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No.3感謝信
一、考點(diǎn)綜述
感謝信是指在日常學(xué)習(xí)和生活中，當(dāng)收到饋贈(zèng)、邀請(qǐng)、赴宴、照顧、慰問(wèn)、祝賀時(shí)，給對(duì)方道謝的信件。信件不適宜過(guò)長(zhǎng)，只需寫(xiě)明感謝他人的理由，信文要感情真摯，措辭得體。人稱使用第一人稱和第二人稱，時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。
二、典型示范
假定你是李津，經(jīng)常幫助你學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的朋友Alex即將返回自己的國(guó)家。請(qǐng)給他寫(xiě)一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：
1. 表示感謝；
2. 回顧Alex對(duì)你的幫助；
3. 臨別祝愿。
注意：
1. 詞數(shù)100左右；
2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
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1.【感謝信結(jié)構(gòu)以及實(shí)例說(shuō)明】
【分析】
第一步:審題。
（1）體裁：感謝信
（2）要點(diǎn)：
1. 寫(xiě)郵件感謝經(jīng)常幫助你學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的朋友；
2. 表示感謝；
3. 回顧Alex對(duì)你的幫助；
4. 臨別祝愿。
（3）人稱：第一人稱和第二人稱
（4）時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。
第二步:列提綱 （內(nèi)容結(jié)構(gòu)、重點(diǎn)詞組、句型）
（1）謀篇布局
書(shū)信格式，稱呼和落款文中已經(jīng)給出。首段，寫(xiě)信的目的，中間段回顧Alex對(duì)你的幫助；最后一段表達(dá)祝愿。
（2）關(guān)鍵詞和句子
根據(jù)寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及構(gòu)思好的提綱我們可以初步確定文章可能使用到的詞匯和句子有：leaving for the United States soon，express my heartfelt gratitude，unbelievable progress，cheer me up。
第三步:連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞進(jìn)行過(guò)渡銜接。
第四步:注意書(shū)寫(xiě)，保持卷面整潔，避免劃線，亂擦。
文章寫(xiě)完之后要檢查文中是否存在拼寫(xiě)或語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。
Dear Alex,
（點(diǎn)明主題）Learning that you’re leaving for the United States soon, I’m eagerly writing to express my heartfelt gratitude to you for your help.
（說(shuō)明感謝的原因）Honestly speaking, it’s so nice of you to offer me a class of practical learning skills. Under your professional guidance, I have made such unbelievable progress in English. It’s indeed a pleasant surprise for me to even rank first in a recent English speech contest. Whenever I encounter difficulties, you always cheer me up and help me out, which fuels my enthusiasm for English and promotes me to regain tremendous confidence. No words are strong enough to convey how grateful I am.
（再次致謝）Thanks again and wish you a pleasant journey home.
Yours,
Li Jin
2.【感謝信常用詞匯】
1. thank sb. for sth. /doing sth. 因某事而感激某人
2. be grateful to sb. for sth. 因某事而感激某人
3. show/express/extend/convey my sincere thanks/gratitude to sb. for sth.
向某人表達(dá)我誠(chéng)摯的謝意
4.in trouble 陷入困境
5. make great／good/ rapid progress in… 在…取得很大/飛速的進(jìn)步
6.in/during/over the past/last four years 過(guò)去四年
7. be admitted to/into a university 被一所大學(xué)錄取
8.say thanks to you for helping me 謝謝你幫助我
9. How time flies! 時(shí)間過(guò)得真快！
10．As time goes by/with time going by 隨著時(shí)間的推移
11. thanks to/owing to/because of your help 多虧了你的幫助
12. pay a visit to 地點(diǎn). 去參觀，拜訪
14. have a better understanding of… 對(duì)……有更好的理解
15.a place of interest 名勝
3.【感謝信常用句型結(jié)構(gòu)】
1. My true/sincere/ heartfelt gratitude is beyond any words/description. / No words are strong enough to convey how grateful I am.
任何語(yǔ)言都無(wú)法表達(dá)我真摯的謝意。
2. We all thank you and are very grateful for what you did for us.
我們非常感激你為我們做的一切。
3. I am writing to express my thanks for your helping me improve my spoken English. 我寫(xiě)這封信是為了表達(dá)你幫我提高英語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)的謝意。
4. Thank you again for your wonderful hospitality and I am looking forward to seeing you soon. 再次感謝你的盛情招待，我非常期待不久會(huì)看到你。
5. I’d like to take this opportunity to express my great appreciation for your timely help and assistance. 我謹(jǐn)借此機(jī)會(huì)感謝你給我及時(shí)的幫助和支持。
6. I am sincerely grateful to you for your timely help.我真誠(chéng)地感謝你及時(shí)的幫助。
7. Thank you so much for your generous help.非常感謝您慷慨的幫助。
8. I am so grateful to you for what you have done for me.我很感謝你為我所做的一切。
9. I would like to convey my thanks to you for your kind help.我想感謝你的幫助。
10. For this reason, I am writing this letter to express my sincere thanks to you.
為此，我寫(xiě)這封信是為了表達(dá)我對(duì)你真誠(chéng)的感謝。
11. Thanks to your help, I have made rapid progress in ....
多虧了你的幫助，在...我取得了了飛速的進(jìn)步。
12. Without/But for your help (If it were not for your help), I would not have made so much progress in my English.
要是沒(méi)有你的幫助，我的英語(yǔ)不會(huì)取得如此大的進(jìn)步。
13. I would appreciate it if you could accept my sincere thanks.
如你能接受我誠(chéng)摯的感謝，我不勝感激。
14. Your kindness and help will always be remembered.
我將永遠(yuǎn)銘記你的善意和幫助。
4. 【增分佳句】
開(kāi)頭表達(dá)感謝之情并說(shuō)明原因的常用語(yǔ)：
1. I am writing to express my sincere thanks/appreciation/gratitude to you for your kindness during my stay in London.
我寫(xiě)這封信是為了感謝我在倫敦逗留期間您的幫助。
2. I would like to express/convey my heartfelt thanks to you for your generous help.
我想要對(duì)你的慷慨幫助表達(dá)最誠(chéng)摯的謝意。
3. On behalf of my whole family, I would like to express my sincere gratitude for your wonderful gift.
我謹(jǐn)代表我們?nèi)遥瑢?duì)你贈(zèng)送的精美禮物表達(dá)我最真誠(chéng)的謝意。
4. Thank you so much for your generous help.
非常感謝您慷慨的幫助。
6. It was so kind of you to treat me as your own sister./family member
謝謝你把我當(dāng)作自己的妹妹。It is adj./n. of/for sb. to do sth.
8. I am so grateful to you for what you have done for me.
我很感謝你為我所做的一切。
9. I would like to convey my thanks to you for your kind help.
我想感謝你的幫助。
10. I’m writing to thank you for the few wonderful days in London.
我寫(xiě)信感謝你幫我在倫敦度過(guò)的快樂(lè)日子。
11.I am writing to express/show/convey my sincere thanks to you for your help.
我寫(xiě)信真誠(chéng)地感謝你的幫助。
12. For this reason, I am writing this letter to express my sincere thanks to you.
為此，我寫(xiě)這封信是為了表達(dá)我對(duì)你真誠(chéng)的感謝。
中間細(xì)述事件經(jīng)過(guò)或者詳細(xì)介紹對(duì)方的幫助、幫助所起的作用、對(duì)禮物的喜愛(ài)等的常用語(yǔ)：
1. Thanks to your care and company, I had a wonderful time during the two-week holiday.
多虧了您的照顧和陪伴，我愉快地度過(guò)了兩周的假期。
2. But for/Without your help/guidance/assistance, I wouldn't have made such rapid progress.
如果沒(méi)有您的幫助/指導(dǎo)/協(xié)助，我就不可能進(jìn)步這么快。
3. And much to my delight, my spoken English has greatly improved under your professional guidance.
而且令我非常高興的是，我的英語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)水平在您的指導(dǎo)下大大提高了。
4. It was nice/kind/thoughtful of you to assist me in that snowstorm.
能在那場(chǎng)暴風(fēng)雪中給予我?guī)椭婧?善良/體貼
5. If it were not for your help, I wouldn't have won the prize.
如果沒(méi)有你的幫助，我不可能得獎(jiǎng)。
結(jié)尾再次表示感謝，歡迎來(lái)訪等的常用語(yǔ)：
1. Thanks again for helping me.
再次感謝你對(duì)我的幫助。
2. Thank you again for your generous help.
再次感謝你的慷慨幫助。
3. I would appreciate it if you could accept my sincere thanks.
如果你能接受我誠(chéng)摯的感謝，我將不勝感激。
4. Your kindness and help will always be remembered.
我將永遠(yuǎn)銘記你的善意和幫助。
5.1 deeply/greatly appreciate your hospitality（款待）．
我深深感謝你們的盛情款待。
6. I will never forget the help you gave me and the time we spent together.
我永遠(yuǎn)也忘不了您對(duì)我的幫助，以及我們一起度過(guò)的時(shí)光。
7. Nothing could ever return the favor you gave me.無(wú)法報(bào)答你給予我的幫助。
三、真題演練
(2021年天津第二次)
假如你是晨光中學(xué)的李津。你在英國(guó)游學(xué)期間曾寄宿在英國(guó)學(xué)生Chris家，他母親Nancy通過(guò)電子郵件祝賀你順利完成高中學(xué)業(yè)，并詢問(wèn)你將如何安排高中最后一個(gè)假期。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)回復(fù)，內(nèi)容包括：
(1) 表示感謝并問(wèn)候；
(2) 計(jì)劃與家人一起做的事情；
(3) 你決定選擇哪個(gè)專業(yè)，為學(xué)好該專業(yè)做何準(zhǔn)備。
注意：
(1) 詞數(shù)不少于100；
(2) 可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫；
(3) 開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Nancy,
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Yours,
Li Jin
【分析】
第一步:審題。
假如你是晨光中學(xué)的李津。你在英國(guó)游學(xué)期間曾寄宿在英國(guó)學(xué)生Chris家（感謝的原因），他母親Nancy（感謝的對(duì)象）通過(guò)電子郵件祝賀你順利完成高中學(xué)業(yè)，并詢問(wèn)你將如何安排高中最后一個(gè)假期。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)回復(fù)，內(nèi)容包括：
(1) 表示感謝并問(wèn)候；
(2) 計(jì)劃與家人一起做的事情；
(3) 你決定選擇哪個(gè)專業(yè)，為學(xué)好該專業(yè)做何準(zhǔn)備。
（1）體裁：感謝信
（2）要點(diǎn)：
1. 表示感謝并問(wèn)候；
2. 計(jì)劃與家人一起做的事情；
3. 你決定選擇哪個(gè)專業(yè)，為學(xué)好該專業(yè)做何準(zhǔn)備。
（3）人稱：第一人稱和第二人稱
（4）時(shí)態(tài)：一般將來(lái)時(shí)為主。
第二步:列提綱 （內(nèi)容結(jié)構(gòu)、重點(diǎn)詞組、句型）
（1）謀篇布局
首段，表示感謝并問(wèn)候，中間段計(jì)劃與家人一起做的事情，你決定選擇哪個(gè)專業(yè)，為學(xué)好該專業(yè)做何準(zhǔn)備；最后一段表達(dá)祝愿。
（2）關(guān)鍵詞和句子
第三步:連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞進(jìn)行過(guò)渡銜接。
第四步:注意書(shū)寫(xiě)，保持卷面整潔，避免劃線，亂擦。
文章寫(xiě)完之后要檢查文中是否存在拼寫(xiě)或語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。
【范文1】
Dear Nancy,
How is everything going (with you) (問(wèn)候) It’s really wonderful to hear from you./I’m really glad to hear from you. (寫(xiě)作背景) I would like to express my sincere gratitude to you and your family for taking care of me during my study tour in the UK./ I am writing to express my sincere appreciation to you and your family for taking care of me during my stay in the UK. (感謝)
Since I have finished my high school studies, my parents and I are planning to travel to Beijing, where I want to see the flag raising. In addition, I want to pay a visit to Peking University to experience the academic atmosphere there. (假期計(jì)劃)Besides, I have decided to major in computer/ to choose the computer major, which I believe will be useful/beneficial to the society and will help to prepare me for my future career.(所選專業(yè)) To get prepared for my study in university, I have consulted people engaged in this major and read a lot of relevant books. (為選專業(yè)所做的準(zhǔn)備)
I will never forget the help you gave me and the time we spent together. (再次感謝)Best wishes to you and your family.(祝福)
Yours,
Li Jin
【范文2】
Dear Nancy,
How’s everything going It’s really wonderful to hear from you. I’d like to express my heartfelt thanks to you and your family for taking care of me during my study tour in the UK.
Since I have finished my high school studies, my parents and I are going to travel to Beijing this holiday, where I want to see the flag raising.（非限制性定語(yǔ)從) In addition, I want to go to Tsinghua Campus, enjoying the elegant demeanor(風(fēng)度）of the famous university (非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)作狀語(yǔ)). I have decided to choose the computer major, which I believe is of great use to society and will help me prepare for my future career(非限制性定語(yǔ)從句).I have consulted people engaged in this major and been to training institutions for consultation.
Thank you so much for your generous help. Best wishes to you and your family.
Yours,
Li Jin
四、鞏固練習(xí)
假如你是李華，在美國(guó)做過(guò)一年交換生，現(xiàn)在剛剛回國(guó)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，給曾為你提供食宿的杰克遜夫婦寫(xiě)一封感謝信，內(nèi)容主要包括：
1.表達(dá)感謝；
2.說(shuō)明自己的英語(yǔ)已有很大提高；
3.代表父母表示謝意，并邀請(qǐng)對(duì)方有空來(lái)做客
注意：詞數(shù)不少于100。
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