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外研版英語七年級下冊Unit 5 Amazing nature
第4課時 話題寫作
話題感知
寫作話題→神奇的大自然 寫作內容→描述自然奇觀，講述如何保護自然環境 寫作技能→能正確運用比較級和最高級形式
素材積累
Ⅰ詞匯積累
1. one of ... ……之一
2. a land full of ... 充滿……的土地
3. be famous for 以……而聞名
4. ... meters long/high ……米長/高
5. more... than... 比……更……
6. take away... 奪走……
7. stop people from doing sth. 阻止人們做某事
8. cry for help 大聲呼救
Ⅱ 高分句型
1. The most beautiful place in my opinion is...
我認為最美麗的地方是……
2. It is famous for...
它以……而聞名。
3. It is like... 它像……
4. Words can’t express my love for ...
語言無法描述我對……的熱愛。
5. We should take action and protect them.
我們應該采取行動保護它們。
典文示例
Ⅰ寫作任務
2023年9月17日，我國云南“普洱景邁山古茶林文化景觀”被聯合國教科文組織列入《世界遺產名錄》。假如你是李華，請根據以下提示，給你的南非好友Jack發一封電子郵件，向他介紹景邁山。
內容提示：
1. 景邁山位于中國西南部的云南省，海拔1500米左右；
2. 景邁山古茶林文化景觀由5片古茶林、9個古村寨和3片分隔防護林組成；
3. 景邁山以普洱茶聞名于世……
要求：
1. 文中應包括所給內容提示，可適當增加細節，以便行文連貫；
2. 詞數80左右（開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數）。
參考詞匯：cultural landscape 文化景觀；World Heritage List《世界遺產名錄》；Pu’er tea 普洱茶；old tea forest 古茶林；protective separation forest 分隔防護林
Ⅱ思路點撥
1. 體裁：說明文
2. 時態：一般現在時
3. 人稱：第一人稱、第二人稱
4. 框架結構
開篇點撥 → I’d like to... 具體介紹 → Jingmai Mountain is in... It’s famous for... 發出邀請 → Why not come to...
Dear Jack，
As you know, the Cultural Landscape of Old Tea Forests of Jingmai Mountain in Pu’er has been added to the UNESCO World Heritage List.
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I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
Ⅲ佳作欣賞
Dear Jack,
As you know the Cultural landscape of Old Tea Forests of Jingmai Mountain in Pu’er has been added to the UNESCO World Heritage List. I’d like to tell you something about Jingmai Mountain.
Jingmai Mountain is in the southwest of China’s Yunnan Province. It’s about 1,500 meters above the sea level. The cultural landscape is made up of five old tea forests, nine traditional villages and three protective separation forests. Jingmai Mountain is famous for Pu’er tea in the world. Tea is an important part of Chinese culture. It has a history of over 6,000 years in China. I’m proud to say that Jingmai Mountain is one of the best natural places in China. Words can’t express my love for it.
Why not come to visit Jingmai Mountain and enjoy pu’er tea this summer I’m sure you will love it.
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
實戰演練
假如你是一只叫做飛飛的丹頂鶴，現在生活在扎龍自然保護區，由于人類的幫助，你的生活發生了翻天覆地的變化。請你給人類寫一篇詞數在80～100之間的英語感謝信。
內容必須包括以下要點：
扎龍基本情況 最大的濕地之一；提供…… 鳥兒的棲居情況
人類為濕地和鳥類做的事 1. 中國政府制定法律…… 2. 觀鳥協會
我在這里的生活現狀 1. 介紹最好的朋友——天鵝 2. 最喜歡的季節和原因
參考詞匯：red-crowned crane 丹頂鶴；swan 天鵝；Zhalong Nature Reserve 扎龍自然保護區；wetland 濕地；provide 提供
Dear humans,
I am a red-crowned crane called Feifei. I'm writing to thank you for your help.
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Thanks again for helping us.
范文
第4課時 話題寫作
One possible version:
Dear humans,
I am a red-crowned crane called Feifei. I’m writing to thank you for your help.
Zhalong Nature Reserve is one of the largest wetlands in the world. It provides us with a lot of food and water. Many birds live here. They are very happy. Thanks to the laws made by the Chinese government, we are safe. We don’t have to worry about bad guys hunting us. Humans build birdwatching places, so there are a lot of people coming to watch us. I have a best swan friend here. She is beautiful. I like spring very much, because the weather is warm and I have enough food.
Thanks again for helping us.
Best wishes,
Feifei

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