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湖北省高中名校聯盟 2025 屆高三第三次聯合測評英語試題
第二節 讀后續寫（滿分25分）
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Ally and I first met at a local riding club, where we were both eager beginners, learning the basics of horseback riding. Our friendship quickly developed as we discovered our shared passion for horses and the excitement of riding a horse across open fields. We spent countless hours together, talking about everything under the sun as we watched the horses playing happily and lively.
Ally was very passionate about riding, and it was a joy to share that enthusiasm with her. However, being someone who set high standards for myself and those I cared about, I sometimes found myself pushing her to improve her skills, even if it meant being a bit demanding.
One sunny afternoon, during a particularly challenging riding exercise, I suggested a technique that involved a tight turn and a quick jump over a low fence.
“That's too risky, " Ally protested, biting her lips in concern. “I'm not ready for that yet. "
"Come on, Ally," I urged, tapping my foot impatiently. "You've got to push yourself if you want to get better. "
Our voices rose, and soon we were locked in a heated discussion, and even our horses sensed the tension and became restless. Finally, we both accepted that we had different points of view and decided to leave it at that. But the leftover tension caused a slight but noticeable gap between us.
One evening after that argument, as I was helping my parents close up the store, my phone rang. It was Ally. I picked up the phone, my heart still heavy from our earlier disagreement.
“Hey," she began, her voice full of hope. “I was thinking we could try that technique again. I feel like I'm ready now. "
I shook my head even though she couldn't see me. "I don't think that's a good idea,' I replied, my tone firm.
She paused, and I could almost hear her disappointment. “Okay," she said softly. “I'll see you then. "
注意：
1.續寫詞數應為150左右;
2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。
Paragraph 1: The next afternoon, I received a call from Ally's mother.
Paragraph 2: I rushed to the hospital and found Ally with a cast(石膏) on her leg.
湖北省高中名校聯盟 2025 屆高三第三次聯合測評英語試題
第二節 讀后續寫（滿分25分）
閱讀下面材料，根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。
Ally and I first met at a local riding club, where we were both eager beginners(定從), learning the basics of horseback riding(現在分詞短語做伴隨動作). Our friendship quickly developed as we discovered our shared passion for horses and the excitement of riding a horse across open fields(狀從). We spent countless hours together, talking about everything(現在分詞做伴隨動作) under the sun as we watched the horses playing happily and lively(狀從).
Ally was very passionate about riding, and it was a joy to share that enthusiasm with her. However, being someone(現在分詞做伴隨動作) who set high standards for myself and those(定從) I cared about(定從), I sometimes found myself pushing her to improve her skills, even if it meant being a bit demanding(狀從).
One sunny afternoon, during a particularly challenging riding exercise(介短狀語), I suggested a technique that involved a tight turn and a quick jump over a low fence(賓從).
“That's too risky, " Ally protested, biting her lips in concern(現在分詞短語做伴隨動作，描寫心情). “I'm not ready for that yet. "
"Come on, Ally," I urged, tapping my foot impatiently.(現在分詞短語做伴隨動作，描寫心情) "You've got to push yourself if you want to get better(狀從). "
Our voices rose(狀態描寫), and soon we were locked in a heated discussion, and even our horses sensed the tension and became restless(擬人，描寫馬). Finally, we both accepted that we had different points of view and decided to leave it at that(賓從). But the leftover tension caused a slight but noticeable gap between us(事件的描述，產生隔閡).
One evening after that argument, as I was helping my parents close up the store(狀從), my phone rang. It was Ally. I picked up the phone, my heart still heavy from our earlier disagreement(獨立主格，心情描寫).
“Hey," she began, her voice full of hope(獨立主格，心情描寫). “I was thinking we could try that technique again(賓從). I feel like I'm ready now(賓從). "
I shook my head even though she couldn't see me(狀從). "I don't think that's a good idea(賓從),' I replied, my tone firm.(獨立主格，描寫聲音)
She paused, and I could almost hear her disappointment. “Okay," she said softly. “I'll see you then. "
注意：
1.續寫詞數應為150左右;
2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。
Paragraph 1: The next afternoon, I received a call from Ally's mother.
Paragraph 2: I rushed to the hospital and found Ally with a cast(石膏) on her leg.
1. 續寫分類與思路分析
分類 事故與成長型（Accident and Growth）
續寫思路 1. 事故發生（Ally受傷）→ 2. 內心沖突（愧疚、自責）→ 3. 成長（理解、尊重）
布局 第一段：接到電話得知Ally受傷；第二段：醫院探望及心理成長
續寫要點 承接原文情緒、細膩心理描寫、高級詞匯運用
2. 故事山模式分析
分析角度 內容 原文反應句
人物刻畫 主人公從固執到理解，Ally從膽怯到勇敢 "I'm not ready for that yet."
情感層次 爭執 → 震驚 → 愧疚 → 成長 "Her voice full of hope."
關鍵情節點 爭吵 → 事故 → 和解 "Our voices rose…"
語言特色 高級詞匯、心理描寫、情境鋪墊 "I shook my head…"
關鍵詞分析 accident, regret, friendship, understanding "I don't think that's a good idea."
心理描寫 主人公的愧疚、Ally的勇敢 "I picked up the phone, my heart still heavy."
動作描寫 騎馬、摔倒、醫院探望 "Grabbing my coat, I rushed out."
環境描寫 馬場的緊張、醫院的沉靜 "Even our horses sensed the tension."
隱含主題 友誼的成長與尊重 "Next time, we ride at your pace."
情感轉折 從固執到理解，從緊張到釋然 "Her voice trembling, she admitted the truth."
空間轉換 馬場 → 家 → 醫院 "I rushed to the hospital."
時間過渡 爭執后的夜晚 → 第二天下午 "One evening… The next afternoon…"
動作、心理、環境描寫的推薦英文例句：
動作描寫：
She bit her lip nervously, her eyes darting around the room.
He tapped his foot impatiently, his arms crossed tightly over his chest.
She reached out and gently squeezed my hand, her touch warm and reassuring.
He rushed out the door, his heart pounding in his chest.
She shook her head firmly, her voice steady despite the tension.
He paused, taking a deep breath before continuing.
She leaned back in her chair, her expression thoughtful.
He clenched his fists, trying to control his rising frustration.
心理描寫：
A wave of guilt washed over me, making it hard to breathe.
My heart sank as I realized the gravity of the situation.
I felt a renewed sense of hope, like a light breaking through the darkness.
Her words lingered in my mind, stirring up a mix of emotions.
I couldn’t shake the feeling of regret, no matter how hard I tried.
A sense of relief flooded through me, easing the tension in my shoulders.
My mind raced with worry, each thought more frantic than the last.
I felt a deep sense of gratitude, knowing she had forgiven me.
環境描寫：
The sun dipped below the horizon, casting a golden glow over the fields.
The hospital room was quiet, save for the faint beeping of machines.
The wind rustled through the trees, creating a soothing, rhythmic sound.
The air was thick with tension, making it hard to breathe.
The open fields stretched out before us, endless and inviting.
The room felt cold and sterile, adding to my unease.
The horses grazed peacefully in the distance, their movements calm and unhurried.
The sky was overcast, matching the somber mood of the day.
常見單詞的高級替換詞：
Happy → Elated, Jubilant, Content, Ecstatic, Thrilled
場景：描述人物情緒時使用，如“She was elated after winning the competition.”
Sad → Melancholic, Sorrowful, Despondent, Mournful, Heartbroken
場景：描述人物情緒時使用，如“He felt a deep sense of sorrow after the loss.”
Angry → Furious, Livid, Incensed, Outraged, Irate
場景：描述人物情緒時使用，如“She was furious when she found out the truth.”
Tired → Exhausted, Weary, Fatigued, Drained, Spent
場景：描述人物狀態時使用，如“After the long journey, he was completely exhausted.”
Beautiful → Gorgeous, Stunning, Breathtaking, Radiant, Exquisite
場景：描述景色或人物外貌時使用，如“The sunset was absolutely breathtaking.”
高中語法現象及地道搭配分析：
定語從句：
例句: "Ally, who was very passionate about riding, always pushed herself to improve."
分析: 使用who引導的定語從句，修飾Ally，增加了句子的復雜性和信息量。
現在分詞作狀語：
例句: "She looked up at me, her face pale but still kind."
分析: 使用現在分詞結構作伴隨狀語，描述動作的同時增加了細節。
虛擬語氣：
例句: "I shouldn’t have pushed you so hard."
分析: 使用shouldn’t have done表示對過去行為的后悔，是虛擬語氣的一種常見用法。
倒裝句：
例句: "Not only did she fall, but she also hurt her leg."
分析: 使用倒裝句強調動作的先后順序，增加了句子的表現力。
并列句：
例句: "I nodded, feeling a renewed sense of friendship and understanding between us."
分析: 使用并列句連接兩個動作，使句子更加流暢自然。
生詞短語積累：
Passionate (adj.) - 熱情的，充滿激情的
近義詞: Enthusiastic, Ardent
反義詞: Indifferent, Apathetic
例句: She was passionate about her work, always putting in extra effort.
例句: His passionate speech inspired everyone in the room.
Tension (n.) - 緊張，張力
近義詞: Stress, Strain
反義詞: Relaxation, Ease
例句: The tension in the room was palpable as they waited for the results.
例句: She tried to ease the tension by cracking a joke.
Regret (n.) - 后悔，遺憾
近義詞: Remorse, Sorrow
反義詞: Satisfaction, Contentment
例句: He felt a deep sense of regret after losing his temper.
例句: She expressed regret for not taking the opportunity when she had the chance.
Reassuring (adj.) - 令人安心的，安慰的
近義詞: Comforting, Soothing
反義詞: Disturbing, Unsettling
例句: His reassuring smile made her feel at ease.
例句: The doctor’s reassuring words helped calm her nerves.
Somber (adj.) - 陰沉的，憂郁的
近義詞: Gloomy, Melancholic
反義詞: Cheerful, Bright
例句: The somber mood of the funeral was overwhelming.
例句: The sky was somber, reflecting the sadness of the day.
Possible Answers
Version 1
The next afternoon, I received a call from Ally’s mother. Her voice was trembling(聲音描寫，反應情緒) as she told me(狀從) that Ally had been in an accident while riding(狀從省略，she was). “She tried that technique you mentioned,” she said quietly. “She fell and broke her leg.” On hearing this(on doing sth 一...就...), I felt a wave of guilt washing over me(現在分詞短語做伴隨動作). “I’m so sorry to hear that,” I stammered, my voice cracking(獨立主格描寫情緒). “I never meant for her to get hurt.” I realized I should have been more supportive and patient, understanding(現在分詞做伴隨動作) that everyone has their own pace in learning. This realization weighed heavily on me(心理描寫), and I knew I needed to make up for it.
I rushed to the hospital and found Ally with a cast on her leg. As I sat beside her(狀從), I apologized sincerely for my behavior. “I’m so sorry, Ally,” I said, tears welling up in my eyes.(獨立主格) “I should never have pushed you so hard(虛擬語氣). Your safety is more important than any riding achievement.” Ally smiled weakly, forgiving me with a reassuring look(現在分詞做伴隨動作). We chatted joyfully, talking about the importance of listening to each other and respecting our limits(現在分詞短語做伴隨動作). From that moment, I promised to be a better friend, one who supports and encourages her without being overly demanding(定從). Our friendship, though tested(狀語從句壓縮，though it was tested), became stronger through mutual understanding and forgiveness.
Version 2：
Paragraph 1: The next afternoon, I received a call from Ally's mother. Her voice trembled(聲音描寫反應情緒) as she spoke(狀從), "Ally had an accident during her riding practice. She tried that technique you two discussed, and... she fell. She’s at the hospital now." My heart sank(心理描寫), and a wave of guilt washed over me(心理描寫). I couldn’t believe she had attempted it alone. I had been so stubborn, so insistent, and now Ally was paying the price. I quickly grabbed my jacket and rushed out the door, my mind racing with worry and regret(心理描寫).
Paragraph 2: I rushed to the hospital and found Ally with a cast(石膏) on her leg.She looked up at me with a weak smile, her face pale but still kind.(獨立主格描寫表情) "I guess I wasn’t as ready as I thought(狀從)," she said softly. I sat down beside her, my throat tight with emotion.(情緒描寫) "I’m so sorry, Ally," I whispered. "I shouldn’t have pushed you so hard(虛擬語氣，反映后悔的情緒)." She reached out and squeezed my hand. "It’s okay," she replied. "I wanted to prove to myself that I could do it(賓從后置). But maybe next time, we’ll take it slower, together." I nodded, feeling a renewed sense of friendship and understanding between us(現在分詞短語做伴隨動作). From that day on, I promised myself to be more patient and supportive, not just with Ally, but with everyone I cared about.
Versio 3
Paragraph 1: The next afternoon, I received a call from Ally's mother. Her voice was trembling(聲音描寫反應情緒), and I could sense the urgency in her tone. "Ally had an accident while practicing that technique(狀從壓縮) you two talked about," she said, her words heavy with worry(獨立主格反應情緒). My heart sank(情緒描寫), and a wave of guilt washed over me(心理描寫). I had been so insistent, so focused on pushing her to improve, that I hadn’t considered the risks. I quickly grabbed my jacket and rushed out the door, my mind racing(獨立主格) with thoughts of what could have happened(with復合結構+賓從). The ride to the hospital felt like an eternity, each second filled with regret and fear(獨立主格).
Paragraph 2: I rushed to the hospital and found Ally with a cast on her leg.
She looked up at me with a weak smile, her face pale but still kind(獨立主格，描寫狀態). "I guess I wasn’t as ready as I thought(狀從)," she said softly, her voice tinged with both pain and acceptance(獨立主格 描寫情緒). I sat down beside her, my throat tight with emotion(獨立主格描寫情緒). "I’m so sorry, Ally," I whispered, my voice barely audible(獨立主格描寫狀態). "I shouldn’t have pushed you so hard(虛擬語氣，表示后悔)." She reached out and gently squeezed my hand, her touch warm and reassuring(獨立主格補充信息). "It’s okay," she replied. "I wanted to prove to myself that I could do it(賓從后置). But maybe next time, we’ll take it slower, together." I nodded, feeling(現在分詞短語做伴隨動作) a renewed sense of friendship and understanding between us.
Version 4
Paragraph 1: The next afternoon, I received a call from Ally's mother. Her voice was filled with concern(描寫情緒) as she explained(狀從) that Ally had attempted the technique we had argued about and had fallen during practice. My heart raced(描寫心理), and I felt a knot tighten in my stomach(描寫心理). I had been so stubborn, so focused on proving my point, that I hadn’t considered how my words might push her to take unnecessary risks(結果狀語從句). Without hesitation, I grabbed my keys and rushed to the hospital, my mind filled with worry and regret(獨立主格補充描寫心情). The drive felt endless, each mile amplifying my guilt.(獨立主格補充描寫心理)
Paragraph 2: I rushed to the hospital and found Ally with a cast on her leg.
She was lying in bed, her leg propped up(獨立主格描寫狀態), and her face lit up with a faint smile when she saw me(狀從). "I guess I overestimated myself," she said, her voice tinged with both humor and pain(獨立主格補充描寫信息). I sat down beside her, my heart heavy with remorse(獨立主格，補充描寫心情). "I’m really sorry, Ally," I said, my voice trembling(獨立主格，補充描寫心情). "I shouldn’t have pressured you like that.(虛擬語氣，表達悔恨)" She shook her head gently. "It’s not your fault," she replied. "I wanted to try it, but I realize now that I need to take things at my own pace." Her words brought a sense of relief, and I promised myself to be more patient and supportive in the future.
Version 5
Paragraph 1: The next afternoon, I received a call from Ally's mother. Her voice was shaky(神態描寫), and she explained that Ally had been injured while attempting the technique we had discussed. My heart dropped,(失落的心理描寫) and I felt a cold wave of guilt wash over me(糾結，挫敗的心理描寫). I had been so focused on pushing her to improve that I hadn’t stopped to think about the dangers(目的狀從). I immediately left everything and rushed to the hospital, my mind filled with fear and regret.(獨立主格補充描寫人物) The drive felt like a blur, each moment weighed down by the thought of what could have been avoided(獨立主格+賓從,用虛擬語氣表達悔恨).
Paragraph 2: I rushed to the hospital and found Ally with a cast on her leg.
She was sitting up in bed, her face pale but her eyes still bright(獨立主格，描寫人物狀態). "I guess I learned the hard way," she said with a small laugh, though I could see the pain behind her smile(讓步狀從). I sat down beside her, my heart aching with remorse(獨立主格補充描寫心理). "I’m so sorry, Ally," I said, my voice filled with regret.(獨立主格補充描寫心理) "I shouldn’t have pushed you like that(虛擬語氣，刻畫悔恨)." She reached out and patted my hand gently. "It’s okay," she said. "I wanted to try it, but I realize now that I need to listen to my own limits." Her forgiveness brought a sense of relief, and I vowed to be more understanding and supportive in the future.
語法加分點及替換詞：
定語從句：
例句: "Ally, who was always eager to improve, had taken my words to heart."
替換詞: who → that, whom
近義詞: eager → enthusiastic, keen
現在分詞作狀語：
例句: "She looked up at me, her face pale but still kind."
替換詞: pale → ashen, pallid
近義詞: kind → gentle, compassionate
虛擬語氣：
例句: "I shouldn’t have pushed you so hard."
替換詞: shouldn’t have → ought not to have
近義詞: pushed → pressured, urged
倒裝句：
例句: "Not only did she fall, but she also hurt her leg."
替換詞: not only → not just
近義詞: hurt → injured, harmed
并列句：
例句: "I nodded, feeling a renewed sense of friendship and understanding between us."
替換詞: nodded → agreed, acknowledged
近義詞: renewed → restored, revived
情緒描寫亮點詞匯：
Guilt (n.) - 內疚
替換詞: Remorse, Regret
例句: A wave of guilt washed over me as I realized my mistake.
Relief (n.) - 寬慰
替換詞: Comfort, Solace
例句: Her forgiveness brought a sense of relief to my troubled heart.
Worry (n.) - 擔憂
替換詞: Anxiety, Concern
例句: My mind was filled with worry as I rushed to the hospital.
Regret (n.) - 后悔
替換詞: Sorrow, Remorse
例句: I felt a deep sense of regret for pushing her too hard.
動作描寫亮點詞匯：
Rushed (v.) - 沖
替換詞: Hurried, Dashed
例句: I rushed to the hospital, my heart pounding in my chest.
Squeezed (v.) - 緊握
替換詞: Grasped, Clutched
例句: She squeezed my hand gently, her touch warm and reassuring.
Nodded (v.) - 點頭
替換詞: Agreed, Acknowledged
例句: I nodded, feeling a renewed sense of understanding.
Paused (v.) - 停頓
替換詞: Hesitated, Stopped
例句: She paused, taking a deep breath before continuing.

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