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Having got married a few years earlier, my husband and I now had a large gold-rimmed (鑲金的) china dinner service and a sizable collection of crystal glasses — all of them neatly packed away in tissue paper and bubble wrap, not serving their essential purpose for a single time. We agreed that they should be saved for a special occasion.
We were waiting for the very occasion until my father was gone.
To organize his funeral, I went to my parents’ house. Soon I found myself wandering the house in search of my dad. As I opened the wardrobe (衣柜) door in my parents’ room, I was shocked to discover piles of sweaters, nearly all of which were still in their wrapping, never worn.
I knew those sweaters. Whenever I was stuck for an idea of what to buy my dad for his birthday or Christmas, I’d fall back on one of two items that always seemed to go down well; a sweater or a bottle of whiskey. My dad had been a maker of sweaters for all his life. It felt only right and proper that he deserved some nice sweaters in his late years. My dad also claimed to enjoy a nice drop of whiskey. Over the years, he’d collect several bottles from clients and suppliers in the run-up to Christmas. So, when illness brought his career to a premature end, it seemed only natural that I became his regular whiskey supplier.
The trouble was, I never saw him wearing any of those sweaters, and I never saw him enjoying a whiskey. I often asked him why. His answer was always the same, “I’ m saving them for a special occasion.”
I returned downstairs and went to what was known in the family as “Dad’s Cupboard” and there was every bottle of whiskey I’d ever bought him. All unopened.
注意:(1)續寫詞數應為150左右；
(2)開頭已給出。
A wave of mixed emotions swept over me.
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My husband was surprised to see those items all on the table.
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關于父親 “特殊場合” 的故事續寫
一、續寫要點（兩段）
第一段
詳細描述主角帶著父親遺物離開父母家時的復雜心情，可能會有對父親的思念，也有對過去行為的反思。
主角在回家途中，內心不斷堅定不再為 “特殊場合” 而保留物品的想法，思考如何將這個理念融入自己的生活。
到家前，主角可能會回憶與父親相處的點滴，進一步強化改變的決心。
第二段
著重描寫丈夫看到遺物時的反應細節，除了驚訝，可能還有好奇和對主角情緒的關切。
講述主角與丈夫深入交流后，兩人共同決定改變生活方式的具體計劃，如定期舉辦家庭聚餐使用精美餐具等。
闡述在后續生活中，這種改變給他們帶來的積極影響，以及他們如何將這種生活態度傳遞給身邊的人。
二、情感線（150 字）
起初，主角面對父親遺物，悲傷與懊悔交織，沉浸在失去父親的痛苦和對父親未享受禮物的遺憾中。在回家路上，主角從回憶里汲取力量，逐漸堅定改變生活方式的信念。回到家與丈夫分享后，得到丈夫支持，兩人的情感更加緊密，共同對新生活充滿期待。在后續實踐中，他們因這種改變收獲滿足與快樂，情感也愈發深厚，同時也希望將這份積極傳遞出去。
三、故事線（6 條）
主角帶著父親的毛衣和威士忌離開家，途中思緒萬千，回憶起與父親的過往種種。
主角到家后，丈夫看到桌上物品，兩人展開深入交談，主角傾訴內心想法。
主角和丈夫決定每周舉辦一次家庭聚餐，使用金鑲邊瓷器和水晶杯，開啟新的生活方式。
在一次家庭聚餐中，邀請了親朋好友，大家對他們的改變表示好奇，主角分享父親的故事。
主角和丈夫將部分毛衣捐贈給慈善機構，看到受助者的笑容，內心充滿溫暖。
主角和丈夫的生活態度影響了身邊人，朋友們也開始重新審視自己的生活，珍惜當下。
四、主旨升華句 5 句英文
Life is a precious gift, and every moment is a special occasion waiting to be cherished.
生命是一份珍貴的禮物，每一刻都是一個值得珍惜的特殊時刻。
We should not let our possessions gather dust, but rather use them to create beautiful memories every day.
我們不應讓我們的物品積滿灰塵，而應每天用它們來創造美好的回憶。
The story of my father taught me that true happiness lies in the simple pleasures of life, not in waiting for some distant perfect moment.
我父親的故事告訴我，真正的幸福在于生活中的簡單快樂，而不是等待某個遙遠的完美時刻。
By embracing the present and making the most of what we have, we can turn ordinary days into extraordinary ones.
通過擁抱當下，充分利用我們所擁有的，我們可以把平凡的日子變成非凡的日子。
Let us not postpone our joy; instead, let us find reasons to celebrate and live life to the fullest every single day.
讓我們不要推遲我們的快樂；相反，讓我們每天都找到慶祝的理由，盡情地生活。
五、兩篇寫作示范
示范一
A wave of mixed emotions swept over me. As I carried the sweaters and whiskey out of my parents' house, memories of my dad flooded my mind. I remembered his kind smile and the way he always said he was saving these for a special occasion. In the car, I couldn't hold back my tears. I thought about how many precious moments he had missed. By the time I reached home, I was determined to make a change.
My husband was surprised to see those items all on the table. I sat him down and poured my heart out. After listening, he nodded solemnly. We decided to start a new tradition. Every Sunday, we'd have a family dinner using our fancy china and crystal glasses. We opened a bottle of whiskey and raised a toast to my dad. We also donated half of the sweaters to a local shelter. As the weeks passed, our home was filled with more laughter and warmth. We realized that life was too short to wait for special occasions.
示范二
A wave of mixed emotions swept over me. With the boxes of sweaters and bottles of whiskey in my arms, I took one last look around my parents' house. The sadness of losing my dad was overwhelming, but so was the realization of how much he had missed. On the drive home, I kept thinking about all the times I could have urged him to enjoy these gifts. When I got home, I was ready to embrace a new way of life.
My husband was surprised to see those items all on the table. I shared my father's story with him, my voice trembling. He immediately hugged me and said he was on board with any change I wanted to make. We planned a big dinner party for our friends. We used our gold - rimmed china and crystal glasses, and served the whiskey. During the party, we told everyone about my dad and our new philosophy. Some of our friends were inspired and decided to follow suit. We continued to donate the sweaters and, in the process, found a new sense of purpose. This experience taught us that every day could be a special occasion if we chose to make it so.
【答案】范文
A wave of mixed emotions swept over me. My fingers trembled as I traced the dust-covered whiskey labels, each representing a missed opportunity to share warmth with Dad. Suddenly, the china set stored in our attic flashed through my mind — those pristine plates imprisoned in bubble wrap, just like Dad’s untouched treasures. With determined steps, I began carefully unpacking every sweater, arranging them on Dad’s bed as colorful soldiers of remembrance. The whiskey bottles clinked gently as I carried them downstairs, their amber liquid finally catching afternoon sunlight through the window.
My husband was surprised to see those items all on the table. “Are we… using the special china tonight ” he asked, noticing our wedding crystal shining beside Dad’s whiskey collection. I poured two glasses, the golden liquid swirling like liquid sunset. “Every day with loved ones is the special occasion,” I whispered, clinking my glass against his. The crystal’s clear chime echoed through the house, mingling with the faint rustle of tissue paper being torn from plates that would finally host laughter instead of dust.

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