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Mya finished playing a Christmas carol (頌歌) and looked up at her piano teacher. “You played that very well,” Ms. Jackson said. “How would you like to join some of the other students and play carols at the shopping center this Saturday afternoon ”
“I can’t,” Mya said quickly.
“Lots of kids are shy,” Ms. Jackson said, “but the best way to overcome your fear of playing in public is by actually doing what scares you. Remember, our art festival is going to be right after Christmas. You’ll have to play in front of an audience then. Playing at the shopping center this weekend would be great practice.”
“I’m sorry. I can’t be there,” Mya went on. “My great-grandmother invited my family to the Christmas party at her retirement community that afternoon.”
Mya didn’t add that she was relieved to have an excuse not to have to play at the shopping center. The thought of playing piano with so many people around made her stomach clench into a knot.
On Saturday morning, as Mya helped Mom and Dad wrap presents for Great-Grandma, she thought about her friends playing the piano at the shopping center. She pictured hundreds of shoppers hanging around and listening while going from store to store. Some of them would take breaks from shopping to sit on benches and watch the piano players. “I’m so glad I won’t be there,” she thought to herself.
When Mya and her parents arrived at the retirement community, they greeted Great-Grandma with hugs and wishes for a merry Christmas. Mrs. Carmen, the party activities director, showed a short holiday movie first. Then they played games, and the residents opened their gifts.
“We usually end by singing Christmas carols,” Mrs. Carmen said. “But our pianoplayer wasn’t able to make it today.” “Mya plays the piano,” Great-Grandma announced, smiling proudly.
“Wonderful,” Mrs. Carmen said. She smiled at Mya. “Mya, would you like to play while we sing It would be such a help.”
注意：
1．續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個左右；
2．請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
Mya was about to say she couldn’t do it.
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She sat down on the bench and played “Silent Night”.
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關(guān)于 Mya 的故事續(xù)寫
一、續(xù)寫要點（兩段）
第一段（Mya 被迫同意演奏）：
內(nèi)心掙扎：恐懼（手汗、心跳加速）vs 責(zé)任感（曾祖母期待）
觸發(fā)轉(zhuǎn)變：回憶老師的話 / 曾祖母的鼓勵
決定行動：深呼吸、點頭同意
第二段（演奏過程與成長）：
緊張表現(xiàn)：顫抖的手指、聲音發(fā)顫
轉(zhuǎn)折點：觀眾的積極反饋（微笑、跟唱）
成功體驗：漸入佳境，享受音樂
領(lǐng)悟道理：勇敢≠無畏，而是直面恐懼
二、情感線（150 字）
Mya 的情感變化：
恐懼→抗拒→動搖→勇氣→釋然→自豪
被要求演奏時：恐懼（喉嚨發(fā)緊、手心出汗）
看到曾祖母期待：愧疚（無法拒絕老人）
回憶老師教導(dǎo)：矛盾（理性認(rèn)知 vs 感性恐懼）
演奏初期：緊張（音符顫抖、視線模糊）
觀眾互動后：放松（融入音樂，享受過程）
結(jié)束時：自豪（克服自我，獲得認(rèn)可）
三、故事線（6 條）
Mya 因害羞拒絕購物中心演出
被迫在退休社區(qū)演奏，內(nèi)心掙扎
回憶老師教導(dǎo)，鼓起勇氣同意
演奏時從緊張到漸入佳境
觀眾積極反饋，演出成功
領(lǐng)悟勇敢的真諦，實現(xiàn)成長
四、主旨升華句（5 句英文）
True courage is not the absence of fear, but playing the melody despite trembling hands.
Sometimes the stage we fear the most becomes the platform where we shine brightest.
A single act of vulnerability can touch hearts and transform a room into a symphony of connection.
The greatest gift we can give others—and ourselves—is the courage to be seen.
Fear is the keyhole; stepping forward is the key that unlocks our potential.
五、寫作示范（兩篇）
示范 1（內(nèi)心成長視角）
Mya was about to say she couldn’t do it. Her nails dug into her palms as Great-Grandma’s eyes sparkled with pride. "I’m not ready," she wanted to cry. Then she remembered Ms. Jackson’s lesson: "Music isn’t about perfection—it’s about sharing joy." Swallowing hard, Mya whispered, "Okay, I’ll play."
She sat down on the bench and played "Silent Night". Her first notes wobbled like a fawn taking its first steps. But when a white-haired resident hummed along, Mya’s fear began to melt. The piano’s warmth spread through her arms, and she closed her eyes, letting the music carry her. Applause erupted, and Great-Grandma kissed her forehead. "You turned fear into magic," she said. Later, Mya realized bravery wasn’t about being fearless—it was about playing anyway.
示范 2（外部影響視角）
Mya was about to say she couldn’t do it. Then she noticed Mrs. Carmen’s worried frown and a resident’s wheelchair-bound man clutching a teddy bear. They need this, she thought. Summoning every ounce of courage, Mya nodded. "I’ll play," she said, voice shaking.
She sat down on the bench and played "Silent Night". Her hands felt like ice, but when the first chord rang out, a chorus of cracked, beautiful voices joined in. A little girl in a red dress swayed by the piano, and Mya found herself smiling. By the final note, tears streamed down her cheeks—but they were tears of triumph. Mrs. Carmen hugged her. "You’ve made this Christmas unforgettable," she said. Later, Great-Grandma squeezed her hand. "Remember this moment next time fear tries to silence you," she whispered. Mya vowed she would.
【答案】
Mya was about to say she couldn’t do it. However, looking around the room, she saw the smiles on all the faces as they looked eagerly toward her, especially her great-grandma. Her eyes were sparkling like diamonds. It was a big day for her. Nevertheless, Mya had her heart in her mouth at the thought that everyone would be sitting in a big circle facing the piano, which would be worse than playing at the shopping center. Just then, she remembered what Ms. Jackson had said. Taking a deep breath, Mya dragged her feet to the piano hesitantly.
She sat down on the bench and played “Silent Night”. The moment she touched the keys, her previous fear as well as anxiety faded away. Immersing herself in melody, she made no mistake all the way through. What a relief! Then, as she played it again, everyone began to sing cheerfully to the piano. A warm feeling chased away the butterflies in her stomach. Mya just had to do it. And she did! Ms. Jackson was right. By doing what scares you, you’ll gain a completely new perspective on yourself.

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