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2025中考英語書面表達之材料作文專項復(fù)習(xí)講義
寫作思路
題型 考查頻次 命題預(yù)測
書面表達之材料作文 10年10考 材料作文，顧名思義，需要首先對材料進行理解與提煉，對其主題、細節(jié)等有一定程度的把握，在此基礎(chǔ)上，方能寫好文章。同時，在寫作中切忌抄襲原材料，在引用時需有相應(yīng)變化。-般而言，其寫作順序是:引用材料提出觀點或想法一論述總結(jié)。
思維導(dǎo)圖
方法探究
探究一 解題步驟
考生在考場上，可以按照以下幾個步驟來完成書面表達題。
第一步：認真審題，明確要求。
審題是寫好書面表達題的關(guān)鍵。通讀試題所給的每一個字，觀察所給的每一幅圖畫，從而明確該文的題目要求，判斷作文的類型、特點，了解作文的重要內(nèi)容，力求寫作切中題意
1．確定主題。通過仔細觀察、認真分析，確定文章的主題，然后再圍繞主題進行寫作，以滿足中考“切中題意”的要求。
2．確定格式。文體不同，格式也不一樣。書信有書信的格式，便條有便條的格式。同樣都是通知，口頭通知與書面通知格式也不相同。因此，應(yīng)根據(jù)不同的文體來確定寫作時所采用的相應(yīng)格式。
3．確定人稱。因搞錯人稱而失分，實在令人可惜。所以，在動筆之前應(yīng)先確定是使用第一、二人稱還是第三人稱。
4．確定時態(tài)。
第二步：依據(jù)要點，草擬提綱。
根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示，在草紙上列出各要點所用的單詞、短語以及句式等。注意這是組織語言、形成短文的基礎(chǔ)步驟。
這一步驟的要求是：根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示簡單地列出提綱，將所需的語言材料準(zhǔn)備好。可以只列出主要的詞、詞組、短語及句型；暫不考慮動詞的時態(tài)、語態(tài)、第三人稱單數(shù)等詞形變化。
第三步：擴展成句，連句成篇。
將上述所列出的單詞、短語等擴展成句。注意時態(tài)、語態(tài)的正確運用，并適當(dāng)使用一些連接詞將所列的語句連成完整的語篇。全文應(yīng)結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，前后連貫。
第四步：仔細檢查，認真修改。
檢查修改是書面表達解題過程中必不可少的一個重要環(huán)節(jié)。檢查修改的原則是大處著眼，小處著手。具體應(yīng)從詞法、句法、語篇三個方面入手仔細檢查并認真修改。
從詞法角度。主要檢查詞匯的運用是否妥當(dāng)；拼寫是否有誤；名詞、代詞的數(shù)和格是否正確；詞性是否混淆；詞與詞之間是否“搭配不當(dāng)”；用詞是否重復(fù)等。
2．從句法角度。主要檢查句子結(jié)構(gòu)是否完整；動詞時態(tài)、語態(tài)是否正確；主謂是否一致等。3．從語篇角度。主要檢查文體格式是否正確；字數(shù)是否符合要求；要點是否齊全；語句是否
簡潔；上下文是否連貫、符合邏輯等。
第五步：認真書寫，講究規(guī)范。
中考書面表達對答卷的書寫問題有明確具體的要求。因此，在考試中同學(xué)們應(yīng)注意書寫的美觀性，千萬不能因為書寫問題影響自己的得分。另外，整潔干凈的卷面，規(guī)范、美觀的字體會給閱卷者好的印象，可以得到“印象分”
探究二 題型策略
一、寫人敘事類
（一）命題特點
1. 常采用給材料的形式, 讓學(xué)生描述或記敘某個人物或事件;
2. 要求學(xué)生能夠簡短地發(fā)表自己的看法, 或給予正確的評價;
3. 一般有很大的自由度, 學(xué)生可以充分發(fā)揮自己的想象, 暢談自己的看法。
（二）寫作要求
1. 主體要明確, 結(jié)構(gòu)要完整, 句型要簡練;
2. 切勿漏掉六個要素, 即五個“W” (who, when, where, what, why)和一個“H” (how);
3. 時態(tài)、人稱要分清; 事件、線索要連貫; 內(nèi)容、思想要感人。
▲句式舉例
He is tall/short. . . and has long/short/black/brown. . . hair.
他很高/矮……并且留著長長的/短的/黑色的/棕色的頭發(fā)。
She is interested in. . . 她對……感興趣。
He’s so kind that we all like him. 他那么友好, 以至于我們都喜歡他。
He used to be/have. . . 他過去常常是(有)……
We’re proud of him/her. 我們以他(她)為驕傲。
He’s ready to help others. 他樂于助人。
I’ve learnt a lot from her/him. 我已經(jīng)從她/他那兒學(xué)到了很多。
二、方法建議類
（一）命題特點
1. 一般給出問題和材料, 要求學(xué)生寫出解決方法或解決建議;
2. 話題側(cè)重行為、學(xué)習(xí)、環(huán)保、安全及健康等方面;
3. 一般要求以書信、郵件形式寫作, 學(xué)生可根據(jù)提示增加一些細節(jié), 適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
（二）寫作要求
1. 主體要明確, 結(jié)構(gòu)要完整, 句型要簡練;
2. 如果以書信、郵件形式呈現(xiàn), 必須符合書信、郵件的基本格式;
3. 時態(tài)、人稱要分清; 方法、建議要實用; 觀念、態(tài)度要真誠。
▲句式舉例
I’d like to share my ideas with you. 我想與你分享我的想法。
Here are some of my suggestions. 這是我的一些建議。
The best way to. . . is by. . . ……最好的方法是通過……
To keep healthy/safe, we should. . . 為了保持健康/安全, 我們應(yīng)當(dāng)……
It’s one’s duty to. . . Let’s start from today. ……是某人的責(zé)任。讓我們從今天開始吧。
Everyone should play a part in doing sth. 人人都應(yīng)當(dāng)參與……
I hope my advice/suggestions is/are helpful to you. 我希望我的建議對你有幫助。
三、計劃夢想類
（一）命題特點
1. 一般給出提示, 讓學(xué)生寫出自己的計劃或夢想;
2. 要求學(xué)生描述將來某一階段或某一活動的計劃; 談?wù)撟约旱膲粝? 給出堅持該夢想的理由以及實現(xiàn)該夢想將要做出的努力;
3. 學(xué)生可以充分發(fā)揮自己的想象, 適當(dāng)發(fā)揮, 增加文章內(nèi)容。
（二）寫作要求
1. 仔細研讀提示及要求, 切勿漏掉要點;
2. 適當(dāng)增加要點; 注意使用高級詞匯及句子;
3. 注意人稱及時態(tài)、語態(tài)的正確把握。
▲句式舉例
I want to be. . . when I grow up. 當(dāng)我長大后, 我想當(dāng)一名……
She plans to travel around the world. 她計劃周游世界。
The summer holiday is coming to an end and the new term is coming. 暑假即將結(jié)束, 新的學(xué)期即將到來。
I’d like to have a good rest and relax myself. 我想好好休息, 放松一下自己。
He wants to read more books to improve himself. 他想多讀書來提升自己。
I hope my dream can come true one day. 我希望我的夢想有一天會實現(xiàn)。
I think you’ll achieve your dream. 我認為你會實現(xiàn)你的夢想。
四、說明介紹類
（一）命題特點
1. 常采用提示或圖表的形式, 讓學(xué)生介紹某種活動、某種動物或名勝等;
2. 要求學(xué)生能夠?qū)⒒顒印⑷蝿?wù)、地點等進行清楚而準(zhǔn)確地描述;
3. 主要考查任務(wù)說明文、事物說明文和方式方法說明文等。
（二）寫作要求
1. 主體要明確, 結(jié)構(gòu)要完整, 句型要簡練;
2. 合理運用說明方法: 分析、分類、因果、舉例、比較等;
3. 時態(tài)、語態(tài)要分清; 段落、內(nèi)容要層次; 單詞、標(biāo)點要正確。
▲句式舉例
He/She/It looks like. . . 他/她/它看起來像……
It’s 300 meters long/wide/high. 它有300米長/寬/高。
It’s made of wood. 它是由木材制成的。
With the rapidly growing popularity of. . . 隨著……的快速普及……
A recent survey suggests that. . . 最近的一項調(diào)查顯示……
China is a great country with a long history. 中國是一個擁有悠久歷史的偉大國家。
典型練習(xí)
1．（2024·江西南昌·二模）本卷閱讀理解部分文章C講述了現(xiàn)今學(xué)校為提升學(xué)生午休質(zhì)量而做出的努力和改變。良好的睡眠對學(xué)生的健康和學(xué)習(xí)都有積極的影響。假如你是張華，最近校英語社正在就“The Importance of Enough Sleep”舉行征文活動。請根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容寫一篇短文投稿，先談?wù)勊叩闹匾裕榻B一下你每天的睡眠時間和不能獲得充足睡眠的原因，最后就如何改善學(xué)生的睡眠提出合理的建議。
寫作要點 參考句型
1.Why is it important to have enough sleep It’s important for us to… I often… I plan to…
2.Do you have enough sleep If not, why
3.What can you do to improve your sleep
要求：
1.短文應(yīng)包括表格中所有的寫作要點，條理清楚，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2. 短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的人名和地名；
3.詞數(shù)80-120，短文開頭及結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
The Importance of Enough Sleep
Sleep is very important for our health and learning. When we sleep well,
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I believe by making small changes, we can improve the quality of our sleep and feel better.
2．（2024·遼寧撫順·一模）每個人都是在不斷地進步中成長的，相信你也一樣。經(jīng)歷了近三年的初中生活，你在哪方面進步了？如何進步的？你的進步感言是什么？請以“My Progress in Middle School”為題，寫一寫。
要求：
1. 文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名及學(xué)校名稱等；
2. 詞數(shù)80~100。
My Progress in Middle School
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3．（2024·江蘇南京·二模）某英文報 Kids Voice 欄目正在征稿，請你根據(jù)要求用英語寫一篇文章投稿， 談?wù)勀愕南敕ā?br/> Some teenagers have difficulty in finding a true friend. They make friends by following suit (隨大流). That means they do the same as their friends, such as playing online games or saying bad words behind others, although they’re not willing to. Share your ideas about the topic. 1. What do you think about following suit to make friends 2. How can teenagers make true friends Support your ideas with your experience as an example.
注意：
1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱；
2. 語言通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；
3. 詞數(shù) 80左右。
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4．（2024·山東東營·三模）你在求學(xué)的過程中肯定遇到過很多好老師，你最喜歡哪位呢？請你以The Teacher I Like Best為題，用英語寫一篇短文，參加美國雜志W(wǎng)eekly Reader的征文活動。
內(nèi)容可涉及：他（她）是誰、教什么學(xué)科：你喜歡他（她）的原因。可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
要求：1．80-100詞；
2．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名及校名，老師姓名統(tǒng)一使用Mr./ Mrs./ Miss XX，例如：Mr. Ma。
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5．（2024·湖北襄陽·二模）當(dāng)下，全國各地文旅系統(tǒng)都在“發(fā)大招”吸引游客，抖音國際版（TikTok）發(fā)起了“Tour China in ________”為主題的英文宣傳視頻征集活動，向世界展示中國。請根據(jù)以下征集要求，結(jié)合你拍攝的本地風(fēng)土人情視頻，用英文寫一篇短文（解說詞）。
Notice Hi, friends ! This is Tour China at TikTok! Tourists from around the world get excited to crowd into safe, cultural, friendly China. How are you going to attract them to your place You can tell them about the interesting places, colourful culture, delicious food, or anything special in your hometown. Share with us at TourChina@! TikTok International
要求：
1. 請用你要介紹的地點，將文章標(biāo)題補充完整；
2. 你的英文解說詞里至少包含征集通知中提到的兩項（黑體部分）；
3. 詞數(shù) 80 詞左右，文中不得出現(xiàn)個人真實姓名和校名等信息。
Tour China in ____________
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6．（2024·海南省直轄縣級單位·二模）“You Ask, We Answer”是一個國際青少年交流網(wǎng)站，近日有人發(fā)布了一個關(guān)于作業(yè)的帖子。假設(shè)你是李華，請閱讀原帖后，結(jié)合自己的經(jīng)歷，用英語跟帖。
You Ask, We Answer
This term we don’t have much homework. But I find that I still spend too much time on it and I stay up almost every day. It makes me really tired. Do you spend a lot of time on your homework Does anyone have some good ways to help me Looking forward to your replies. Miyoko, Japan
要點：
1.回復(fù)Miyoko提出的問題；
2.給她一些高效完成作業(yè)的建議；
3.告訴她良好睡眠的重要性。
注意：
1.要點齊全，適當(dāng)拓展；
2.行文連貫，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范；
3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名、地名；
4.100詞左右(文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù))。
Hi, Miyoko. I’m sorry to hear that you’re upset about your homework.
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7．（2024·江蘇鹽城·三模）在生活的長河中，每個人都是一名獨特的航行者，追尋著屬于自己的夢想和榮光。在這段旅程中，我們經(jīng)歷了無數(shù)的挑戰(zhàn)和困難，也收獲了無數(shù)的歡笑和淚水。其中，總會有一件事情，讓我們深感驕傲與自豪。校報英語編輯部正開展以“One Thing I’m Proud of”為題的征文活動。請你結(jié)合提示中的問題寫一篇短文投稿。
注意事項: （1）詞數(shù)100詞左右(文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）；
（2）文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名、校名等信息；
（3）文章必須包含所有要點，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順。
One Thing I’m Proud of
The thing I am proud of is that
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8．（2024·浙江寧波·三模）作為中學(xué)生，我們現(xiàn)在的學(xué)習(xí)壓力很大，經(jīng)常面對各種考試，因此有時會產(chǎn)生焦慮情緒。
校英語報邀你寫一篇短文，給考試焦慮的同學(xué)們提一些建議。請你結(jié)合自己的學(xué)習(xí)經(jīng)歷闡述你的觀點，結(jié)合以下要點，以”How to Deal with the Exam Stress”為題寫一篇短文。
Reasons Be afraid to fail the exam
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Advice Prepare hard
Sleep well before the exam
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注意：
(1)短文必須包括所有要點，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
(2)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名和校名；
(3)詞數(shù)：80—100。
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9．（2024·黑龍江綏化·二模）良好的習(xí)慣成就美好的未來。作為青少年，如何培養(yǎng)良好的習(xí)慣呢？請根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示以“How to Develop Good Habits”為題寫一篇英語短文。
內(nèi)容提示：(1)上課認真聽講，做筆記；
(2)每天按時完成作業(yè)；
(3)閑暇時多讀課外書籍；
(4)每周鍛煉3至4次；
(5)多吃蔬菜、水果，少吃不健康食品；
(6)補充一至兩點良好的習(xí)慣，并談?wù)勊鼈儗ι硇慕】档挠绊憽?br/>要求：(1)根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
(2)語句通順，意思連貫，書寫工整；
(3)文章中不得出現(xiàn)任何真實信息；(姓名、校名和地名等)
(4)詞數(shù)不得少于80詞。(開頭已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù))
How to Develop Good Habits
It’s very important for us to have good habits.
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10．（2024·福建福州·三模）為了促進學(xué)生全面發(fā)展，你校開展了以“幫助他人，共創(chuàng)美好生活”為主題的活動。 假定你是李華，請你根據(jù)以下提示，以“Sell Old Things and Show Love”為題，用英語寫一篇短文，向你校的英語廣播站介紹此次活動。詞數(shù)80左右。
the school held this activity the environment and offer help to those in need. . .
What students did gave away things. . .
How you felt difficult, meaningful. . .
注意事項：
1.必須包含所有提示信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；
2.意思清楚，表達通順，行文連貫，書寫規(guī)范；
3.請勿在文中使用真實的姓名、校名和地名。
Sell Old Things and Show Love
Last week, a volunteer activity with the theme of selling old things and showing love was held in our school to improve students all-round development.
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參考答案
1．（2024·江西南昌·二模）本卷閱讀理解部分文章C講述了現(xiàn)今學(xué)校為提升學(xué)生午休質(zhì)量而做出的努力和改變。良好的睡眠對學(xué)生的健康和學(xué)習(xí)都有積極的影響。假如你是張華，最近校英語社正在就“The Importance of Enough Sleep”舉行征文活動。請根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容寫一篇短文投稿，先談?wù)勊叩闹匾裕榻B一下你每天的睡眠時間和不能獲得充足睡眠的原因，最后就如何改善學(xué)生的睡眠提出合理的建議。
寫作要點 參考句型
1.Why is it important to have enough sleep It’s important for us to… I often… I plan to…
2.Do you have enough sleep If not, why
3.What can you do to improve your sleep
要求：
1.短文應(yīng)包括表格中所有的寫作要點，條理清楚，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2. 短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的人名和地名；
3.詞數(shù)80-120，短文開頭及結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
The Importance of Enough Sleep
Sleep is very important for our health and learning. When we sleep well,
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I believe by making small changes, we can improve the quality of our sleep and feel better.
【答案】例文1：
The Importance of Enough Sleep
Sleep is very important for our health and learning. When we sleep well, our bodies and minds feel good. We have more energy and can study better during the day. However, if we don’t get enough sleep, it can affect us in many ways.
Personally, I try to get around 8 hours of sleep every night, but sometimes it’s hard. Sometimes I stay up late watching TV or using my phone. Other times, I feel stressed or worried and it’s hard to relax and fall asleep.
To improve my sleep, first I plan to turn off all screens at least an hour before bedtime. This helps my brain to relax and get ready for sleep. I also try to create a calm and comfortable sleep environment in my bedroom.
I believe by making small changes, we can improve the quality of our sleep and feel better.
例文2：
The Importance of Enough Sleep
Sleep is very important for our health and learning. When we sleep well, we will feel energetic and fresh. However, if we don’t get enough sleep, it can affect our health and mind.
Take me as an example, I feel tired and lack of sleep every day. Because homework always takes up too much of my time. Besides, I also spend sometime on my phone at night to have fun.
In order to get enough sleep, I think it is important to plan our time carefully. Since homework is necessary for our study, we need to find ways to finish it efficiently. Second, we need to control the time of using mobile phones and try to keep a balance between study and rest.
I believe by making small changes, we can improve the quality of our sleep and feel better.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；
③提示：寫作要點已給出，要注意不要遺漏提示的如談?wù)勊叩闹匾砸约敖榻B自己的睡眠時間及如何改善睡眠的建議等相關(guān)要點，適當(dāng)添加細節(jié)，并突出寫作重點。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，表明寫作意圖，說明睡眠的重要性；
第二步，介紹自己的睡眠時間及不能獲得充足睡眠的原因；
第三步，就如何改善學(xué)生的睡眠提出合理的建議；
第四步，書寫結(jié)語，表達“希望通過小改變提高睡眠質(zhì)量”的愿望。
[亮點詞匯]
①turn off關(guān)閉
②at least至少
③take sb. as an example以某人為例
④lack of缺少
⑤take up占用
[高分句型]
However, if we don’t get enough sleep, it can affect us in many ways.(if引導(dǎo)條件狀語從句)
2．（2024·遼寧撫順·一模）每個人都是在不斷地進步中成長的，相信你也一樣。經(jīng)歷了近三年的初中生活，你在哪方面進步了？如何進步的？你的進步感言是什么？請以“My Progress in Middle School”為題，寫一寫。
要求：
1. 文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名及學(xué)校名稱等；
2. 詞數(shù)80~100。
My Progress in Middle School
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【答案】例文
My Progress in Middle School My three years in middle school have been a journey of growth and improvement. I used to be so shy that I was afraid of speaking in public. Last year, my teacher asked me to sing a song at the school art festival. I was afraid and didn’t want to have a try. But my teacher encouraged me and helped me practice the song again and again. At last, the moment came. Keeping my teacher’s words “Believe in yourself! Everything will go well.” in mind, I went to the stage confidently.
From then on, I have changed a lot and taken an active part in school activities. Just as the saying goes, believing in yourself is the first step on the road to success.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時態(tài)：時態(tài)以“一般現(xiàn)在時”、“一般過去時”和“現(xiàn)在完成時”為主；
③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏提示，并適當(dāng)添加細節(jié)，注意字母大小寫以及標(biāo)點符號。
[寫作步驟]
第一步、開篇點題，引出話題；
第二步、介紹自己在哪方面取得進步以及如何進步的；
第三步、介紹自己進步感言是什么。
[亮點詞匯]
①used to be過去是
②be afraid of害怕
③have a try試一試
④take an active part in積極參與
[高分句型]
①I used to be so shy that I was afraid of speaking in public. (so…that引導(dǎo)結(jié)果狀語從句)
3．（2024·江蘇南京·二模）某英文報 Kids Voice 欄目正在征稿，請你根據(jù)要求用英語寫一篇文章投稿， 談?wù)勀愕南敕ā?br/> Some teenagers have difficulty in finding a true friend. They make friends by following suit (隨大流). That means they do the same as their friends, such as playing online games or saying bad words behind others, although they’re not willing to. Share your ideas about the topic. 1. What do you think about following suit to make friends 2. How can teenagers make true friends Support your ideas with your experience as an example.
注意：
1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱；
2. 語言通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；
3. 詞數(shù) 80左右。
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【答案】例文
It isn’t wise to follow suit to make friends. Firstly, following suit is against being yourself, which will make you unhappy. Even worse, you might forget who you really are while doing so. Secondly, you may do something terrible to others when following suit, like hurting others’ feelings.
As for how to make true friends, I think being honest and polite is the best policy. Besides, be glad to offer your time and help when others are in need. When my classmate Jack failed his math test, I helped him review the lessons every day. Now, we are best friends. Last but not least, you should develop some hobbies which will help you find friends with similar interests.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”和“一般過去時”；
③提示：寫作要求已給出，學(xué)生不要遺漏題目中的要點，適當(dāng)添加細節(jié)，寫作時保持主謂一致，注意字數(shù)要求。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，總起引出話題；
第二步，講述模仿他人交友是并不明智的；
第三步，講述如何交到真正的好朋友。
[亮點詞匯]
①Even worse更糟糕的是
②be glad to do sth.很高興做某事
③help sb. do sth.幫助某人做某事
④Last but not least最后但同樣重要的是
[高分句型]
①Firstly, following suit is against being yourself, which will make you unhappy. （which引導(dǎo)非限定性定語從句）
②When my classmate Jack failed his math test, I helped him review the lessons every day. （when引導(dǎo)時間狀語從句）
4．（2024·山東東營·三模）你在求學(xué)的過程中肯定遇到過很多好老師，你最喜歡哪位呢？請你以The Teacher I Like Best為題，用英語寫一篇短文，參加美國雜志W(wǎng)eekly Reader的征文活動。
內(nèi)容可涉及：他（她）是誰、教什么學(xué)科：你喜歡他（她）的原因。可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
要求：1．80-100詞；
2．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名及校名，老師姓名統(tǒng)一使用Mr./ Mrs./ Miss XX，例如：Mr. Ma。
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【答案】例文
The Teacher I Like Best
Of all my teachers, I love Mrs. Li best. She taught us English in junior middle school.
She had many ways of making her classes interesting and exciting. She always taught us something new in easy ways. She helped us use English by doing interesting activities, such as, making surveys, playing games, etc. Mrs. Li was a strict but kind teacher. She often asked us to be on time for class and do homework by ourselves. When we had trouble, she often helped us out.
Thanks to Mrs. Li, I started to love English. I love Mrs. Li and her class.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；
②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時”；
③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏，適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)完整表述內(nèi)容。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，介紹自己最喜歡的老師是誰；
第二步，介紹喜歡她的原因；
第三步，表達感謝。
[亮點詞匯]
①in easy ways用簡單的方法
②such as例如
③be on time按時
④thanks to多虧
[高分句型]
①When we had trouble, she often helped us out.（when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句）
5．（2024·湖北襄陽·二模）當(dāng)下，全國各地文旅系統(tǒng)都在“發(fā)大招”吸引游客，抖音國際版（TikTok）發(fā)起了“Tour China in ________”為主題的英文宣傳視頻征集活動，向世界展示中國。請根據(jù)以下征集要求，結(jié)合你拍攝的本地風(fēng)土人情視頻，用英文寫一篇短文（解說詞）。
Notice Hi, friends ! This is Tour China at TikTok! Tourists from around the world get excited to crowd into safe, cultural, friendly China. How are you going to attract them to your place You can tell them about the interesting places, colourful culture, delicious food, or anything special in your hometown. Share with us at TourChina@! TikTok International
要求：
1. 請用你要介紹的地點，將文章標(biāo)題補充完整；
2. 你的英文解說詞里至少包含征集通知中提到的兩項（黑體部分）；
3. 詞數(shù) 80 詞左右，文中不得出現(xiàn)個人真實姓名和校名等信息。
Tour China in ____________
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【答案】例文：
Tour China in Xiangyang
Hello friends, welcome to Xiangyang!
Xiangyang is a beautiful city in China. It has a long history and rich culture. There are many famous attractions in Xiangyang, such as the ancient city wall, Longzhong Scenic Area, and Tangcheng Film and Television City. Xiangyang is also known for its delicious food, such as beef noodles and sesame seed cakes. People in Xiangyang are very friendly and hospitable.
If you have the chance to visit Xiangyang, I’m sure you will definitely have a great time!
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇說明文，為材料作文；
②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；
③提示：根據(jù)要求補充完整題目，然后介紹這座城市的風(fēng)土人情等，注意要包含通知里提到的要點，保證條例清晰，語法正確。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，補充完整題目，表示歡迎；
第二步，從歷史、景點、美食等方面介紹襄陽；
第三步，書寫結(jié)語。
[亮點詞匯]
①such as比如
②be known for因……而出名
③have a great time玩得開心
[高分句型]
If you have the chance to visit Xiangyang, I’m sure you will definitely have a great time!（條件狀語從句；賓語從句）
6．（2024·海南省直轄縣級單位·二模）“You Ask, We Answer”是一個國際青少年交流網(wǎng)站，近日有人發(fā)布了一個關(guān)于作業(yè)的帖子。假設(shè)你是李華，請閱讀原帖后，結(jié)合自己的經(jīng)歷，用英語跟帖。
You Ask, We Answer
This term we don’t have much homework. But I find that I still spend too much time on it and I stay up almost every day. It makes me really tired. Do you spend a lot of time on your homework Does anyone have some good ways to help me Looking forward to your replies. Miyoko, Japan
要點：
1.回復(fù)Miyoko提出的問題；
2.給她一些高效完成作業(yè)的建議；
3.告訴她良好睡眠的重要性。
注意：
1.要點齊全，適當(dāng)拓展；
2.行文連貫，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范；
3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名、地名；
4.100詞左右(文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù))。
Hi, Miyoko. I’m sorry to hear that you’re upset about your homework.
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【答案】例文
Hi, Miyoko. I’m sorry to hear that you’re upset about your homework. I used to have the same problem as you. But now I often finish my homework in an hour. Here’s some advice for you.
First, listen carefully in class. The homework usually practices what you have learned in class. If you can’t understand what your teachers say in class, you will find it hard to finish your homework. Second, you need to manage your time wisely. For example, you can start your homework early. Third, try to find some good learning methods, like breaking tasks down into smaller parts.
Remember, good sleep is helpful to your health and it can make you full of energy and study well the next day. So, better not stay up too late.
I hope my advice will be helpful to you. Wish you a successful term!
Li Hua, China
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；
③提示：根據(jù)所給原帖和要求完成寫作，注意標(biāo)點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，回復(fù)Miyoko提出的問題；
第二步，給她一些高效完成作業(yè)的建議，告訴她良好睡眠的重要性；
第三步，書寫結(jié)語。
[亮點詞匯]
①used to曾經(jīng)
②practice練習(xí)
③wisely明智地
④break…down將……分成若干部分
⑤stay up熬夜
[高分句型]
If you can’t understand what your teachers say in class, you will find it hard to finish your homework.(if引導(dǎo)條件狀語從句；what引導(dǎo)賓語從句)
7．（2024·江蘇鹽城·三模）在生活的長河中，每個人都是一名獨特的航行者，追尋著屬于自己的夢想和榮光。在這段旅程中，我們經(jīng)歷了無數(shù)的挑戰(zhàn)和困難，也收獲了無數(shù)的歡笑和淚水。其中，總會有一件事情，讓我們深感驕傲與自豪。校報英語編輯部正開展以“One Thing I’m Proud of”為題的征文活動。請你結(jié)合提示中的問題寫一篇短文投稿。
注意事項: （1）詞數(shù)100詞左右(文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）；
（2）文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名、校名等信息；
（3）文章必須包含所有要點，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順。
One Thing I’m Proud of
The thing I am proud of is that
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【答案】例文
One Thing I’m Proud of
The thing I am proud of is that I visited some old people to make them happy.
It was on a fine autumn afternoon when I was still a teenager. I noticed an old grandma sitting silently under a tall tree in front of her house, looking rather sad and lonely. I went to have a chat with her. After our short conversation, I got to know that all the old women’s sons and daughters were far away from her, making their lives in big cities and she felt lonely. I felt sympathetic for her, and I realized that there were actually many old people like her in the village. So a good idea occurred to me suddenly.
I gathered my friends, and organized them to visit these old people one by one. We sang songs, danced and told jokes to them, which made them happy. One of them was so moved that tears fell down. Caring for those around us and passing our happiness to others are what we have learnt that day. I made it, and I feel really proud of myself that I gave comfort to those who needed most.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時態(tài)：時態(tài)以“一般過去時”為主；
③提示：根據(jù)所給提示完成寫作，注意標(biāo)點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，介紹自己引以為傲的事情；
第二步，介紹事情發(fā)生的時間以及自己做了什么；
第三步，介紹自己以此為傲的原因。
[亮點詞匯]
①notice注意
②get to know了解
③sympathetic同情的
④occur to被想起
⑤feel proud of感到自豪
[高分句型]
One of them was so moved that tears fell down.(so…that引導(dǎo)結(jié)果狀語從句)
8．（2024·浙江寧波·三模）作為中學(xué)生，我們現(xiàn)在的學(xué)習(xí)壓力很大，經(jīng)常面對各種考試，因此有時會產(chǎn)生焦慮情緒。
校英語報邀你寫一篇短文，給考試焦慮的同學(xué)們提一些建議。請你結(jié)合自己的學(xué)習(xí)經(jīng)歷闡述你的觀點，結(jié)合以下要點，以”How to Deal with the Exam Stress”為題寫一篇短文。
Reasons Be afraid to fail the exam
*
Advice Prepare hard
Sleep well before the exam
*
注意：
(1)短文必須包括所有要點，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
(2)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名和校名；
(3)詞數(shù)：80—100。
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【答案】例文
How to Deal with the Exam Stress
As we all know, students are in the face of many exams every school day. Naturally, because of being afraid to fail the exam and let our parents and teachers down, we may have the exam stress. Too much stress will make us feel tired.
Here I want to share some advice with you on how to use proper ways to deal with the stress. To begin with, preparing hard for the tests is a good choice for us, which can build our confidence and release our body. Besides, we are supposed to sleep well before the exam so that we can have enough time to relax. Last but not least, we are able to do something enjoyable like listening to the music or walking in the park.
To sum up, we’d better plan and prepare everything well to deal with stress. Only in this way, we can make a progress in grades and be mentally healthy at the same time!
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；
②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；
③提示：寫作要點已給出，注意不要遺漏“信息提示”中的要點內(nèi)容，即結(jié)合自己的學(xué)習(xí)經(jīng)歷闡述如何處理考試焦慮，給同學(xué)們提一些建議，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。注意寫作時要按第一人稱寫。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，表明寫作意圖，學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)壓力大，考試焦慮現(xiàn)象較嚴重；
第二步，具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容，作者結(jié)合自己的學(xué)習(xí)經(jīng)歷闡述考試焦慮的觀點，以及處理焦慮的一些建議；
第三步，書寫結(jié)語。最好做好計劃和準(zhǔn)備，以應(yīng)對壓力。只有這樣，才能在成績上取得進步，同時也能保持心理健康。
[亮點詞匯]
①to begin with 首先
②last but not least 最后但同樣重要的一點
③sum up 總之
[高分句型]
Besides, we are supposed to sleep well before the exam so that we can have enough time to relax.（so that引導(dǎo)的目的狀語從句）
9．（2024·黑龍江綏化·二模）良好的習(xí)慣成就美好的未來。作為青少年，如何培養(yǎng)良好的習(xí)慣呢？請根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示以“How to Develop Good Habits”為題寫一篇英語短文。
內(nèi)容提示：(1)上課認真聽講，做筆記；
(2)每天按時完成作業(yè)；
(3)閑暇時多讀課外書籍；
(4)每周鍛煉3至4次；
(5)多吃蔬菜、水果，少吃不健康食品；
(6)補充一至兩點良好的習(xí)慣，并談?wù)勊鼈儗ι硇慕】档挠绊憽?br/>要求：(1)根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
(2)語句通順，意思連貫，書寫工整；
(3)文章中不得出現(xiàn)任何真實信息；(姓名、校名和地名等)
(4)詞數(shù)不得少于80詞。(開頭已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù))
How to Develop Good Habits
It’s very important for us to have good habits.
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【答案】例文：
How to Develop Good Habits
It’s very important for us to have good habits.
As teenagers, what should we do In my opinion, we should listen to the teacher carefully in class and take notes when necessary. It is a good habit to finish schoolwork on time every day. In our spare time, we had better read some books to get more knowledge.
Also, we should eat more fresh fruit and vegetables and less unhealthy food. It’s necessary for us to take exercise three or four times a week.
What’s more, we should go to bed early to get enough sleep. We had better not stay up too late. We should always remember to wash our hands before meals to keep clean. Exercise is fun and relaxing. It’s healthy for our mind and body. Healthy lifestyle helps us get good grades and live happily.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：材料作文；
②時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時；
③提示：文章包括所有要點，并進行適當(dāng)補充，注意行文連貫，無語法錯誤。
[寫作步驟]
①在學(xué)習(xí)方面養(yǎng)成好習(xí)慣，認真聽講、按時完成作業(yè)等；
②保持健康方面的好習(xí)慣，健康飲食、多鍛煉；
③生活方面的好習(xí)慣，早睡早起、勤洗手等。
[亮點詞匯]
①in my opinion 在我看來
②on time 準(zhǔn)時
③had better 最好
[高分句型]
①In my opinion, we should listen to the teacher carefully in class and take notes when necessary. （省略主謂的狀語從句）
②It’s necessary for us to take exercise three or four times a week.（it作形式賓語）
10．（2024·福建福州·三模）為了促進學(xué)生全面發(fā)展，你校開展了以“幫助他人，共創(chuàng)美好生活”為主題的活動。 假定你是李華，請你根據(jù)以下提示，以“Sell Old Things and Show Love”為題，用英語寫一篇短文，向你校的英語廣播站介紹此次活動。詞數(shù)80左右。
the school held this activity the environment and offer help to those in need. . .
What students did gave away things. . .
How you felt difficult, meaningful. . .
注意事項：
1.必須包含所有提示信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；
2.意思清楚，表達通順，行文連貫，書寫規(guī)范；
3.請勿在文中使用真實的姓名、校名和地名。
Sell Old Things and Show Love
Last week, a volunteer activity with the theme of selling old things and showing love was held in our school to improve students all-round development.
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【答案】例文
Sell Old Things and Show Love Last week, a volunteer activity with the theme of selling old things and showing love was held in our school to improve students all-round development. The purpose of this activity is to improve environment and offer help to those in need. Students prepared many things which were made by hand in their spare time, such as kites, model planes and soon. Many students and teachers came to take part in it. Everyone chose their favorite items and paid for them at a much lower price. We sent the money to the community to help children who couldn’t attend school and the seniors who needed better care.
Though it was difficult, I felt very happy. Because it is meaningful to help others.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時態(tài)：時態(tài)以“一般過去時”為主；
③提示：根據(jù)所給提示完成寫作，注意標(biāo)點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，介紹活動的背景和目的；
第二步，介紹活動的流程；
第三步，介紹自己的感受。
[亮點詞匯]
①purpose目的
②prepare準(zhǔn)備
③take part in參加
④pay for支付
⑤attend school上學(xué)
[高分句型]
Students prepared many things which were made by hand in their spare time, such as kites, model planes and soon.(which引導(dǎo)定語從句)

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