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專題八 書面表達
書面表達是初中英語學業水平考試中最能直觀地檢驗學生英語運用能力的題型，主要測試學生綜合運用所學語言知識和英語表達的能力，即考查學生運用所掌握的詞、句、語法、篇章結構等知識與技能表達觀點、思想和情感，進行書面交流的能力。可以較為全面地測試考生的語言基本功。
2019-2024年近六年浙江中考書面表達：應用文——回復郵件
年份 內容 體裁 題材
2024 回復Candy的郵件，向她推薦一所合適的學校。 應用文 社會服務與人際溝通
2023（杭州） 回復Jack的郵件，介紹來杭州需要帶的東西以及送什么禮物 應用文 社會服務與人際溝通
2022（杭州） 回復交換生Jack的郵件，介紹學校有趣的活動與中國變化 應用文 生活與學習
2021（杭州） 回復Matt的郵件，接受參加聚會的邀請 應用文 社會服務與人際溝通
2020（杭州） 回復Larry的郵件，接受給留學生做中國民樂講座的邀請并詢問細節 應用文 社會服務與人際溝通
2019（杭州） 回復Linda的郵件，介紹自己即將去羅馬的兄弟 應用文 社會服務與人際溝通
回復郵件
書面表達題的話題通常與學生的學習和生活緊密關聯，體裁有生活應用類，人物、事件等故事類，文化傳統、祖國建設等介紹類，對圖表、流程圖等進行描述的說明類，或對某一話題、事件等發表自己觀點的夾敘夾議類，等等。題目的任務表現形式多樣，一般有明確的任務要求、必要的支持性信息和限定條件。支持性信息有圖畫、圖表、提綱、提示詞等。學生應根據寫作要求和限定條件，利用所給的支持性信息，盡自己所學、所能，將自己的英語水平展示出來。
試題一般都提供一定的情景內容，內容多與學生日常生活實際相聯系。提供情景內容的形式有材料、提綱、圖標或圖畫等。試題也注重考查考生表達個人思想、再現生活經歷、描述周邊人物和事件以及發表相關觀點的能力。近年來，應用文是考查的重點，其涵蓋面也十分廣泛，包括活動安排、調查報告、倡議書、感謝信、書面通知、自薦應聘、請假條、規則介紹等方面。
具體要求如下：
1.緊扣主題，覆蓋內容要點，行文連貫，條理清楚，邏輯嚴密，格式正確，符合英語表達習慣。
2.詞匯豐富，語言優美，無明顯的句法、詞法、詞義、拼寫錯誤。
3.長度符合要求，以寫約110詞的任務要求為例，詞數盡量不少于90詞或多于130詞；書寫要工整、規范。
仔細審題，明確任務
仔細閱讀書面表達題的任務，根據所提供的支持性信息，如圖表、提綱等，明確寫作要求，確定題材和體裁。
厘清要點，列出提綱
根據所給圖表或提示，厘清文章寫作要點，搭好作文框架；再三檢查所列提綱是否已涵蓋所需要點，是否可以達成寫作目的。
撰寫初稿，連貫表達
依據提綱內容，用自己能熟練運用的詞語和句型等，撰寫初稿。在擬初稿過程中，除了確保作文內容涵蓋所有要點外，也需關注文章表達的連貫性和邏輯的嚴密性。同時還需注意語言的地道性，符合英語的表達習慣，避免中文思維。
回顧全文，修改潤色
仔細閱讀所寫文章初稿，檢查內容是否充實，句子的結構是否正確，句子是否通順，文章格式是否符合要求，單詞拼法、標點符號及大小寫是否正確等。必要時，可運用豐富的詞匯和句型來完善文章。
浙江省中考英語書面表達評分標準如下(以滿分20分為例)：
采分點 滿分 可給分值
1.內容充實，覆蓋要點7 (內容、要點) 7 6~7分:描述所有信息，內容合理、豐富 3~5分:描述了大部分信息，內容比較合理 1~2分:描述了小部分信息，內容不合理 0分: 沒有作答或描述內容與主題無關
2.用詞適切，語法正確 (詞匯、語法、句型) 7 6~7分:用詞適切，句型變化多樣且有效，完全 或基本沒有語言錯誤 3~5分:用詞基本適切，句型較為單一，有少量 語言錯誤，但不影響理解 1~2分:有較多語言錯誤，一定程度上影響理解 0分: 有大量語言錯誤，影響了理解
3.結構緊湊，意思連貫(語意、連詞、指代) 4 3~4分:行文連貫，連接詞使用恰當，指代清晰 1~2分:行文不夠連貫，連接詞使用不夠恰當， 指代不夠清晰 0分: 沒有連貫意識
4.書寫規范，詞數適宜(標點符號、大小寫、詞數) 2 2分:大小寫、標點正確，詞數達標， 書寫規范整潔 1分:大小寫、標點有部分錯誤，詞數達標，書寫 尚可辨認 0分:大小寫、標點錯誤較多，語言應用不規范， 詞數嚴重不足，書寫難以辨認
1.豐富詞匯、靈活表達
在寫作時應盡量不要反復使用相同的詞匯，以避免文章看起來枯燥、呆板。英語中相同的意思往往有不同的表達方式。用稍難單詞或短語代替一些簡單、常見的表達，可以使文章更生動、更有表現力。
如: You should try your best to use the new words in your daily life.
升格→You are supposed to make every effort to use the new words in your daily life.
2.擴寫句子
寫作的時候，我們常遇到寫完主謂賓就不知道如何往下寫的情況。這時可以運用一定的方法對句子進行擴展，以表達更完整、更具體的意思。
添加定語對名詞進行限制或說明，如形容詞、介詞短語、分詞短語、定語從句等。
如: He is a student.
升格1→He is a hard-working student.
升格2→He is a hard-working student(studying)in Sunshine School.
升格3→He is a hard-working student in Sunshine School who always gets good grades,
添加狀語表示時間、地點、方式、程度、目的、原因、結果等，如副詞、不定式、分詞、狀語從句等。
如: We should take good care of our eyes.
升格(擴寫原因)-We should take good care of our eyes because eyes are the windows to the soul.
You should communicate with your parents often.
升格(擴寫目的)→You should communicate with your parents often to get along well with them.
There is nothing to worry about the exam.
升格(擴寫條件)→There is nothing to worry about the exam as long as you prepare well for it.
添加同位語，如名詞、名詞短語等。
如: Dunhuang is an amazing city.
(添加同位語)→Dunhuang is an amazing city,one of the main stops on the Silk Road.
添加例子作補充說明，如用like，such as列舉事物或用for example舉例說明等。
如: We should pay more attention to personal health.
升格(擴寫事例)→We should pay more attention to personal health such as wearing the mask and keeping one metre away from others.
Bad eyesight brings trouble to our life and study.
升格(舉例說明)→Bad eyesight brings trouble to our life and study. For example.if we leave our glasses at home,we can't see the blackboard clearly in class.
3.巧用連接詞
恰當地運用連接詞把詞與詞、短語與短語、句與句連接起來，這樣可以使語言表達更加準確、流暢。連接詞功用廣泛，有表示并列或選擇關系的，有表示轉折關系的，有表示因果關系的，有表示條件或讓步的，有表示目的或結果的，在選用時要注意正確使用。
4.運用高分句式
寫作中恰當運用固定句式不僅可以避免語法錯誤，還可以使表達更加多樣化，從而使文意更加生動。如it代替動詞不定式作形式主語或賓語，“make十賓語十賓語補足語”，動名詞短語作主語等，此外，靈活改變句子的表達方式，把介詞短語、動詞不定式或副詞等放在句子的開頭，也能使句子形式更加多樣。
5.行文連貫
行文連貫是衡量書面表達水平的重要標志之一，但很多同學在寫作中卻往往忽視這一點。如何做到行文連貫呢？我們可以恰當使用連接詞，尤其是在引出下文、承上搞述、結束話題和總結話題時使用，使全文條理清楚、結構緊湊。
6.巧用諺語，妙筆生花
寫作中巧用格言、諺語，可以豐富文章內容，增強說服力，為文章增色添彩，同時也能展示考生強大的語言積累水平。
【真題在線】
20234年浙江中考真題
假如你是李華，你的英國好友Candy暑期將來中國游學。請根據以下相關信息，寫一封郵件，向她推薦一所合適的學校。
I like sports, and I’m interested in traditional Chinese art. Chinese food is great.
My cousin’s school ◆in the city center ◆a good ping-pong team ◆hand-made food classes My school ◆in the countryside ◆a new sports center ◆local art clubs
注意：
（1）郵件需包含所選學校至少兩點相關信息，可適當發揮；
（2）文中不得出現真實姓名、學校等信息；
（3）詞數80左右：郵件的首尾和第一句已給出，不計入總詞數。
Dear Candy
I’m excited to know that you are coming to China soon.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【參考答案】
Dear Candy,
I’m excited to know that you are coming to China soon. I think my school would be a great choice for you. It's located in the countryside, which is perfect for enjoying the peaceful environment and focusing on your studies. Plus, we have a new sports center where you can practice various sports, including the sports you love. Additionally, joining local art clubs here will allow you to explore traditional Chinese art, which I know you're interested in. The school also has delicious handmade food classes, so you can learn to cook Chinese dishes yourself!
Looking forward to your reply and wishing you a great trip to China.
Best wishes, Li Hua
關鍵詞匯：countryside, sports center, local art clubs, handmade food classes
亮點句式：It's located in the countryside, which is perfect for enjoying the peaceful environment...
【試題解讀】
一、寫作思路：
首先，需要確定推薦哪一所學校，并給出至少兩個相關的理由。
其次，結合Candy的興趣愛好（喜歡運動、對中國傳統藝術感興趣、喜歡中國美食），說明為什么這所學校適合她。
最后，可以簡單描述學校的其他優勢或特色。
二、寫作框架：
引言：表達對好友即將來中國的興奮之情。
主體：推薦學校并闡述理由，包括學校位置、運動設施、藝術活動、美食課程等方面。
結尾：期待Candy的回復，表達對她中國之行的祝愿。
三、寫作步驟：
閱讀題目要求，確定需要包含的信息點。
構思郵件內容，確定推薦學校及其理由。
組織語言，注意使用恰當的連接詞和句式。
檢查郵件內容，確保沒有語法錯誤，信息點完整。
2023年杭州中考真題
假定你是李平，請你對英國朋友Jack的郵件進行回復。詞數80左右，可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。
TO LiPing@ SUBJECT C U soon! Hi Li Ping Next week I’ll be with you in Hangzhou. I can’t wait! It’s going to be so cool! We can do lots of exciting things together! I need to pack for my trip. What should I bring with me Is there a swimming pool or tennis center nearby I’d like to get you a gift from where I live. What would you like me to get you I’m so excited about the trip! See you soon. Jack
Hi Jack,
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Li Ping
【答案】
Hi Jack,
I am so glad to receive your email. I can’t wait to see you, too.
It will be very hot in Hangzhou next week, so you should bring some T-shirts and shorts as well as some sunscreen. There is a big swimming pool near my house. We can swim in it for free. In addition, there is a tennis center three kilometers from my home, so we can also go to play tennis. I like English local products very much. If it is convenient for you, please bring me some.
I am looking forward to meeting you.
Li Ping
【詳解】
[總體分析]
① 題材：本文是一篇應用文，為電子郵件；
② 時態：時態為“一般現在時”；
③ 提示：根據所給提示完成寫作，不能遺漏信息，以第一人稱為主。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，首先表示自己很開心收到對方的郵件；
第二步，具體闡述他需要帶的東西以及介紹家附近的游泳池或網球中心；
第三步，最后介紹自己想要對方帶什么。
[亮點詞匯]
①can’t wait to do迫不及待做
②as well as和，以及
③look forward to期待
[高分句型]
①It will be very hot in Hangzhou next week, so you should bring some T-shirts and shorts as well as some sunscreen. （so引導并列句）
②If it is convenient for you, please bring me some.（if引導的條件狀語從句）
2022年杭州中考真題
假定你是李平, 請閱讀以下郵件, 接受邀請并回復。詞數 80 左右, 可適當增加細節, 以使行文連貫。
To: LiPing@ Subject: Exchange Visit! Hi there, Li Ping! My name’s Jack and I’m going to be at your school for the exchange visit next month. I’m really excited about it! Well, why am I writing right now For one thing, I really want to know something about the interesting activities at your school, so could you introduce one of them Also, I am interested in Chinese culture. So what do you suggest I do after school! Take care and hope to hear from you soon. Jack
Dear Jack,
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【答案】
Dear Jack,
I’m glad to know that you will come for the exchange visit.
At school, we have many different interesting activities, such as talent show, basketball competition and so on. These activities gives us a good chance to show our talents and it is of great help for us to communicate with others.
As for Chinese culture, I suggest that you visit the Hangzhou National Tea Museum, where you can learn something about the history of Chinese tea. If you are interested in traditional Chinese opera, Hangzhou Yue Opera Theater is a good place
Hopes this helps. If you want to know something more, please write to me.
——Li Ping
【解析】文章主要圍繞兩個方面展開：
1、interesting activities at your school;
2、Your suggestions about what Jack can do after school;
2021年杭州中考真題
假定你是李平，請閱讀以下郵件，接受邀請并回復。詞數 80 左右，可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。
Hi Li Ping， How is everything going with you？Next week my cousin Mike is staying with me We're having a party next Saturday. Please come!We'll have lots of drinks. But if you remember，can you bring some Chinese food？The party will be starting at 6 pm. What time do you think you'll be coming？Ill probably need one or two people to help me tidy up after the party. Do you think you'll be able to stay and help？ Anyway，hope you can make it. Please write back to tell me if you can come or not. All he best， Matt
Dear Matt，
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Li Ping
【答案】
Dear Matt,
It’s good to hear from you. Everything is fine with me here. Thanks for the invitation! I will definitely come! It will be good to meet Mike. I’ll arrive at around 5:30 next Saturday and bring some traditional Chinese foods, like dumplings and zongzi for you. I hope you would like them. Don’t worry. I will stay after the party to help you clean up.
Thanks again for the invitation. I am really looking forward to it!
All the best.
Li Ping
【詳解】
1.題干解讀：該題目屬于應用文寫作，但寫作時要按郵件格式寫。在寫作時根據收到的郵件內容，接受邀請并回復，內容包括幾點到達，以及所帶的食物等。
2.本文應該用第一人稱為主來敘述內容；時態采用一般將來時和一般現在時；在寫作時，力求語言準確，格式準確，保證條理清晰。
2020年杭州中考真題
假定你是李平，請閱讀以下郵件并回復。內容包括接受邀請并詢問至少三個相關細節 (如具體地點……)
注意：
1）詞數80左右；
2）可適當增加細節, 以使行文連貫。
Dear Li Ping, We would like to invite you to give us a talk on Chinese folk music. The talk will be on the evening of Friday, July 10th at 7:00. If you're able to come, please reply in writing to this invitation by July 2nd. Hope you can make it! Larry Smith President of Foreign Students' Club
Dear Larry,
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Yours,
Li Ping
【答案】
Dear Larry,
Thank you so much for your invitation. As a big fan of Chinese folk music, it's my great honor to share something interesting with all of you. I'm available on the Friday evening, July 10th and I'll be there on time. But I am still wondering more details about the talk. The first question I would like to know is where the talk will be held. Moreover, I will appreciate if you tell me how long the talk will last so that I can arrange the content of my talk. The last one is who will come to the talk. Thanks again for your invitation.
Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Ping
【知識點】應用文寫作
【解析】【分析】這篇作文是回復邀請函，格式方面：文章為是書信類，根據已有的郵件進行回復，開頭和結尾己經給出。審題方面：根據題目的信息可以看到，作文的要求是要根據郵件進行回復，所以需要我們對來信內容有很好地審核，提出自己的問題，從考察的內容看，這次的作文還是比較貼近生活實際和課本，平時這類的作文也有練習過，所以平時每個單元的作文練習還是要引起重視。結構方面：作文一定要注意格式和層次。感謝并接受邀請-詢問細節-再次感謝邀請。
【點評】這篇文章內容豐富、表達準確，恰當地使用了連詞、固定搭配等，使文章語意通順、上下文連貫。其中一些用法，如Thank you so much for；As a big fan of；share something interesting with；on time；be held；Moreover；how long；so that；arrange the content of；Looking forward to等，都是可圈可點之處。
2019年杭州中考真題
假定你是李平,最近收到意大利朋友 Linda 的電子郵件。以下是郵件的一部分,請你閱讀后回復,詞數 80 左右。
【答案】
Dear Linda,
Thank you so much for agreeing to show my brother around Rome. Now let me tell you something about my brother. He is thirteen years old, easy-going and humorous-we get along really well. He loves different cultures. He is interested in museums and likes trying local food.
My brother is also cute. He's of medium height with short straight black hair. He is good at Chinese kungfu, and usually wears T-shirts and jeans.
Thanks again for your help!
Yours,
Li Ping
【分析】這是一篇應用文寫作。首先認真閱讀題目所給的電子郵件，了解收到的電子郵件的內容，然后根據要求做出回復。首先感謝Linda同意帶著弟弟去羅馬觀光，接著介紹了自己弟弟的基本信息，最后對Linda表示感謝。
【點評】這篇作文行文連貫、要點齊全，利用了所學句式和一些短語，例如 He's of medium height with short straight black hair. we get along really well. 使文章增色不少。文章拼寫正確，沒有語法錯誤，邏輯通順，是一篇優秀的作文。
【限時訓練】
A
假如你是李華，為營造更好的校園英語氛圍，你班決定以學校花園為載體，開展“Create Our Outdoor Classroom”項目式學習（COOC Project），經過分組討論，你們形成了Plan A與Plan B 兩個實施方案（見下表）。請你選擇其中一個方案，用英語寫一篇短文，代表小組在英語拓展課上就你們所選方案的內容和優勢進行回報。
注意：(1)短文必須包含表中你所選方案的所有信息，并適當發揮。
(2)文中不得出現與你身份相關的信息。
(3)詞數：80~100。短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。
Dear classmates,
I’m very proud to share our plan with you today. The plan we choose is _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thank you!
【答案】
例文：
Plan A
Dear classmates,
I’m very proud to share our plan with you today. The plan we choose is naming the plants in English.
There are mainly two steps. We’ll first do a survey to find information about the plants. We can surf the Internet, or ask our teachers for help if we meet with difficulties. The second step is to design name cards. We’ll describe each kind of plants in English. To make the cards look prettier, a photo of the plant will be included in each card.
We believe this plan will make our school garden a better place to learn about nature and improve our English. I can’t wait to see it come into practice.
That’s all. Thank you!
Plan B
Dear classmates,
I’m very proud to share our plan with you today. The plan we choose is creating an English corner.
The first thing we’ll do is to choose an area for it. As you see in the map, the grassland makes a good choice. We’ll decorate it with several tables and chairs, so that we can have comfortable talks. A shelf of English books and magazines will also be put there. Then we’re going to make some rules. For example, we need to take care of things, and of course, speak English only.
I’m sure this corner will become a popular place for us to improve our spoken English, and make more friends as well.
That’s all. Thank you!
【解析】
1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“Create Our Outdoor Classroom”為主題，結合提示內容，選擇一個方案進行介紹。注意要點齊全，可適當發揮。
2.寫作指導：以Plan A為例，寫作時要以第一人稱來介紹，時態綜合使用一般現在時和一般將來時。作文可分為四段，第一段引出話題；第二段介紹具體要怎么做；第三段介紹該計劃預期的成果；第四段收尾。要保證語言連貫，無語法和拼寫錯誤。
B
畢業之際，學校英文報將舉行以“My dream job”為題的征文比賽。請你根據自己的理想，選擇下表中一個職業或自行確定另一個職業寫一篇英語短文，向校英文報投稿。
內容要點 參考詞匯
What do you want to be when you grow up a teacher a scientist
Why do you want to be a(n)… ●be good at communicating ●work with children ●be interested in science ●invent new products
How are you going to do that ●get a good education ●learn how to teach children ●study science hard ●do scientific research
Where are you going to work ●… ●…
When are you going to start ●… ●…
注意：(1)文中必須包括所給的內容要點，可適當發揮，參考詞匯僅供選擇使用；(2)文中不能出現真實的人名、校名等相關信息；
(3)詞數80～100。
My dream job
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【答案】例文：
My dream job
We all have dream jobs. As for me, I dream to be a scientist. I have always been interested in science. I want to invent new products to improve people’s life and I also hope to discover the mysteries of the world.
To be a scientist, I need to take actions right now. First, I’m going to study science really hard. Second, I plan to do scientific research. And most importantly, I’ll read as many books as possible. If I become a scientist, I will live in Beijing where I can communicate with more experts. I believe my dream will come true if I work hard.
【解析】
1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。以“我夢想的工作”為題寫一篇短文。
2.寫作指導：本文采用一般現在時，人稱以第一人稱為主。分為兩段式：第一段介紹自己夢想的工作是什么；第二段介紹自己如何讓自己的夢想實現。寫作時保持主謂一致性，做到無語法和標點錯誤。
C
最近，用手機APP買菜的人多了。手機菜場菜品豐富、洗凈配好、預約送菜上門……外國朋友對此也很感興趣。
請你以A New Use of the Mobile Phone為題，寫一篇110詞左右的英語短文介紹手機買菜帶來的便利，讓外國朋友了解中國人民生活中的這個新變化。
A New Use of the Mobile Phone
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【答案】例文：
A New Use of the Mobile Phone
Preparing for meals is tiring. You may have to spend hours getting everything ready for cooking. Now in China, new mobile apps are here to help.
These apps provide you with meat, fish, and vegetables, almost everything you need for a meal. You ,an order whenever you like and decide on the time for them to arrive. If you like. they can be washed, cut and packed for a certain dish. Some apps even guide you to cook step by step, making cooking easier.
Compared with the traditional way of going to the market, mobile apps save your time and energy. With such a new use of the mobile phone, you can enjoy a more relaxing life.
【詳解】
這是一篇給材料作文。要求以A New Use of the Mobile Phone為題，寫一篇英語短文介紹手機買菜帶來的便利，讓外國朋友了解中國人民生活中的這個新變化。首先認真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點；然后根據提示內容，列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達；然后緊扣要點，動筆寫作。在寫作時，注意連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性，要層次清楚，要點分明，中心突出。同時要注意語言的表述應該符合語法的結構，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的復合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細心復核檢查，確保正確無誤。
D
你校將舉辦英語文化節, 現向全校學生征求活動意見。假如你是李華, 請用英語給負責人寫一封書信, 從學校的活動意向表中推薦2—3個活動并闡明理由。
□sing English songs □read English novels □watch English movies □tell English stories □make English posters □perform English sitcoms
注意：（1）書信內容要點應選自上表, 可適當發揮; （2）詞數: 80—100;（3）書信開頭和結尾已給出, 不計入總詞數。
Dear sir,
For the coming English festival, I have some suggestions.
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I hope my suggestions will be helpful. Thank you!
Yours
Li Hua
【答案】例文：
本文是一篇應用文，為書信作文。要求一李華的名義給英語文化節的負責人寫一封信，從學校的活動意向表中推薦2—3個活動并闡明理由。此文時態主要為"一般現在時"和"一般將來時"；寫作要點已給出，要注意不要遺漏材料中的內容，并適當增加細節。
寫此類作文，要注意運用正確的信件格式。結合所給的題目要求，抓住重點進行分析，做到條理清晰。注意單詞拼寫，以及句子的流暢性和完整性。寫作步驟可以分三步：①第一步，表明寫作意圖。借用"英語文化節"來引出下文中對推薦的活動的介紹；②第二步，具體闡述寫作內容。從"看英文電影、講英文故事和演英語情景喜劇"三方面入手，重點介紹推薦這些活動的理由；③第三步，書寫結語。希望自己的建議能夠被采納。
可用的亮點詞匯：①not only...but also 不但。.....而且；②as well as 和；③share sth with sb 與某人分享某物；④at the same time 同時。可用的高分句型有：①Not only can we enjoy the performance of the actors, but we can also learn English in a fun way.（倒裝句) ；②Also, I recommend telling English stories as a way to celebrate the festival, by which we can enrich our knowledge as well as share favorite stories with each other in English.（定語從句）；③The reason is that it helps to improve our spoken English and acting skills. （表語從句）。
E
你校英語俱樂部將舉行"勞動教育"主題活動，現向全校學生征求活動建議。假如你是 李華，請根據下圖內容用英語給負責人寫一封書信，談談自己的勞動經歷并提供建議。
注意：1.短文必須包括上圖所有要點，可適當發揮。2.補充內容至少各一條； 3. 詞數：80-100;4.文章的開頭僅供選擇使用，不計入總詞數。
Dear sir,
Labor is a very important part of our life.Here is my experience and some advice.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文：
Dear sir.
Labor is a very important part of our life.Here is my experience and some advice. I usually helpwith housework,such as doing the dishes,cleaning my bedroom,sweeping the floor and so on.Helping with chores not only helps me form good habits,but also helps to develop my life skills.
Also,sharing with housework can help our parents free from heavy chores after work.
For the coming Labor Education Theme Activity,I have some suggestions.I think holdingcompetitions about labor skills is an excellent idea.We can encourage students to clean up anddecorate our school as well.Students will learn about the importance of hard work and the valueof labor
這是一篇應用文。要求按照所給內容用英語給負責人寫一封書信，談談自己的勞動經歷并提供建議。寫作時應遵循以下步驟：第一步，開篇點題，介紹勞動的重要性，并引入自己的經驗和建議；第二步，介紹自己所做的家務勞動及收獲；第三步，對主題活動提出建議并總結。根據材料內容可知本文主要用一般現在時，寫作要點已給出，寫作時應注意文章邏輯通順，書寫工整，并突出重點。
這篇文章內容切題，意思連貫，表達清楚、完整，時態運用靈活準確。一些固定短語，如form good habits養成好習慣；clean up 打掃干凈；the importance of……的重要性等運用較為得體，表達比較準確。下列句式增加了文章亮點，使文章更加流暢自然。如：Helping with chores not only helps me form good habits, but also helps to develop my life skills. (動名詞作主語，not only…but also…連接并列成分)；I think holding competitions about labor skills is an excellent idea. (省略that的賓語從句)。
F
假設你是李華，請結合表格內容，用英語郵件向你的美國筆友 Mike 介紹你校本學期開設的三門勞動課程及其目的，并談談你選擇的一門勞動課程及選擇理由。
School Labor（勞動） Courses The course you choose and your reason
Courses Aims
Vegetable-planting To study plants and know about farming ……
Cooking course：making dumplings & Zongzi To learn about traditional Chinese cultures
Chair-repairing To learn and practice new skills
要求： （1）必須包括表格中所有要點內容，并適當發揮； （2）詞數：100左右（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數）； （3）不得使用真實姓名、校名等有關信息。
Dear Mike，
How is everything going？
This term，we have three labor courses at school.
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Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】例文：
Dear Mike，
How is everything going？
This term，we have three labor courses at school.We have three fascinating options：Vegetable-planting，which aims to study plants and know about farming；Cooking course：making dumplings and Zongzi，which aims to learn about traditional Chinese cultures；and Chair-repairing，designed to learn and practice new skills.
Among these courses，I've chosen the Cooking course：making dumplings and Zongzi.（介紹選擇的課程）This choice was motivated by my interest in Chinese culture and cuisine.Through this course，I hope to not only learn how to make these delicious traditional dishes but also gain a deeper understanding of their cultural significance. I believe that this experience will enrich my cultural knowledge and enhance my appreciation for traditional cuisine.
Yours， Li Hua
本題是一篇應用文寫作，要求考生以李華的身份寫一篇英文郵件給美國筆友 Mike介紹學校本學期開設的三門勞動課程及其目的，并說明自己選擇的勞動課程及其理由。寫作背景：本學期李華的學校新開設了三門勞動課程。內容包括：1. 介紹本學期開設的三門勞動課程及其目的；2. 介紹自己選擇的勞動課程。注意：1.寫作詞數應為100左右；2.表格要點內容必須全部包括，可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；3. 不能使用真實的名稱；4. 時態為"一般現在時"。本題對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點都需要包括。寫作時注意準確運用時態，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使作文顯得更有檔次。
本篇書面表達表達上要點齊全，上下文連貫，使用了一定數量的句式結構，讓句子表達更加生動傳神，同時使用了較多的高級詞匯和固定短語，提高了文章的檔次，體現了對英語書面表達熟練的駕馭能力。例如：We have three fascinating options：Vegetable-planting，which aims to
study plants and know about farming.（運用了which引導的非限制性定語從句）； Cooking
course：making dumplings and Zongzi which aims to learn about traditional Chinese
cultures；（運用了which引導的非限制性定語從句）； Through this course，I hope to not only
learn how to make these delicious traditional dishes but also gain a deeper understanding
of their cultural significance.（運用了not only...but also 連接的并列結構）； I believe that this
experience will enrich my cultural knowledge and enhance my appreciation for traditional
cuisine.（運用了that引導的賓語從句）。
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專題八 書面表達
書面表達是初中英語學業水平考試中最能直觀地檢驗學生英語運用能力的題型，主要測試學生綜合運用所學語言知識和英語表達的能力，即考查學生運用所掌握的詞、句、語法、篇章結構等知識與技能表達觀點、思想和情感，進行書面交流的能力。可以較為全面地測試考生的語言基本功。
2019-2024年近六年浙江中考書面表達：應用文——回復郵件
年份 內容 體裁 題材
2024 回復Candy的郵件，向她推薦一所合適的學校。 應用文 社會服務與人際溝通
2023（杭州） 回復Jack的郵件，介紹來杭州需要帶的東西以及送什么禮物 應用文 社會服務與人際溝通
2022（杭州） 回復交換生Jack的郵件，介紹學校有趣的活動與中國變化 應用文 生活與學習
2021（杭州） 回復Matt的郵件，接受參加聚會的邀請 應用文 社會服務與人際溝通
2020（杭州） 回復Larry的郵件，接受給留學生做中國民樂講座的邀請并詢問細節 應用文 社會服務與人際溝通
2019（杭州） 回復Linda的郵件，介紹自己即將去羅馬的兄弟 應用文 社會服務與人際溝通
回復郵件
書面表達題的話題通常與學生的學習和生活緊密關聯，體裁有生活應用類，人物、事件等故事類，文化傳統、祖國建設等介紹類，對圖表、流程圖等進行描述的說明類，或對某一話題、事件等發表自己觀點的夾敘夾議類，等等。題目的任務表現形式多樣，一般有明確的任務要求、必要的支持性信息和限定條件。支持性信息有圖畫、圖表、提綱、提示詞等。學生應根據寫作要求和限定條件，利用所給的支持性信息，盡自己所學、所能，將自己的英語水平展示出來。
試題一般都提供一定的情景內容，內容多與學生日常生活實際相聯系。提供情景內容的形式有材料、提綱、圖標或圖畫等。試題也注重考查考生表達個人思想、再現生活經歷、描述周邊人物和事件以及發表相關觀點的能力。近年來，應用文是考查的重點，其涵蓋面也十分廣泛，包括活動安排、調查報告、倡議書、感謝信、書面通知、自薦應聘、請假條、規則介紹等方面。
具體要求如下：
1.緊扣主題，覆蓋內容要點，行文連貫，條理清楚，邏輯嚴密，格式正確，符合英語表達習慣。
2.詞匯豐富，語言優美，無明顯的句法、詞法、詞義、拼寫錯誤。
3.長度符合要求，以寫約110詞的任務要求為例，詞數盡量不少于90詞或多于130詞；書寫要工整、規范。
仔細審題，明確任務
仔細閱讀書面表達題的任務，根據所提供的支持性信息，如圖表、提綱等，明確寫作要求，確定題材和體裁。
厘清要點，列出提綱
根據所給圖表或提示，厘清文章寫作要點，搭好作文框架；再三檢查所列提綱是否已涵蓋所需要點，是否可以達成寫作目的。
撰寫初稿，連貫表達
依據提綱內容，用自己能熟練運用的詞語和句型等，撰寫初稿。在擬初稿過程中，除了確保作文內容涵蓋所有要點外，也需關注文章表達的連貫性和邏輯的嚴密性。同時還需注意語言的地道性，符合英語的表達習慣，避免中文思維。
回顧全文，修改潤色
仔細閱讀所寫文章初稿，檢查內容是否充實，句子的結構是否正確，句子是否通順，文章格式是否符合要求，單詞拼法、標點符號及大小寫是否正確等。必要時，可運用豐富的詞匯和句型來完善文章。
浙江省中考英語書面表達評分標準如下(以滿分20分為例)：
采分點 滿分 可給分值
1.內容充實，覆蓋要點7 (內容、要點) 7 6~7分:描述所有信息，內容合理、豐富 3~5分:描述了大部分信息，內容比較合理 1~2分:描述了小部分信息，內容不合理 0分: 沒有作答或描述內容與主題無關
2.用詞適切，語法正確 (詞匯、語法、句型) 7 6~7分:用詞適切，句型變化多樣且有效，完全 或基本沒有語言錯誤 3~5分:用詞基本適切，句型較為單一，有少量 語言錯誤，但不影響理解 1~2分:有較多語言錯誤，一定程度上影響理解 0分: 有大量語言錯誤，影響了理解
3.結構緊湊，意思連貫(語意、連詞、指代) 4 3~4分:行文連貫，連接詞使用恰當，指代清晰 1~2分:行文不夠連貫，連接詞使用不夠恰當， 指代不夠清晰 0分: 沒有連貫意識
4.書寫規范，詞數適宜(標點符號、大小寫、詞數) 2 2分:大小寫、標點正確，詞數達標， 書寫規范整潔 1分:大小寫、標點有部分錯誤，詞數達標，書寫 尚可辨認 0分:大小寫、標點錯誤較多，語言應用不規范， 詞數嚴重不足，書寫難以辨認
1.豐富詞匯、靈活表達
在寫作時應盡量不要反復使用相同的詞匯，以避免文章看起來枯燥、呆板。英語中相同的意思往往有不同的表達方式。用稍難單詞或短語代替一些簡單、常見的表達，可以使文章更生動、更有表現力。
如: You should try your best to use the new words in your daily life.
升格→You are supposed to make every effort to use the new words in your daily life.
2.擴寫句子
寫作的時候，我們常遇到寫完主謂賓就不知道如何往下寫的情況。這時可以運用一定的方法對句子進行擴展，以表達更完整、更具體的意思。
添加定語對名詞進行限制或說明，如形容詞、介詞短語、分詞短語、定語從句等。
如: He is a student.
升格1→He is a hard-working student.
升格2→He is a hard-working student(studying)in Sunshine School.
升格3→He is a hard-working student in Sunshine School who always gets good grades,
添加狀語表示時間、地點、方式、程度、目的、原因、結果等，如副詞、不定式、分詞、狀語從句等。
如: We should take good care of our eyes.
升格(擴寫原因)-We should take good care of our eyes because eyes are the windows to the soul.
You should communicate with your parents often.
升格(擴寫目的)→You should communicate with your parents often to get along well with them.
There is nothing to worry about the exam.
升格(擴寫條件)→There is nothing to worry about the exam as long as you prepare well for it.
添加同位語，如名詞、名詞短語等。
如: Dunhuang is an amazing city.
(添加同位語)→Dunhuang is an amazing city,one of the main stops on the Silk Road.
添加例子作補充說明，如用like，such as列舉事物或用for example舉例說明等。
如: We should pay more attention to personal health.
升格(擴寫事例)→We should pay more attention to personal health such as wearing the mask and keeping one metre away from others.
Bad eyesight brings trouble to our life and study.
升格(舉例說明)→Bad eyesight brings trouble to our life and study. For example.if we leave our glasses at home,we can't see the blackboard clearly in class.
3.巧用連接詞
恰當地運用連接詞把詞與詞、短語與短語、句與句連接起來，這樣可以使語言表達更加準確、流暢。連接詞功用廣泛，有表示并列或選擇關系的，有表示轉折關系的，有表示因果關系的，有表示條件或讓步的，有表示目的或結果的，在選用時要注意正確使用。
4.運用高分句式
寫作中恰當運用固定句式不僅可以避免語法錯誤，還可以使表達更加多樣化，從而使文意更加生動。如it代替動詞不定式作形式主語或賓語，“make十賓語十賓語補足語”，動名詞短語作主語等，此外，靈活改變句子的表達方式，把介詞短語、動詞不定式或副詞等放在句子的開頭，也能使句子形式更加多樣。
5.行文連貫
行文連貫是衡量書面表達水平的重要標志之一，但很多同學在寫作中卻往往忽視這一點。如何做到行文連貫呢？我們可以恰當使用連接詞，尤其是在引出下文、承上搞述、結束話題和總結話題時使用，使全文條理清楚、結構緊湊。
6.巧用諺語，妙筆生花
寫作中巧用格言、諺語，可以豐富文章內容，增強說服力，為文章增色添彩，同時也能展示考生強大的語言積累水平。
【真題在線】
20234年浙江中考真題
假如你是李華，你的英國好友Candy暑期將來中國游學。請根據以下相關信息，寫一封郵件，向她推薦一所合適的學校。
I like sports, and I’m interested in traditional Chinese art. Chinese food is great.
My cousin’s school ◆in the city center ◆a good ping-pong team ◆hand-made food classes My school ◆in the countryside ◆a new sports center ◆local art clubs
注意：
（1）郵件需包含所選學校至少兩點相關信息，可適當發揮；
（2）文中不得出現真實姓名、學校等信息；
（3）詞數80左右：郵件的首尾和第一句已給出，不計入總詞數。
Dear Candy
I’m excited to know that you are coming to China soon.
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Yours,
Li Hua
2023年杭州中考真題
假定你是李平，請你對英國朋友Jack的郵件進行回復。詞數80左右，可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。
TO LiPing@ SUBJECT C U soon! Hi Li Ping Next week I’ll be with you in Hangzhou. I can’t wait! It’s going to be so cool! We can do lots of exciting things together! I need to pack for my trip. What should I bring with me Is there a swimming pool or tennis center nearby I’d like to get you a gift from where I live. What would you like me to get you I’m so excited about the trip! See you soon. Jack
Hi Jack,
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Li Ping
2022年杭州中考真題
假定你是李平, 請閱讀以下郵件, 接受邀請并回復。詞數 80 左右, 可適當增加細節, 以使行文連貫。
To: LiPing@ Subject: Exchange Visit! Hi there, Li Ping! My name’s Jack and I’m going to be at your school for the exchange visit next month. I’m really excited about it! Well, why am I writing right now For one thing, I really want to know something about the interesting activities at your school, so could you introduce one of them Also, I am interested in Chinese culture. So what do you suggest I do after school! Take care and hope to hear from you soon. Jack
Dear Jack,
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2021年杭州中考真題
假定你是李平，請閱讀以下郵件，接受邀請并回復。詞數 80 左右，可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。
Hi Li Ping， How is everything going with you？Next week my cousin Mike is staying with me We're having a party next Saturday. Please come!We'll have lots of drinks. But if you remember，can you bring some Chinese food？The party will be starting at 6 pm. What time do you think you'll be coming？Ill probably need one or two people to help me tidy up after the party. Do you think you'll be able to stay and help？ Anyway，hope you can make it. Please write back to tell me if you can come or not. All he best， Matt
Dear Matt，
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Li Ping
2020年杭州中考真題
假定你是李平，請閱讀以下郵件并回復。內容包括接受邀請并詢問至少三個相關細節 (如具體地點……)
注意：
1）詞數80左右；
2）可適當增加細節, 以使行文連貫。
Dear Li Ping, We would like to invite you to give us a talk on Chinese folk music. The talk will be on the evening of Friday, July 10th at 7:00. If you're able to come, please reply in writing to this invitation by July 2nd. Hope you can make it! Larry Smith President of Foreign Students' Club
Dear Larry,
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Yours,
Li Ping
2019年杭州中考真題
假定你是李平,最近收到意大利朋友 Linda 的電子郵件。以下是郵件的一部分,請你閱讀后回復,詞數 80 左右。
【限時訓練】
A
假如你是李華，為營造更好的校園英語氛圍，你班決定以學校花園為載體，開展“Create Our Outdoor Classroom”項目式學習（COOC Project），經過分組討論，你們形成了Plan A與Plan B 兩個實施方案（見下表）。請你選擇其中一個方案，用英語寫一篇短文，代表小組在英語拓展課上就你們所選方案的內容和優勢進行回報。
注意：(1)短文必須包含表中你所選方案的所有信息，并適當發揮。
(2)文中不得出現與你身份相關的信息。
(3)詞數：80~100。短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。
Dear classmates,
I’m very proud to share our plan with you today. The plan we choose is _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thank you!
B
畢業之際，學校英文報將舉行以“My dream job”為題的征文比賽。請你根據自己的理想，選擇下表中一個職業或自行確定另一個職業寫一篇英語短文，向校英文報投稿。
內容要點 參考詞匯
What do you want to be when you grow up a teacher a scientist
Why do you want to be a(n)… ●be good at communicating ●work with children ●be interested in science ●invent new products
How are you going to do that ●get a good education ●learn how to teach children ●study science hard ●do scientific research
Where are you going to work ●… ●…
When are you going to start ●… ●…
注意：(1)文中必須包括所給的內容要點，可適當發揮，參考詞匯僅供選擇使用；(2)文中不能出現真實的人名、校名等相關信息；
(3)詞數80～100。
My dream job
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C
最近，用手機APP買菜的人多了。手機菜場菜品豐富、洗凈配好、預約送菜上門……外國朋友對此也很感興趣。
請你以A New Use of the Mobile Phone為題，寫一篇110詞左右的英語短文介紹手機買菜帶來的便利，讓外國朋友了解中國人民生活中的這個新變化。
A New Use of the Mobile Phone
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D
你校將舉辦英語文化節, 現向全校學生征求活動意見。假如你是李華, 請用英語給負責人寫一封書信, 從學校的活動意向表中推薦2—3個活動并闡明理由。
□sing English songs □read English novels □watch English movies □tell English stories □make English posters □perform English sitcoms
注意：（1）書信內容要點應選自上表, 可適當發揮; （2）詞數: 80—100;（3）書信開頭和結尾已給出, 不計入總詞數。
Dear sir,
For the coming English festival, I have some suggestions.
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I hope my suggestions will be helpful. Thank you!
Yours
Li Hua
E
你校英語俱樂部將舉行"勞動教育"主題活動，現向全校學生征求活動建議。假如你是 李華，請根據下圖內容用英語給負責人寫一封書信，談談自己的勞動經歷并提供建議。
注意：1.短文必須包括上圖所有要點，可適當發揮。2.補充內容至少各一條； 3. 詞數：80-100;4.文章的開頭僅供選擇使用，不計入總詞數。
Dear sir,
Labor is a very important part of our life.Here is my experience and some advice.
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Yours,
Li Hua
F
假設你是李華，請結合表格內容，用英語郵件向你的美國筆友 Mike 介紹你校本學期開設的三門勞動課程及其目的，并談談你選擇的一門勞動課程及選擇理由。
School Labor（勞動） Courses The course you choose and your reason
Courses Aims
Vegetable-planting To study plants and know about farming ……
Cooking course：making dumplings & Zongzi To learn about traditional Chinese cultures
Chair-repairing To learn and practice new skills
要求： （1）必須包括表格中所有要點內容，并適當發揮； （2）詞數：100左右（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數）； （3）不得使用真實姓名、校名等有關信息。
Dear Mike，
How is everything going？
This term，we have three labor courses at school.
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Yours，
Li Hua
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