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On a rainy Friday afternoon. Susan Tribula fell in love with Elvis Presley after watching him perform in an old movie. Inspired by his music, she danced around the living room, playing an imaginary guitar. Her mother, Mrs. Tribula, noticed how much Susan resembled her own mother.Grandma Betty, who had been a talented banjo(班卓琴) player in her youth. Grandma Betty had once boen a neighborhood celebrity, playing at fairs and parties, but she had stopped play ing as she grew older.
Susan's enthusiasm for Elvis made Mrs. Tribula wonder if lier daughter might be better suited to the guitar than the piano. Susan had taken piano lessons for years but never showed the same passion she now had for Elvis's music. After discussing it with her husband, they decided to let Susan switch to guitar lessons.
The next day, Susan and lier mother visited Grandma Betty at her retirement home. Susan asked her grandmother why she no longer played the banjo. Grandma Betty explained that she felt too old and forgetful, but she shared the story of how s lee got lier banjo. As a young girl, she had secretly borrowed a banjo from her friend's father and taught herself to play, eventually winning a local music contest. Her parents, opposed to her playing the banjo, eventually supported her after socing how much joy it brought her and others.
Susan's nowfound passion for the guitar made her regret that Grandma Botly no longer played the banjo. In order to help Grandma Betty regain her love for music. Susan asked her grandmother to teach her to play the guitar. Howover, Grandma Bett y declined and introduced her to Mr. Mike, a retired guitarist, instead. Susan didn't give up. On the contrary, slee pan practicing diligently, determined to perform at Grandma Betty's upcoming 80th birthday party During herperformance, she would invite her grandmother to play together, thus inspiring her to pick up the banjo again. When the big day came, the big lounge(休息室) of the retirement home was completely full.
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As Susan stood in front of the crowd, her heart beat violently.
Grandma Betty soon returned with her banjo.
文本講述了Susan Tribula在觀看了一部老電影中Elvis Presley的表演后，愛上了他的音樂，并激發了對吉他而非鋼琴的熱情。盡管Susan已經學了多年鋼琴，但她從未表現出對鋼琴同樣的熱情。她的父母注意到這一點后，決定讓她改學吉他。
隨后，Susan和她的母親拜訪了住在養老院的Grandma Betty。Grandma Betty曾是一位才華橫溢的班卓琴手，但隨著年齡的增長她停止了演奏。當Susan得知祖母的音樂故事后，希望祖母能教她彈吉他以幫助她重新找回對音樂的熱愛，但Grandma Betty推薦了一位退休吉他手Mr. Mike給Susan。
Susan努力練習吉他，決心在Grandma Betty即將到來的80歲生日派對上表演，并邀請祖母一同演出。在生日派對上，Susan成功地與Grandma Betty合作演出，后者重新拿起班卓琴加入到表演中，場面非常溫馨感人。這次活動不僅慶祝了Grandma Betty的生日，也重燃了她對音樂的熱愛。這一過程展示了音樂跨越世代的力量，以及它如何將家人緊密聯系在一起，再次點燃他們心中對生活和音樂的熱情與歡樂。
文本解構
人物關系圖譜：
Susan（熱情行動者） 母親（觀察聯結者） Betty（內心矛盾者）
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原文伏筆/續寫呼應點
Betty曾偷偷學琴:可設計"秘密曲譜"細節
養老院大休息室:作為表演空間呼應
母親發現Susan像Betty:暗示音樂基因傳承
情感曲線分析：
Susan從"模仿Elvis"到"主動創造"，Betty從"自我封閉"到"情感釋放"的變化
參考范文1
As Susan stood in front of the crowd, her heart beat violently. But when seeing Grandma Betty's smiling face in the audience, she found her courage. Taking a deep breath, she started playing the guitar, her fingers dancing skilfully across strings. The music filled the room, and everyone present was fascinated. Halfway through the song, she paused, extended her hand toward Grandma Betty and invited邀請//signaled to示意her to join her. At first, Grandma Betty was surprised and hesitant, but seeing Susan's eager face, she finally headed for her bedroom.
Grandma Betty soon returned with her banjo. Exchanging a knowing glance, they played together, their music integrating perfectly. As the final notes of the song faded away, the audience erupted into thunderous applause爆發雷鳴般的掌聲. Grandma Betty's eyes sparkled with long-lost passion, and Susan beamed with pride自豪的微笑 when she realized she had achieved her goal. From that day on, Grandma Betty resumed恢復，重新開始 playing the banjo on a regular basis, and the two often played together, creating beautiful memories that would last a lifetime.
參考范文2
As Susan stood in front of the crowd, her heart beat violently. The room was filled with residents and family members, all eyes on her. Taking a deep breath, she strummed the first chord of Elvis's classic tune that had brought her so much joy. Her fingers danced over the strings, each note resonating with her passion for music. Halfway through her performance, she paused, looked directly at Grandma Betty, and invited her to join, "Grandma, this song wouldn't be complete without you."
Grandma Betty soon returned with her banjo. A hush fell over the audience as she tuned her instrument, memories flooding back. When she began to play, it was clear she hadn't lost her touch. Together, they played a melody that bridged generations, filling the room with a warmth and harmony that moved everyone present. By the end of their duet, tears glistened in many eyes, including those of Grandma Betty. It was more than just a performance; it was a moment of reconnection, a reminder of the enduring power of music to bring people together and reignite old flames of passion and joy. This special day not only celebrated Grandma Betty's 80th birthday but also marked the revival of her musical spirit, inspired by her granddaughter's love for music.
參考范文三
As Susan stood in front of the crowd, her heart beat violently. The familiar chords of Elvis's "Can't Help Falling in Love" trembled from her guitar strings as she scanned the sea of expectant faces. Halfway through the song, her voice gained strength, echoing through the lounge with surprising clarity. When the final note faded, applause erupted like summer rain. Susan gripped the microphone, her gaze locking onto Grandma Betty's misty eyes in the front row. "This next song needs something special," she announced, fingers brushing the guitar neck nervously. "Someone who taught me that music never ages." The crowd murmured as Susan extended her hand toward her grandmother. "Will you play 'You Are My Sunshine' with me, Grandma "
Grandma Betty soon returned with her banjo. The instrument gleamed like rediscovered treasure in her weathered hands. As she settled beside Susan, the room held its breath. The opening notes from the banjo danced with the guitar's rhythm, tentative at first, then blooming into joyful harmony. Their voices intertwined - Susan's youthful vibrato wrapping around Betty's warm, crackling tones. By the chorus, walkers tapped time and silver heads nodded recognition. When the last chord shimmered in the air, Betty's cheeks glistened with tears that had nothing to do with age. The standing ovation shook the lounge windows as three generations of Tribula women embraced, surrounded by the echoes of music reborn.

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