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Unit 6 Rain or Shine Writing
語(yǔ)法重點(diǎn)
- 時(shí)態(tài): 現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)（結(jié)構(gòu)：am/is/are + V-ing）
- 人稱: 第一人稱、第三人稱
- 主題: 描述天氣、地點(diǎn)及人物活動(dòng)與感受
寫作模板
開頭句
1. Today is a beautiful spring day. The weather is warm and sunny, and the temperature is around 25℃.
2. It’s a lovely day at Mount Huangshan! The clouds look amazing, and the trees and rocks seem like part of a painting.
3. Let me tell you what people are doing in the park right now.
活動(dòng)句型
1. Look!
- Look! A boy is flying a kite happily. The kite is flying higher and higher.
- Look! Two men are walking their dogs on the grass. The dogs are beautiful and cute.
2. What about...
- What about the little girl Oh, she is riding her bike gladly.
- What about Peter He is climbing slowly because the ground is wet.
3. 合并同類活動(dòng)
- Many people are enjoying outdoor activities: flying kites, skateboarding, walking dogs, and having picnics.
- Tourists at Bright Peak are taking photos, chatting, and admiring the sunlight shining through the clouds.
細(xì)節(jié)擴(kuò)展
- 天氣描寫:
- The sun is shining brightly, and the sky is clear and blue.
- Heavy fog covers the mountain, making everything look grey and mysterious.
- The wind is blowing gently, perfect for flying kites.
- 情感描寫:
- Helen is in high spirits, encouraging her brother Peter to keep climbing.
- Everyone seems tired but happy after reaching the peak.
結(jié)尾句
1. What a happy and relaxing day! Remember: enjoy your life, come rain or shine.
2. Everyone is having a great time. I hope there will be more days like this.
3. The weather and activities bring lots of happiness to us. What a wonderful day!
實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練
情景 1: 你是騰飛，在公園玩耍。
開頭:
> Today is a beautiful spring day. The weather is warm and sunny, and the temperature is around 25℃. My parents and I are having fun at the park. There are also many people enjoying this lovely moment.
正文:
> Look! A boy is flying a kite happily. The kite is flying higher and higher. What about another boy He is skateboarding excitedly. On the grass, two men are walking their dogs. The dogs are beautiful and cute. A little girl is riding her bike gladly. Everyone seems to be in high spirits.
結(jié)尾:
> What a happy and relaxing day! Remember: enjoy your day, come rain or shine.
情景 2: 你是Bob，與家人在公園野餐。
題目: My Happy Family Time
開頭:
> It’s 2:00 in the afternoon. My family and I are having a picnic in the park. The sun is shining brightly, and the air smells like fresh grass.
正文:
> Look! My younger sister is drawing pictures under a tree. What about my dad He is laying out the food on the blanket. My mom is laughing while flying a kite with my brother. I am sitting on the grass, enjoying a sandwich and watching the clouds. Even our dog, Max, is running around happily.
結(jié)尾:
> Everyone is having a great time. What a perfect day to be with family!
注意事項(xiàng)
- 確保使用現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)描述活動(dòng)（e.g., is flying, are walking）。
- 加入天氣、情感和細(xì)節(jié)描寫（e.g., The sunshine is warm and bright）。
- 保持第一人稱或第三人稱一致性。
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