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Unit 5 Here and Now
單元話題（此時(shí)此刻）寫作滿分范文15篇
說明：此專題分三個(gè)難度層次，基礎(chǔ)入門訓(xùn)練<進(jìn)階拓展訓(xùn)練< 能力綜合實(shí)踐，老師根據(jù)學(xué)生實(shí)際情況進(jìn)行針對性難度訓(xùn)練。
基礎(chǔ)入門訓(xùn)練5篇
1．假如今天是星期天，天氣晴朗而溫暖。你的家庭成員正在進(jìn)行不同的活動(dòng)。請你根據(jù)下面的信息和提示，用英語寫一篇短文。
要求：語句通順，意思連貫，書寫工整，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
文章不得出現(xiàn)任何真實(shí)信息（姓名、校名和地名等）。
詞數(shù)：至少70個(gè)詞。
人物 正在做的事
爺爺、奶奶 外出散步
爸爸 看一本歷史書
媽媽 在客廳里看電視
弟弟、妹妹 在臥室里下象棋
我 ……
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【答案】例文
Today is Sunday. The weather is warm and sunny. It’s a nice day for my family to do fun things at home.
My grandparents are walking outside. They are breathing fresh air and talking happily. My dad is in his armchair. He is reading a history book. My mom is in the living room. She is watching TV and laughing sometimes. My little brother and sister are in the bedroom. They are playing chess. They are trying to win the game.
What am I doing I am in the study, listening to music while doing my homework. The music helps me do my homework better. It’s a great Sunday afternoon. We all have a good time.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)以“現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)”為主；
③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，需包含所有內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)增添細(xì)節(jié)以保證內(nèi)容連貫。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，介紹天氣情況，引出主題。
第二步，具體介紹人物及其對應(yīng)活動(dòng)。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①breath fresh air呼吸新鮮空氣
②watch TV看電視
③play chess下象棋
④have a good time 過得愉快
[高分句型]
①They are breathing fresh air and talking happily.（and連接并列成分）
②I am in the study, listening to music while doing my homework.（while引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語從句）
2．今天是星期天，下著雪，天氣很冷，但很多孩子在戶外玩耍。請根據(jù)提示，寫一篇短文，描述孩子們的活動(dòng)。
提示：
1. How’s the weather today
2. What are the children doing
3. How do they feel
寫作要求：
(1) 短文應(yīng)包含所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
(2) 詞數(shù)：70詞左右；
(3) 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和學(xué)校名稱。
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【答案】例文
It’s Sunday today. It’s snowing and it’s very cold. The children are wearing their warm clothes.
Look at the children! They’re playing outside. Some are skating, some are running in the snow, some are having a snowball fight, and others are making a snowman.
Although the weather is cold, they are still having great fun. They all feel very happy.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)主要為“現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)”；
③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏信息提示，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，介紹今日的天氣；
第二步，具體介紹孩子們在戶外做什么；
第三步，總結(jié)孩子們在外玩耍的感受。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①look at看一看
②have snow fight打雪仗
③have great fun玩得開心
[高分句型]
①It’s snowing and it’s very cold. (并列句)
②Although the weather is cold, they are still having great fun. (although引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句)
3．假如你是李華，請你根據(jù)下面的提示，給你的好朋友Sarah寫一封信，告訴她此時(shí)你們一家人在公園里的活動(dòng)情況。
寫作要點(diǎn)：
1. What time is it now and how is the weather
2. What are your family doing
3. How do you feel about it
要求：
1.短文應(yīng)包括提示中所有的寫作要點(diǎn)，條理清楚，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2.短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和地名；
3.詞數(shù)70左右。
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【答案】例文
Dear Sarah,
How is it going with you I’m happy to tell you about my vacation.
It is sunny today, just right for vacation. It’s nine o’clock. I am in the park with my family. My father is taking photos of flowers. Where is my mother Oh, she is talking with a woman under a tree. My sister is having a good time playing with my cousin. What about me I’m writing the letter to you by the lake. We’re all having a great time.
How about your vacation Can you tell me
Yours,
Li Hua
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為書信作文；
②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”和“現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)”；
③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生注意不要遺漏提示中的要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作要點(diǎn)。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，先引出要談?wù)摰脑掝}；
第二步，具體介紹一家人正在做什么和闡述自己的感受；
第三步，書寫結(jié)束語。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①take photos of拍……的照片
②have a good time doing做某事玩得開心
③talk with和某人談?wù)?br/>[高分句型]
My sister is having a good time playing with my cousin.（現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)）
4．假如現(xiàn)在是星期天的上午，你和你的媽媽在公園里散步，你們看見公園里很多人在進(jìn)行著不同的活動(dòng)。請根據(jù)下面的寫作要點(diǎn)，寫一篇英語短文。
寫作要點(diǎn)：
1. What are people doing in the park
2. How do they feel
要求：
1.詞數(shù)70左右；
2.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名。
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【答案】例文
It’s fine on Sunday morning. My mother and I are walking in the park. Many people are in the park. Look! Some boys are playing basketball and others are playing football. Some people are playing games under a big tree. Near a table, a girl is reading a book. Another girl is eating an apple and the others are playing chess. How happy they are!
【詳解】[總體分析]
① 題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；
② 時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；
③ 提示：根據(jù)所給提示完成寫作，不能遺漏信息，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，描述公園里人們的活動(dòng)；
第二步，描述他們的感受。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
① play basketball 打籃球
② play games 玩游戲
③ play chess 下國際象棋
[高分句型]
Some boys are playing basketball and others are playing football. （并列句）
5．假如現(xiàn)在是星期六的下午，你和媽媽在公園里散步，看見公園里很多人在進(jìn)行不同的活動(dòng)。請根據(jù)下面的要點(diǎn)及注意寫一篇英語短文。
要點(diǎn)：
1. 一些男人在打籃球，還有一些在踢足球；2. 一些孩子在樹下玩游戲；3. 幾個(gè)女孩坐在桌子旁，一個(gè)在看書，一個(gè)在吃蘋果，其余在下棋。
注意：
1. 短文須包括所有寫作要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2. 詞數(shù)70左右。
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【答案】例文
It’s fine on Saturday afternoon. My mother and I are taking a walk in the park. Many people are in the park.
Look! Some men are playing basketball and others are playing football. Some children are playing games under a big tree. Near a table, a girl is reading a book. Another girl is eating an apple and the others are playing chess.
How happy they are!
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)”；
③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏“信息提示”中的介紹要點(diǎn)，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，介紹我和媽媽在公園里散步，公園里有很多人；
第二步，具體闡述公園里的人分別進(jìn)行的活動(dòng)；
第三步，書寫結(jié)語。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①take a walk散步
②play games玩游戲
③the others其余的人
[高分句型]
①How happy they are! (How引導(dǎo)的感嘆句)
進(jìn)階拓展訓(xùn)練5篇
6．假如現(xiàn)在是周六傍晚六點(diǎn)鐘，你和你的家人都在家。請發(fā)揮你的想象，根據(jù)下面要點(diǎn)，用英語寫一篇短文。
要點(diǎn)：
1. What are your family doing
2. What things do you have to do
3. What do you think of these things
注意：
1. 短文應(yīng)包括提示中所有的要點(diǎn)，條理清楚，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2. 短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和地名；
3. 詞數(shù)70左右。
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【答案】例文
It’s 6 p.m. on Saturday. My family are all at home. Look, my grandparents are watching TV. My mother is doing some cleaning in the bedroom. My father is playing games on the computer. I am reading a storybook. I have to finish it soon, because I have to do my homework from 7:00 to 8:00. Then, I have to clean my room. And I have to go to bed before 9:30.
As you can see, I am a little busy on Saturday evenings. But it’s good for me. And I think I can do the things well. They help me have good habits.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇記敘文；
②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)”和“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；
③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，必須包括所有內(nèi)容，可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使內(nèi)容連貫。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，點(diǎn)明時(shí)間是周六傍晚六點(diǎn)鐘，引出家人都在家這一話題。
第二步，具體描述家人分別在做什么，如祖父母看電視、媽媽打掃臥室、爸爸玩電腦游戲等，然后說明自己正在做的事以及接下來不得不做的事。
第三步，談?wù)剬@些事的看法。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①at home 在家
②do some cleaning 打掃衛(wèi)生
③play games 玩游戲
[高分句型]
①I have to finish it soon, because I have to do my homework from 7: 00 to 8: 00. （because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句）
②And I think I can do the things well.（賓語從句）
7．當(dāng)你晚上正在做作業(yè)時(shí)，你弟弟拍了張家里人忙碌的照片上傳到了你的班級群里。請你根據(jù)以下提示用英語寫一篇短文，介紹照片里你家里人忙碌的場景，向同學(xué)分享家里人的生活。
寫作要點(diǎn)：1. Where are you
2. What are your family doing
3. How are you feeling
要求：1. 短文應(yīng)包括所有的寫作要點(diǎn)，條理清楚，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2. 短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名、地名等信息；
3. 詞數(shù)70左右。短文開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
參考詞匯：work on computer, prepare for, take photos, do the dishes, wash, clean
It’s 7:00 p.m. in my home. I am doing my homework in the living room. All my family ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
It’s 7:00 p.m. in my home. I am doing my homework in the living room. All my family are busy at the moment.
My father is working on the computer. He is preparing for his work next day. My mother is doing the dishes. My sister is cleaning the floor. My brother is washing his sports shoes. He likes playing basketball, and he likes keeping his shoes clean every day. What’s this Yes, it’s my little brother’s hands. We can’t see his face because he is taking photos for us. He likes taking photos. He thinks it is interesting!
Look, we are a happy family.
【詳解】[總體分析]
① 本文是一篇材料作文。
② 時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)主要為“現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)”。
③ 提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)。注意行文連貫，邏輯清晰，無拼寫和語法錯(cuò)誤。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，承接給出的開頭，點(diǎn)明家人都很忙；
第二步，介紹家里人正在做什么；
第三步，表明自己的感受。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①doing the dishes洗碗
②keeping his shoes clean保持他的鞋子干凈
③taking photos for us為我們拍照
[高分句型]
① We can’t see his face because he is taking photos for us. (because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句)
② He thinks it is interesting! (省略that的賓語從句)
8．現(xiàn)在是星期六的上午10點(diǎn)，下面是Susan做的一個(gè)調(diào)查。請你幫她寫成一篇詞數(shù)70左右的英語作文，準(zhǔn)確描述小組成員此時(shí)此刻正在做什么。
Name What are they doing
John painting a picture
Anna reading a book
Tom lying on the grass and sleeping
Tony swimming
Peter taking a walk
Mary and Lily riding their bikes along the road
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【答案】例文
It is 10 a.m. on Saturday morning. Susan’s group members are doing different activities. John is painting a picture, while Anna is reading a book. Tom is lying on the grass and sleeping, and Tony is swimming. Peter is taking a walk in the park. Mary and Lily are riding their bikes along the road, enjoying the fresh air. Everyone is spending their Saturday morning in their own way.
【詳解】[總體分析]
① 題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；
② 時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)”；
③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，應(yīng)注意不要遺漏“信息提示”中每一項(xiàng)內(nèi)容，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，整體說明當(dāng)前時(shí)間是星期六上午10點(diǎn)；
第二步，具體描述小組成員此時(shí)此刻正在做的事情；
第三步，總結(jié)小組成員的活動(dòng)情況。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
① painting a picture 畫畫
② reading a book 讀書
③ lying on the grass 躺在草地上
[高分句型]
① John is painting a picture, while Anna is reading a book.（時(shí)間狀語從句）
② Mary and Lily are riding their bikes along the road, enjoying the fresh air.（現(xiàn)在分詞作伴隨狀語）
9．假如你是Mary，你和你的家人正在山里過暑假。請根據(jù)下列文字提示，給你的朋友Gina寫一封60詞左右的信，介紹一下你們此刻的度假情況。
提示：
1. 這里總是晴天，但天氣并不熱，正適合游玩；
2. 媽媽正和妹妹玩，我在給你寫信，爸爸在拍照；
3. 這里是一個(gè)令人放松的地方，我們玩得非常開心。
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【答案】Dear Gina,
How’s it going My family and I are having a nice summer vacation in the mountains.
It’s always sunny here, but not hot at all. The weather is perfect for having fun. Right now, my mom is playing with my sister, my dad is taking pictures, and I’m writing to you. This is such a relaxing place. We are really enjoying ourselves.
I hope you are having fun too.
Best wishes!
Mary
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇書信作文；
②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)主要為“現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)”與“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；
③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，要注意不要遺漏材料中的內(nèi)容，并適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，詢問對方的近況，表明自己正在與家人度假；
第二步，具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。從天氣、家庭成員的活動(dòng)等方面介紹自己的假期生活；
第三步，書寫結(jié)語，希望對方也玩得開心。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①in the mountains 在山里
②not...at all 一點(diǎn)也不
③enjoy oneself 玩得開心
[高分句型]
①I hope you are having fun too. (賓語從句)
10．Mike和朋友們正在不同的地方度假。假如你是Mike，請根據(jù)下面的表格寫一篇英語短文描述你和朋友們正在做的事情。
Who Where Weather Activities
Mike Harbin cold, snowy skate, make a snowman
Mike’s friends Hainan warm, sunny swim, play beach volleyball
寫作要求：
(1) 短文應(yīng)包含所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
(2) 詞數(shù)：70詞左右，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
(3) 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和學(xué)校名稱。
Hello! My name is Mike.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Hello! My name is Mike. My family and I are having a great time visiting Harbin. The weather is cold and snowy. We’re wearing hats and warm clothes. I am so happy to see the white world. My father and I are skating. My mother is making a snowman. We are having fun. My friends are in Hainan now. It’s warm and sunny there. They are having a good time on the beach. Some are swimming in the sea, and some are playing beach volleyball. How happy they are!
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時(shí)態(tài)：現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)；
③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，注意不要遺漏提示中的要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作要點(diǎn)。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，先介紹自己和父母度假的城市，天氣和活動(dòng)。
第二步，再介紹朋友們度假的城市，天氣和活動(dòng)。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①make a snowman堆雪人
②have a good time玩的開心
③in the sea在海里
[高分句型]
①How happy they are!（感嘆句）
②I am so happy to see the white world.（動(dòng)詞不定式作原因狀語）
能力綜合實(shí)踐5篇
11．假如你是Mike，你正在哈爾濱度假，你的好朋友們正在海南度假。請你根據(jù)下面寫作要點(diǎn)用英語寫一篇短文，談?wù)勀愫湍愕暮门笥褌兪侨绾味冗^假期的。
內(nèi)容包括：
1. 天氣如何？
2. 你正在做什么？
3. 你覺得這次假期如何？
要求：
1. 短文應(yīng)包括上述所有的內(nèi)容，條理清楚，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2. 短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和地名；
3. 詞數(shù)70左右。
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【答案】例文
Hello! My name is Mike. My friends and I are taking a vacation in different places.
My family and I are having a great time visiting Harbin. The weather is cold and snowy here. We’re wearing hats and warm coats. I am so happy to see the white world. My father and I are skating. My mother is building a snowman. We are having fun.
My friends are in Hainan now. It’s warm and sunny there. They are having fun playing on the beach. Some are swimming in the sea. Some are playing beach volleyball. They are having a good time too.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)”；
③提示：根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容介紹自己和朋友是如何度過假期的，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意行文連貫，表述清晰。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，引出主題，介紹自己和朋友在不同的地方度假；
第二步，介紹自己的度假情況，包括地點(diǎn)、天氣、進(jìn)行的活動(dòng)及感受；
第三步，介紹朋友們度假的情況。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①have a great time玩得開心
②on the beach在沙灘上
③take a vacation度假
[高分句型]
I am so happy to see the white world. (不定式作原因狀語)
12．上周五，你校老師組織學(xué)生們?nèi)ト嗣窆珗@(People’s Park)游玩。假如你是校英文報(bào)記者，請根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)，就此活動(dòng)寫一篇題為“An unforgettable school trip”的英文報(bào)道。
要點(diǎn)：
1. 天氣情況；
2. 交通方式；
3. 活動(dòng)內(nèi)容：做游戲、爬山、野餐等；
4. 感受。
注意：
1. 詞數(shù)70左右；
2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3. 文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名及學(xué)校名稱。
An unforgettable school trip
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【答案】例文
An unforgettable school trip
Last Friday, our teacher took us to People’s Park. It was a wonderful trip.
It was sunny. We went there by school bus. We got there at about ten o'clock. There were many people playing in the park. At first, we played some interesting games. We also went climbing which was tiring but very exciting. Then we had lunch under a big tree. After that, we took some photos. At four o'clock in the afternoon, we went back home. We all sang happily on the bus.
All in all, we had a good day to remember.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時(shí)態(tài)：本文用一般過去時(shí)；
③提示：報(bào)道同學(xué)們?nèi)ト嗣窆珗@游玩的活動(dòng)，需要遵照所給要求，信息覆蓋全面，適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充細(xì)節(jié)。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，簡單介紹活動(dòng)，引出下文；
第二步，介紹游玩那天的天氣情況，交通方式，活動(dòng)內(nèi)容，注意細(xì)節(jié)充分，行文連貫；
第三步，描述大家的感受，總結(jié)全文。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①at first首先
②all in all總之
③sing happily開心的唱歌
[高分句型]
①There were many people playing in the park.（there be sb. doing句型）
②We also went climbing which was tiring but very exciting.（定語從句）
13．現(xiàn)在是下午四點(diǎn)鐘，你們學(xué)校正在上自主活動(dòng)課。學(xué)生們可以根據(jù)自己的興趣愛好，選擇自己喜歡的課程或活動(dòng)。下面的表格中列舉了你和你的同學(xué)們正在進(jìn)行的一些活動(dòng)。請你根據(jù)表格中的內(nèi)容提示，寫一篇詞數(shù)70左右的短文，介紹一下自主活動(dòng)課上的情況。開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Frank and Mike play chess
Peter play soccer
Cindy sing and dance
Jeff and Eric make a model plane
You practice speaking English
It’s four o’clock in the afternoon. We’re doing our favorite things at school now.
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【答案】例文
It’s four o’clock in the afternoon. We’re doing our favorite things at school now.
Look! Frank and Mike are playing chess. Peter likes sports. He’s playing soccer with his friends. Where’s Cindy She’s singing and dancing in the music room. What about Jeff and Eric They’re making a model plane. And me I’m practicing speaking English with my English teacher.
We are having a good time.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)”；
③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏“信息提示”中的介紹要點(diǎn)，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，介紹下午四點(diǎn)同學(xué)們正在學(xué)校做最喜歡的事情；
第二步，具體闡述同學(xué)們正在進(jìn)行的一些活動(dòng)；
第三步，書寫結(jié)語。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①practice doing sth練習(xí)做某事
②have a good time玩得開心
[高分句型]
①We are having a good time. (現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)態(tài))
14．昨天是周六，你和父母親去了農(nóng)場，請你用英語描述一下你們一家在農(nóng)場的情況。
要點(diǎn)如下：
（1）天氣情況；
（2）你們做了什么活動(dòng)；
（3）你和家人的感受。
注意：
（1）詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右；
（2）可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
（3）文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名及學(xué)校名稱。
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【答案】例文
Yesterday was Saturday. It was sunny and warm. My parents and I went to the farm. The air was fresh and the scenery was beautiful. We did many kinds of farm work. My father helped the farmers with their work, my mother picked vegetables, and I fed the animals. We all enjoyed the activities very much. It was a wonderful day, and we felt very happy and relaxed. I hope we can go to the farm again soon.
【詳解】[總體分析]
① 題材：本文為一篇記敘文，為材料作文；
② 時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般過去時(shí)”；
③ 提示：要點(diǎn)已給出，注意不要遺漏，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，完善表述內(nèi)容。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，介紹上周六的天氣情況；
第二步，介紹父母和自己在農(nóng)場做了什么活動(dòng)；
第三步，表達(dá)自己和家人的感受。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①many kinds of許多種類的
②help sb with sth幫助某人做某事
[高分句型]
①The air was fresh and the scenery was beautiful.（and連接的并列句）
②I hope we can go to the farm again soon.（省略that的賓語從句）
15．
寫作小練筆用所學(xué)內(nèi)容描述星期日的天氣及你和家人的活動(dòng)。（詞數(shù)40左右） 內(nèi)容提示： WeatherFatherMotherSisterIsunny, hotswimming in the seasitting on the chairplaying on the beachdrinking orange juice
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【答案】例文
It is Sunday today. The weather is sunny and hot. My father is swimming in the sea. He likes swimming best. My mother is sitting on the chair. My sister is playing on the beach. I am drinking orange juice. Everyone is happy.
【詳解】[總體分析]
① 題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；
② 時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)”；
③ 提示：根據(jù)所給提示完成寫作，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，整體說明星期日的天氣情況；
第二步，具體描述家庭成員的活動(dòng)；
第三步，總結(jié)當(dāng)天的感受。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
① sunny and hot 晴朗炎熱
② swimming in the sea 在海里游泳
③ sitting on the chair 坐在椅子上
④ playing on the beach 在沙灘上玩耍
⑤ drinking orange juice 喝橙汁
[高分句型]
He likes swimming best.（動(dòng)名詞作賓語）學(xué)校:___________姓名：___________班級：___________考號：___________
Unit 5 Here and Now
單元話題（此時(shí)此刻）寫作滿分范文15篇
說明：此專題分三個(gè)難度層次，基礎(chǔ)入門訓(xùn)練<進(jìn)階拓展訓(xùn)練< 能力綜合實(shí)踐，老師根據(jù)學(xué)生實(shí)際情況進(jìn)行針對性難度訓(xùn)練。
基礎(chǔ)入門訓(xùn)練5篇
1．假如今天是星期天，天氣晴朗而溫暖。你的家庭成員正在進(jìn)行不同的活動(dòng)。請你根據(jù)下面的信息和提示，用英語寫一篇短文。
要求：語句通順，意思連貫，書寫工整，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
文章不得出現(xiàn)任何真實(shí)信息（姓名、校名和地名等）。
詞數(shù)：至少70個(gè)詞。
人物 正在做的事
爺爺、奶奶 外出散步
爸爸 看一本歷史書
媽媽 在客廳里看電視
弟弟、妹妹 在臥室里下象棋
我 ……
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2．今天是星期天，下著雪，天氣很冷，但很多孩子在戶外玩耍。請根據(jù)提示，寫一篇短文，描述孩子們的活動(dòng)。
提示：
1. How’s the weather today
2. What are the children doing
3. How do they feel
寫作要求：
(1) 短文應(yīng)包含所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
(2) 詞數(shù)：70詞左右；
(3) 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和學(xué)校名稱。
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3．假如你是李華，請你根據(jù)下面的提示，給你的好朋友Sarah寫一封信，告訴她此時(shí)你們一家人在公園里的活動(dòng)情況。
寫作要點(diǎn)：
1. What time is it now and how is the weather
2. What are your family doing
3. How do you feel about it
要求：
1.短文應(yīng)包括提示中所有的寫作要點(diǎn)，條理清楚，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2.短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和地名；
3.詞數(shù)70左右。
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4．假如現(xiàn)在是星期天的上午，你和你的媽媽在公園里散步，你們看見公園里很多人在進(jìn)行著不同的活動(dòng)。請根據(jù)下面的寫作要點(diǎn)，寫一篇英語短文。
寫作要點(diǎn)：
1. What are people doing in the park
2. How do they feel
要求：
1.詞數(shù)70左右；
2.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名。
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5．假如現(xiàn)在是星期六的下午，你和媽媽在公園里散步，看見公園里很多人在進(jìn)行不同的活動(dòng)。請根據(jù)下面的要點(diǎn)及注意寫一篇英語短文。
要點(diǎn)：
1. 一些男人在打籃球，還有一些在踢足球；2. 一些孩子在樹下玩游戲；3. 幾個(gè)女孩坐在桌子旁，一個(gè)在看書，一個(gè)在吃蘋果，其余在下棋。
注意：
1. 短文須包括所有寫作要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2. 詞數(shù)70左右。
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進(jìn)階拓展訓(xùn)練5篇
6．假如現(xiàn)在是周六傍晚六點(diǎn)鐘，你和你的家人都在家。請發(fā)揮你的想象，根據(jù)下面要點(diǎn)，用英語寫一篇短文。
要點(diǎn)：
1. What are your family doing
2. What things do you have to do
3. What do you think of these things
注意：
1. 短文應(yīng)包括提示中所有的要點(diǎn)，條理清楚，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2. 短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和地名；
3. 詞數(shù)70左右。
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7．當(dāng)你晚上正在做作業(yè)時(shí)，你弟弟拍了張家里人忙碌的照片上傳到了你的班級群里。請你根據(jù)以下提示用英語寫一篇短文，介紹照片里你家里人忙碌的場景，向同學(xué)分享家里人的生活。
寫作要點(diǎn)：1. Where are you
2. What are your family doing
3. How are you feeling
要求：1. 短文應(yīng)包括所有的寫作要點(diǎn)，條理清楚，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2. 短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名、地名等信息；
3. 詞數(shù)70左右。短文開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
參考詞匯：work on computer, prepare for, take photos, do the dishes, wash, clean
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8．現(xiàn)在是星期六的上午10點(diǎn)，下面是Susan做的一個(gè)調(diào)查。請你幫她寫成一篇詞數(shù)70左右的英語作文，準(zhǔn)確描述小組成員此時(shí)此刻正在做什么。
Name What are they doing
John painting a picture
Anna reading a book
Tom lying on the grass and sleeping
Tony swimming
Peter taking a walk
Mary and Lily riding their bikes along the road
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9．假如你是Mary，你和你的家人正在山里過暑假。請根據(jù)下列文字提示，給你的朋友Gina寫一封60詞左右的信，介紹一下你們此刻的度假情況。
提示：
1. 這里總是晴天，但天氣并不熱，正適合游玩；
2. 媽媽正和妹妹玩，我在給你寫信，爸爸在拍照；
3. 這里是一個(gè)令人放松的地方，我們玩得非常開心。
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10．Mike和朋友們正在不同的地方度假。假如你是Mike，請根據(jù)下面的表格寫一篇英語短文描述你和朋友們正在做的事情。
Who Where Weather Activities
Mike Harbin cold, snowy skate, make a snowman
Mike’s friends Hainan warm, sunny swim, play beach volleyball
寫作要求：
(1) 短文應(yīng)包含所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
(2) 詞數(shù)：70詞左右，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
(3) 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和學(xué)校名稱。
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能力綜合實(shí)踐5篇
11．假如你是Mike，你正在哈爾濱度假，你的好朋友們正在海南度假。請你根據(jù)下面寫作要點(diǎn)用英語寫一篇短文，談?wù)勀愫湍愕暮门笥褌兪侨绾味冗^假期的。
內(nèi)容包括：
1. 天氣如何？
2. 你正在做什么？
3. 你覺得這次假期如何？
要求：
1. 短文應(yīng)包括上述所有的內(nèi)容，條理清楚，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2. 短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和地名；
3. 詞數(shù)70左右。
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12．上周五，你校老師組織學(xué)生們?nèi)ト嗣窆珗@(People’s Park)游玩。假如你是校英文報(bào)記者，請根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)，就此活動(dòng)寫一篇題為“An unforgettable school trip”的英文報(bào)道。
要點(diǎn)：
1. 天氣情況；
2. 交通方式；
3. 活動(dòng)內(nèi)容：做游戲、爬山、野餐等；
4. 感受。
注意：
1. 詞數(shù)70左右；
2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3. 文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名及學(xué)校名稱。
An unforgettable school trip
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13．現(xiàn)在是下午四點(diǎn)鐘，你們學(xué)校正在上自主活動(dòng)課。學(xué)生們可以根據(jù)自己的興趣愛好，選擇自己喜歡的課程或活動(dòng)。下面的表格中列舉了你和你的同學(xué)們正在進(jìn)行的一些活動(dòng)。請你根據(jù)表格中的內(nèi)容提示，寫一篇詞數(shù)70左右的短文，介紹一下自主活動(dòng)課上的情況。開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Frank and Mike play chess
Peter play soccer
Cindy sing and dance
Jeff and Eric make a model plane
You practice speaking English
It’s four o’clock in the afternoon. We’re doing our favorite things at school now.
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14．昨天是周六，你和父母親去了農(nóng)場，請你用英語描述一下你們一家在農(nóng)場的情況。
要點(diǎn)如下：
（1）天氣情況；
（2）你們做了什么活動(dòng)；
（3）你和家人的感受。
注意：
（1）詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右；
（2）可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
（3）文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名及學(xué)校名稱。
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15．
寫作小練筆用所學(xué)內(nèi)容描述星期日的天氣及你和家人的活動(dòng)。（詞數(shù)40左右） 內(nèi)容提示： WeatherFatherMotherSisterIsunny, hotswimming in the seasitting on the chairplaying on the beachdrinking orange juice
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