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Enjoy a song
Trouble
中考話題八 Problems and suggestions
（Writing)寫作課
Teaching material
8B Unit 1
8B Unit 4
Health problems
Personal problems
Give advice
Give advice
課前任務(wù)：熟讀教材以上話題單元，摘錄并分類整理與problem主題相關(guān)的語言表達(dá)。
A letter
to students
Beginning
Body
Ending
Talk about problems
Give advice
schoolwork
study until really late
too much homework
too many after-school classes
fail the exam
worry about school grades
...
Let’s talk.
Problems
relationship
argue/fight with my parents
give me a lot of pressure about school
don’t allow me to hang out with my friends
borrow my things without returning
won’t let me have a pet
...
argument between my parents
Problems
Talk about problems(談?wù)搯栴}）
Let’s read
【好句范例】
1.Some students don't know how to get on well with their classmates, while others have too much homework to do.
2. Students have been competing with each other since they were very young,which brings them too much stress.
3. Some students often feel lonely, and they don't know who they should share their feelings with.
5. These days children have too much homework to do so that they have no free time.
Talk about problems(談?wù)搯栴}）
Let’s Write
【句子仿寫】
1.你可能太擔(dān)心你的成績，以至于你不能專注于(focus on）做其他事情。
2.當(dāng)你感到失望時，你可能會失去學(xué)習(xí)興趣。
3.你可能不知道如何與父母和睦相處。
You may worry about your grades too much so that you can't focus on doing other things.
You may lose interest in study when you feel disappointed.
You may not know how to get along/on well with your parents.
Let’s think.
I am not good at maths.
I failed the exam.
Why don’t you ______
ask your teacher for
help
(向你的老師尋求幫助)
Useful expressions:
Why don’t you _______
You should/shouldn’t ____.
You must __________.
It’s best to ______________.
ask your classmates for help
study as much as you can
don’t waste time
do many exercises
study
Give advice.(給出建議）
Let’s think.
go to visit her
give him a hug
write him a letter
take him to the ball game
call him up
Useful expressions:
You’d better _________.
It’s a good way to _____.
It’s a good idea for you to_____.
You can _____
You’d better ______________.
write him a letter
(寫封信給他)
buy him a present
I am in dark mood.
I argued with my best friend.
relationship
Give advice.(給出建議）
Give advice.(給出建議）
Let’s read
【好句范例】
1.I think a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem.
2.First of all,try to do sports as much as possible.
3. Besides, you should be brave enough toexpress your ideas
4.Talking to friends is a good way to reduce pressure.
5. The more you read,the better your minds will be.
6. If you are in trouble, you can ask your teachers for help.
Give advice.(給出建議）
Let’s Write
1.此外，做運(yùn)動是放松自己的好方法。
2.如果你對學(xué)校生活不滿意，你可以和你信任的人談?wù)劇?br/>3.盡量多和你的同學(xué)交流。
Besides,doing exercise is a good way torelax yourself.
If you feel unhappy about your schoollife, you can talk to someone you trust.
Try to communicate with your classmates
Express hope.(表達(dá)希望）
Let’s read
角度3【好句范例】
1.I am looking forward to your good news.
2.I hope my suggestions are worth taking.
3.I believe you will be better and better as long
as we pay attention to solving the problems
together.
Express hope.(表達(dá)希望）
Let’s Write
【句子仿寫】
1.我希望每個人都能妥善處理這些問題，有一個健康的身心。
2.我希望每個人都能少一點壓力，過上更好的生活。
I hope everyone can deal with these problems properly and have a healthy body and mind.
I hope everybody will have less pressure and live a better life.
Good ways to write a good article
An excellent
article
Structure
(including given information)
結(jié)構(gòu)
Beautiful words
優(yōu)美辭藻
Sentence pattern
句型結(jié)構(gòu)
Linking words/
Conjunction
過渡詞/連詞
Extended information
Linking words
Conjunctions
★ however/while
★ when/while/as soon as/until
★ although
★ What’s more/Also/Besides/ In addition
★ not only…but also
★ if/ unless
★ so…that…/such…that
★ Firstly, secondly, thirdly
★ so that…
A letter
to students
Beginning
Body
Ending Express hope
Talk about problems:
1. be worried about grades
2. lose interest in study
3. .....
Give advice:
1. talk to someone you trust
2.listen to music
3 .....
doubt yourself
do sports
[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇書信作文；
②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；
③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏信息提示，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作要求。
第一步，表明寫作意圖。在成長的過程中，出現(xiàn)一些心理健康問題是很正常的；
第二步，具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。通過提出問題和給建議來論述主題；
第三步，書寫結(jié)語。希望大家都能在學(xué)校度過一段美好時光。
[輔助詞匯]
①concentrate on 集中注意力做某事
②lose interest in 對......失去興趣
③spare no effort to不遺余力去做某事
[寫作步驟]
Write a passage.(連句成文）
Dear students,In the process of growing up,it's normal for you tohave some mental health problems.You may worry about your grades too much so thatyou can't concentrate on doing other things. You maylose interest in study when you feel disappointed duringthe school life. You may doubt yourself when you get abad grade in the exam. But don't worry. Let me showyou some advice to figure it out.If you feel unhappy about your school life, you cantalk to someone you trust and learn from each other.You can listen to light music when you get a bad gradein the exam. Besides,doing exercise is a good way torelax yourself too.We should treat these problems with a normalmind and spare no effort to study. I hope you all guyscan have a good time in school life.Dr. Li
Let’s Write
Dear students,
In the process of growing up,it's normal for you tohave some mental health problems.
Dr. Li
Write a passage.(連句成文）
Dear students,In the process of growing up,it's normal for you tohave some mental health problems.You may worry about your grades too much so thatyou can't concentrate on doing other things. You maylose interest in study when you feel disappointed duringthe school life. You may doubt yourself when you get abad grade in the exam. But don't worry. Let me showyou some advice to figure it out.If you feel unhappy about your school life, you cantalk to someone you trust and learn from each other.You can listen to light music when you get a bad gradein the exam. Besides,doing exercise is a good way torelax yourself too.We should treat these problems with a normalmind and spare no effort to study. I hope you all guyscan have a good time in school life.Dr. Li
Let’s Write
Dear students,
In the process of growing up,it's normal for you tohave some mental health problems.
You may worry about your grades too much so that you can't focus on doing other things. You may lose interest in study when you feel disappointed during the school life. You may doubt yourself when you get abad grade in the exam. But don't worry. Let me give you some advice .
If you feel unhappy about your school life, you can talk to someone you trust and learn from each other. Also ,you can listen to light music when you get a bad grade in the exam. Besides,doing exercise is a good way to relax yourself too.
I hope everyone can deal with these problems properly and have a healthy body and mind.
Dr. Li
作文自評
Dear students,In the process of growing up,it's normal for you tohave some mental health problems.You may worry about your grades too much so thatyou can't concentrate on doing other things. You maylose interest in study when you feel disappointed duringthe school life. You may doubt yourself when you get abad grade in the exam. But don't worry. Let me showyou some advice to figure it out.If you feel unhappy about your school life, you cantalk to someone you trust and learn from each other.You can listen to light music when you get a bad gradein the exam. Besides,doing exercise is a good way torelax yourself too.We should treat these problems with a normalmind and spare no effort to study. I hope you all guyscan have a good time in school life.Dr. Li
Let’s Write
書面表達(dá)評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)（以15分滿分為例）
分檔標(biāo)準(zhǔn)
第一檔（15-13分） ：內(nèi)容完整，語言準(zhǔn)確無誤，邏輯連貫，使用高級句式
第二檔（12-10分） ：內(nèi)容基本完整，語言有小錯誤但不影響理解
第三檔（9-7分） ：內(nèi)容部分缺失或表述不清，語言錯誤較多
第四檔（6-4分） ：僅能表達(dá)部分要點，語言錯誤嚴(yán)重影響理解
第五檔（3-0分） ：文不對題或無法組織有效內(nèi)容

扣分細(xì)則
內(nèi)容 ：每個要點2分缺少要點直接扣分
語言 ：字?jǐn)?shù)不夠的每少5個單詞扣0.5分 語法/拼寫錯誤每處扣0.5分，同類錯誤不重復(fù)扣分
格式 ：未按要求格式（如書信、日記）扣1分
加分項
使用復(fù)合句、過渡詞提升連貫性
立意新穎或結(jié)合社會熱點可能獲得更高檔位
Write a passage.(連句成文）
Dear students,In the process of growing up,it's normal for you tohave some mental health problems.You may worry about your grades too much so thatyou can't concentrate on doing other things. You maylose interest in study when you feel disappointed duringthe school life. You may doubt yourself when you get abad grade in the exam. But don't worry. Let me showyou some advice to figure it out.If you feel unhappy about your school life, you cantalk to someone you trust and learn from each other.You can listen to light music when you get a bad gradein the exam. Besides,doing exercise is a good way torelax yourself too.We should treat these problems with a normalmind and spare no effort to study. I hope you all guyscan have a good time in school life.Dr. Li
Let’s Write
Dear students,
In the process of growing up,it's normal for you tohave some mental health problems.
You may worry about your grades too much so that you can't focus on doing other things. （2）You may lose interest in study when you feel disappointed during the school life. （2）You may doubt yourself when you get abad grade in the exam. （2）But don't worry. Let me give you some advice .
If you feel unhappy about your school life, you can talk to someone you trust and learn from each other. （2）Also ,you can listen to light music when you get a bad grade in the exam. （2）Besides,doing exercise is a good way to relax yourself too.（2）
I hope everyone can deal with these problems properly and have a healthy body and mind.（1）
Dr. Li
行文結(jié)構(gòu)2分
THANKS
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