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（10）讀后續寫——高考英語考前三個月速記清單
答題技巧
寫作步驟：
Step 1: 信息瀏覽與主題把握
明確要素：who（人物）、what（事件）、where（地點）、when（時間）、why（原因）
總結文章大意與表達主題
Step 2: 段落梳理與情節提煉（重點）
梳理開頭（beginning），了解故事起始背景
把握發展（development），明確情節推進脈絡
確定高潮（climax），找出故事最緊張時刻
梳理結尾（ending），知曉故事最終走向
Step 3: 依據段落開頭，構思續寫內容（突破點）
仔細研讀續寫段落的開頭語，以此為基礎展開合理想象
Step 4: 細節刻畫與銜接優化（亮點）
添加豐富細節，使故事更生動形象
營造情節沖突，增強故事吸引力
優化銜接表達，使文章過渡自然流暢
Step 5: 達成首尾呼應，確保結構合理完整
結尾呼應開頭，強化主題
檢查文章結構，確保邏輯連貫、條理清晰
續寫標準：
故事圍繞主要人物展開
詳細刻畫人物角色及其情感
有效使用連接成分，結構緊湊
運用豐富的詞匯、語法結構和修辭使描寫生動
第一段和第二段的內容銜接自然，邏輯合理通順
續寫內容與所給短文融洽度高，語言風格保持一致，思想積極向上
高分要求：
增加細節：
環境描寫；肖像描寫；動作描寫；語言描寫；心理描寫
營造沖突：
人物和人物之間的沖突；人物和環境之間的沖突
升格語言：
非謂語動詞；with復合結構；形容詞作狀語；特殊句式；虛擬手段；常用修辭手法
需要注意：
情節設計要符合生活實際和文章邏輯，避免太過離奇；
敘述力求精練、生動、連貫，對話不要太多，書面化的長句不宜太多。
詞匯與句型
寫天氣
sunny (陽光明媚的)
bright (晴朗的；明亮的)
clear (清澈的；晴朗無云的)
cloudless (無云的)
warm (溫暖的)
cloudy (多云的)
dull (陰沉的；無趣的)
rainy (下雨的)
drizzling (下毛毛雨的)
pouring (傾盆大雨的)
misty (有霧的；模糊的)
snowy (下雪的)
windy (有風的)
breezy (微風輕拂的)
gusty (陣風的；狂風的)
stormy (暴風雨的；激烈的)
寫外貌
short矮
scruffily dressed 衣著不整潔
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neatly dressed衣著干凈整潔
overweight超重的
well dressed穿著講究的
plump豐腴的
smartly dressed穿著光鮮
thin瘦的
skinny 極瘦的
plain相貌平平的
slim苗條的
good-looking好看的
medium height中等身高
elegantly dressed穿著考究
tubby矮胖的
muscular強壯的
寫性格
boring乏味的
cold冷酷的
charming可愛的
confident 自信的
calm鎮定的
strong堅強的
humorous 幽默的
optimistic樂觀的
selfish自私的
outstanding杰出的
romantic浪漫的
quiet文靜的
pessimistic悲觀的
nervous焦慮的
pleasant友好的
lovely可愛的
proud驕傲的
gentle 溫柔的
generous寬宏大量的
rude沒禮貌的
adventurous有冒險精神的
sociable善于交際的
vigorous精力旺盛的
spirited精神飽滿的
情感描寫
開心
She had a bright smile and jumped up and down, with joy shining in her eyes.
她笑容燦爛，蹦蹦跳跳，眼中閃爍著喜悅。
The smile on her face shone like a diamond.她臉上的笑容像鉆石一樣閃閃發光。
His eyes twinkled with pleasure.他高興得雙眸閃閃發亮。
The crowd got excited. They cheered and clapped, with happy looks on their faces.（
人群興奮起來。他們歡呼鼓掌，臉上洋溢著開心的神情。
憤怒
He was full of rage and glared at the person in front, his eyes full of anger and his voice loud.
他怒火中燒，怒視著前面的人，眼神充滿憤怒，聲音很大。
He got very angry, his face turning red, and he clenched his fists tightly.
他非常生氣，臉都變紅了，緊緊握住拳頭。
His face clouded with anger.他滿面怒容。
She looked at him with eyes flashing angrily.她憤怒地看著他。
傷心
Overcome with grief, he cried loudly, and then fell to the floor, covering his face with hands.
被悲痛籠罩，他大聲哭泣，然后倒在地上，用手捂住臉。
She was in a sad mood. Her steps were heavy and her eyes were dull as she walked slowly.
她心情悲傷。她腳步沉重，眼睛無光，緩緩地走著。
He stood silently, tears rolling down his cheeks.
他靜靜地站著，眼淚順著面頰流了下來。
She sobbed, hiding her face in her hands.她掩面哭泣。
The news cast a cloud of gloom over his face.這消息使他臉上蒙上了一層陰影。
緊張
She was very nervous waiting for the test results. Her hands were sweaty and her mind was full of thoughts.
她等考試結果時非常緊張。手心出汗，腦子里思緒萬千。
As the performance time got closer, she felt nervous. She walked around backstage, adjusting her clothes and breathing deeply.
隨著表演時間臨近，她感到緊張。在后臺走來走去，調整衣服，深呼吸。
His heart was beating loudly. He played with his pen, unable to pay attention.
他的心跳得很響。他擺弄著筆，無法集中注意力。
Nervousness came to him like a shadow. His legs felt weak and his mouth was dry. He tried to be brave.緊張像影子一樣襲來。他腿發軟，嘴巴發干。努力鼓起勇氣。
恐懼
She was so scared that she stood still, her eyes wide open in fear and her breath quick.
她嚇得一動不動，驚恐地瞪大雙眼，呼吸急促。
Fear came over him like a cold wind, making his hands shake.
恐懼像一陣冷風襲來，讓他的手顫抖。
She shook all over, feeling like sitting on pins and needles.她渾身顫抖，覺得如坐針氈。
His heart was pounding, as if he were frightened.他的心怦怦跳，似乎被嚇壞了。
I bowed my head timidly and dared not look at my father's face.我膽怯地低著頭，不敢看爸爸的臉。
感動
She was very touched. Holding the gift tightly, she felt a warm feeling inside.
她非常感動。緊緊握著禮物，她內心感到一股溫暖。
She was full of emotion listening to the kind words. Her face showed her deep gratitude.
她聽著那些溫暖的話語，情緒激動。臉上流露出深深的感激。
Tears filling his eyes, she offered her heartfelt gratitude.他熱淚盈眶，表示衷心的感謝。
With tears streaming down her face, she...淚水順著她的臉頰流了下來，她……。
滿意
There is always a smile of contentment on her face.她臉上總是掛著心滿意足的微笑。
Seeing their task finished gives them a sense of satisfaction.看到任務完成了，他們感到很滿意。
He glanced at her with a pleased smile.他面帶滿意的笑容瞥了她一眼。
驚訝
The audience was inexpressibly astonished at the brilliant performance.
那出色的表演使觀眾感到說不出的驚嘆。
She was surprised that he had no words of blame for her.
使她驚訝的是，他沒有對她說任何責備的話。
思考
An idea flashed across his mind.他腦子里閃過一個念頭。
An idea formed in his mind.他腦中有了一個主意。
An idea occurred to/hit/struck him.他突然有了一個主意。
She was deep in thought and heard little of what was being said around her.
她在沉思，幾乎聽不見周圍的話。
動物描寫
circle/hover 盤旋 fly 飛翔 unfold 張開,展開
unfold the wings 展開翅膀 fly away 飛走 flap the wings 拍打翅膀
move the wings 扇動著翅膀 take wing 展翅飛翔 let out a squeaking call 發出吱吱聲
Suddenly a bird flew straight and quick like an arrow to the sky.一只鳥像箭一樣直沖天空。
Sunshine is glittering on her wings.陽光在它的翅膀上閃閃發光。
It flew near the ground and went into some tall grass.
它飛到離地面很近的地方,鉆進了高高的草叢里。
What a hungry bear! After we returned home safe and sound, we realized that something should be done for bears.多餓的熊啊!在我們平安回到家后,我們意識到應該為熊做點什么。
社會溫情
pass on 傳遞 spread kindness 傳播善意 timely help 及時的幫助
reach out伸出援手 make a difference 起作用
carry sb. through difficult times 幫助某人渡過難關
Shortly afterwards, he got the tire fixed. He got up, wiped the sweat from his face, and wished me a pleasant journey.
不久之后,他把輪胎修好了。他站起來,擦去臉上的汗水,并祝我旅途愉快。
He patted me on the shoulder to ease my anxiety.
他拍了拍我的肩膀,以緩解我的焦慮。
To her relief, the local people helped to carry her through these difficult times.
令她感到欣慰的是,當地人們幫助她度過了這些困難時期。
Without his timely help, I would have certainly missed my plane.
如果沒有他的及時幫助,我肯定會誤機。
From that day on, every time I meet someone who needs help, I always reach out to them, hoping to pass on the kindness that the Mexican family offered me.
從那天起,每當我遇到需要幫助的人,我總是向他們伸出援手,希望把這個墨西哥家庭給予我的善意傳遞下去。
I made up my mind to pass on "love" to others. Just as the saying goes, "Roses given, fragrance in hand."
我下定決心要把“愛”傳遞給別人。俗話說:“贈人玫瑰,手有余香。”
It dawned on me that never should we underestimate the power of our actions. A small act of kindness may be powerful enough to make a huge difference.
我突然意識到,我們永遠不應該低估我們行動的力量。一個小小的善舉可能足以產生巨大的影響。
常用句型
1. 主語+謂語1…，謂語2…，and 謂語3….
描述一系列的動作。如果是兩個動作，可以用主+謂…and (then) 謂…
She stopped the truck safely outside the garage and then rushed back to the basement.
She turned around and saw me standing in the doorway.
2. Doing…, 主語+謂語…
有時可以在doing前加before, after, while等。
Hearing his brother's words, she rushed back to the shop to find the boy but time never waits for anyone.
Having wandered aimlessly in the street for hours, she felt a little hungry and wished for something to eat.
3. 主語+謂語…, doing… .
該句型可以以并列謂語的形式出現，轉化為：主語+謂語1...and謂語2...。
"It's OK," Mama said, comforting me with a hug.
4. 主語+謂語…，獨立主格…
獨立主格在句中作狀語。該句型可以轉化為并列句：主語1+謂語…and主語2+謂語…。
He stood there, tears of gratitude welling up in his eyes.=He stood there and tears of gratitude welled up in his eyes.
She opened the letter, her hands trembling with excitement.= She opened the letter and her hands trembled with excitement.
5. 表情感類的形容詞，主語+謂語.
情感類的形容詞在句中作狀語，說明主語的狀態。有時也可以放在句尾：主+謂...，表情感類的形容詞。
Exhausted and scared, Jane lay down near a stone, missing her family at a distance.
Jenny sat there, speechless and numb with shock.
6. 句子副詞，主語+謂語…
句子副詞在句中作狀語，修飾整個句子，放在句首，引出句子。
Incredibly, she was able to carry her last child out before the roof and walls fell.
"Actually, I was touched by your kindness!" said Jenny, wiping her tears.
7. 時間狀語，主語+謂語.
時間狀語一般放在句末，但有些時間狀語放在句首，能使行文連貫，邏輯合理。
For the first time in her life, Maria felt frightened and alone.
After seemingly a long time, Jane felt tired and laydown in the darkness.
8. 地點狀語或表示運動方向的副詞+謂語（vi.）+主語全部倒裝句
主語必須是名詞，謂語動詞為不及物動詞，常見的表運動方向的副詞有：in, out, off, away, up, down, outside, inside等。
In his hand was a flower, with its petals all worn.
Away went the crowd one by one.

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