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應用文之志愿者活動類
假定你是李華，想邀請熱心于公益的留學生朋友Fred一起去你市火車站參加為期兩天的志愿服務活動。請你給他寫一封郵件，內容包括：
1.活動的時間和地點；
2.志愿服務的內容（至少三個方面）。
要求：1. 詞數100左右；
2. 可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【分析】
本篇書面表達是應用文，要求寫一封書信。
【詳解】
第1步：根據提示可知，本文要求寫一封電子郵件：假定你是李華，想邀請熱心于公益的留學生朋友Fred一起去你市火車站參加為期兩天的志愿服務活動。請你給他寫一封郵件，內容包括：1.活動的時間和地點；2.志愿服務的內容（至少三個方面）。時態應為一般將來時。
第2步：根據寫作要求，確定關鍵詞（組），如：volunteer(志愿服務)，railway station(火車站)，function(功能)，gather(集合)，actively(積極地)，detail (細節)，luggage (行李)，entrance (入口)，board (上車)，accompany(陪伴)，direct (指引)，rewarding(值得的)及passenger(乘客)等。
第3步：根據提示及關鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態問題。
第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當的連詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規范清晰，保持卷面的整潔美觀。
【點睛】
范文語言地道，語篇連貫，詞數適當。作者在范文中使用了較多高級詞匯和句式，高級詞匯有be involved in(參與)，put on(穿上)，in time (及時)，get familiar with (熟悉)，get down to(開始)，make sure(確保)以及keep order(維持秩序)，而且還使用了狀語從句If any elderly or young passengers are travelling alone, we may accompany them and make sure they board in time.賓語從句I believe you’ll find the experience rewarding.非謂語動詞I’m writing to invite you to join me for voluntary work at the railway station from May 1st and 2nd.及One of our duties is to answer questions and direct passengers to the right places.全文沒有語法錯誤，上下句轉換自然流暢.
Dear Fred,
I’m writing to invite you to join me for voluntary work at the railway station from May 1st and 2nd. I know you are always actively involved in volunteering so you won’t miss this opportunity. Here are some details about the activity.
We are to gather at the entrance to the station at 8:00 a.m. and put on uniforms before being shown around to get familiar with the functions of different areas. Then we’ll get down to work. One of our duties is to answer questions and direct passengers to the right places. If any elderly or young passengers are travelling alone, we may accompany them and make sure they board in time. More often we’ll help with heavy luggage and keep order.
I believe you’ll find the experience rewarding.
Yours,
Li Hua
假定你是某國際學校的學生會主席李華，你校最近將組織一批志愿者到火車站提供服務。請你以學生會的名義用英語寫一則書面通知。內容主要包括:
1. 時間:11月18日(星期日), 上午8:00-11:00
2. 地點:福州火車站
3. 活動內容:撿垃圾(pick up rubbish)、信息咨詢(provide information for passengers)、幫助使用自助售票機(ticket vending machine)等
4. 注意事項
注意:1. 詞數100 左右(開頭和結尾已給出，但不計入總詞數)；
2. 可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。
Notice
Volunteer Activity at Fu Zhou Railway Station
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Student Council
【分析】
本篇書面表達是應用文，要求寫一則通知。
【詳解】
第1步：根據提示可知，本文要求寫一則通知：假定你是某國際學校的學生會主席李華，你校最近將組織一批志愿者到火車站提供服務。請你以學生會的名義用英語寫一則書面通知。內容主要包括:1. 時間:11月18日(星期日), 上午8:00-11:00；2. 地點:福州火車站；3. 活動內容:撿垃圾、信息咨詢、幫助使用自助售票機等；4. 注意事項。時態應為一般現在時。
第2步：根據寫作要求，確定關鍵詞（組），如； rubbish（垃圾），ticket vending machine（自動售票機），volunteer（志愿者），passenger（乘客）， baggage（行李），service（服務）及benefit（獲益）等。
第3步：根據提示及關鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態問題。
第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當的連詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規范清晰，保持卷面的整潔美觀。
【點睛】
范文語言地道，語篇連貫，詞數適當。作者在范文中使用了較多高級詞匯和句式，高級詞匯有pick up（撿），provide sth for sb（為某人提供某物），a variety of (種種)，in addition（此外），on time(按時)以及benefit from（從……中獲益），而且還使用了賓語從句“Welcome to join us, and we believe you will benefit a lot from this activity.”及“In addition, some volunteers can teach passengers how to use the ticket vending machine.”，非謂語動詞“To help students learn more about sharing, volunteers in our school will be organized to offer service at Fu Zhou Railway Station.”及“Please remember to come to the station on time.”，全文沒有語法錯誤，上下句轉換自然流暢。
Notice
Volunteer Activity at Fu Zhou Railway Station
To help students learn more about sharing, volunteers in our school will be organized to offer service at Fu Zhou Railway Station.
The activity will be held from 8 a.m. to 11a.m this Sunday morning on November 18th . Volunteers can offer a variety of services. Some can pick up rubbish on the ground and provide information for passengers. Some can help the passengers with heavy baggage. In addition, some volunteers can teach passengers how to use the ticket vending machine.
Please remember to come to the station on time. Welcome to join us, and we believe you will benefit a lot from this activity.
Student Council
假定你是李華，上周日你校學生會組織了一批同學到公園開展環境保護志愿活動。 請你為校廣播臺寫一篇英文報道，內容包括:
1. 活動目的；
2. 活動時間、地點和內容(撿垃圾、宣講環保知識)；
3. 活動反響。 注意:
1. 寫作詞數應為80左右；
2. 請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。
Environmental Protection — We Care, We Can
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【分析】
本篇書面表達屬于應用文，要求考生寫一篇英文報道，詳細描述在公園開展的環境保護志愿活動。
【詳解】
第一步：審題
體裁：應用文
時態：根據提示，時態主要為一般過去時。
結構：三段式
第一段寫活動目的； 第二段寫活動地點和內容； 第三段寫活動反響。
要求：
內容包括如下幾個方面：
1. 活動目的；
2. 活動時間、地點和內容(撿垃圾、宣講環保知識)；
3. 活動反響。
第二步:列提綱 （重點詞組）
raise public awareness of, carry out, search for, preach to the public, related to, environmental protection, good feedback.
第三步：連詞成句
Raise public awareness of environmental protection.
The Student Union organized some students as volunteers to carry out a special task last Sunday.
They went to the Central Park to search for and collect the garbage that was thrown randomly.
They preached to the public about some knowledge and methods related to environmental protection.
The activities received very good feedback.
The volunteers and the people in the park said they had learned more about environmental protection.
根據提示及關鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態問題。
第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）
1.表并列補充關系： also，Both…and…
2.表目的關系：In order to
連句成文，注意使用恰當的連詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，確保行文流暢。
【點睛】
[高分句型1] In order to raise public awareness of environmental protection, the Student Union organized some students as volunteers to carry out a special task last Sunday.
該句中用短語“in order to do”的形式作目的狀語。
[高分句型2] They went to the Central Park to search for and collect the garbage that was thrown randomly.
該句中that引導定語從句，先行詞是the garbage。
【答案】Environmental Protection—We Care, We Can
In order to raise public awareness of environmental protection, the Student Union organized some students as volunteers to carry out a special task last Sunday.
They went to the Central Park to search for and collect the garbage that was thrown randomly. They also preached to the public about some knowledge and methods related to environmental protection.
The activities received very good feedback. Both the volunteers and the people in the park said they had learned more about environmental protection.
假定你是李華，為助力你市創建國家衛生城市(National Health City)，上周末你校學生會組織了一次志愿者活動，到你校附近社區幫助打掃衛生。請你為校英文報寫一篇報道，內容包括：
1. 活動目的；
2. 活動詳情；
3. 活動反響。
注意：
1. 寫作詞數應為80左右；
2. 請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。
A Volunteer Activity
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【分析】
本篇書面表達屬于應用文。為助力創建國家衛生城市(National Health City)，上周末校學生會組織了一次到校附近社區打掃衛生的志愿者活動，要求考生就此活動為校英文報寫一篇報道。
【詳解】
詞匯積累
呈現新面貌：take on a new look→presenting a new look
熱情地：warmly→affectionately
完全的：thorough→complete
參與：participation→concernment
2.句式拓展
簡單句變復合句
原句：The communities took on a new look.
拓展句：Although the volunteers were very tired, the communities took on a new look.
【點睛】
[高分句型1]
The activity was so warmly welcomed that more than 500 students signed up for it.( so…that引導的結果狀語從句)
[高分句型2]
All the volunteers were divided into several groups and they went to the nearby communities, where they helped the residents and the workers do a thorough cleaning.(關系副詞where引導的非限制性定語從句)
【答案】A Volunteer Activity
To help our hometown build a National Health City, the Students’ Union of our school organized a volunteer activity last weekend.
The activity was so warmly welcomed that more than 500 students signed up for it. All the volunteers were divided into several groups and they went to the nearby communities, where they helped the residents and the workers do a thorough cleaning. The communities took on a new look.
This activity was highly thought of, because it not only made a difference, but also raised the students’ sense of participation.
上個月我校某班學生去當地一家孤兒院（orphanage）開展志愿者活動。請根據下列要點寫一篇英語報道。
要點：1.時間、地點、人物及活動（贈送書籍、玩具等)；
2.孤兒院孩子們的反應；
3.簡短評論。
要求：1.詞數100左右；2.可合理增加細節，以使行文連貫。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Last weekend, we went to the local orphanage to do some voluntary work. On the way, we bought books and toys with the money donated by our classmates. Upon our arrival, we handed out all the gifts to the children, then we patiently taught them to sing songs. Before leaving, we received pictures drawn by them as souvenirs of the visit.
When we were about to leave, the children waved their hands and thanked us for our kindness. Seeing the children’s bright smiles, all of us considered the visit to be well worthwhile. We have made an effort to bring sunshine to the children’s lives, and were really happy to be able to help them.
假如你是李華，上周末，你和同學們去當地一家孤兒院（orphanage）開展志愿者活動。請根據下列要點寫一篇英語報道。
要點：1.時間、地點、人物及活動（贈送書籍、玩具等)
2.孤兒院孩子們的反應；
3.簡短評論。
要求：1.詞數100左右
2.可合理增加細節，以使行文連貫。
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【答案】Last weekend, we went to the local orphanage to do some voluntary work. On the way, we bought books and toys with the money donated by our classmates. Upon our arrival, we handed out all the gifts to the children, then we patiently taught them to sing songs. Before leaving, we received pictures drawn by them as souvenirs of the visit.
When we were about to leave, the children waved their hands and thanked us for our kindness. Seeing the children’s bright smiles, all of us considered the visit to be well worthwhile. We have made an effort to bring sunshine to the children’s lives, and were really happy to be able to help them.
假如你是李華，上周六你們班組織了一次志愿者活動，去敬老院看望慰問老人。根據下表中所提供的信息，講述這次活動的情況，并談談自己的感受。 提示詞：gerocomium 敬老院， the elderly 老年人
Time 9:00---11:00, last Saturday
Place the gerocomium near our school
Volunteer work took a lot of presents to, performed program(表演節目)，
talked with the elderly，
……..
feeling (感受) ……..
要求：1. 不少于60詞；2.內容要點可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫; 3.開頭已經給出。
Last Saturday, my class organized a volunteer activity to the gerocomium（敬老院）.
Last Saturday, my class organized a volunteer activity to the gerocomium（敬老院）. My classmates and I went to the gerocomim near our school. We took a lot of presents to the elderly. Some of us performed wonderful program，such as singing, dancing. We also asked them to join us and they were very happy. Some of us talked with the elderly seriously. They told us a lot about their lives.
All of us were happy because we did something good to others. In my opinion, we should spend more time helping the elderly. Love the elderly is Chinese people’s virtue.
假定你是李華，你校近期將組織開展一次垃圾分類志愿者活動，請給你的英國留學生朋友Max寫一封郵件，邀請他參加．內容包括：
1．活動時間及地點；
2．活動內容及目的；
參考詞匯：垃圾分類： garbage classification
注意：1．詞數 100左右；
2．可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫．
Dear Max，
In order to raise awareness of the protection of the environment， our school will organize a voluntary activity this Sunday morning．I am writing to invite you to join us．（寫信目的）
We will gather at the gate of Jinjiang Park at eight and do some voluntary work in groups．Activities will include putting up posters, telling the citizens the importance of protecting the environment and picking up rubbish in the park and do some garbage classification. We hope to make our community a better place by working in our spare time If you are interested and available, please meet us there on time．Don't forget to wear light clothes and bring some tools．（活動時間，地點及目的）
Looking forward to your reply．（期望）
Best wishes，
Li Hua
假如你是李華，春節期間，你所在的志愿者小組就如何在疫情期間科學防疫進行了一次線上服務活動。請你根據以下要點提示給外文網寫一篇新聞報道：1. 活動形式和內容2. 活動反響。
注意：1. 詞數80左右；2. 可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。
參考詞匯：the novel coronavirus 新型冠狀病毒
【分析】
這是一篇應用文。本篇要求考生就寒假期間進行的科學防疫線上活動給外文網寫一篇新聞報道。
【詳解】
體裁：應用文
時態：根據提示，時態應以一般過去時為主
結構：總分總
要求：
1. 活動形式和內容
2. 活動反響
第二步：列提綱（重點詞組）
prevent/ be anxious about/ invite sb. to do sth./ range from…to…/ in addition/ take turns to do sth./ provide sb. with sth./ confidence/ appeal to sb. to do sth./ in the form of/ think highly of/ joint efforts
第三步：連詞成句
1. To educate more people how to prevent the novel coronavirus and protect themselves, we volunteers organized an online voluntary activity during the Spring Festival.
2. Knowing many people were too anxious about the outbreak of the disease, we invited professional experts to give online instructions, including correct way to wash hands, indoor body-building exercises and so on.
3. Additionally, we take turns to answer people's questions online, which not only eased their anxiety but also offered them confidence.
4. More importantly, we called on people to limit their outdoor activities, avoid crowded places and wear a mask, in the form of videos, pictures, cartoons, etc.
5. This activity was highly thought of, giving more people confidence that the novel virus could be controlled and finally defeated with our joint efforts.
第四步：連句成篇（加入銜接詞或從句）
表示并列的連詞：and/but/or/so…
狀語從句連詞：because/ if/ though/ although…
定語從句連詞：which/ that/ when/ where…
第五步：修改潤色（加入高級詞匯或短語）
【答案】An online voluntary activity
In an attempt to educate more people how to prevent the novel coronavirus and protect themselves, an online voluntary activity was organized by our group of volunteers during the Spring Festival.
Knowing that many people were too anxious about the outbreak of the disease, we invited professional experts to give online instructions, ranging from the correct way to wash hands to indoor body-building exercises. In addition, we take turns to answer people's questions online, which not only eased their anxiety but also provided them with confidence. More importantly, we appealed to people to minimize outdoor activities, avoid crowded places and wear a mask, in the form of videos, pictures, cartoons, etc.
This activity was highly praised, which gave more people confidence that the novel virus could be controlled and finally defeated with our joint efforts.
【點睛】
范文內容完整，要點全面，語言規范，語篇連貫，詞數適當，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系。作者在范文中使用了一些主從復合句，例如：Knowing that many people were too anxious about the outbreak of the disease, we invited professional experts to give online instructions, ranging from the correct way to wash hands to indoor body-building exercises.中that引導賓語從句；This activity was highly praised, which gave more people confidence that the novel virus could be controlled and finally defeated with our joint efforts.中which引導非限制性定語從句，that引導同位語從句。
假定你是某國際學校的校英語報記者李華，春節將至，你校學生會于上周日組織了部分志愿者去到當地農村看望因疫情影響而無法與父母團聚的留守兒童。請你就此活動寫一篇英文報道，內容包括：
1.活動目的；
2.活動過程；
3.活動反響。
注意：1.寫作詞數應為80詞左右；
2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。
參考詞匯：留守兒童 left-behind children
【分析】
本篇書面表達屬于應用文，要求考生寫一篇英文報道，報道你校學生會于上周日組織的去當地農村看望因疫情影響而無法與父母團聚的留守兒童的活動。
【詳解】
第一步：審題
體裁：應用文
時態：根據提示，時態主要為一般過去時。
結構：總分法
總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內容。
要求：
1. 介紹活動目的；
2. 介紹活動過程；
3. 介紹活動反響。
第二步:列提綱 （重點詞組）
a group of; pay a visit to…; set out for…; help sb. to do sth.; teach sb. to do sth.; bring sth. to sb.
第三步：連詞成句
1. Last Sunday morning, we gathered at the school gate and set out for a rural area in high spirits.
2. We arrived there at nine and the children welcomed us warmly.
3. We introduced ourselves briefly, which helped us to know each other better.
4. We organized some entertainment activities like teaching those children to sing and dance.
5. It not only gave us an opportunity to experience a different life but also brought some warmth to those left-behind children.
根據提示及關鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態問題。
第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）
1.表文章結構順序：firstly; in the end
2.表并列補充關系：and; additionally; not only…but also…
3.表因果關系：because of
連句成文，注意使用恰當的連詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規范清晰。
【答案】 Volunteers’ Visit to Local Left-behind Children
With the approach of the Spring Festival, a group of volunteers from our school’s Students’ Union paid a visit to those left-behind children whose parents cannot return home because of the epidemic situation, aiming to show our care and help them have a happy holiday.
Last Sunday morning, we gathered at the school gate and set out for a rural area in high spirits. We arrived there at nine and the children welcomed us warmly. Firstly, we introduced ourselves briefly, which helped us to know each other better. Additionally, we organized some entertainment activities like teaching those children to sing and dance. In the end, we sent books and school things to them as New Year’s presents.
This activity was really impressive. It not only gave us an opportunity to experience a different life but also brought some warmth to those left-behind children.
【點睛】
[高分句型1]. With the approach of the Spring Festival, a group of volunteers from our school’s Students’ Union paid a visit to those left-behind children whose parents cannot return home because of the epidemic situation, aiming to show our care and help them have a happy holiday. （由關系代詞whose引導限制性定語從句，先行詞為“left-behind children”）
[高分句型2]. Firstly, we introduced ourselves briefly, which helped us to know each other better. （由關系代詞which引導非限制性定語從句）
singing and dancing together.全文中沒有中國式英語的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、層次分明，上下句轉換自然，為文章增色添彩。
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9．書面表達
上周日，你們學校組織了一次志愿者活動。假設你是李華，請你根據以下提示給校報寫一封信，報道相關情況，要點包括：
1. 活動地點：文化廣場；
2. 活動形式：發傳單、做演講；
3. 活動內容：宣傳地震常識和防震知識；
4. 參加活動的感受。
注意：
1. 詞數100左右；
2. 可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；
3. 開頭語和結束語已為你寫好，不計入總詞數。
參考詞匯：leaflet傳單
Dear Editor，
We took part in a voluntary activity organized by our school last Sunday.
Best wishes!
【答案】
Dear Editor，
We took part in a voluntary activity organized by our school last Sunday. We gathered at the Culture Square, passing leaflets to passers by from which they can learn what the earthquake is and how to protect themselves against the earthquake. The leaflets drew the attention of the public to the damage that an earthquake can cause and told them to take action in a right and efficient way. Some made a public speech, telling people about the best place where they can hide when an earthquake occurs.
We have learned much from the voluntary activity, which offers us an opportunity to contribute to society. We told the public about the situation because we thought everyone should be concerned about each other and take responsibility for promoting a public cause.
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua
10．假如你是李華，上周日你和同學一起參加學生會組織的志愿者活動，到附近社區進行義務勞動，受到社區居民的歡迎。請根據下列活動內容用英語給校園英語報寫一則報道。
1. 打掃衛生；
2. 澆灌花木；
3. 幫老人們做家務；
4. 做戒煙宣傳；
5. 為孩子們輔導功課；
提示詞：義務勞動 voluntary labor 社區 community
注意：1. 詞數100左右
2. 可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Students’ Voluntary Work in a Neighbourhood
Last weekend, some students took part in an activity organized by the Students’ Union. They did some voluntary work in a nearby neighbourhood. Once they got there, they divided themselves into small groups to do different jobs. Some did some cleaning and watered the plants; Some coached pupils in English; Some helped the elderly with their housework; Others were busy walking around to make the public aware of the harm of smoking.
The activity was much praised by the neighbourhood and the students also enjoyed it. They got to know the society better and learned how to help the people around.

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