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“Never give up! Never give up!” chanted (吟誦) my two young children, Max and Charley, as they marched barefoot behind their grandmother Mia. They had just left the beach, where they had spent the day building sand castles and splashing in the waves. Now, Mia was leading Max and Charley on another adventure: They were seeking the ice-cream truck, which was always difficult to find.
Over the years, Mia had become our family’s symbol of positivity. It was not a title she earned without effort, however. When my dad died, Mia was only forty years old and was left to raise me and my ten-year-old brother alone. She experienced a deeply sad event that could easily make anyone feel significantly less happy. She had been the one who had to make the decision to remove our dad from life support fourteen days after he died in a car accident.
My mom could have lived under a black cloud. Instead, she challenged herself to find joy every day. She was always up for a new challenge, whether that was hiking across the steep (陡峭的), rocky road of a mountaintop in Austria to get a better view of the breathtaking landscape, or signing up for tap-dancing classes at fifty. Leading by example, Mom taught us just how much one could achieve with a positive attitude.
She has taken the same approach in her relationship with her grandchildren. Before starting her adventure with Max and Charley on that hot July afternoon, Mia heard the familiar clang (叮當聲) of the ice-cream man’s bell from her beach chair. She turned and saw him briefly, spotting his green shirt and catching the gleam of his waving bell before he turned and disappeared over the dunes (沙丘). But you need to be fast because he doesn’t stay for very long after you hear his bell.
注意：
1.續寫詞數應150個左右；
2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。
Max and Charley were disappointed when they didn’t catch the truck in time that day.
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After about twenty minutes of walking, Max’s faith in the mission began to waver(動搖).
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尋找冰淇淋車冒險的故事續寫
一、續寫要點（兩段）
第一段（失望后的策略）：
孩子們因錯過冰淇淋車沮喪
Mia 用 “disappointment is a detour” 理念鼓勵
制定戰略：登高觀察、預判路線
第二段（動搖后的堅持）：
Max 因疲憊動搖，Mia 用海鷗比喻激勵
發現捷徑，團隊合作成功截停卡車
結尾用 “single step” 呼應主題，點明傳承
二、情感線（150 字）
Max 和 Charley 的情感變化：
期待→失望→希望→疲憊→堅持→勝利
錯過卡車時：失望（垂頭喪氣）
Mia 鼓勵后：重燃希望（眼睛發亮）
長途跋涉中：疲憊（腳步拖沓）
聽到比喻時：被啟發（若有所思）
發現卡車時：興奮（歡呼雀躍）
吃冰淇淋時：滿足（心滿意足）
三、故事線（6 條）
冰淇淋車消失，孩子們失望
Mia 用 “detour” 理念轉換視角
登高觀察，制定截擊計劃
長途跋涉中 Max 動搖
Mia 用海鷗比喻強化信念
團隊合作成功，領悟堅持真諦
四、主旨升華句（5 句英文）
Disappointment is not the end—it’s the starting point of a new adventure.
Like a seagull riding the wind, resilience transforms obstacles into wings.
The sweetest victories often come after walking through the heat of perseverance.
A single step today can lead to a lifetime of courage tomorrow.
True leadership is teaching others to see detours as paths to discovery.
五、寫作示范（兩篇）
示范 1（自然隱喻版）
Max and Charley were disappointed when they didn’t catch the truck in time that day. Charley kicked a seashell, her lip quivering. "But remember," Mia said, scooping up a handful of sand, "the ocean never stops flowing because the tide retreats—it prepares for the next wave." She pointed to the dunes. "Let’s climb higher. The ice-cream man’s route follows the breeze."
After about twenty minutes of walking, Max’s faith in the mission began to waver. "I’m thirsty," he complained. Mia knelt, brushing saltwater from his forehead. "See those mangroves " she said. "Their roots grow strongest where the current is fiercest." Just then, a breeze carried the faint jingle. They sprinted to the boardwalk, finding the truck parked at sunset. "We didn’t just catch ice cream," Mia said, passing them cones. "We caught a lesson: Even when the path bends, keep moving forward."
示范 2（團隊合作版）
Max and Charley were disappointed when they didn’t catch the truck in time that day. "Let’s use teamwork," Mia said, dividing roles: Charley would listen for the bell, Max would track tire marks, and she’d navigate. They zigzagged through dunes, laughing as they debated the truck’s next stop.
After about twenty minutes of walking, Max’s faith in the mission began to waver. "I think it’s gone forever," he sighed. Mia stopped, picking up a broken sand dollar. "This shell didn’t become beautiful by giving up when the tide changed," she said. Suddenly, Charley shouted, "I hear it!" They ran toward the sound, finding the truck stuck in soft sand. The kids pushed while Mia distracted the driver with jokes. "You’re heroes!" the driver laughed, giving them free sprinkles. Later, Max said, "Grandma, you’re like the ice-cream man—always bringing joy." Mia winked. "And you’re my co-pilots."
【答案】
Max and Charley were disappointed when they didn’t catch the truck in time that day. Mia’s eyes sparkled and she said, “Never give up!” She explained that the truck might be gone, but they could find it at its next stop. They walked block after block. Not knowing which direct ion the truck had taken, they had to make their best guess about where to search. The kids’ tiny legs were tired, but they carried on regardless, continuing to chant, “Never give up!”
After about twenty minutes of walking, Max’s faith in the mission began to waver (動搖).He wondered out loud, “Maybe we should give up. We have been walking pretty far and haven’t seen the truck yet.” Then he collapsed, resting his aching legs. Mia bent over and patted him gently on the shoulder. Wearing an encouraging smile, Mia comforted, “Never give up!” with Charley nodding in agreement. Max looked up, thought for a while and jumped to his feet. Just two blocks later, they found it. The kids screamed with excitement, “Never give up!” Simple though it is, that phrase has become our battle cry for the challenges we face.

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