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閱讀下面材料，根據其內容和所給段落開頭語段續寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。
I was wandering along the street on a pleasant day,heading towards our local drugstore.As I walked,I suddenly remembered that I needed to buy a special type of canned cat food from the vet(獸醫).In fact,the cat belongs to my daughter,and she's currently in a financial dilemma and can't afford to pay for the expensive food.Just the day before,I had had a conversation with her about it and expressed my concern that I can't afford to keep spending $300 a month for the vet food.
When I entered the vet hospital,the place was busy with activity.The vet assistant was occupied helping another customer.Fortunately,she recognized me and knew exactly what kind of food I needed to buy.She asked me if I wanted half a case or a whole case.After a moment's thought,I decided on the full case.Just then,another customer walked in and made his way to the counter.Since I wasn't in a particular hurry,I politely said,“Go ahead and serve this gentleman.Meanwhile,I'll go to the drugstore.That will give you time to do your paperwork while I'm gone."
She looked relieved and said,"Thanks,that would be great!"
The gentleman,a kind-looking man with a friendly smile,immediately protested,“You should go first, you were here before me."
I waved my hand and replied,"No worries,you go right ahead.My pleasure," He jokingly replied,"Wow,how can I thank you "
Without really thinking,in a moment of cheerfulness,I said,“You could buy me a case of cat food.Ha ha."I laughed and then turned to leave.
As I walked out of the vet hospital,I couldn't help but smile at the unexpected interaction.It was just a small moment,but it added a touch of warmth to my day.Little did I know what surprises the future might hold.
注意：
1.續寫詞數應為150左右；
2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。
I returned 10 minutes later
With the case of cat food,I got home.
文章大意
文章講述了 “我” 在去當地藥店途中，想起要給女兒的貓買獸醫推薦的昂貴罐裝貓糧。在獸醫醫院，忙碌的獸醫助理認出了 “我”，知道 “我” 所需的貓糧。這時另一位顧客進來，“我” 因不著急，便讓他先辦理業務，自己去藥店，還開玩笑說若要感謝就幫 “我” 買一箱貓糧。離開獸醫醫院時，“我” 因這次意外互動感到溫暖，卻不知接下來會有驚喜。
故事山分析
開端：“我” 要給女兒的貓買昂貴的獸醫推薦的貓糧，女兒經濟困難，“我” 也負擔有壓力。
發展：在獸醫醫院，“我” 讓后來的顧客先辦理業務，還開玩笑說讓他買箱貓糧作為感謝。
高潮（續寫部分）：10 分鐘后 “我” 回到獸醫醫院，發現那位顧客真的幫 “我” 買了貓糧，這一情節將故事推向高潮。
結局：“我” 帶著貓糧回家，心中充滿感動，領悟到生活中善良的互動能帶來美好。
伏筆以及在續寫中的回應
伏筆：“我” 與女兒的對話提及貓糧昂貴，自己負擔有壓力。回應：為后面顧客幫忙買貓糧，“我” 的驚喜和感動做鋪墊，突出這份幫助的珍貴。
伏筆：“我” 在獸醫醫院讓后來的顧客先辦理業務。回應：體現 “我” 的善良，促使顧客產生回報的想法，推動顧客幫 “我” 買貓糧情節的發展。
伏筆：“我” 開玩笑說顧客若感謝就買箱貓糧。回應：顧客當真，直接引出續寫中顧客買貓糧的情節。
伏筆：“我” 離開時因意外互動感到溫暖。回應：與續寫中 “我” 收到貓糧后的感動相呼應，強化情感遞進。
伏筆：“我” 說不知未來有何驚喜。回應：續寫中顧客買貓糧就是那個驚喜，前后呼應。
續寫要點（兩段）
第一段：10 分鐘后 “我” 回到獸醫醫院，看到那位顧客還在，且旁邊放著一箱貓糧，獸醫助理告知 “我” 顧客已幫 “我” 付款，“我” 十分驚訝和感動，與顧客交流，表達感激。
第二段：“我” 帶著貓糧回家，迫不及待告訴女兒這個溫暖的故事，女兒也很感動。“我” 深刻體會到生活中不經意的善良能帶來意想不到的美好，決定以后也要更多傳遞善意。
情感線
起初，“我” 因負擔女兒貓咪昂貴的貓糧費用而有些憂慮。在獸醫醫院與顧客互動時，“我” 以輕松玩笑的態度應對，離開時感到一絲溫暖。當 10 分鐘后回到醫院發現顧客幫 “我” 買了貓糧，“我” 從驚訝轉為深深的感動。回家與女兒分享后，這種感動進一步升華，“我” 意識到生活中善意的傳遞如此美好，內心充滿對人性美好的贊美和對傳遞善意的堅定決心。
故事線
“我” 因女兒貓咪的昂貴貓糧經濟有壓力，去獸醫醫院購買。
在獸醫醫院，“我” 讓后來的顧客先辦理業務，并開玩笑讓他買貓糧感謝。
10 分鐘后 “我” 回到醫院，發現顧客真幫 “我” 買了貓糧。
“我” 與顧客交流，表達感激。
“我” 帶著貓糧回家，告訴女兒這件事。
“我” 領悟到生活中善意傳遞的美好，決定傳遞善意。
主旨升華句 5 句英文
This small act of kindness not only lightened my financial burden but also reaffirmed my faith in the goodness of humanity. 這一小小的善舉不僅減輕了我的經濟負擔，也再次堅定了我對人性美好的信念。
The unexpected generosity from a stranger taught me that a simple act of kindness can have a profound impact on someone's life. 來自陌生人的意外慷慨讓我明白，一個簡單的善舉能對他人的生活產生深遠影響。
In a world often filled with stress and challenges, this experience reminded me of the power of kindness to bring warmth and hope. 在一個常常充滿壓力和挑戰的世界里，這次經歷讓我想起善良帶來溫暖和希望的力量。
The kindness shown by the gentleman made me realize that even in the most ordinary moments, we have the opportunity to make a difference by being kind. 這位先生展現的善良讓我意識到，即使在最平凡的時刻，我們也有機會通過善良產生影響。
This heart - warming incident inspired me to pay it forward and spread kindness wherever I go, believing that small acts can create a big ripple effect. 這個暖心的事件激勵我將善意傳遞下去，無論走到哪里都傳播善良，相信小小的舉動可以產生巨大的連鎖反應。
寫作示范一
I returned 10 minutes later. As I walked back into the vet hospital, I noticed the kind - looking man still standing at the counter. To my astonishment, there was a case of cat food beside him. The vet assistant smiled at me and said, “This gentleman insisted on buying the cat food for you as a token of gratitude for your kindness.” I was so surprised that I was at a loss for words. I looked at the man, and he just smiled and said, “A promise is a promise.” I thanked him profusely, and we chatted for a while about the importance of kindness.
With the case of cat food, I got home. I couldn't wait to tell my daughter what had happened. Her eyes widened in disbelief, and then a big smile spread across her face. She was deeply touched by the stranger's kindness. This experience made me realize that a simple act of kindness, like letting someone go ahead in line, can lead to a wonderful chain reaction. It also taught me that in a world full of challenges, there is always room for kindness and unexpected blessings. I decided then and there to be more generous and spread kindness wherever I could.
寫作示范二
I returned 10 minutes later. When I entered the vet hospital, I was greeted with a sight that made my heart skip a beat. The gentleman was standing there with a huge smile, and right next to him was the case of cat food I needed. The vet assistant explained, “He waited for you to come back and paid for the cat food. He said it was the least he could do.” I was overwhelmed with gratitude. I shook his hand firmly and expressed how much his gesture meant to me. He just said, “It's amazing how a little kindness can make a big difference.”
With the case of cat food, I got home. I rushed to share this heart - warming story with my daughter. She was moved to tears, and we both felt a sense of warmth and hope. This encounter made me understand that kindness is a universal language that can bridge gaps between strangers. It doesn't take much to be kind, but the impact it has can be immeasurable. From that day on, I made up my mind to be a carrier of kindness, hoping to create more beautiful moments like this in the world.
One possible version
I returned 10 minutes later. When I walked back into the vet hospital, I was greeted by the vet assistant with a big smile. She said, "You have a very kind gentleman waiting for you." I was a bit puzzled until I saw the man who I had let go ahead of me. He was standing there with a case of cat food with his hands. He smiled at me, saying"I think I should keep my promise. Here's your case of cat food as a thank you for your kindness." I was completely surprised. I never thought he would actually take my joke seriously. I thanked him generously, and he just shrugged and said, "It's the least I could do. " We chatted for a while, and I found out that he was also an animal lover.
With the case of cat food, I got home. I couldn't wait to tell my daughter what had happened. When I shared the story with her, she was amazed at it. She said, "Mom, this is such a wonderful story. It just shows that there are still kind people in the world." We then opened the case of cat food and watched the cat eating happily. As I sat there with my daughter, I felt a deep sense of contentment. This unexpected act of kindness not only lightened our financial burden but also filled our hearts with warmth and hope. From then on, I made up my mind to pass on “love”to others. Just as a saying goes: “Rose given and fragrance in hands.”

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