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2025中考英語書面表達(dá)之電子郵件專項(xiàng)復(fù)習(xí)講義
寫作思路
題型 考查頻次 命題點(diǎn)撥
書面表達(dá)之電子郵件 10年10考 電子郵件和書信類文章按其內(nèi)容可分為普通書信、感謝信、申請(qǐng)信、推薦信、邀請(qǐng)信、道歉信等多種類型，因其行文格式基本統(tǒng)一。 在進(jìn)行電子郵件寫作時(shí)，我們可以采取三步走的方法: 1.與聯(lián)系人寒暄，表明寫作意圖，引出話題。若與收信人較親密，可以直呼其名，然后簡(jiǎn)單說明寫信目的:若與聯(lián)系人較為陌生，可以先說明自己的身份再引出寫信的目的。 2.詳細(xì)闡述郵件內(nèi)容，主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。內(nèi)容即寫信人具體要說的話。可以是通知、致謝、敘事、致賀、邀請(qǐng)、提建議等，可以是一件事，也可以是幾件事。 3.首尾呼應(yīng)，再次點(diǎn)明主旨，表示問候。簡(jiǎn)單概括郵件的主題，表達(dá)對(duì)收信人的美好祝愿，再次表明自己的寫作意圖，呼應(yīng)開頭，使文章結(jié)構(gòu)更加嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)。
思維導(dǎo)圖
方法探究
探究一 必備句式
必備句型
一、開頭常 用句式
( 1) How have you been recently 你近來怎樣
(2) How are you getting on with your English 你的英語學(xué)得怎么樣
(3) I wonder if everything is going well with you.我想知道你最近是否一切順利。
(4) I haven't heard from you for ages.我很久沒有收到你的來信了。
(5) I'm writing to you for some help.我寫郵件給你是希望得到你的幫助。
(6) I am sorry for delaying the e-mail so long.耽誤了這么久才給你回郵件，我很抱歉。
(7 ) Thanks for your e-mail.謝謝你的郵件。
(8) I'm glad to receive your e-mail.很高興收到你的郵件。
(9) You must be surprised to receive my e-mail收到我的郵件你一定很意外。
二、常用于闡達(dá)事件或提出建議、邀請(qǐng)等。
(1) Something bad happened to me有件倒害事發(fā)生在我身上。
(2)1am going to tell you something serious.我想告訴你一件根戶肅的事情。
(3) 1 would like to share my success on the competition with you.
我想和你分享我比賽得獎(jiǎng)的消息。
(4) The party is on Saturday morning聚會(huì)在周六早上。
(5)1 wan to invite you to have dinner with me this Friday.這個(gè)星期五我想邀請(qǐng)你共進(jìn)晚餐。
(6) Would you like to join a in the picnic 你愿意和我們一起野餐嗎
(7) I have got 3 pieces of advice for you, just as follows:
我有三點(diǎn)建議給你，正如下文所示:
(8) You should follow thee 3 steps. Firstly, . Secondly, ... And last, ...
你應(yīng)該按照這三個(gè)步驟，第一.......第二......第三......
結(jié)尾常用句式
(1)1 would be grateful if you could provide me with some information.
如果你能給我提供一些信息，我會(huì)很感激的。
(2) 1 wonder if you could help me out of it.我想知道你能否幫我一把。
(3)1 hope that you can show me what t0 do next我希望你能告訴我下一步該怎么做。
(4) I'm looking forward”hearing from you我期待收到你的回信。
(5) Please write me back as soon as possible請(qǐng)盡快給我回信。
(6) I hope to see you at the party我希望能在聚會(huì)上見到你。
(7) Please take good care of yourself and have a good time請(qǐng)照顧好自己，并玩得開心。
(8) Please do let me know if you have decided it 如果你決定了，一定要讓我知道。
(9) Thank you again for your help.再次感謝你的幫助。
(10) I would appreciate it if you could write me back.如果你能回信，我會(huì)很感激的。
(11) I need to go to school, so I have to quit it.我要去學(xué)校了，所以只能擱筆了。
探究二 解題策略
1.認(rèn)真審題，確定體裁、時(shí)態(tài)、人稱。
書信類文章有著自己獨(dú)特的格式，寫信人的地址及發(fā)信日期寫在右上角，收信人的姓名及地址寫在信紙的左上方；年份應(yīng)該完全寫出月份一般不要簡(jiǎn)寫；書信的在稱呼下一行開始；稱呼要頂格寫，末尾要用逗號(hào)，而不是冒號(hào)；結(jié)尾敬語應(yīng)該另起一行開始；敬語yours sincerely, faithfully等之后，必須寫上逗號(hào)。
書信中的人稱應(yīng)以第一人稱為主，但也不排除表述時(shí)的靈活使用。時(shí)態(tài)的運(yùn)用比較靈活，要根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容選用。書信寫作的基本要求：準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)潔和清楚。一般來說書信的段落短、句子短、用詞要平易。
2.構(gòu)思提綱，列出寫作要點(diǎn)。
　　信件類文章一般要含有稱謂、正文、結(jié)尾客套語、簽名，其中正文部分是信件的主體，一般來說可以分為三個(gè)部分來寫作。
電子郵件和書信類文章正文
內(nèi)容 經(jīng)典句式
開頭 稱謂 Dear Sir, /Dear Lady, / Dear headmaster,
[] [] 正文 第一段 問候并交待寫信目的[] How is it going I’m writing to introduce …… I am very glad to get your letter and I would like to …… You asked me about(problem, question in your letter, now let me give you some advice.[] In reply your letter about ……[]
第二段 圍繞信件主題進(jìn)行詳細(xì)的說明、記敘、建議或論證 這一部分要根據(jù)信件的內(nèi)容進(jìn)行寫作，常用句式可參考前面幾個(gè)專題的內(nèi)容
第三段 結(jié)束語 I hope to have a letter from you before long. Give my best wishes to you. Wishing your business ever successful！ Hope you are healthy. Please write to me as soon as possible. Please remember me to your whole family. Looking forward to your next visit to China.
結(jié)尾 簽名 Yours, /Yours sincerely, /Your student, /Your son,
　　
3.遣詞造句。
寫作的下一個(gè)步驟，是根據(jù)確定的提綱和要點(diǎn)，選擇適當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯造句。在造句時(shí)，初習(xí)寫作者可以按照由簡(jiǎn)單句到復(fù)合句、特殊句式的寫作思路進(jìn)行寫作。在保證句子基本正確的基礎(chǔ)上，再將簡(jiǎn)單句潤(rùn)色為稍為復(fù)雜的句式。
4.組句成篇。
　　最后，我們可以再讀文章，檢查是否存在語法、拼寫錯(cuò)誤，并在句與句之間增加些銜接、過渡詞匯，組句成篇。
典型練習(xí)
1．（2024·河北唐山·三模）假如你是李明，下周你和朋友們準(zhǔn)備舉行一次野餐，打算邀請(qǐng)你們學(xué)校的外教Tom參加。請(qǐng)你用英語寫一封郵件，告訴他野餐的時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)、活動(dòng)內(nèi)容、以及需要準(zhǔn)備什么。
參考詞語：park, take photos, game, fly kites, sing, food, drinks
提示：1. When and where are you going to have a picnic
2. What are you going to do
3. What do you advise Tom to prepare for the picnic
要求：
1. 短文須包含所有提示內(nèi)容。
2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名或地名。
3. 詞數(shù)：80詞左右。開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Tom,
How is it going
I’m writing to invite you to our picnic.
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I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Ming
2．（2024·江蘇無錫·三模）假設(shè)你是無錫某所中學(xué)的莉莉，你的英國(guó)筆友珍妮想了解中國(guó)學(xué)生課外閱讀的情況。根據(jù)下圖提示，給她回一封電子郵件。
注意事項(xiàng)：
1. 回復(fù)的郵件須包括所給內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，要求語句通順，意思連貫，并展開合理想象，作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2. 流程圖中的提示為非限定性內(nèi)容，僅供參考；
3. 詞數(shù)在100個(gè)左右，回復(fù)郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
4. 回復(fù)的郵件中不得使用真實(shí)的個(gè)人姓名或?qū)W校名稱。
5. 郵件必須寫在答題卡指定的位置上。
Dear Jenny,
Thank you for your email. I would like to tell you something about
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Lily
3．（2024·福建廈門·二模）假定你是李華，你的美國(guó)朋友Lily對(duì)中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)手工藝品很感興趣。請(qǐng)你結(jié)合以下圖表信息，用英語寫一封電子郵件，向她介紹上周你校舉辦的藝術(shù)節(jié)系列活動(dòng)之“體驗(yàn)手工藝品制作，感受千年藝術(shù)之美”，分享活動(dòng)的過程和感受，并邀請(qǐng)她有機(jī)會(huì)來你校體驗(yàn)傳統(tǒng)手工藝品制作。詞數(shù)80左右。
Traditional Chinese handicrafts (手工藝品) Materials provided
Kite bamboo, paper, string (線), glue (膠水)
Paper cutting paper with different colors, scissors
Chinese clay art clay, paint
要求：
1.必須包含所有提示信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
2.不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名、人名等相關(guān)信息；
2.注意緊扣主題， 內(nèi)容完整，意思連貫，符合邏輯，書寫整齊。
Dear Lily,
I’m happy to know that you’re interested in traditional Chinese handicrafts.
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Yours,
Li Hua
4．（2024·福建廈門·三模）假定你是李華，你的美國(guó)筆友Jim寫信咨詢你們學(xué)校的社團(tuán)活動(dòng)情況。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下調(diào)查結(jié)果用英文給他回封電子郵件。詞數(shù)80左右。
要點(diǎn)包括：
1.簡(jiǎn)要分析調(diào)查結(jié)果；
2.介紹一次難忘的社團(tuán)活動(dòng)并說明原因；
3.邀請(qǐng)他來學(xué)校體驗(yàn)社團(tuán)活動(dòng)。
注意事項(xiàng)：
1.必須包含所有提示信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
2.意思清楚，表達(dá)通順，行文連貫，書寫規(guī)范；
3.請(qǐng)勿在文中使用真實(shí)的人名、校名及地名。
Dear Jim,
I’m glad to hear from you. Our school has set up different kinds of clubs to enrich our school life. We did a survey. Here are the results.
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Yours,
Li Hua
5．（2024·天津·二模）假如你是李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，給你的筆友David用英文寫一封郵件，向他講述你所看到的一個(gè)感人故事。
（1）一個(gè)下雪天，李華去超市購(gòu)物。
（2）看見一位老人在超市旁賣菜。
（3）超市老板出來，想要趕走老人。
（4）一位叔叔過來買下了所有蔬菜。
（5）你認(rèn)為……
參考詞匯：老板boss
要求：
（1）詞數(shù)：80～100個(gè)。
（2）開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
（3）要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
Dear David,
How is everything going I’d like to tell you a moving story I saw a few days ago.
On a snowy day,
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Yours,
Li Hua
6．（2024·浙江杭州·二模）假如你是Li Ping，你班在校英語戲劇節(jié)(English Drama Festival)中獲得一等獎(jiǎng)，外教Mark打算為此慶祝，并委托你調(diào)查同學(xué)們喜歡的慶祝方式。請(qǐng)根據(jù)調(diào)查結(jié)果，給外教寫一封郵件，并談?wù)勀愕慕ㄗh。
要求：
1.內(nèi)容包括：表達(dá)感謝、提出個(gè)人建議、說明理由；
2.郵件不得使用真實(shí)的人名、校名；
3.詞數(shù)100左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出（不計(jì)詞數(shù)）。
Dear Mark,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Ping
7．（2024·河北石家莊·二模）你校正在進(jìn)行特色課程的選課活動(dòng)，假如你是交換生Henry，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表的提示給負(fù)責(zé)的李老師寫一封電子郵件，寫出你所選擇的一門特色課程以及選擇該課程的3個(gè)理由，并提出你對(duì)該課程的希望。
Special Courses
basketball improve your health encourage you to work in groups…
English Film Appreciation get your pronunciation better open up your eyes…
Chinese Painting be interested in Chinese culture learn stories of famous painters…
注意：
（1）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息；
（2）文中具體內(nèi)容可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
（3）詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右(開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。
Dear Mr. Li,
I am Henry from Class Two, Grade Nine. As for the special course, I choose
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Henry
8．（2024·浙江寧波·一模）假如你是李華，為了提高學(xué)生對(duì)科學(xué)的興趣，你校上周五在學(xué)校體育館舉行了校園科學(xué)節(jié)活動(dòng)。你的英國(guó)筆友Tom 得知后，發(fā)郵件向你咨詢科學(xué)節(jié)相關(guān)情況。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)郵件內(nèi)容給他回復(fù) 一封郵件，并談?wù)勀愕母惺?
注意：
(1)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名；
(2)需包含郵件中劃線的所有要點(diǎn)提示；
(3)詞數(shù)80左右，郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
(4)參考詞匯： attend a science lecture、make science works、give a science speech
To : LiHua@ Subject: Science Festival Dear Li Hua. How is it going You know I am quite interested in science and I think it is important for the development of a country. Yesterday, I was told that there was a fantastic science festival in your school. Could you please tell me something about it When and where was the festival held Why did your school hold the festival What activities did you take part in Which one was the most interesting to you And how do you like the festival Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Tom
Dear Tom,
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Yours,
Li Hua
參考答案
1．（2024·河北唐山·三模）假如你是李明，下周你和朋友們準(zhǔn)備舉行一次野餐，打算邀請(qǐng)你們學(xué)校的外教Tom參加。請(qǐng)你用英語寫一封郵件，告訴他野餐的時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)、活動(dòng)內(nèi)容、以及需要準(zhǔn)備什么。
參考詞語：park, take photos, game, fly kites, sing, food, drinks
提示：1. When and where are you going to have a picnic
2. What are you going to do
3. What do you advise Tom to prepare for the picnic
要求：
1. 短文須包含所有提示內(nèi)容。
2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名或地名。
3. 詞數(shù)：80詞左右。開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Tom,
How is it going
I’m writing to invite you to our picnic.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Ming
【答案】例文
Dear Tom,
How is it going
I’m writing to invite you to our picnic. My friends and I are going to have a picnic this Sunday at the park near our school. We are going to meet at our school gate at 9 o’clock in the morning. In the park, we are going to take some photos, play games, fly kites, and sing songs. You can take some sandwiches and some bottles of water with you for lunch.
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Ming
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一封電子郵件；
②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)以“一般將來時(shí)”為主；
③提示：根據(jù)所給提示完成寫作，不能遺漏信息，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，突出寫作重點(diǎn)。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，詢問對(duì)方近況，表明寫作意圖；
第二步，具體介紹野餐的相關(guān)情況；
第三步，書寫結(jié)語，期待收到對(duì)方的回復(fù)。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①have a picnic野餐
②take photos照相
③fly kites放風(fēng)箏
④look forward to期盼
[高分句型]
①You can take some sandwiches and some bottles of water with you for lunch. (and并列句)
2．（2024·江蘇無錫·三模）假設(shè)你是無錫某所中學(xué)的莉莉，你的英國(guó)筆友珍妮想了解中國(guó)學(xué)生課外閱讀的情況。根據(jù)下圖提示，給她回一封電子郵件。
注意事項(xiàng)：
1. 回復(fù)的郵件須包括所給內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，要求語句通順，意思連貫，并展開合理想象，作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2. 流程圖中的提示為非限定性內(nèi)容，僅供參考；
3. 詞數(shù)在100個(gè)左右，回復(fù)郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
4. 回復(fù)的郵件中不得使用真實(shí)的個(gè)人姓名或?qū)W校名稱。
5. 郵件必須寫在答題卡指定的位置上。
Dear Jenny,
Thank you for your email. I would like to tell you something about
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Lily
【答案】例文
Dear Jenny,
Thank you for your email. I would like to tell you something about the after-class reading in our school.
In fact, most students in our school haven’t realized the importance of after-class reading. Some students prefer comic books to classic reading materials. Here are the reasons. Some students are too busy with after-school classes to do after-school reading. Some students haven’t formed a good habit of reading. Others have so little interest in reading that they don’t spend time reading at all.
In the past few years, I have read many world classics. I have learned a lot from the books. In my opinion, books can open up a new world to us. So I suggest that everyone should have the habit of after-school reading.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Lily
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文為一封電子郵件；
②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)；
③提示：郵件開頭及寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，可適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出重點(diǎn)。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，表明寫作意圖；
第二步，介紹中國(guó)學(xué)生課外閱讀的現(xiàn)狀，接著介紹學(xué)生不喜歡閱讀的原因；
第三步，介紹自己的經(jīng)歷和建議。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①in fact事實(shí)上
②prefer…to…更喜歡……
③too…to…太……以至于不能……
④in my opinion在我看來
[高分句型]
①Others have so little interest in reading that they don’t spend time reading at all.（so…that…引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語從句）
3．（2024·福建廈門·二模）假定你是李華，你的美國(guó)朋友Lily對(duì)中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)手工藝品很感興趣。請(qǐng)你結(jié)合以下圖表信息，用英語寫一封電子郵件，向她介紹上周你校舉辦的藝術(shù)節(jié)系列活動(dòng)之“體驗(yàn)手工藝品制作，感受千年藝術(shù)之美”，分享活動(dòng)的過程和感受，并邀請(qǐng)她有機(jī)會(huì)來你校體驗(yàn)傳統(tǒng)手工藝品制作。詞數(shù)80左右。
Traditional Chinese handicrafts (手工藝品) Materials provided
Kite bamboo, paper, string (線), glue (膠水)
Paper cutting paper with different colors, scissors
Chinese clay art clay, paint
要求：
1.必須包含所有提示信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
2.不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名、人名等相關(guān)信息；
2.注意緊扣主題， 內(nèi)容完整，意思連貫，符合邏輯，書寫整齊。
Dear Lily,
I’m happy to know that you’re interested in traditional Chinese handicrafts.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Lily,
I’m happy to know that you’re interested in traditional Chinese handicrafts. Our school just held an art festival. It was great fun and I can’t wait to share it with you.
The activity took place in the school art room from 4:00 p. m. to 6:30 p. m. on May 31st. And it had three traditional Chinese handicrafts, the kite, paper cutting and Chinese clay art, for us to choose. I am quite fond of flying kites, so I enjoyed myself in making my own kite. At first, the art teacher showed us how to make a kite. Following her clear instruction, I cut the bamboo and the paper. Then I drew a picture and painted it with a brush on the paper. After that, I started to glue the paper on the bamboo and tie a string to the kite. Finally, all my hard work paid off. I got my own kite and I thought it was pretty.
Through this activity, I not only experience the pleasure of making traditional Chinese handicrafts, but also feel the beauty shown in common things. I think it is really worth doing it by ourselves. Would you like to join in this activity next time I’m sure you will like it.
Yours,
Li Hua
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一封電子郵件；
②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)以“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”及“一般過去時(shí)”為主；
③提示：根據(jù)所給提示完成寫作，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，表明寫作意圖，介紹活動(dòng)的背景信息；
第二步，介紹體驗(yàn)手工藝品制作的過程；
第三步，描述自己的感受并邀請(qǐng)對(duì)方。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①share…with…和……分享……
②take place舉行
③fond of 喜歡
④instruction教授；指示
⑤pay off得到回報(bào)
⑥not only…but also不僅……而且
[高分句型]
I think it is really worth doing it by ourselves.(省略that的賓語從句)
4．（2024·福建廈門·三模）假定你是李華，你的美國(guó)筆友Jim寫信咨詢你們學(xué)校的社團(tuán)活動(dòng)情況。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下調(diào)查結(jié)果用英文給他回封電子郵件。詞數(shù)80左右。
要點(diǎn)包括：
1.簡(jiǎn)要分析調(diào)查結(jié)果；
2.介紹一次難忘的社團(tuán)活動(dòng)并說明原因；
3.邀請(qǐng)他來學(xué)校體驗(yàn)社團(tuán)活動(dòng)。
注意事項(xiàng)：
1.必須包含所有提示信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
2.意思清楚，表達(dá)通順，行文連貫，書寫規(guī)范；
3.請(qǐng)勿在文中使用真實(shí)的人名、校名及地名。
Dear Jim,
I’m glad to hear from you. Our school has set up different kinds of clubs to enrich our school life. We did a survey. Here are the results.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version
Dear Jim,
I’m glad to hear from you. Our school has set up different kinds of clubs to enrich our school life. We did a survey. Here are the results. Around half of our students are interested in Chinese calligraphy club. And 34% of them enjoy themselves in Sports club. Besides that, Choral club is the third most popular and 6% of them say they like Story-telling club best.
For me, my most unforgettable club experience was practicing Chinese calligraphy before Spring Festival. That day, we recruited 40 Chinese calligraphy lovers. Then we started writing Spring Festival couplets, we practiced different calligraphy strokes and styles, and shared our creations with each other. After that, we posted them on the porch of each classroom. The rewarding experience reminded me of the importance of preserving, dedication and promoting traditional arts like calligraphy in the future.
I am writing to invite you to come to my school to experience rich and colorful club activities.
Yours,
Li Hua
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一封電子郵件；
②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)以“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”和“一般過去時(shí)”為主；
③提示：根據(jù)所給要點(diǎn)完成寫作，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，表明寫作意圖，簡(jiǎn)要分析調(diào)查結(jié)果；
第二步，介紹一次難忘的社團(tuán)活動(dòng)并說明原因；
第三步，邀請(qǐng)對(duì)方來學(xué)校體驗(yàn)社團(tuán)活動(dòng)。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①be interested in…對(duì)……感興趣
②enjoy oneself盡情享受；感到愉快
③unforgettable難忘的
④stroke一筆，一劃
⑤remind sb. of提醒某人
⑥invite sb. to do sth.邀請(qǐng)某人做某事
[高分句型]
Besides that, Choral club is the third most popular and 6% of them say they like Story-telling club best.(省略that的賓語從句)
5．（2024·天津·二模）假如你是李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，給你的筆友David用英文寫一封郵件，向他講述你所看到的一個(gè)感人故事。
（1）一個(gè)下雪天，李華去超市購(gòu)物。
（2）看見一位老人在超市旁賣菜。
（3）超市老板出來，想要趕走老人。
（4）一位叔叔過來買下了所有蔬菜。
（5）你認(rèn)為……
參考詞匯：老板boss
要求：
（1）詞數(shù)：80～100個(gè)。
（2）開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
（3）要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
Dear David,
How is everything going I’d like to tell you a moving story I saw a few days ago.
On a snowy day,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Do you have a story to share Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文：
Dear David,
How is everything going I’d like to tell you a moving story I saw a few days ago.
On a snowy day, I went shopping in the supermarket. I saw an old man selling vegetables by the supermarket. At that time, the supermarket boss came out and wanted to drive away the old people. At this time, an uncle came and bought all the vegetables. I think this uncle is warm-hearted and helpful. He is a great man. We should learn from him.
Do you have a story to share Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為電子郵件；
②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般過去時(shí)”；
③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏給出的五個(gè)要點(diǎn)提示，寫郵件向筆友David講述一個(gè)感人故事。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，引出話題，介紹一個(gè)感人的故事；
第二步，具體講述這個(gè)感人故事；
第三步，發(fā)表自己的感想；
第四步，期望收到對(duì)方回復(fù)。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①tell sb. sth.告訴某人某事
②go shopping購(gòu)物
③see sb doing sth.看到某人正在做某事
④learn from sb.向某人學(xué)習(xí)
[高分句型]
I think this uncle is warm-hearted and helpful.（省略that的賓語從句）
6．（2024·浙江杭州·二模）假如你是Li Ping，你班在校英語戲劇節(jié)(English Drama Festival)中獲得一等獎(jiǎng)，外教Mark打算為此慶祝，并委托你調(diào)查同學(xué)們喜歡的慶祝方式。請(qǐng)根據(jù)調(diào)查結(jié)果，給外教寫一封郵件，并談?wù)勀愕慕ㄗh。
要求：
1.內(nèi)容包括：表達(dá)感謝、提出個(gè)人建議、說明理由；
2.郵件不得使用真實(shí)的人名、校名；
3.詞數(shù)100左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出（不計(jì)詞數(shù)）。
Dear Mark,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Ping
【答案】例文
Dear Mark,
We are grateful for your enthusiasm in celebrating our class winning the first prize at the English Drama Festival. Your support means a lot to us! Based on the survey I conducted, 88% of us are enthusiastic about a weekend outing, while 59% favor an English movie night, followed by 32% who prefer a food party. My preference is in line with the majority, so I suggest a hiking trip along the nearby green way, which has lively plants and stunning views. Such an outing is perfect for us to take a break from study routines, strengthen friendship and make our success more memorable.
I’ll appreciate it if you can take my suggestion into account. Looking forward to our exciting celebration!
Yours sincerely,
Li Ping
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一封電子郵件；
②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；
③提示：根據(jù)所給調(diào)查結(jié)果及要求完成寫作，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，表明寫作意圖，表達(dá)感謝；
第二步，介紹調(diào)查結(jié)果并提出個(gè)人建議及理由；
第三步，書寫結(jié)語。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①enthusiasm熱情
②based on基于
③conduct a survey進(jìn)行調(diào)查
④preference偏愛
⑤in line with…與……一致
⑥memorable值得紀(jì)念的
⑦take…into account考慮
[高分句型]
My preference is in line with the majority, so I suggest a hiking trip along the nearby green way, which has lively plants and stunning views.(which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句)
7．（2024·河北石家莊·二模）你校正在進(jìn)行特色課程的選課活動(dòng)，假如你是交換生Henry，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表的提示給負(fù)責(zé)的李老師寫一封電子郵件，寫出你所選擇的一門特色課程以及選擇該課程的3個(gè)理由，并提出你對(duì)該課程的希望。
Special Courses
basketball improve your health encourage you to work in groups…
English Film Appreciation get your pronunciation better open up your eyes…
Chinese Painting be interested in Chinese culture learn stories of famous painters…
注意：
（1）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息；
（2）文中具體內(nèi)容可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
（3）詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右(開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。
Dear Mr. Li,
I am Henry from Class Two, Grade Nine. As for the special course, I choose
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Henry
【答案】例文
Dear Mr. Li,
I am Henry from Class Two, Grade Nine. As for the special course, I choose basketball. Do you know why Now let me tell you the reason.
First, I like playing basketball because playing basketball is good for our health. Second, when we work as a team, we can know more professional knowledge about teamwork. Third, it will make your life colorful. Finally, I hope the school can have more PE teachers to guide students. And I hope we can start with the basics, because maybe there are a lot of students who can’t play basketball.
Look forward to your replay.
Yours,
Henry
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文為一封電子郵件；
②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；
③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，可適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏“提出你對(duì)該課程的希望”這一要求。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，寫出所選課程；
第二步，闡述選該課程的原因；
第三步，表達(dá)對(duì)該課程有何希望；
第四步，書寫結(jié)語。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①like doing喜歡做某事
②be good for 對(duì)……有益
③look forward to期待
[高分句型]
①Second, when we work as a team, we can know more professional knowledge about teamwork.（when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句）
②And I hope we can start with the basics, because maybe there are a lot of students who can’t play basketball.（省略that的賓語從句）
8．（2024·浙江寧波·一模）假如你是李華，為了提高學(xué)生對(duì)科學(xué)的興趣，你校上周五在學(xué)校體育館舉行了校園科學(xué)節(jié)活動(dòng)。你的英國(guó)筆友Tom 得知后，發(fā)郵件向你咨詢科學(xué)節(jié)相關(guān)情況。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)郵件內(nèi)容給他回復(fù) 一封郵件，并談?wù)勀愕母惺?
注意：
(1)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名；
(2)需包含郵件中劃線的所有要點(diǎn)提示；
(3)詞數(shù)80左右，郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
(4)參考詞匯： attend a science lecture、make science works、give a science speech
To : LiHua@ Subject: Science Festival Dear Li Hua. How is it going You know I am quite interested in science and I think it is important for the development of a country. Yesterday, I was told that there was a fantastic science festival in your school. Could you please tell me something about it When and where was the festival held Why did your school hold the festival What activities did you take part in Which one was the most interesting to you And how do you like the festival Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Tom
Dear Tom,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Tom,
Happy to learn that you want to know about our science festival, I’m writing to share my experience and feelings with you .
To arouse the students’ interest in science, our school held the science festival at the school gym last Friday. Besides attending a science lecture, I also gave a science speech and made some science works. Though I am not good at making works, I still find it the most interesting activity that I have ever joined in during the festival. It was really an unforgettable experience in my school life. And all of us thought highly of this meaningful festival.
How about your school science festival Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇電子郵件；
②時(shí)態(tài)：主要為“一般過去時(shí)”；
③提示：需包含郵件中劃線的所有要點(diǎn)，注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，闡述寫作意圖，想介紹科學(xué)節(jié)分享自己的經(jīng)驗(yàn)和感受；
第二步，介紹科學(xué)節(jié)的目的，活動(dòng)和自己的經(jīng)驗(yàn)，感受；
第三步，對(duì)科學(xué)節(jié)的評(píng)價(jià)。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①share…with…和……分享……
②be good at 擅長(zhǎng)于
③look forward to盼望
④arouse激起
[高分句型]
①I still find it the most interesting activity that I have ever joined in during the festival. (It作形式賓語)
②Though I am not good at making works, I still find it the most interesting activity that I have ever joined in during the festival. (讓步狀語從句)

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