的微笑形成反差，引出兩人友好交流的情節(jié)，推動故事發(fā)展。
續(xù)寫要點(diǎn)（兩段）
第一段：佩斯利微笑著詢問能否和 “我” 一起坐，讓 “我” 十分驚訝。坐下后，她先開口打破沉默，沒有指責(zé)，而是真誠地表達(dá)對友誼的珍視。“我” 被她的善良打動，鼓起勇氣說出一直憋在心里的道歉，承認(rèn)自己的錯誤，解釋當(dāng)時錯誤選擇的原因。佩斯利認(rèn)真傾聽，最終選擇原諒 “我”，我們約定以后要坦誠相待。
第二段：回顧這次 “刻薄女孩” 的經(jīng)歷，“我” 充滿感恩。這次經(jīng)歷讓 “我” 學(xué)會了換位思考，不再因虛榮做出錯誤選擇。在之后的生活中，面對類似情況，“我” 都會堅(jiān)守善良，珍惜友誼。它成為 “我” 成長路上的重要一課，讓 “我” 明白真誠待人、珍視友誼的重要性，時刻提醒自己不要重蹈覆轍。
情感線
起初，“我” 因虛榮傷害佩斯利，雖有愧疚但未及時彌補(bǔ)，之后陷入后悔與自責(zé)。當(dāng)佩斯利在食堂走向 “我” 時，“我” 緊張又期待，害怕她的指責(zé)。佩斯利微笑著靠近，讓 “我” 驚訝。交流中，“我” 鼓起勇氣道歉，內(nèi)心滿是愧疚與期待被原諒的忐忑。佩斯利原諒 “我” 后，“我” 感到無比欣慰與開心。回顧此事，“我” 心懷感恩，完成了從傷害他人到懂得珍惜、堅(jiān)守善良的情感蛻變。
故事線
“我” 八年級時，在萬圣節(jié)活動邀請中，因虛榮對佩斯利撒謊，放棄與她一起玩。
活動中與佩斯利碰面，看到她受傷失望的表情，“我” 內(nèi)心愧疚，之后在學(xué)校我們不再交流。
佩斯利在食堂走向獨(dú)自坐著的 “我”，微笑著詢問能否一起坐。
我們交流，“我” 道歉，佩斯利原諒 “我”，我們約定以后坦誠相待。
回顧經(jīng)歷，“我” 感恩成長，學(xué)會換位思考，堅(jiān)守善良，珍視友誼。
這次經(jīng)歷成為 “我” 成長路上的重要一課，時刻提醒自己正確對待友誼。
主旨升華句
This experience taught me that true friendship is priceless and we should always cherish and be honest with our friends, for a moment of thoughtlessness can cause deep pain. 這次經(jīng)歷讓我明白，真正的友誼無價，我們應(yīng)始終珍惜朋友并坦誠相待，因?yàn)橐粫r的疏忽可能會造成深深的傷害。
Looking back, I realize that every mistake is an opportunity for growth, and by learning from my “mean girl” moment, I have become a more empathetic and sincere person. 回首往事，我意識到每一個錯誤都是成長的機(jī)會，從我的 “刻薄女孩” 時刻中吸取教訓(xùn)，我已成為一個更有同理心、更真誠的人。
The incident with Paisley served as a powerful reminder that kindness and integrity should always guide our actions, especially when it comes to our relationships with others. 與佩斯利的這件事有力地提醒我，善良和正直應(yīng)始終指引我們的行為，尤其是在處理人際關(guān)系時。
Through this regrettable experience, I have learned to value the feelings of others above my own fleeting desires, and this has greatly enriched my understanding of friendship and human connection. 通過這次令人遺憾的經(jīng)歷，我學(xué)會了將他人的感受置于自己一時的欲望之上，這極大地豐富了我對友誼和人與人之間聯(lián)系的理解。
This “mean girl” moment, though painful, has been a turning point in my life, leading me to make more conscious choices and fostering a greater sense of responsibility in my interactions with others. 這個 “刻薄女孩” 時刻雖然痛苦，卻是我人生的一個轉(zhuǎn)折點(diǎn)，讓我在與他人交往中做出更審慎的選擇，培養(yǎng)了更強(qiáng)的責(zé)任感。
寫作示范一
To my surprise, Paisley smiled warmly and asked if she could join me. I nodded, still a bit stunned. As she sat down, she said softly, “I've missed talking to you.” Her words melted my heart. Gathering my courage, I said, “Paisley, I'm so sorry for lying to you. I was wrong and only thought about having more fun with others. You mean a lot to me.” She listened attentively and then replied, “I was sad, but I understand. Let's just start over.” We both smiled, and in that moment, our friendship was rekindled.
As I look back on that regrettable “mean girl” moment, I am grateful for the growth it brought into my life. It taught me the importance of being true to myself and others. Now, whenever I face a choice, I think of Paisley and make decisions based on kindness and loyalty. This experience has not only strengthened our friendship but also made me a better person. It serves as a constant reminder that every action has consequences, and we should always strive to be kind.
寫作示范二
To my surprise, Paisley smiled warmly and asked if she could join me. I was taken aback by her friendliness. She sat down and started, “I know things have been awkward, but I really hope we can be friends again.” I felt a lump in my throat. “Paisley, I feel so guilty. I should never have ditched you for Violet. You're the best friend I've ever had.” She reached out and held my hand, saying, “It's okay. Everyone makes mistakes. Let's forget about it.” From that day on, our bond grew even stronger.
As I look back on that regrettable “mean girl” moment, I am grateful for the growth it brought into my life. It made me realize how easily I could have lost a precious friendship. Now, I always put myself in others' shoes before making decisions. This experience has taught me the value of humility and the power of forgiveness. It has truly transformed me into a more caring and responsible person, and I will always cherish the lesson it taught me.
【答案】To my surprise, Paisley smiled warmly and asked if she could join me. I was taken aback by her forgiveness and willingness to give me another chance. I eagerly invited her to sit, feeling a sense of relief wash over me. I explained my regret for my actions on that Halloween night. I apologized and I assured her that I had learned my lesson. She listened intently and forgave me, expressing her own desire for friendship. From that day forward, we formed a bond that was built on trust, honesty, and loyalty.
As I look back on that regrettable “mean girl” moment, I am grateful for the growth it brought into my life. This experience influenced me deeply and served as a turning point in my life. It made me more conscious of my choices and considerate of how those choices might affect others, reminding me that the true measure of a person lies not in their popularity or achievements but in how they treat others. I am grateful to Paisley for forgiving me and for being a constant reminder of the person I strive to be.

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